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Posted: 13 years ago
hi AG(short form of ur name)...hehe...hope u like it...

ok..so finally i read all the parts...u r an awesome writer...and believe me am not saying it kyunki u r my friend but because it really is very nice...i love it...sachi main...

geet kitni cute and innocent hain...sweet type...like TJP ka maan...haha...and now maan has made her his pari and he is her messiah...amazing...

am so happy for the second marriage...i just hope ke geet aur baby donon fine rahen...take maan geet ko seekha saken ke baarish mein kaise enjoy karte hain...haha...

continue soon AG...trust me AG...u rock with this...
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting 4r update...😍
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sry to keep u guys waiting...but tomorrow pakka...
thnks for bearing wid me...sry again
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydevil87



sry to keep u guys waiting...but tomorrow pakka...
thnks for bearing wid me...sry again

Will be waiting...
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Originally posted by: crazydevil87



sry to keep u guys waiting...but tomorrow pakka...
thnks for bearing wid me...sry again


wil b waiting 4r update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Guys m updating it from fon so can't edit my status n no color coding really sorry guys no internet kya karoon...
I'm truly very sry for not updating for sooo long n thank u sooo much for bearing wid me guys...
Thanks a million for all of your love and support!!
Your comments and likes really make me feel special and motivates me to write more for u all'.
I'm really sry for not being able to reply to each one of your comments but thanks a trillion for appreciating and commenting on my work''''
My special thanks for all of ur amazing comments.
I really luved each one of dem guys...Luv u all!!!!
your comments make my day guys so pls do comment!!!
THANK U ALL SOOO MUCH!!!!!!

Guys dis part is dedicated to my dearest friend Silky(m sure u all know her as fabulous writer of KC n TJN). Luv u Silku i hope u'll lyk this part.

PART 21

After sometime Maan got a call from Pratham...

MAAN: Oh no pari main ghar pe to inform karna bhool hi gaya ab to dad meri waat laga denge...jaan tum baat kar lo aur keh do main abhi drive kar raha hoon to phone nahin le sakta...

Geet answered the call...

Pratham: Hello beta kahan ho tum dono kab se phone unreachable hai?? Aur Geet kaisi hai doctor ne kya kaha???
GEET: Hello dad main bilkul theek hoon aur doctor ne bhi kaha ki ab sab theek hai... Sorry dad wo thodi shopping karni thi to hum hospital se nikal kar mall chale gaye the aur call karna bhool gaye...
Pratham: Its ok beta you take care aur jaldi aa jao... Achcha meri Maan se baat karana...
GEET: Ji dad! Ye lijiye Maan dad apse baat karenge...

There was naughtiness in her eyes while switching on the bluetooth of the phone... Though he felt angry at first that she didn't help him but all the anger faded seeing the cute naughty sparkle that he always loved to see in those gems...

MAAN: Sorry dad m really really sorry...
Pratham: Sorry ke bachche ye koi tareeka hota hai pata hai hum kitne pareshaan ho gaye the zimmedari naam ki koi cheez hai ki nahin...
MAAN: Dad main sorry ka nahin apka bachcha hoon apki memory waqi age ke saath kam hoti jaa rahi hai aur sorry dad wo achanak se Geet ka shopping ka mood kar gaya to phone karna dimag se slip kar gaya...
Pratham: Beta baap se pange tu aa phir batata hoon kiski memory weak hai...
MAAN(thought but spoke aloud): O teri ye to gadbad ho gayi mafi mangni thi aur pange khade kar diye...
Pratham: Haan beta ab to gadbad ho hi gayi matlab ab tujhe tere BAAP se koi nahin bacha sakta... Chalo ab jaldi aao...

Call was disconnected...

MAAN(with fake anger): MSK se panga mehnga parega Geet...

Geet had intentions of teasing him but seeing his anger all the naughtiness was replaced by fear... His anger was something that has always scared her...

GEET(thinking): Jhalli gadhi ullu aur socho pareshan karne ki lo aa gaye wapas dusht danav avtar mein...Geet beta ab teri khair nahin...Babaji ye kya ho gaya???
GEET: Ma...Maan...wo wo...m...main...

Tears threatened to fall from her eyes thinking about her stupidity...
Seeing her all scared and on verge of crying he cursed the moment when he thought of putting up the fake anger act...
He stopped the car...
He put his finger under her chin and lifted her face to meet his eyes... He cupped her face and kissed her eyes asking her not to cry...
She immediatly hugged him scared to again lose his love due to her stupidity...

GEET: I'm sorry Maan main bas mazaq kar rahi thi sachchi mujhe pata hota apko itna...

He halted her in mid sentence by crashing his lips on hers...through his slow gentle loving kiss he was trying to take away all her fear...they didn't know when that gentle kiss turned to into a passionate one replacing everything on their mind with their deep love and passion... The need of air made them reluctantly leave each other's lips but they still held each other... Their foreheads were still touching each other and they were looking in each other's eyes with all the love they possessed for each other...

MAAN: Jaan tum jab bhi mujhe dekho tumhari ankhon mein ye khushi aur apne Maan ke liye ye beintaha mohabbat hona chahiye wo darr nahin jo abhi kuch der pehle tha...main mazak kar raha tha jaan Maan apni pari se kabhi gussa ho hi nahin sakta wo to bas apni pari se dher pyar karna janta hai...ab jaldi se mujhe apni pyari si muskaan de do..

She smiled shyly at his sweet talks...
He touched her nose lightly...

MAAN: Thats like my darling pari... Jaan ab tum itne pyaar se meri bahon mein ho to itna golden chance chhodne ka bilkul bhi dil nahin kar raha par ab humne aur der ki to dad mera qeema bana denge...

Blushing profusely she immediately left him... He kissed her forehead and left her...

MAAN: Don't get disappointed Mrs. Khurana we will surely continue later...

He winked while Geet's jaw dropped and her mouth was making an 'o'...

GEET: Mr. Khurana sapne dekhna band kijiye aur aage dekh ke gaadi chalaiye abhi to bas phone pe jhaad parhi hai humein aur der hui to apko dad ki daant dinner mein milegi...

MAAN(thinking): God she looks damn cute with these annoyed looks on her face... I feel like eating her up... Oye Maan control kar yaar concentrate on driving the car...

As they entered the hall of KM everyone pounced on them asking about Geet's health and scolding Maan for his irresponsibility...except Annie who was standing there and watching her brother who always shut her up with his glares getting scolded from all the elders amused...

Annie(whispered to Geet): Kya baat hai aaj pakka duniya ulti ghoom rahi hogi Mr. Responsible the MSK ko responsibility ka lecture mil raha hai lol...

Geet who was already feeling guilty since it was her who asked him to take her somewhere and now he was getting all the scoldings though they were equally responsible for the mistake gave Annie a glare...

Annie: Ae lo tujhe bhi bhai ki sangat ka asar ho gaya pehle sirf wo ghoorte the ab tujhe bhi jhelna parega...
GEET: Annie aisa kuch nahin hai aur filhal to main teri bakwas jhel rahi hoon...maze lene ki bajaye Maan ko bachane ki soch...
Annie: Pagal hai kya Geet aisa nazara sau saalon mein ek baar naseeb hota hai...pls let me have fun...
GEET: Chaddo!!!!

Geet left for the kitchen and asked Nakul to serve the dinner... She came back to hall and asked everyone to come for dinner..
Maan thanked her through his eyes while she answered him through hers...
They ate dinner and Geet was being advised by elders on what precautions she should take while going to college...

After Maan entered the room finishing some pending work he noticed Geet was in washroom getting freshen up something struck his mind he smirked and went to stand in front of the washroom...

As Geet opened the Maan shouted...

MAAN: Aaahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MAAN: Kya karti ho Geet dekh ke door nahin khol sakti...
GEET: I'm sorry Maan mujhe pata hi nahin chala...I'm really really sorry... Kahan lagi apko dikhaiye...

She made him sit on the bed and was going when he held her wrist...

MAAN: Itni zor ki laga ke ab bhaagi kahan jaa rahi ho???
GEET: First aid box lane jaa rahi hoon Maan...

Maan felt like hitting his head on the wall seeing his wife's naiveness...

MAAN: Uski zaroorat nahin paregi...baitho yahaan...
GEET: Achcha dikhaiye kahan lagi hai??

He pointed at his forehead she lightly touched there trying to sooth his pain blowing air from her mouth...
He pulled her closer... She looked at him questioning what he is upto through her eyes... She noticed the naughty glint in his eyes... She pushed him...

GEET: Chaddo Maan aap na bare nautankibaaz ho gaye ho...
MAAN: Arey nautankibaaz baaz kyun??? Mujhe sahi mein chot lagi hai...
GEET: Achchaji bahot dard ho raha hai??? Tabhi apko ye shararten soojh rahi hain...
MAAN: Jaan jab tum mere itne qareeb aake mujhe itne pyaar se chhuogi to is mamuli insaan ka dil to machalega na???
GEET: To mamuli insaan phir apni chot ka ilaj khud kijiye aur dil ko sambhaliye main chali apki coffee lane...

Taking advantage of his loose grip she ran off...

MAAN: Arey Geet sambhalke!!!

After sometime Geet was back with his coffee...
He sipped his coffee while Geet was sitting on her side of bed...

MAAN: Geet tumne to mujhpe hukm chalana shuru kar diya hai...
GEET: Matlab???? Maine kya kiya Maan???
MAAN: Aur nahin to kya pehle bas kehti thi ki mujhe kadvi nahin meethi coffee peeni chahiye ab to tumne meri coffee mein cheeni hi mila di...
GEET: Aisa kaise ho sakta hai maine khud banayi hai aur bilkul cheeni nahin dali...
MAAN: Lo khud hi taste karlo...

She took the cup from Maan and sipped. She made really bad wala face...

GEET: Maan ismein to bilkul cheeni nahin hai... Ye to bilkul kadvi hai...

MAAN(thinking): Awww meri pari kitni cutie lagti hai ise to main roz apni coffee sip karaoonga aur phir...

He pinched her cheeks and then kissed them...

GEET: Maan main kuch pooch rahi hoon apse...kahan hai cheeni????
MAAN: Actually jaan pehle to nahin thi ab hai...

Geet was looking at him with questioning eyes not getting any of his words...

MAAN: Meri pari se meetha aur kya ho sakta hai??? Is kadvi coffee ko meetha karne ke liye meri pari ki ek sip kafi hai...aur is coffee ki mithaas ke aage shahad ki mithaas bhi pheeki hai...

Geet was turning pink with his claims...

MAAN: Haye jaan tumhare in gulabi galon ko dekh ke kuch kuch ho raha hai...
GEET: Maan please ab bas bhi kariye na...
MAAN: Achcha bas karne ki fees lagegi...
GEET: Fees?????????
MAAN: Haan...

He pointed towards his lips...
Geet hit there lightly... He pouted cutely...
Not able to resist the cute pout she pecked him and turned away shyly... Maan hugged her from back and kissed her cheek...

MAAN: Thanks jaan meri kadvi aur pheeki life mein apne pyaar ki mithaas bharne ke liye... Hamesha is saath ko barkaraar rakhna tumhara Maan ab tumhare pyaar ke bina jee nahin payega...

She kept her one hand on his and her other hand on his cheeks...

GEET: Maan is saath ko koi nahin tod sakta Babaji hain na hamesha se hamare saath... Unhi ne humein milaya hai aur wo hi hamare saath ko hamesha barkaraar rakhenge...

He kissed her lovingly on the other cheek...

MAAN: Chalo jaan ab so jao tum thak gayi hogi aur subah college bhi jana hai...
GEET: Maan college pe yaad aaya mujhe apse ek request karni thi...
MAAN: Geet main TUMHARA Maan hoon tum mujhse request nahin mujhe order karogi...
GEET: Maan pehle meri baat to sun lijiye shayad apko ye baat pasand na aaye...

He turned her...

MAAN: Pari hukm kare aur ye khaaksaar mana kare not possible...
GEET: Mr. Khaaksaar pehle meri baat sun lijiye...
MAAN: Achcha jaan bolo...
GEET: Maan wo mere dost hain na main unse aur ye baat nahin chupana chahti ki meri shaadi ho chuki hai...kya main unhein hamari shaadi ki baat bata doon???

He cupped her face and looked into her questioning eyes with all the love and care he possessed for her...

MAAN: Jaan is Maan Singh Khurana pe sirf aur sirf tumhara haq hai aur tumhein apne Maan ko claim karne ke liye kisi ki permission ki zaroorat nahin...samjhi!!! Tum jisko chaho ye bata sakti ho ki you own MSK...

She was awed by his statement... He kissed on her forehead... She hugged him passionately, emotionally moved with the intensity of his love...
He hugged her back lovingly feeling her passion... He broke the hug reluctantly not leaving her completely...

MAAN: Jaan ab humein sona chahiye kal bahot dinon baad tum college jaa rahi ho to araam tumhare liye bahot zaroori hai...
GEET: Jo hukm huzur-e-aala ka...
MAAN: Kya baat hai jaan...
GEET: Ab MSK ke saath ka kuch to asar hoga...

They both had a good round of laughter and slept peacefully in each other's embrace...

Geet texted Nupur that she has to tell something important to all of them and she asked her to tell all the members of the gang to meet her at the canteen before the class...

Geet was going by herself when Maan said that he'll drop her and pick her up she doesn't need to go alone... So they left for Geet's college...
All the way Maan noticed Geet was very restless he knew she was scared about the reaction of her friends on knowing that she has been hiding that she is already married...
She was going to open the door of the car as it stopped in front of the college gate but Maan held her hand he cupped her cheek with his other hand...

MAAN: Jaan tum itna tension kyun le rahi ho wo tumhare dost hain to tumhari problem zaroor samjhenge aur agar koi problem ho to tumhara masiha kis din ke liye hai... Waise don't worry I'm sure wo tumhein samjhenge...

He put a little pressure on the hand he was holding assuring her and kissed her forehead...

MAAN: Ab is tension yaheen tata karo aur apni pyaari si smile dedo warna mera din khar...

Before he could complete she smiled and kissed him on cheek...

GEET: Jab mere masiha mere saath hain to koi tension tik hi nahin sakti...thanks Maan...
MAAN: Ye thanks wanks apne paas rakhiye aur yunhi muskurati rahiye is khaaksaar ke liye to yehi kaafi hai...

She again smiled shyly and left saying bye...

She entered the canteen and saw every member of the gang having same question in their eyes...
Nupur reached first beside her...

Nupur: Kya baat hai Geet?? Sab theek hai na???
GEET: Haan sab theek hai actually mujhe tum logon ko kuch batana tha jo maine kafi dinon se chupaya hua hai...
Mayank: Aisi kya baat hai Geet??
GEET: Dekho guys mujhe galat mat samajhna main kabhi chhupana nahin chahti thi par halaat mere favour mein nahin the...
Nupur: Geet baat kya hai bol na...
GEET: Ye college join karne se pehle hi meri shaadi ho chuki thi... I'm already married guys!!!!!

so guys wat do u think wat wud b her frnds' reaction???

big SRY for late update and thanks for bearing wid me
Hope I lived upto all of your expectations!!!!!!
Your opinion is really precious and important for me
so pls do let me know what you all think about the update'''
pleading for ur comments guys...

Pls don't forget to press the LIKE button!!!!

Pls do comment''..they make my day!!!

THANK U ALL!!!!
Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

superb i hope ki geet ke friends geet ko samze aur maza to tab aayega jab vo ye nahi manege ki geet mrs. msk hai aur fir maan piche se aaye aur proudly kahe ki geet sach kah rahi hai vo hi mrs. msk hai continue soon dear eagerly waiting for next part

Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first of all thanks a ton for the dedication luv u so so so much
um glad to have a friend like u

now coming to the update
isko bolte hai dhamakedar update
superb mindblowing fantastic one...
maan ne kafi naughty ho gaya hai har waqt sharat sujti rehti hai usse

chot lag gayi na itni zyada ki first aid ki zarurat pad gayi...god maan kitna pareshan karta hai geet ko
and mr. resposible ko jo daant padi
par uncle aunty vo geet ke saath time spend kar raha tha na

i loved that part superb one jab geet maan ke liye coffee lati hai yar
geet ke peete hi usme swad aa gaya

hayye kya pyar hai

and then her college part tere question ka answer..
well i feel uske freinds itna to usse samajte hai hai yar...so there wont be any prob i feel

continue soon meri writer ji

luv u
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
simply superb loved it alot
plz Maan ko akay bolnai daina YEH MRS.MAAN SINGH KHURANA HAI MAAN KI GEET 😍something like this
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
i wanna see the look on her friend's face specially the one who is having feelings for geet

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