PRINCESS DIARY- MY FIRST FF chapter 11 on page 26 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: pri01

Wow it's awesome love it ...AS has recognized Manyata and UV is already falling for Manyata it's great

Plzzz update soon awaiting for the nextchapter

Thxs for the pm🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi

really reallly fabulous update and singing scene was truely awesome..

Loved ManVeer..

thanks for the pm..

take care

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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Great update! I love how Manyata is respectful towards DS in the FF and hopefully she'll continue to be ;)
I loved how MV met and the bike ride! Hayye! :P Fab job :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Awesome as usual 👍🏼... Update the next part soon and thankz for the PM...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey dearo,me nizza
loved ure ff completely...using this id to read ff's and os hence send pm on this id next time...other one lakshyasss...
great imagination dear...
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nams4, Sara.Khan, nizzalicios..., dreamyjennice, capriya, Vampgirl, Henriette, zigzagway_sadi, --ANGEL--, pri01, -iPayal-, adventure_gurl, *Dakoo_Minzy*, iPayal-Vishwa-, ,Hubze ,nizzalicios..capriya,.roking_nidhi223 thanks a lot my frns , i glad that u people liked it thankooo😃
Edited by Kesarmania - 13 years ago
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#77
chapter 5

Udaymahal 1 am

Uday was twisting and turning on his bed, he could not sleep. Since he had returned from the function only one voice was replayed again and again in his brain, and that was of Manyata .

Uv: oh god , mujhe neend kyun nahi aarahi hai? Baar baar uska khayal kyun aaraha hai? Nahi nahi yeh pyaar nahi ho sakta! You don't believe in love udayveer no , she is nothing . mere wajha se bahutse girls ki neend or chain udd jaati hai ,par koi aise nahi jo mujhse meri peaceful sleep chura sakti hai tum bhi nahi Manyata .

He pulled his blanket over his head and continued to struggle to sleep throughout the midnight. At last his brain was tired and his fatigued eyes closed their shutter when it was almost near dawn.

Ratatat-tat , Uday veer woke up by knock at his door.

Uv: come in he said lazily

Un: dada kya hua hai aap ko, tabiyat toh thik hai na?

Uv: don't worry my little sis , actually I slept late last night, isslye thoda laahass he yawned extending his both arms and then continued I mean late uthgayein.

Un: thoda late , time dekhiye dada.

He looked at watch and shot up from bed like bullet. Uv: oh shit, 11 'clock.

Un: aap ko pata hai , Aaisab aapse urgent milna chahatein hai , aap ke mobile pe unhone try kiya but you did not pick up.

Uv: . silent mode pe tha, I forgot to change the profile, chal main jaldise ready ho jaat hoon. It must be very important ,waise bhi Kal function ke baad ' AS' kuch disturbed Lag rahi thi.

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Shivthirth palace of Peshwa 12 pm

Aaisaab , Udayveer and legal adviser of peshwae Doctorsaab were sitting in Aaisaab's studyroom. They had explained Uday everything what had happened, How Aaisaab noticed the scar on Manyata's back and Doctorsaab investigated and proved her doubt correct.

Uv: it's like miracle Aaisaab , for 16 years we were searching for her and we all had lost hope. Abb bhi yakeen nahi ho raha hai ke woh hi peshwae parivar ki badi rajkumari hai. Aaisaab aap sirf hukum dijeye , baaki sab hum sambhal leinge .

As: aapse humein yehein umeed thi, you know beta I trust you more than my children . Brijraj toh uss accident ke baad kisse chizz mein interest nahi laetein , sirf shaarab mein dubae rehaitae hain. Aur mrunalini aur uss ke family se humein koi asha nahi hai.

Uv: Don't be upset 'AS' , hum aagaye hain, humari rajkumari ke bina ghar nahi lauteinge. He said it confidently and slight smirk spread on his lips.

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Manyata peered through window outside, she was worried for her baba. It was 8 pm already and her baba had not returned back. Suddenly she heard a knock at her door. She ran towards door thinking her baba must have come .But when she opened the door she was shocked to see a young handsome man wearing black shirt with dark tom ford sunglasses standing at her door.

M: tum wahi hona big-dale amir-jada jo uss din mila tha, yahan chawl mein bhi pahunch gaya, kya karne aaye ho? Hum gareeb log se Christmas ka chanda magne aaye ho kya? Phir toh sorry, baba ghar pe nahi hai ok kuch nahi mil sakata. And she tried to slam the door on his face but Uday pushed it open.

Uv: hum tumhe chanda maagne wale lagate hai princess?

M: hello tum ho kaun mujhe princess bulane wale? Waise bhi raat ko chasma pehan kar yahan pe toh andhe bikari ya phir gali ke gunde log aate hai har festival mein chanda maagne. Abb please jaao yahan se , ek toh main apne baba ke liye pehlese pareshan hoon aur upperse tum tapak gaye.

Uv: don't worry princess I m here at your service, aapke asli father ke paas lejane aaya hoon. He grabbed her hand firmly and dragged her outside her room. By now her chawl people had come out of their room and they watched curiously from their balcony at clamant group of journalists struggling with army of royal bodyguards. Uday pulled Manyata towards his car holding her arm and she tried to resist him with all her physical power and at same time cursed him in rage.

M: halkat, idiot, cowdung ke kide, suwar ki poonch, khasmanu khane,vaede, kutte ,kaminae chod mujhe. She saw her best friend Akash looking at her helplessly, "Akash help me" she called out to him with hope that he will come for her rescue. But he just stood at one corner like defeated solider and Udayveer drove away with his princess.

Edited by Kesarmania - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Loved it especially his way of just easily grabbing her and her curses lol loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it keep it up!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lolz! great update! Christmas ka chanda waali line made me laugh! ^_^

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