Maneet FF- Pavithra vivah-pt-22 , pg-144 - Page 68

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Posted: 13 years ago
uff..still waiting ..sad no update!
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Varsha plz dear update next part me roz wait karti hu ,plz varsha kisi din 2 update ek saath de k humko surprise de do @lz plz plz update soon me waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART-20

"its me…."maan turned back no courage to see her face….

"aap…maan sir why did you done to me….."she hold is shirt collar and pulled close…she panicked she don't know what she is doing….her tears were not stopping and she felt the movement she want to kill her self due to her weakness and helpless…her pure fillings on marriage is vanished by maan…now he is the victim in front of her eyes…

"how dare you to do so…are you human be or a animal….how can you do this to me…you…."her culture what she grown not let her to speak more…but she raised her hand to slap ..but she couldn't its felt so weak she started to sink…maan hold her wrist tightly and twisted her back to him…she try to escape from him but the situation made him too strong and she is become too weak…she started collapse in his hands…

"you want to know…you want to know the reason geet…how Darley you try to give entry in my khurana mansion and how can you marry my brother dev…."he gritted his teeth..geet felt to weak and she stopped her protest….again maan turned her to his side…

"may… dev…impossible…."she didn't completed her words..

"ha…from the day one I observed wontedly you try to trap dev..you try to search the way to reach khurana mension…I have tried my best to stop you…but everything left my hand… finally you people try to marry in temple….bcoz of you dev taken such a big decision in his life so …so geet this will be a punishment to you…you should bare this life long…. …"he thrown her on bed…"geet listen carefully I won't let you take such steps in my brother life…how can you marry other person when you already…"he stopped with jolt…geet was dumb led..what I am hearing is it true…dev loved me… he planned to marry me…oh god…but what happened now same thing happen by maan oh bhabhaji why you let me to be alive….her head started to spin…her head ace again started to spread all over her body she couldn't control any more…maan kept his right leg on her pallu whish is laying next to her…his another foot is on ground….he thrown some photographs on her face…"these are our marriage original photos….if you try to encourage dev again ill show this photographs to him…another important thing you can marry anyone or you can go with anybody I don't care but you shouldn't turn back to our family…understood.." he roared like a lion….

Geet shivered….he didn't give her at least one chance to speak also…...geet grabbed those photographs and she went totally blank. Those photographs were proving that she married with maan. actually she is in unconscious condition but still at photographs were too natural which is the proof her marriage. he went to near door…"out side driver is waiting for you, now you can leave…but again and again I am warning you, if you try to ruin my brother life that day will be the end of the day for you . i won't let you to do anything to dev what you have done to anni…" is it she is listening he had a doubt he close the distance between them…already she is closed her eyes and drowning down…don't know what made him to hold her….he grabbed her before falling down…he try to wake holding her cheeks with right thumb and forefinger roughly but already she lost her sense.

"geet ..otto…geet.." no response…immediacy he placed her slowly on bed and sprinkle some water but still she didn't wake from sudden shock…the unknown worry gathered In his heart….he scooped her in his arms and went to car. He placed very carefully next to driver seat and he himself derived the car towards city hospital. Within few minutes he reached the hospital. He didn't wait for any stretcher to carry her …he himself carried her from his arms..he ran madly to doctors room…

"doctor pls check her…"already he himself wet due to heavy sweating….

Doctor sudden surprised looking him in this stage…she rush to check the patent…"Mr. Maan singh kurana pls wait…" maan waited outside with restless.

After few minutes doctor came outside….she seems little bit confuse…".doctor what happened….is it she ok…"

"Mr. Maan singh khurana…."she don't know how to tell him...

"tell me doctor…"he holed her arms….. when doctor delay to tell him he is loosing his patience.

"I think she is pregnant…"

"what …"with sudden shock he left her arms at one jerk….

"yes Mr. Khurana….we should do some other check up to confirm it…before that I should speak to her husband…can you call her husband pls…"doctor didn't expect that maan married her bcoz from past two years she is a family doctor for khurana family..now how can she expect that geet is his wife….still her bride dress made her confuse..but she didn't dare to question maan.

Maan totally blanked nothing is running in his mind…how can it possible…to be with her one night she become a pregnant…oh…I thought I am punishing her what she done to anni…but faith planning to punish me….is faith paying back what I have done to her…..mere amsh uski ghodh par…oh nahi…his eyes were teary…his mind is not ready accept the truth and it is not forgiving geet what she done to anni…

"Mr.Maan singh khurana why what happened…are you ok…"doctor still confused from his act.

"yes I am ok…"he wake up from his thought…

"so can you inform her husband…"doctor request again…

"no need…I am the reason for her pregnancy…pls proceed…"his cold voice uttered…

"par maan…"he stopped her in mid indicating from his fore finger…

Doctor understood…without a single word she went inside….

After one hour when she came out maan is missing…she shifted her ward. Now she is looking little bit better. Within few minutes doctor got a call from maan " doctor listen carefully… I don't want explore my marriage secret to with anybody and I hope even you maintain something . pls tell me how she is…"

"she is ok maan but…something is bothering her..still she didn't gain her sense..i think she is in shock…can you come here at once…"

"no…." he cut the call…he walked like wounded lion…within few minutes he changed his decision again he drive his car towards city hospital…its almost midnight…he enter in her room…geet closed her eyes …there is lot of pain in her face…still her eye lids were wet…while sleeping her face seems so innocent..his hand moved without his knowledge on her forehead…he caressed softly….his fingers travelled from her forehead to her neck and then shoulder….still she is laying like a doll….his hand moved to her tummy….its moved under her saree fleets…. slowly he caressed again…his fingers were feeling her warmth satin silk skin…mere amsh…again and again he caressed her tummy…it's a really beautiful movement in each and every human life ….when the human bee knew his own creature is forming…its a great feel…he hate him self being cause of her pain…and the same time even he hated geet bcoz she is the cause of making him monster…she is the cause of his pain….

There is a slight movement in her body…..her hand unknowingly its caressing her tummy…even her hand caressed her tummy at the same time…maan goose bumped…maan hold her hand….again she slipped in her sleep.

At morning when geet open her eyes…everything looks soo beautiful and good….it seems its fresh morning…with new beginning… suddenly when she scanned her self..she remembered the past night..oh god..she is become again panic…again every incident rushed in front of her eyes…waiting for dev…maan kidnap..forceful marriage…no I am not agreeing this marriage…my husband is one and only balvanth…how can he do this to me… she remembered her parents and darji…today you people are not with me that's the reason everything is happening to me…no I can't bare this…the truth that she married maan that is killing her…her culture is not letting her to take so easily….again and again she remembered her marriage with balwanth..her sathphere, her maang filling rasam each and every rasams are disturbing her……the marriage manthra's echoing in her ear…again and again…she lost her patience….she saw here and there…there is a sharp knife placed on the table…she is taken the knife in her hand…her gaze moved to her wrist…she is above to cut her nerve…at the same time door opened and doctor entered inside…

"hi Mrs khurana…...how are you…"geet shocked….what she is addressing me….

"I am fine.." she hided knife under the pillow ….

"so how you feel….i think your husband not slept last night…"

"husband….."doctor didn't give much importance to her…

"so geet…you are expecting…but I had a complaint on you being educated why you didn't come for normal testing and how can you be so careless…no geet now you are becoming a mother…have some responsibility…"

Another shock…. mother…what she mean" what…"her mouth left open…

"yes now your pregnancy is confirmed… if I am not wrong already eleven weeks completed…haina geet…"she is busy checking her heartbeat by stethoscope…she didn't notice much….

"geet ….but you are lucky..your baby is lucky …it is ok…and be ready for some other casual testing also…sister will help you….geet pls don't skip your monthly checkups… ." she went out…

Geet sat like a dumb…what is happening in my life….first I lost my parents…and again my lovely darji only one person in this world who understood me better…after that I married with unknown person….who left me without completing his promises…again anni in my life who brought a new twist and happiness to me…again I arrased by monster naming maan he married me forcefully …now I am pregnant which is not expected oh….her tears rolled on her cheeks….again she pulled knife from under the pillow when she about to cut her wrist…some thing stop her…is it anni no ..now she is not worrying about anni bcoz now she is safe with arjun…ha she got a answer…her new life…her new creature…her new partner of this life…a tiny cute life..a small baby…her hand caressed her tummy…the feel of new small cute baby…there is a small smile slipped on her lips…yes I should live…only for my baby…only for my baby who is sharing my blood and flesh…..i should start new fresh life…only for my baby…here after only baby and anni is in my life….before that I should teach a lesson for khurana's brothers…how dare they do this to me …her anger turn on dev…

When nurse came inside she didn't found geet in her bed….immediately she is given the information to maan. maan thrown his mobile angrily and he rush to sanjeevini…

His guess is right geet is with arjun on the entrance. She changed her dress….and she is looking like a fresh flower…maan turned his car to KM..some how she is ok that's enough. he didn't sleep a single minute hole night….now his eyes were burning…he went to wash room and taken cold water bath…after finishing his bath he made his way to KC.

When he entered KC everything is cool …..once his gaze turn to geet cabin…she is busy with her work…his ego is satisfied looking her here…but he don't know very soon he will see another geet in front of him…..

Dev entered geet cabin…actually he is too shy what happened yesterday. Once when he wake it is almost morning…he didn't remember what happen at last evening….suddenly he realized that geet waiting for him yesterday evening…he felt so bad and he rush to office to ask her forgiveness.

Dev shocked looking at geet…she is looking too new….she is wearing mangalsuthara and her maang filled with sindhur….there was a new glow in her face….

"geet…"he called surprisingly…..

Geet stood on her place….very soon the anger replaced in her eyes…."geet what is this…."

"dev first you tell me did you plan to marry me yesterday…."she is questioning furiously…her eyes were turned to red like burning charcoals….

Even maan surprised looking her in this new face….no one notice him due to blinds…"yes…geet …but…"next movement his right side cheek swollen with a hard slap of geet's hand…..

Precap : geet decides to leave KC…Anni saw sameera and brij……….

Hi everybody,

How are you without our GHSP and our maneets….i am not fine feeling too bad…but what to do …there is no way…my only one dream that again our maneets to be present in any other channels…..

So buddies thanks for your honest comment….i need some more support from your part…I hope you all will be with me….again requesting for honest like and comments…

Once again thanking you all

Varsha.

Happy Merry Christmas…..buddies…

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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome


hate maan for dis


marrying her nd leave her aside at dis stage


be a man yaar


nd bechara dev



bt dey deserve dis


waiting for the moment when maan cumes to know abt sameera nd brij involvement


not geet



update next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
superb part
ossum one
really
hope now maan understands that she never trapped dev at all
waiting for the next part dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
excellent update yaar...i luvd ot continue soon...

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