Kriyaansh FF-YOung Love NOTE(pg 150) - Page 51

Originally posted by: -sofiya-

awesome !

Thnxx

Originally posted by: magical_mania

Oh man!! Kya likhti ho tum hass k stomach ache ho gaya...kria k idea mast tha n poor neha lol n vicky instead of running wants to take a pic..dy both r hilarious waiting 4 wat cms next..update soon

he he thnk u😆😆

Originally posted by: namylovkriyansh

mujhe bhe bhut dar lagta hah lizard se,poor neha..lets c wwt she does to kria...kriA IS SOO NAUGHTY HERE

yea she s...😃

Originally posted by: kritika325

awesomeee...😆luved it so so mch...❤️❤️

Thnk u😃

Originally posted by: kriyansh960

HAHAHAHA !! bechari neha !!! ab kya hoga kria ka !! 🤣

loved it !! <3

Thnxxx😆

Originally posted by: crazysky

lol love kricky...

yea Kricky...nyc name😆😆

Originally posted by: prrk86

awesome

thnxx😃

Originally posted by: perfectangel

awsome yr nd loved it so so much❤️

thnk uuu😳

Originally posted by: killerbinny

i just loved it...hehehehe...kria izz just copy of mine...lolzz...bt must say she'z damn daring...main to yeh sab canteen mein krti hoon aur miss kria g toh class mein hi...wah g wah!!!

he he he...canteen me..lol

Originally posted by: sapna_gada

awesome...

thanks for pm...

waiting for your next update...

pleasure,😃

Originally posted by: aditi061

I can't stop laughin . Gud sense of humour

thnkuu😆😆

Originally posted by: swaron502

osm osm osm osm osm...!!!!!!!!!!!

thnxx dear😳

Originally posted by: sweetapple2995

dude just read like 10 parts of your ff and it was sooo awesome!! sry for latecoming ab main dyan se padoongi hahah but loved this can't wait to see what neha does hahah

he he apology accptd😆😆
nxt tym late mat hna...😆😆

Rey in library

Rey: mai yahan baithke jiske notes bana raha hu wo college ghum rahi hai wo bhi kiske saath...mre hi dost k sath wo b haath pakadke... Damn.. Ufff..Muje itna gussa kyu araha hai... Calm down rey...

A guy sitting nxt to rey... His name is ryan

Ryan: tum apne aap se kya baat kar rahe ho?

Rey: kuch b karun tumhe isse kya.. Apna kaam karo

Ryan: wahi to kar raha hu.. Tum itne gusse me kyu ho?? Kisine tumse kch kaha..

Rey: giving fake smile..Nahi... Kisine kuch nahi kaha.. Mai pagal hu..muje aisi harkatein karne me bada maza ata hai..aur kuch?

Ryan: ohhh... Muje laga hi tha..

rey: kya laga?

Ryan: yahi tumhara screw thoda dheela hai

Rey: angrily...oyeee...

Librarian: silence..ye library hai koi parliament nahi...

Ryan: ye buddha bhi na.. Humne kab kaha k ye parliamnt hai... Hai na dude..?? Waise wats ur name

Rey: *irritatd* reyansh.. Reyansh singhania.. Ab tum apna kaam karoge..

Ryan: mai apna kaam hi to kar raha hu..

Rey: kaisa kaam.. Muje distrb karne ka

RyaN: haan..mai kch dino se library aake sabko tang karta hu..muje maza aata hai..

Rey: khinch k do thappad lagaunga to aur maza ayega tumhe... chalo jao yahan se..

Ryan: kamaal hai yaar bhadak kyu rahe ho..chill m gng.. Hve a nyc day..

Rey: aaj kal har jagah muje pagal hi kyu mil rahe hai..

Neha: kria tu muje kahi dikh ja bas... Pata nahi kaha ghum rahi hogi... Call krke dekhti hu.. She calls up kria... Bt no answr.. ufff isne silent me rakh diya hga apna cel.. Ab mai isse kaha dhundo... She taps hr feet and screams Kriaaa

Vicky: kria ye jo area hai na bht silent hai aur rey ki fav jagah yehi hai...

Kria: accha.. Mje to acchi nahi lagi... Idhar hai kya...?

Vicky: yahan koi aata jata nahi na...aur rey ko aisi hi jagah pasand hai

Kria: emmm... Waise vicky ye rey itna boring kyu hai...aur kitna khadoos bhi... Huh... Zyada baat hi nahi karta...

Vicky: wo to aisa hi hai...

Kria: uske mom dad bhi aise hi hai

Vicky: nahi.. Uski mom bilkul tumhre jaisi hai..full of life...

Kria: aur uske dad..

Vicky: uske dad..

Kria: shouts vicky wo dekho..

Vicky: kya hua...

Kria: wo chapadganju raghu..

Vicky:tum usse kaise janti ho

Kria: wo aaj subah uske sath jhagda hua tha..

Vicky: kria tum uske mu mat lago..wo harami type ladka hai..

Kria: haan mje bhi aisa hi lagta hai...

Vicky: wo mera dushman hai

Kria: accha..kyu

Vicky: cuz wo rey ka dushman hai..

Kria: rey ka..kyu?

Vicky: wo actually ek baar kya hua apni class ki ek ladki hai priyanka..raghu uske sath chedkani kar raha tha..har roz usko pareshan karta..aur wo ek din rey k paas apni prblm leke agayi...to rey ne iss raghu ki bht dhulayi ki aur saari clg ki saamne khada krke priyanka ko sandal se marne k liye kaha..aur usne maara bhi... Sab dekhte reh gaye... Tabse he s lyk mauka nahi chodta rey se apni dushmani nikalne ka..u b safe...usse baat b mat karo.. Ok..

Kria: ok.. kamaal hai yaar...rey to ek dum Hero type ladka hai...i likish.. Smiles..

Vicky: haan wo to hai... Isliye ladkiyan uske aage piche ghumti hai..

Kria: tum bhi kuch kam nahi ho...

Vicky: he he.. Thnx fr d compliment.. Kria tum bht acchi ho lyk baaki ladkiyo ki tarah nahi ho...bht hi bindaas ho...sweet aur innocnt bhi.. Hamesha aisi hi rehna...

Kria: wo to mai hu aur hamesha rahungi... smiles...chalo mai tumhe apni fav jagah dikhati hu..

Vicky: ok madam

neha sees kria vicky roaming...

Neha: kria ki bacchi waha hai..and shouts kria..

VickY: kria tumne neha ki awaz suni..

kria: nahi to..

Neha: shouts vicky

Vicky: kria abhi maine vicky krke suna... He turns and sees neha.. Dekho kria maine kaha tha na..neha agayi..he waves his hand and says hi neha...

Kria: ohh no... Kya haath hilake hii kar rahe ho..bhaago... Wo hame peetne aarahi hai...

Neha: kria ruk... Mai tujhe nahi chodungi..

Kria vicky while running

Vicky: kria kitna bhaga rahi ho...

Kria: kya karein aaj ka din hi aisa hai

Neha: running shouts ruk jao kria vicky..

Vicky: kria wo dead end hai yaha se bhaago..

kria: ohhh thnxxx...

Vicky: turns and says neha tum hame nahi pakad paogi...

Neha: idiot mai tumhe nahi chodungi...

kria and rey's zordaar takkar... And rey holds hr tightly... aur fir der aankhon aankhon ka khel starts...

vicky: rey chod kria ko... Kria chalo wo arahi hai..

rey lost in kria's eyes..

Kria: rey mai thik hu...aap mujhe chodiye..

Rey: ha? Sry.. And he slowly moves his hand frm hr waist..

Neha: rey usko mat chodna...plzzz...

Kria tries to run and rey holds kria's hand

Kria: rey yeh aap.. Plzz muje jaane dijiye..

Vicky: rey chod...

Rey: smiles..emmm...nahiii chodunga

Neha: aha...ab bach k kaha Jayegi kria...muje bht bhagaya tum dono ne...and she hits vicky wid hr bag..

Vicky: oye..

Neha: kya oye... Ek aur dun..?

Rey: yes ek aur..

Vicky stands behind rey..dekho neha bag side me rakho zor se lag rahi hai..

Neha: accha...aur zor se maarungi...

Rey holding kria's hand stares @ her..

Neha: rey ab tum iska haath chod do...

rey stil starng @ kria.. vicky hits on his head..haath chod...

Rey: ohh sry..and he leaves kria's hand

Neha: mai tra gala daba dungi kria.. jaanti hai mai kitna darr gayi thi... aur mam ne mujhe daanta wo b bewajah... And she holds kria's neck

kria: help

Rey: arrey chodo neha kya kar rhi ho

Vicky: chodo neha...he pushes neha and says khabardar agar meri kria baby ko kch kiya to..

Neha: aha.. Bas gala pakda tha dabaya nahi..ab daba dungi.. Aur kya kria baby

Rey: kria baby?

Vicky: haan... Ab to mai aur kria besties hai... Aur kria mri kria baby hai

Kria: haan...

Rey: enuff kuch zyada horaha hai..

Vicky: kyu? tu jal raha hai??

Neha. Wo kyu jalega.. Ye to hona hi tha.. Do gadhe ek dusre k besties hi hte hai..🤣🤣🤣

Dont Forget 2 hit like and commnt😆

yaar !! i love ur FF !! it so real !! i start imagining the whole scene !!!

Its really gud yaar vicky ki besty kria baby lol n rey ho raha h deewana kria k pyaar me..nyc update n update soon.

hey its just awesome ...
loved every line of it ...
n i dont know y but while reading ur ff there's always a smile on my face...
n loved neha's line" Do gadhe ek dusre k besties hi hte hai..🤣🤣🤣 " lol...

update soon

nice update yaar..loved it...👏👏update soon

Awesome part dude. I just loved it. Keep it up.

Originally posted by: kriyansh960

yaar !! i love ur FF !! it so real !! i start imagining the whole scene !!!

i was smiling like an idiot the whole time !! hahahahah !!

rofl!! ur too gud dearie