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PART 20
Maan broke the hug...
MAAN: Jaan ab humein chalna chahiye warna late ho jayenge...
GEET: Ji!
He gave her the 'haye' look and she blushed remembering their phone conversation... Finally they left for the hospital...
Maan was really tensed about Geet's health and these hospitals and more than regular check ups only reminded him of Rano's condition at the time of carrying Geet... His heart was drowning in pool of anxiety with every kilometer they were covering for hospital... Geet noticed the silence in him...
GEET: Kya hua Maan aap itne chup kyun ho gaye???
Maan didn't want to stress Geet due to his fear...
MAAN(fake smile): Kuch nahin Geet ye Delhi ka traffic bhi na barhta hi jaa raha hai...
GEET: Maan main apse ye pooch rahi hoon ki aap chup kyun hain aur aap mujhe Delhi ke traffic ke bare mein bata rahe hain???
MAAN: Wahi na Geet dekho ye traffic itna zyada hai ki insaan ko bahot concentration ke saath drive karna parta hai isliye drive karna ek bahot tiring job ho jati hai aur tumhi batao itni tiring job karte hue bhala koi baat kaise kar sakta hai???
GEET: Waise Maan bare shehron ki na yehi problem hai jitni jagah nahin utne log aur jitne log nahin utni gariyaan... Bekar hote hain ye bare sheher...
MAAN: Are Geet main sirf traffic ki baat kar raha tha tum to mere shahar ki kami ginwane pe utar aai...
GEET: Ab main kya kar sakti hoon apke sheher mein itni kamiyaan hi hain ki ginne lago to subah ho jaye...
MAAN: Aisi kya kami hai mere sheher mein??
GEET: Kya kami hai?? Gariyon aur bari bari imarton ke alawa yahaan hai hi kya?? Na nahar na talaab bas ek nadi hai jiska paani theek se pata bhi nahin chalta...aur pollution itna hai ki aasmaan mein theek se sitare bhi nazar nahin aate huh isse achcha to mera hoshiayarpur hai kam se kam Babaji ki banayi is kaynaat ki khoobsurati to pata chalti hai...
MAAN: Tumhein galatfahmi hai Geet...mana ki main city mein bahot rush hota hai, pollution bhi hai aur sirf bari buildings aur gariyan dikhti hain par main tumko aaj ek alag Delhi dikhaoonga jahan charon taraf tumhein is kaynaat ki khoobsurati dikhegi...
GEET: Rehne dijiye Maan main nahin maan sakti... Delhi mein aisi koi jagah hai hi nahin...
MAAN: Mrs. Khurana apne abhi Delhi dekhi kahan hai...
GEET: Aisi baat hai Mr. Khurana to theek hai chaliye dekh lete hain apki is alag Delhi ko bhi...
MAAN: Wahan le chaloonga but hamari pehli destination yaani hospital aa gaya to pehle doctor se mil lein??
GEET: Ok chaliye...
While entering the hospital Maan was again surrounded by anxiety... His face was clouded with stress...
Geet noticed the the stress in him...
She touched his cheek...
GEET: Kya hua Maan aap itne pareshaan kyun lag rahe hain?? Gari mein bhi...
MAAN: Nahin Geet aisi koi baat nahin hai...
Geet caressed his face lovingly...
GEET: Maan apni Geet se jhoot bolenge aap??
MAAN: Kya keh rahi ho Geet...chalo humein late ho raha hai...
GEET: Jab tak aap mujhe apni pareshaani ki wajah nahin bataenge main doctor ke paas nahin jaoongi...
MAAN: Par Geet...
GEET: Maan main apko aise nahin dekh sakti please bataiye na kya baat hai...
He held her hands...
MAAN: Geet mujhe bahot darr lag raha hai...tum hamesha mere saath rahogi na??
GEET: Ye kaisa sawaal hai Maan... Maan ki Geet to Maan ke paas hi rahegi na...
MAAN: Par Geet kahin Rano mom ki tarah tumhein mujhse Babaji nahin chheenenge na???
GEET: Babaji pe vishwas rakhiye Maan aisa kuch nahin hoga waise bhi Maan apki Geet ne apka peechha kabhi chhoda hai...main apko itni asaani se chhod kar kahin nahin janewali samjhe aap... Hamesha aise hi apke saaye ki tarah apke saath saath rahoongi...
MAAN(smiled lightly n kissed her forehead): I lo...
Nurse: You are Mrs & Mr Khurana???
MAAN: Yes...
Nurse: Dr. Kirti is waiting for you...
MAAN: Ya we were going their only...
Dr. Kirti did Geet's check up...
Doctor: Very good Mrs. Khurana apki health mein drastic improvement hai... Mere hisaab se to apki body mein haemoglobin levels bhi increase hue hain kal reports aa jaengi to clearly pata chal jaega...
Maan's face enlightened with satisfaction hearing doctor's words...
MAAN: Doctor ab Geet bilkul theek hai na??? Ab koi pareshaani ki baat to nahin hai???
Doctor: Bilkul nahin Mr. Khurana bas aap isi tarah inka khayal rakhiye...apki wife aur apka bachcha dono bilkul perfect health mein rahenge...
GEET: Doctor ab main college jaa sakti hoon aur bed se uth sakti hoon??? Ye Maan na mujhe bed se hilne bhi nahin dete...
Doctor(smiling at her cute complain): Yes Mrs. Khurana aap college jaa sakti hain but make sure not to stress yourself much... Aap abhi bhi weak hain thoda sa stress ya thakaan apke liye nuqsaandeh hai...
MAAN: To phir aap college jaane ki permission kyun de rahi hain doctor??? Din bhar ki class karegi to thak hi jayegi...
Doctor: Dekhiye Mr. Khurana din bhar bed par baithe rehna bhi theek nahin hai...let her live her normal routine aur agar zyada hectic lage to half day karke wapas aa jayengi wo...right Mrs. Khurana???
GEET: Of course doctor...
Doctor: Make sure aap apne apko zyada tired na karein...isse BP levels mein fluctuation ho sakta hai...
GEET: Sure doctor...
Doctor: Take care Mrs. Khurana...
They took leave from Dr. Kirti...
Maan's restless mind was totally relaxed now... Geet noticed and smiled...
They settled in car...
GEET: To Mr. Khurana ab hamari second destination kya hai??
Maan completely forgot their earlier conversation by now...
MAAN: Jo aap kahein Mrs. Khurana...
GEET: Par Maan mujhe Delhi ke baare mein kya pata aur apne promise kiya tha na ki aap mujhe alag Delhi dikhaenge??
Now Maan was reminded of their earlier conversation... He bit his tounge...
MAAN: Sorry Geet main to bhool hi gaya tha but koi baat nahin chalo main apni pari ko Delhi ka ek alag roop dikhat hoon...
GEET: Ok maaf kiya ab bataiye to jaa kahan rahe hain...
MAAN: Pahonch ke to pata chal hi jayega thoda sabar karo jaan...
GEET: Par...
MAAN: Jaan pls no zidd...chalna hai na???
She nodded.
MAAN: To phir aage koi sawaal nahin...ok??
GEET: Ok...
After 45mins of drive he stopped the car...
MAAN: Lo aa gayi hamari second destination...
Geet excitedly opened her door and ran amidst a plain green field wid weeds and grasses that was shore to a beautiful lake whose water was shining in the moonlight and on the other side were shimmering arravali hills bathed in the moonlight. The whole scene mesmerised her and totally awed she twirled herself to take a glimpse of every corner of the place...
GEET: Wow Maan ye jagah kitni sundar hai...
Maan came and hugged her from the back keeping his chin on her shoulders..
MAAN: Meri pari ko ye jagah pasand aayi?
GEET: Sirf pasand nahin Maan bahot bahot bahot pasand aayi...sach mein Maan maine isse sundar jagah kabhi nahin dekhi...ye chandni mein dhula pahar aur chandni mein chamakta is talab ka behta paani isse zyada pavitra sundarta aur kahan dikhegi...
MAAN: Galat Geet main janta hoon isse kahin zyada pavitra sundarta ki prateek ko...
GEET: Achcha kahan hai???
MAAN: Tumhein dekhna hai???
She nodded. He made her sit leaning on a stone and lay in her lap. He took out his phone and showed her his wallpaper it was a picture of geet sleeping looking like an epitome of serenity...
GEET: Par Maan ye to meri tasveer hai...
A blush was already creeping up her cheeks...
MAAN: To???? Mere liye to pavitrata aur sundarta dono ke mayne hi meri pari hai meri jaan meri GEET...
Geet tumhari in ankhon ki chamak k saamne har sitare ki chamak pheeki par jati hai
He got up and kissed her eyes one by one lovingly...
MAAN: Tumhare chehre ki masumiyat aur chamak ke saamne to ye daagdar chaand kuch bhi nahi hai...aur tumhari bahon ke saaye mein jo sukoon hai wo is chaand ki chandni mein kahan...
Simultaneously he sweetly kissed her forehead then her cheeks and submitted himself in her embrace...
There was a rose bush at a little distance from them. Maan pointed towards the most beautiful rose on that bush...
MAAN: Ab tum kahogi ki wo gulab kitna nazuk aur sundar hai par Geet...
He slowly slid his finger on her lips...
MAAN: Par Geet tumhari in gulabi pankhudiyon ki nazakat usse kahin zyada hai...
Her lips started trembling under the electrifying effect of his finger...
MAAN: Dekho ek ungli ke asar se ye kaanpne lage...
She was going redder with his every word and now he was making her lose every sense of serenity hypnotizing her with those captivating dark eyes and electrocutive touch...
He moved his lips closer to hers whispering huskily...
MAAN: Aur kisi cheez ka swad itna bhi meetha hota hai ye mujhe pata hi nahin tha...
With that he took her inviting lips in his. As their lips met their already flowing passion oozed and lit a fire of passion through both their bodies and the slow kiss turned into a deep passionate demanding kiss... They gasped for air parting reluctantly... She hid her face in his chest instantly trying to control her urges still panting heavily... He pulled her closer in his embrace... Something struck his mind... He parted with Geet and put out his hand in front of her... She looked confusedly at him... He gestured asking her to dance with him...
GEET: Par Maan music ke bina hum dance kaise karenge...
MAAN: Geet hamari dhadkane hamare pyaar jo saaz chhed rahi hain unhein dhyan se suno...
Pls listen to this music guys
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pEyLo3cH_PA
She closed her eyes concentrating on their heartbeats giving her hand in his... He held her hands lovingly and made her stand...
Lost in the rhythm of their heartbeats she unknowingly put her hands on his shoulder...
The moment his hands touched the bare skin of her waist sparks flew she opened her eyes to get further in trance of those dark demanding eyes...
They were completely lost in each other...
He pulled her closer to himself leaving no gap between them entwining the fingers of their other hand they started swaying to beats of the rhythm their beating heart was creating...
He twirled her making the gap between them and then again again twirled her roughly closer to himself...
He lowered her on his one hand and kissed her collarbone passionately then slowly sliding his lips upwards reaching the tip of her chin..
He lifted her back she turned shyly and moved a little when he held her hands from the back and jerked her towards himself making her half bare back colliding on his chest...
The feel of her bare skin gave new levels to his desires... He removed her hairs n slid his finger on bare parts of her back then he jerked open her blouse string in a split second making her gasp... He slowly moved his palm on her bare back and turned her to face him... The havoc his touch was creating on her bare back let out a soft moan of his name from her...
He jerked her closer then again bent her on his hand... He slowly slid his finger on her jawline moving to her neck then to cleavage...
He slid her pallu with his finger... Her chest was heaving up and down due to heavy breathing... He took in the beautiful sight for few moments then replaced his finger with lips and started exploring her upper areas...
He sucked deeply on the nape of her neck then slowly moved his tounge from there to her exposed cleavage... He sucked on her upper cleavage then bit their hard... She let out a deep moan of his name...
His desires were soaring high... He made her stand and pushed her to the nearby tree and started licking at the same spot he bit trying to sooth her pain... She was moaning and panting constantly...
His hand reached her shoulder... He slid her sleeve down and started sucking the exposed skin and kneading her chest which was by now only covered with her lacy net bra she wore...
A loud thunder brought them back to their senses... A deep groan escaped his lips... He leaned on her with all his weight panting heavily trying to control his urges... Her hands slipped at his back controlling his weight on her...
They were still somewhere lost in the ecstatic world of their passions when it started raining...
Maan parted reluctantly...
She immediately adjusted her dress...
MAAN: Oh no jaldi gadi mein chalo Geet...
GEET: Maan please thodi der rukte haina... Baarish mein bheegne ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai...
She twirled herself enjoying the rain...
MAAN: Please Geet abhi tumhein agar sardi ho gayi to problem ho jayegi... Bas ek baar doctor keh den tum poori tarah theek ho without any ifs or buts main khud tumhein sikhaoonga baarish mein enjoy kaise karte hain...
He winked at her...
She went crimson getting his hint and hit him on shoulder lightly...
GEET: Ap bhi na maan...
They reached the car and adjusted themselves...
MAAN: Main bhi na kya...lake ke kinare enjoy karna seekh liya na tumne???
Her eyes widened at his shameless clame...
GEET: MAAN!!!!!!
Maan laughed heartily at her reaction... She was lost in his laughter looking as if seeing world's most beautiful scene...
A tear escaped her eyes out of happiness Maan's eyes fell on it... He immediately wiped it...
MAAN: Kya hua Geet ye achanak aansu???
GEET: Kuch nahin Maan bas aap aise hi haste raha kijiye...
MAAN: Par tum to ro rahi thi...kyun???
GEET: Arey ab apne dusht danav ko pehli baar haste hue dekhoongi to khushi ka ek aansu to banta hai...
MAAN: Nahin koi aansu nahin warna main dusht danav ban jaoonga...
She dramatically put her hand on her heart...
GEET: Na baba us dusht danav ko dur hi rakhiye...
And the car was again filled with their laughter...
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