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NEHU

@Glitter_In_Eye

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

I still need to read he 2nd part. Yay, do updates sath padungi aur fir ise edit karungi.😉
EDIT
Finally read both the parts. Loved both of them I'm really liking the way story is progressing. Always wanted to read some thing like that.
So, Abhi n Nikki finally apologized for their mistakes,good. Loved that! Really looking forward forthe next update, so curious toknow how Nikki's frnds would react to the news.
Update soon.

Edited by Nehu_1 - 13 years ago

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Namy

@Amy_an

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Hey Pra, just read all three parts.. Very nicely written.. And many congrats fr d thread n fr d 2nd ff. It was a privilage to read ur 1st ff and i'm loving ths too.. Saw a diffrnt side of Abhi.. Lovestruck n verbally expressive.. Something new n like it.. Oky so now Nikki is going to tell her gang abt their pvt affair and nw i'm wondering whts gonna happen next? How evryone is gonna take d breaking news? Particularly Armaan*hoping to read a long AbhiMaan tashan scene ;)* and ya wanna read more of AN romancing, more fights, more heartache n mr manaofying scenes :DD Yeh dil always mange more! AN r a complete sweethert.. U r a wonderful writer n i'm sure u would bring best of AN.. All d best! Looking frwrd fr d next update. Pls add me in ur pm list :)

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.Dalisay.

@.Dalisay.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

where r u?? update soon Prash!

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pra19

@pra19

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ANrucha
Hey pra...awesome updates...sweetie.
Why u said, achha nahi laga phir b edit karo??? 😲

Aisa nahi hai...I was busy with exams.thats why!

Anyways Im liking ur ff.u r doing gr8 job!

Keep it up...you'l see my coments regularly from next update!!

Looking forward to read Nikki's friend's reactions... 😊

So,Now u r using hindi dialogues ...good suggestion from Mitzi...⭐️

But u knw,honestly I think your hindi is nt that nice.😲.lol I m so sorry...😳

but I feel so... umm koi baat nahi...chalega. 😆

Update soon.🤗

Hey Rucha , thanks so much , I was real busy the last few days

and couldn't come online . And I kind of thought people are not liking this FF so much you know , with all the low readership and all . I almost wanted to discontinue it , but then I think I'll post it either way rather than letting it stay on my laptop (and let me warn you beforehand, this is becoming a really long one 😊). Will put up the next couple of updates(or more hopefully) in the coming few days as I will not be coming online for some more time

And the second part of your comment is making me (I never use this expression normally) "LOL". You are a sweetheart 😊

My Hindi is pretty good actually . Dang , I wish I could talk to you in Hindi and prove it.. But , I see your point . These dialogues were translated from English to Hindi. I have very little experience in writing Hindi dialogues or even Hindi stories actually . Maybe that's the reason those lines have the feel of a badly subtitled English movie (and that too one like Spiderman or Universal Soldier) 😃 And , I have decided , next time onwards , all my replies to your comments will be in Hindi , haa haa . Thanks again . I am still LOLing and will do so for a long time now.

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pra19

@pra19

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Nehu_1
I still need to read he 2nd part. Yay, do updates sath padungi aur fir ise edit karungi.😉
EDIT
Finally read both the parts. Loved both of them I'm really liking the way story is progressing. Always wanted to read some thing like that.
So, Abhi n Nikki finally apologized for their mistakes,good. Loved that! Really looking forward forthe next update, so curious toknow how Nikki's frnds would react to the news.
Update soon.

Thank you Nehu for the comments and for being my first IF friend 😊.

Glad you liked both part 2 and 3 . Will put updates in the next few days .

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pra19

@pra19

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: namy_an
Hey Pra, just read all three parts.. Very nicely written.. And many congrats fr d thread n fr d 2nd ff. It was a privilage to read ur 1st ff and i'm loving ths too.. Saw a diffrnt side of Abhi.. Lovestruck n verbally expressive.. Something new n like it.. Oky so now Nikki is going to tell her gang abt their pvt affair and nw i'm wondering whts gonna happen next? How evryone is gonna take d breaking news? Particularly Armaan*hoping to read a long AbhiMaan tashan scene ;)* and ya wanna read more of AN romancing, more fights, more heartache n mr manaofying scenes :DD Yeh dil always mange more! AN r a complete sweethert.. U r a wonderful writer n i'm sure u would bring best of AN.. All d best! Looking frwrd fr d next update. Pls add me in ur pm list :)

Namy , thank you so much for all the kind words and hope you continue to like this story too. Like I said before , I almost wanted to discontinue this FF because you know it was getting a little hectic to complete and I thought not many people were liking it . But I think I'll stick around .

Abhi's lovestruck side , oh yes ! I always thought he was a softie when it came to seeing Nikki upset , well at least on most occasions . And this FF will have a lot of arguments , ruthna manana , etc and all this with , of course my trademark sadism .

AN are a sweetheart , undoubtedly 😍I have never been this obsessed with any other real or fictional couple before and I think this is for a lifetime . Will surely PM you when I put up the next update.

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pra19

@pra19

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Mitzi , thanks again.

Hemvb , thanks so much .

And guys , I have just sent friend requests to all who I think are reading this FF .

Anyone else (if you do land up here ) interested in reading this story and need me to PM , please let me know .

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NEHU

@Glitter_In_Eye

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: pra19
Thank you Nehu for the comments and for being my first IF friend 😊.

Glad you liked both part 2 and 3 . Will put updates in the next few days .

You're welcomedear. I'm loving the story to comment to banta hai yaar!😉
@italics My pleasure!😊
@red will be waiting!😃