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Mona55

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wow hari awesomw update yoh kehte hain na sabre ka phal meetha hota haie really great update waiting for the next update

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DAIRY25

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Thanks Hari 😊 ...

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harianjana

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Thank u all for ur wonder ful responses will reply later. I will do update for now

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ekta15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#334

WOW nice way ,so that man is really radh's father .Waiting for next with radhikas ways ,dev's plans to get radhika.

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harianjana

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 22- My family

Radhika:Agar aapko ko ye pata hain toh, vus din hi kyun nahi bataya.

Shankar sharma:Radhika beti, mujhe thoda explanation toh karna hain tumhe, Main tumhe sab kuch batadungi.. lekin tum shanth se baitho.

Radhika nodded and with tears flowing down her cheeks sat on the comfy there.

Asmi and geet to sat on the either sides of the Radhika giving support to her, and asmi rested her head on asmi's shoulder as she felt some dizziness.

Shankar:Main aur tere maa pyaar karke shaadi kiya, vuski wajah mein mere parivaar ko chodna pada. Aapki maa ko koi rishtedaar nahi ... sab log vusse ye kehte ki manhoos ho iss liye shayad mere papa ne humaari shaadi ko haan ahi kiya. Humaari shaadi ke baad . main vus ghar choda, vuske baad mujhe aur tere maa ko 4 saal tak hum donom hi duniyaan hain. Donom ne mehnat karke humaara kuch positions banaya tha.
Chaar saal machine ke tarah work karne ke baad, humaare liye teri maa ne teri bhaiyya ka janam lee .
Vuske 2 saal ke baad fir tumhe aur imarti ka janam liya hain.
Teri janam hone ke baad mujhe bahut achi kismat mein aakhar bahut badi offers aaya tha.
Teri teen months ke age andar hi maine iss ghar ko banaya.Lekin teen month ke baad jab teri maa ne tera aur teri behen ka jaatak jyotish ko dekha tha , tab vusne kaha ki... agar tum mere saath reha toh tum mar javoge , yaan teri maa maregi.
Vuski prayaschit teri maa poochne par vusne kaha ki 18 saal tak hi ye dosh rahega. .Lekin teri maa jo tum se jhudi ho vo toh kuch parihaar ko poochne par jyotish ne vrindavan ki kanha ki mandir mein Pooja karwane ke liye kaha. Teri maa ne waha gayi hain.
Lekin vo do din tak nahi aayi aur mujhe phone mila ki vo toh temple ke samne hi mar gayi. Main ne waha pahunchne par bhi tum waha nahi hain. Main ne bahut khoj kiya tere liye lekin tum mile nahi.Pati aur bachi ko khone ke dhukh par main teen mahine ek laash ki tarah ban gaya hun. Lekin mujhe meri do bachon ko dekhne ka responsiblity hain. vo hain. mere liye zindagi.
Issliye main phir manushy ban gaya tha. meri bachon ki maa baap donom main hi ban gaya tha.
Lekin teri maa ko main nahi bhool paya iss liye main mujhe itna vyasth kari ki buisness mein, mujhe vuske baarein mein sochne tak bhi time na rahe.
Vus samay mein meri dost aur vuski patni jo asmi ke maa-baap hain vahi toh mere bachon ko dekha tha.
Lekin main kabhi vusko meri kami nahi hone diya aur vusko ek perfect insaan bana ne ki har ek kaam kiya aur safal bhi hogaya,

Lekin jab meri imarti ko 16 saal hain tab vo,meri dost aur vuski patni ek accident mein mar gaya tha.

Asmi toh Imarti ki ek achi dost hain. Donom humesha haste,khulte rehte hain. Aisi Asmitha meri beti ko marne ke baad ek zinda laash hi ban gayi hain. Vusko kya karoo ye mujhe samajh mein nahi aaya, is liye main mumbai aagaya.
Lekin wahi asmitha jab paanch saal pehle tumhe shimla ki ek shaadi mein dekhi tab vo phir kuch hosh mein aayi."

Mohan had tears in hsi eyes. even asmi too. Radhika reminded of meeting Deepika -Arjun marriage and thought "shayad wahi shaadi mein meri asmi mujhe dekhi hogi"

Mohan continued "shayad asmi apni maa-baap ko khone par bhi itni dhukh nahi pahunchi thi kyun ki vo apne maa-baap se jyaada mujhse jhudi ho. lekin imarti ki maarna vo nahi sehen payi.

Lekin jab tumhe dekhi vus samay mein hi vo aise feel huyi ki vuska Imarti waapsa aagayi. wahi aakhar mujhse bhi boli."\

Vuske baad maine hi tumhe do saal observe kiya tha.

Jab Asmi tumhe pehli baar teri college mein mili thi tum ko yaad hain vo tera pyre check karli.;"

Radhika reminded that day...

Radhika sat in first row as usual then a girl came to her and asked can i sit here. Radhika accepted and the girl her self inroduced her self as asmitha. And vuske baad class hone waali samay mein vo apni pencil neeche padne ke kaaran neeche gayi hain. lekin thoda sa jyaada waqt li thi. Radhika felt it fishy but didn't mind. Vuske baad canteen mein ye bola ki vusko meri payal pasand rahi aur use chuna chahti gain. Radhika accepted hesitatingly then her eyes were dazzling but radhika found it funny.

Radhika nodded:haan lekin asmi tumne vus samay ye bola ki m=tumhe meri payal achi rakhi

Asmi:warna main ye boli ki tera pair check karna hain toh, tum kya sochoge.

Radhika:Aisi kya hain tere pair mein

Geet:teri pyre mein tera naam hain

Radhika checked her leg and to the right leg it had a tattoo of Her name spell Radhika''

Radhika:Ye baat aapko kaise maaloom hain

Shankar:Vo teri bachpan mein jab tumhe 4 mahine ka age ahin tab teri mom ne karli.

Radhika's eyes surprised and she touched it with a lovely feel of her mother.

Radhika:Par aapne mujhe teen saal pehle hi mil sakte hain na

Shankar:Kaise milo. Tum vus parivaar se itni mili ki tum ek din bhi vus ghar yaan vus parivaar ko chod kar nahi reh sakti hain. Aisi achi parivaar se tumhe door karna nahi chaha tha

Radhika hugged his father and crying said "Daddy aapne aisa kyun kiya. Aapko maaloom hain main kitni baar mere maama aur daddy ke liye roya. Aapko maaloom hain main kitni baar socha ki shayad mere liye ek achi parivaar ho, ek bhaiyya ho bhabhi ho.Lekin aapne mujhe zinda rehte jaante bhi mujhe door rakha."

Radhika ater crying for sometime left him and standing back said with a stern voice..."Ab meri jaroorati aapko kyun padi. ab mujhe yaha laane ka man kyun hua aapko."

Shankar:Tum ne vus ghar chodke vus raat ke samay mein seedha Geet ki ghadi ke neeche aaya tha accident mein.Geet ne tere liye itna pyaar bana ki rakha ke tere ye photos vusne hi saji hain. Vahi tumhe yaha laayi. Beti aaj bhi tumne vus ghar se bahar aaya tha is liye yaha laaya tha. Tumhe vun logon se yaan vunki pyaar hi chahte toh. Tum jaa sakte ho"

Radhiika:aap ye kya kar rahe hain. Mujhe aapke liye intezaar this. Mein kyun aapko chodungi. Mein kyun vus pyaar ko chodungi jis ke liye my varshon se taras raha tha.

Shankar gave a father hug to radhika and the tears rolled out frm geet and asmi.

Radhika rubbing ff her tears and watching at her bhabhi asked "Bhabhi hain na aap meri"

Geet nodded her head happily as if yes.

Radhika:"aap ko kaise pata chala ki mein ghar chodi hun"

Geet loked at asmi and said "Asmi ne mujhe bola ki tum kuch pareshaan mein ho..Jab bhi tumhe pareshan ho mujhe tumhe follow karne ka aadat hain issliye teri gate ke bahar rahne ke liye aaya tha."

Radhika was surprised for the affection shown by her and tears roled from her eyes.

Asmi:ab ye rona kyun hain atleats ab toh haso.

Radhika came backe to ehr teasing mood and said "yes lekin ek sharat par. U have to show me my brother."

Geet:Maan! vo toh abhi office min kuch meeting mein hain

Radhika:Okay mein office javungi

Radhik was abt to satdn but falled off on sofa because of her 'weekness and injuries.

Asmi:Madam tum ab gayal ho. U aren't fit. So stay on bed , Bhaiyya aayega

Geet helped Radhika to go on to bed. and Radhika went. Geet sighed asmi to stay with Radhika for some time and Shankar and geet left on verge of doing something

Asmi:Radhika

Radhika:Asmi main itna khush hun, itna khush hun ki main ab sab ke saamne garv se ye bol sakte khi main orphan nahi hun

Asmi smiled.

Radhika as if remembering something checked her neck and seeing her checkig neck, asmi took the mangal sutra out and asked "Iske liye dekh rahe ho"

Radhika shocked and said "tum tujhe kaha se mil gaya"

Asmi:Jab tum ne accident mein behosh ho gayi tab ain bhi wahi car mein hun aur meine bhabhi se pehle hi notice kiya teri mangal sutra ko. Isliye mere paas save kiye tha

Radhika:kisi ko nahi bataya na

Asmi:hey fool, main ne baavuji ko tere pyaar ko bhi nahi bataya. I know to keep secret of my bestfriends

Radhika hugged asmi with thankful ness and then Asmi asked "Radhu ye shaadi kaise hua"

Radhika broked into tears and narrated the whole incident

Asmi:Radhika kya tum is shaadi ko maanti hun

Radhika:haan main iss shaadi ko maanti hun

Asmi:lekin

Radhika:Nahi asmi. Mein ne dev se pyaar kiya lekin itni din vo pyaar ko saamne nahi dekhne di, i jusat treated him as best friend. Vusne mujhe pyaar karke shaadi nahi ki, vusne ek dost ko maankar apni dost ki respect nibhane ke liye ye kiya tha. Vo toh sahi nahi hain. Waise my paapa aur maa ji ko apna sir neeche karte nahi dekh sakta tha.

Asmi was nodding

Radhika:Vo shaadi hain lekin vo toh sahi prakar mein nahi ki. Agar mujhe pata jaayega ki Dev mujhse pyaar karta hain tab main hi daaddy ko paapa se baat karne ke liye kahungi.

Asmi was nodding with happiness. Lekin ye mangalsutr

Radhika:Vo yaha de do

As asmi gave it she wore it in her neck.

Asmi:ye kya hain

Radhika:Main apna patni dharma chod nahi sakti hun

Asmi:okay thik hain. Bhaiyya ne office se nikhala tha

Radhika:fine I am excited.

Asmi:u will feel good to see him

Radhika nodded her head and they both waited for him . After one hour one person with a stoutly built body came into that room.

Asmi:Kya hua bro itni der ki apni pyaari behen ko dekhne ke liye bhi

Radhika tried to stand up but was abt to fall when he came and stopped her.

Radhika looking at him "Bhaiyya"

Maaan:Haan bhaiyya hi hun. ab ye tum stand karne ki kya jaroorat hain. dekho kitni chot lagi tumhe ab baitho tum

Radhika:Bhaiyya. aap please mere saath baitoh na

Maan:Radhika dar na mat main tere sath hi baithungi

Maan sat behind Radhika and she was having tears seeing her brother.

Geet:Dekha maan maine bola ki vo tumhe dekh ke darayegi. lekin tum ne suna nahi. Is liye bolti ki haftah mein ek baar shave karo

Maan gave a look to geet and asked Radhika"kyun ro rahi ho bachi"

Radhika wiping off her tears "Bhaiyya, ye toh khushi ki aansun hain. Maine humesha sapna dekhte ki mujhe ek acha parivaar hojayiye. vo toh aaj oori ho gayi"

Maan smiled and giving her a friendly hgu said "Ab hum tumhe kabhi nahi chodenge. 22 saal ka intezaar hain tum se"

Radhika felt comfort in his wermth and Geet and Shankar too joined them

Asmi feeling tears in her eeys took a click of them and then stood there.

Maan:Aisi kya dekhti hun tum bhi meri behen ko aavo. mera ek aur haath kaali hain

Radhika was smiling. to make her ore smile

Geet:Acha ab teri do do bhen tere donom haath se hoti toh main kaha rakhu, Kitchen mein?

Maan:meri jaan tum toh mere dil mein rehti hain

Radhika smiled and remembred of DEV

Asmi to lighten :"ahem , ahem. Bachi hain hum yaha. aap apna romantic mood se bahar aayiye."

Every one smile dfor this and shankar said "Lekin asmi tum donom toh shaadi karke jaavoge na"

Maan:Dad abhi th mujhe meri behen mili aap abhi vuski shaadi ki baaatein le rahe hain

Shankar:Beta ladkiyan kabhi kabhi shaadi karogi na

Radhika:Don't worry bhaiyya main shaadi nahi karne waali hun. zindagi bar tumhe sataane ke liye yahi rahungi

Maan And radhika along with Geet blasted into laugh while asmi became serious thinking of Dev.

Geet:Main bhi tere side hun Radhika. Office min mujhe itna satate hain yis ne

Radhika:revenge panning huh. Okay

Maan:acha ab bhabhi -saalu ek side liya,its not fair

Radhika watched out their fun smiling .
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Edited by harianjana - 13 years ago

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harianjana

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wissen, Nabesa, avinashikha, Babbar_Avina, radev85, thujaa, imissouri, radhameera, abi.abi, DAIRY25, meenaluma, maia22, BhartiKhushi909, ushasri, Liashna, fatssrilanka, anu17,

Thank u all for bearing me and loving me

I would like a lot if u people comment too. Any way thank u dears for liking my update😊

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harianjana

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Posted: 13 years ago

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A big thank to all of u who have supported me in doing this ff and also

Aaj ke 6 moths pehle Mein ne ye ff start kiya tha.. aur starting i used to get very few responses. But my first reader was Anu di and Palak, Ekta, Raj bhaiyya. Then only i got that confidence that I too can write a ff and people will read it. But I never expected for this much response. I always use to write what I feel abt Radev and also What I dream abt them including some other incidents. I thought before startign this ... atleast one member like this and feels this that was enough. I don't know how many of u people can connect with this ff. But there are sopme readers o mine who get connected to this ff.
I need to thank three people for inspiring me.The first person is Our very Palak , she was the one who used to msg me my wrongs and also she did proof read my ff. When I am lost at one point she only helped me to regain.
Thank U SONALI

The second person is he is not a forum member but he is indeed my friends who gave me the base of the story . He never tell is directly to me but a character in this ff is based on what i saw in him, actually i doesn't wanna disclose which character it is but indeed i can say the life of this ff is him. He is my friend Kanth.

Thank u Kanth

The third person is a very good friend of mine. just like asmi to Radhika and she is none other that My Ashri, who was known to u when I faced the accident. Ashri I owe a lot to u, may be if u didn't suggest me and encourage me i may have never brought it here.

Thank u ashri

Jo pyaar main Radev ke beech yaha bol raha hun vo toh ek asli zindagi ki kahaan hain. Lekin regarding parents and radhikas [ast it was fictional But the lvoe Dev had on Radhika and the love Radhika had on dev was what i saw in real life.

Hope u will still continue to bear me

And thank u all,

Love u all

Harianjana

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radhameera

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Posted: 13 years ago

#338

wishing to see dev in next part...

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harianjana

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Posted: 13 years ago

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@Radhameera Yes yaar. People are pointing Radh as she was an orphan which she wasn't time for truth to come out.

@usha:ela vunnav. and thanks yes i gave twist but i won't drag it as cv's do dear😉

@meena:Thank u dear. Thanks a lot.

@liashna:here u go with radh's family, a rich and perfect family. noow we have to see what she will so. and thankls for commenting dear

@Bharti:yeah dd is here and wait gc will also be there

@fatssrilanka:Thank u dear

@jeffin:Jeffi hope u are fine. and whats with ur college,and yes thanks for the comment yaar. i like comments full of smileys😉

@maia:exactly , radhika suffered and bear words as orphan, but kanha can never make her bhakt go through, hence he gave her her family

@anu Thank a lot dear

@dairy:thank u dear and welcome too😉

@ekta:yes di ur prediction was absolutely right, he was radh's oving father. and yeah dev has to do intezaar and radev milan will ahpen for sure😊