-dhundlae aks- MAANEETFF THREAD11 pt107 pg118 - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
ohmygod ... I swear ! Teri deewani' couldn't have come at a better time..! when they are completely given to the other person.. all under their spell, guided only by their own emotions for the other !\

Cannot get enough of them ! update muskan update !
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
uuufff those college boys and their creepy mind :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Thanks for the update and congo on the new thread.

U had mentioned final face off - many updates ago...

U had said u needed more parts and could not do the dhamaka on update 100.

Do i see a final face off coming up soon?😭
Edited by Water. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Water.

Thanks for the update and congo on the new thread.


U had mentioned final face off - many updates ago...

U had said u needed more parts and could not do the dhamaka on update 100.

Do i see a final face off coming up soon?😭

i didn't say final face off I said..
one of the face off😉
its in next 2parts
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: muskanp

i didn't say final face off I said..
one of the face off😉
its in next 2parts


r u updating one now di???
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on new thread...just read last 4 updates loved them...love armaan...he is taking good care of geet...NT and dev love story facing hurdles...poor maan is getting emotionally stressed these days...hope he get relived soon and friendship of maan and geet will be back to path...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
Congrats on new thread!!! Please don't rush and finish this FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
nice update muski
omggg love the way maan said no single word
i am more interested in precap now😆😆
pls update soon.
i don't know how much my request matters but still i am requesting.

muski no song on this thread yaar kyun😕😕😕
I was expecting something romantic from DDLJ or KKHH
pls do add the song yaar.
i listen to songs longgg time😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for new thread ...
nice part . pl cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundlae aks

PART 105

vishal ' lekin Maan
Maan stared at him.. NO VISHAL..he groaned.
He stood their glaring at them.. until every one walked away gossiping. Vishal took armaan to get first aid.. armaan snapped his hand away as he left from there.
All the guys were taken a back with Maans demeanor, he never spoke in that tone, forgetting raising his hand. Vishal was lost for words.
She stood behind him looking at his grip on her wrist & his straight angered face, holding her heart that doesn't seem to stop falling for him. She gaped at him like an idiot until he finally turned to look at her. She immediately looked down.
He grated his teeth.. hogaya ki aur bhi tamasha baki hain
she cutely cribbed to her babaji.. main ne kya tamasha kiya
challo yanha se
she pouted cutely & followed him. He didn't leave her wrist just lead her to his car & opened the door for her. She quietly sat in the car. He didn't say anything, just glared at her couple of time & stopped the car near the office bus stand. She was so tempted to pull his gapoo cheeks that was all fuming in his humesha wala anger.
She didn't want to go.. she didn't want to leave him yet. How much she wanted to sit next to him just there.. it felt so warm, like relief after all the turmoil she was facing whole of last week staying away from him.
She sat their wondering how to leave when her heart just wanted to sit next to him. He didn't say word. Just maintained a straight look. She pouted cribbing.. yeh kuch bolten kyun nahi..
daant hi do..
she cleared her throat not knowing wat to say. Geet Handa nothing to say.. uff only this guy can make her feel like that.
she sighed.. sadly opening the car door
phone uttana raat ko he threatened
she immediately smiled looking away from him.. umm she nodded muffling her giggle.
He was irritated with his own behavior.. he called raj .. no hello no hai.. seeda screaming
can u believe I actually punched that guy
raj ' kyun usne ussen kuch kaha tha kya?
Haan
he said cutely
he sighed
I hate her, dehk aab sab log meren baren main college main kya bol rahen honge.
raj shook his head ' Maan yaar why don't u just stop thinking abt all that for once
u know how odd it is
I am not being myself anymore.
When I look at the mirror.. I can't recognize myself.. looks like a total stranger.
Jab se yeh ladki meri zindagi main aayen hain.. isne sab kuch ulat pulat karke rahk diya hain
raj ' I think Maan u seriously like that girl
Maan laughed.. laughed loud.. r u kidding me!!!
then he went silent for some time
she is not misti he said very feebly.
Raj didn't get that name.. kaun?? kisi ki baat kar raha hain tu? Mis??
nahi kuch nahi.. I will talk to u latter.
Raj ' Maan .. Maan meri baat sun
he cut the call & went his gym
she is not misti!!!
how can I just think of anyone else in her place
. Dam he felt himself torn between misti & Geet. because he
knew for sure geet is been closer to him in a way.. no other girl could ever be.
He had not given up on meeting misti.. but some where he stopped going to office looking for her.. since he started running behind Geet.
He doesn't go to office doesn't mean he stopped feeling for mistimia. He can't think of night without hugging her puchki. She is special...
he practiced his martial art.. all wrong moves.. as confused & lost as him..
he gives up... & sits down 'trying to solve this puzzle!! this jigsaw of his heart..that seem to have all mixed up.
his phone rings. He looks at the display.. it was Vishal.. dam the last person he wants to talk after wat happened in the morning.
Vishal ' hi.. Maan.. yaar wat happened to u. aur tu karan ke GF ke saat kya kar raha hain
Maan corrects him.. wo koi Karan ki GF nahi hain
Vishal ' wat is wrong with u? U know they have been together for 2yrs now
Maan ' all that is crap.. he said wiping his sweat.
Vishal ' nahi yaar u don't know abt them
Maan yelled back.. just shut up Vishal..
abt Geet I know better
vishal was taken a back, why was he behaving so tempered off late & wats it between Maan & Geet now.
Maan angrily cut the call & called her back. She picked it in one ring.
Tumhe kitni bar kaha hain stay away from that nerd
yehi kahne keliyen phone kiya aapne
.. she complained cutely...
how he not just fall for that.. but he had to have footage.. so..here he was holding the phone silently waiting for her to say something..
& there she was blushing.. biting her lips.. twisting her hair.. wondering wat to say
finally she managed to say.. aabhi bhi naraz ho
he snapped back.. naraz hone ka license tho sirf tumhe hain, humari aisen kismat kanaha?
Main aapse naraz kab huen thi?
Tho pichlen haften time pass kar rahi thi karan ke saat
wo tho main
just shut up
she pouted & didn't say anything
he waited again to say something, but she was mischievously silent.. he got angry again.. tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahi ho
she blurted main kya bolo.. khud hi bolten ho..shut up aur phir khud hi danthe ho
thats because u deserve getting shouted
no I don't
.. she made a baby face
u do.. u r really mean, & bad..
tum jab se mujhe mili ho mujhe pareshan kar rahka hain. Phir bhi main tumhare phechen phecha aata rahta hoon. Seriously I going mad.
Hain.. she could just keep hearing to him the whole night. .. & the whole day
Precap
maans reaction to knowing karan was actually in her place
-PREV PART 104 NEXT PART 106-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago

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