-dhundlae aks- MAANEETFF THREAD 10 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
congrats on new thread ...waiting 4r update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Congrats for new thread...sweet, romantic, funfull update soon...waiting for their deamy sunday maaneet moments...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
thank god u r updating...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

me was out of town just saw ur new thread and commented on it without even reading your previous post silly me Silly Smiley Emoticons

We all are sad and upset reading about GHSP finishing or not finishing ...
but we have to support each other as Maneet's big global family ..
this is the time of unity and strength we could provide to each other
whether making VM, writing post, commenting on articles or writing OS,SS OR FFS
Muski please don't stop writing on Maneet ...
we love them and we love your FFs on Maneeet ...
lots of
❤️🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
PART 97

She cleared her throat warning herself.. not to fall for those looks.. dam.. he looks so cute.. she inhaled sharply. As she sat in his car.
Before Maan could tell his plan.. Geet shocked him with her itinerary of the day. & a big back pack
hum date pe ja rahen hain.. ghar chot kar nahi he said looking at her bag
kyun dar gayen
he immediately took the bag from her.. kaho tho abhi bhaag kar shaadi kar laten hain
she pushed his cheek away... aisen ksisi bhi nahi shaadi karthi Geet
aisen kisi se thodi.. Maan se karogi
she shook her head..
he hovered closer to her.. waisen bhi tumne mera rape kiya tha.. tho tumhe hi mujhe se shaadi karni padegi
main ne kuch nahi kiya tha
she crossed her hand
tumne hi sab kuch kiya.. humesha karti ho .. he complained cutely like a small boy.
She gave up ..
Aacha suno.. I have booked the tickets for this water park.. jo alipur main hain, that will be like 1hr drive max.. & aur isme she pointed at her back bag swim suit aur towel hain.
Swim suit meren liyen???
he tried to peep in
she waked him.. aapke liyen wanha rent karlenge
He twisted his lips u don't care for me.
She felt so bad... all she does inevitably is care abt him.. more than anything else.. more than her own self. All he does is accuse her.
He looked at the watch... wat time does the park open
10am
phir mujhe itna jaldi kyun uttaya
he cribbed
she pouted cutely..
he teased.. ok.. I know u missed me.. I can understand.. merin personality kuch aisen hain
yah right
he just hugged her closer.. phlen kahna tha na
she smirked.. ha..ha . but he was right.. she does miss him...
but how could she admit that yet, but did she ever had to admit anything to him... he is so used to assuming everything. Just taking her for granted.
Chodo mujhe.. aur ghadi chalvo.. she spoke coming out of his grip
I am hungry lets have some nice breakfast in a dhaba
wow I know just a right place for this..
they hit the high way avoiding the delhi traffic & reached a dhabha that was just on the delhi alipur highway .. they spend an hr there.. having breakfast & picking on each other. Finally Maan created a fuzz to be fed by her on the pretext to typing something on the phone.
Maan aap kha kyun nahi rahen
I have to reply to my frds email. Thoda lamba email hain
he made up some story
yeh bhi koi waqt hotahain email type karne ka
she coolly continued to eat not understanding the hint he was droping
finally he decided to ask her directly wondering kitni duffer hain.. ..
waisen tum bhi mujhe khila sakti ho
phir main kaisen khavongi
, she continued to eat totally not getting it
aaa... he wanted to kill her now..
aisen.. he fed her one bite & forced her to feed him another...
she gulped her food down feeling her fingers in his mouth. She blinked couple of times & looked down feeling those butterflies.. tingling sensation. Her cheek becoming all cherry.
Aab chup chap aisen hi feed karti roho..
he looked back into his phone let me concentrate on the mail.
she mumbled.. chup chap feed karo.. she made all kinds of face & fed him.
Pickle bhi
dhahi bhi
wo wali bite..
nahi nahi.. wo wali
.. he made all kind of demands
she quietly followed
He watched her from corner of his eyes for some time, pretending to type his so called mail.. .. she was feeding him but not eating herself.. he sighed & fed her. She looked at him in shock & suspiciously had it.
Kha lo warna mujhe hi pet dard hoga batmain. She frowned.. humesha galat samjh then.. she pouted cutely
after the breakfast he coolly stretched.. stretched ..stretched & rested on her. ..
Maan
umm
kya kar rahen ho
main kya kar sakta hoon.. u fed me so much.. I need to rest for some time
.. he coolly laid on her lap lifting her hand & tucking it closer to him.
She could just faint with all his this butterfly effects..feelings he keeps filling her with. He doesn't seem to realize but his touch, his talks, his claims.. just drives her into a different world beyond her will, how much she tries to ignore... poor soul
precap
tip tip barsa pani!!!! pani ne aag lageyen
muskan wondering who is burning more Maan or Geet
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PnR2UoPXdVM&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]
-PREV PART 96 NEXT PART 98-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by Dilsay - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dilsay

me was out of town just saw ur new thread and commented on it without even reading your previous post silly me Silly Smiley Emoticons

We all are sad and upset reading about GHSP finishing or not finishing ...
but we have to support each other as Maneet's big global family ..
this is the time of unity and strength we could provide to each other
whether making VM, writing post, commenting on articles or writing OS,SS OR FFS
Muski please don't stop writing on Maneet ...
we love them and we love your FFs on Maneeet ...
lots of
❤️🤗🤗



i do agree with u...
i am telling d same thing 2 muskan... but she is not listing to me... pls aab tumhi use samazao...ki geet endho na ho pls keep writing on maaneet... becuz we love ur ff a lot n everyday we r w8ing for ur updates...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i really dont know who is the baby in both of them
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
congrats for the new thread.
Wow...maaneet bonding awesome.
Oho shadi tak baat pahuch gayi...lol
Water park mai swimming...an woh bhi swimming costume mai...ha ha...
Waiting for more.

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