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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

haila😲
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shy coming



Muskan This will suit better...


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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting for next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundlae aks

PART 89
Maan first promptly said ' no ways.. then his voice turned weirdly worried.. no..
he tried to recollect.. they never became frds .. no.. never..
but why did hurt now not be her frd. ..!!! he stood lost under the shower..
All raj could hear was dripping sound of water for rest of the whole night.. Maan stood their under the shower.. confused. Trying to justify why he doesn't want to be her frd.. & why he can't be her frd. Come on there is nothing common between them..
all raj could see was they were just the same..he rather keep quiet as of now.. the big pea sized brain was supposedly finally at work.
Aur kya.. raj ke shamaat.. he was stuck with Maan on the phone for next two days.. luckly or unluckliy it was one of those holidays.. sat & sunday.. off.. no college..
Maan went on & on.. on.. & on
he had so much to tell abt her. How she fights with him for no reason.. but he never lets her way!!!.
raj wondered... aacha bachu.. !!! her way.. seems to be his way now
forgot to mention.. meanwhile .. geet was trying her best to get ride of this strange feeling in her called maan. anything & everything ..could help types.. sadly nothing did!!!!
Maan got really fed up with all this end less conversation, cribbing & decided to go to his fav disc.
Raj warned him.. don't drink too much.. or he will land up with some girl ..claiming her as his wify
Maan laughed loud drinking his nth drink of that evening. When his eyes met those fuming pair of eyes.
Veer she is starring at me
raj ' kaun
wohi..
mano Maan ke cheren ka rang hi uttar gaya.. he tried to be steady.. Geet was with some girls from college. He tried to look carefully at the drink she was sipping.. don't know why he was so keen to know???!!!
was it because..he didn't want her to be drinking... or was it he wanted to feel less guilty with those questioning eyes
raj was still on call ' Maan??? Maan???
all Maan could manage to reply was ' umm like a begi billi
Geet knotted her brows & frowning at him. Like she hated to see him like this.
Maan quickly checked his surrounding & cloths.. ...yaar veer main teehk lag raha hoo na?
raj rolled his eyes.. right.. aaj kal phone main yeh bhi suntha hain
wo mujhe aisen kyun ghoor rahi hain

raj ' kaisen
like she is not approving of something, main ne abhi taak tho shirt bhi nahi uaatra.. he checked his pants
raj tried to reason it out ' may be she doesn't like u drink... like seeing u in a disc types.. stero types
Maan laughed laud again.. & immediately muffled it.. when he saw he her glaring at him.. almost like disgusted with his behavior.
Raj ' why did u laugh like that
Maan took his drink to sip.. then saw her furious eyes & kept it down & made cute cribbing face while complaining to raj & pouting at Geet.. agar wo mind karti hain tho.. wat is she doing here
she is not like that.. wo yeh sab mind nahi karthi..
wo meri koi bhi baat mind nahi karthi for that matter
she knows me
(raj lifted his brow.. she knows him.. he let out a smirk)
she knows I drink
phir yaar wo aisen kyun gussa ho rahi hain
raj knew he was soon going to be in mental asylum.. if Maan continued his non stop confusion a sec more.

raj finally gave up.. why don't u just as her
Maan thought.. yah right!! ek min ruhk main puchke aata hoon.
He walked striaght to Geets table. She looked away instantly.. ..
he stood few steps away from her ..& again complained to raj.. phir se moo pher diya
raj wanted to pull his hair now..
Maan ' lekin main bhi Maan hoon.. I will not leave her.
He almost fell on her.. all the girls almost jumped off.. except Geet.. like always.. she kind off used to saving him.. she held him in her arms. with that cute little breath taking moment of their.. his breath tickling her sense.. her hand slipping around his waist in a firm grip.. his fingers.. like now knows her waist line & shoulders pritty well ☺️
Maan smiled in her arms.. tum gussa kyun ho rahi ho? He asked ever so innocently.. his breath fanning her neck.
she looked away angrily..
Maan pouted.. cutely again complaining to raj.. kuch nahi kaha
raj froze.. wondering wat scene he is creating in the disc now.
Geet shouted at Maan.. aap yeh kya kar rahen ho?
How can u be drinking, lying like this?
Prachi thinks so different abt u?
Maan looked at her puzzled ' but u know I drink
raj.. closed his eyes duffer wo prachi ki baat kar rahi hain
Maan ' prachi in sab ke beech main kanha se aayen.. he looked around.. trying to stand straight.. with out her support, prachi tho yanah nahi hain
Geet was fuming with in.. not because he was drinking.. but because of the wrong notion he has given to prachi...in directly to her.. that prachi is right abt him being a nice guy.. awesomest person on earth..
she looked away in disgust ' she trust u so much. How can u cheat her like this
Maan shook his head ' ek min!!! main ne ussen kab kaha ki main nahi peeta
but yah..I don't brag about it either.
Waisen bhi I don't think she will understand all this
Geet pushed him away ' so u will lie to her.. drink behind her back
Maan snapped angrily ' but why should I tell her abt my personal life
wat does she have to do with all this
Geet was totally ashamed to have even thought great of this MCP at one point. She now realized he is type of guys.. who wants their little secret life away from their soul mates. All goody goody infront of them. All that image she kind of had abt him.. just came shattering down. Dam .. she was right abt him..she hates him from bottom of her heart. .. wonder she could...!!


Maan ' lekin tum kyun itna gussa ho rahi ho
tum uss din se bematlab mujhe se guss ho rahi thi
that was it.. it was way beyond pushing her off the cliff.. she could just kill him right away with her bare hands for all the while confusing her with his sweet looks. She held his collar angrily.. wat do u think abt urself??
raj shouted at Maan.. to wake up from his drunken state or he would lose that he wants the most in his life...
Maan was getting totally confused with wat ever was happening.. & the drink.. he just passed out.. in her arms. Geet would have just dropped him there & walked away.. but she couldn't. Oh she hated herself to still have that faith ..beyond her wish. While trying to lift him.. his blue tooth ear plug fell off. Geet reluctantly took it & said hello

precap
Geet & rajs talk..
-PREV PART 88 NEXT LINK TO THREAD 9-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I fell out laughing... he faints in her arms. Muskan, you are the biggest drama queen ever. This Maan is a bigger dodo than dodo of maitree (my fav char created by u). With the list of love that someone had posted, I guess I am in love with this duffer, dhakan, stupid, possessive, confused Maan. Too cute for words. Kab sudharogi issen? Not too soon, mazaa aa raha hai. Acha, addiction ka ilaaj, one more, soon please. Sorry for the blank posts sometimes, my phone chews up the text. Love this FF.
Edited by ucompleteme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me me first
i cant belive it
its first time
awesome update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Muskan,

liked both the updates...

Geet being highly principled thinks that it is wrong to think about Maan that way, feels that she betraying Prachi😡 phir prachi...I hate her...

Maan gadha, khota, doesnot understand his feelings... DO one thing muskan, just tell him all those 11 signs of love... may be that will help that idiot understand his feelings...😆

Waiting for another update...

Also I would love to see you breaking record of most threads and parts/updates with this FF. With TM you opened 23 threads and had 191 parts. I do wish and pray to god that with this FF you may open more than 23 threads and have more than 200 updates...

love you

Yosh
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome Muskan...
Loved it.
Maan talli again...ha ha... And aaj no gussa...kya baat hai...
Uff this confusion...i'm sure Raj will end up in a mental assylum soon...lol

Wooh...Geet n Raj talk...superb...cant wait.
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Posted: 13 years ago
my God that was sweeet🤣.. really really sweet 😆... wait a sec! where is she going to take him now that hes fainted ! oh m so excited to hear Raj-geet conversation .. SO SO excited !!😃



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Posted: 13 years ago

maaan , maan kya hoga tera ? How sweetly he is telling "why prachi should know all this " , maan now geet will show u ...me waiting for geet and raj convo.

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