-dhundlae aks -maaneetFF thread 8 - Page 55

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

180.1k

Users

206

Likes

4.5k

Frequent Posters

maanmeet1 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
i just hate d way he talks to her...wht does he think of himself...
504887 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
just luvd it
awww geet was in pain to see maan hurt n soothed him
luvd how cutely geet complained
omg our munda all possessive abt geet awww
so kissing yelling flirting & now vampire biting lol
cont soon pls
pritm thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
Karan stood totally puzzled with wat exactly was happening.. thats not just maan he knows!!

when all will come to know real maan
but at first place maan must know what he want
so confusing
waiting for next update of today

640638 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
updated comment pg 72, sorry it got eaten up again by idevice.
Craziest_MG thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
muskan wont we get another part...???
Arsheela thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Muskan Plz give us another Update
Arsheela thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks Sweet heart for updating
Love you for this
Waiting
vivacious_gurl thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
Just got back home... yeah its already 2.25 am... looks like i am back home on time to read muski's updates... loved part 85... thankfully my emotional bouts have stopped ... and this wasnt a cranky update... 😃
moved it... waiting for more... 😛
muskanp thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundlae aks

PART 86

she could feel a slight tinge of liquid oozing out.. undoubtedly the red liquid in her veins.. that seem to pump faster than usual now days. She walked in the office with a heart that suddenly seem to weigh 100kgs lighter may be.. even lighter that a feather.. the curve on her lips was unimaginably wide.. a sparkle in her eyes anyone could write the whole days hard work to.

She excietedly completed her work & rushed home. She cutely changed into her pinkish night pants & t-shirt. She cuddled into the spread & reached her phone restlessly to call him. The whole smile in her face died the moment she saw prachi calling her right then. She felt horribly guilty .. wat was she doing.. wat was going in her mind all this while.. didn't she even think abt prachi once. She slapped herself hard .. hard .. again to have even thought otherwise... & answered her call...
prachi ' hi, kanha hain tu
Geet ' abhi office se aayen thi
prachi had her own tale to tell her abt studies & assignment & submissions. In between abt Maan, that Geet had began to feel little uncomfortable abt. Though she knew it was wrong, still she didn't seem to have control over her emotions...
prachi suddenly paused.. ek min.. I will call u later Maan ka phone aa raha hain
Geet closed her eyes tightly.. it felt someone just pierced a sharp needle through her heart. She smiled weakly, as prachi cut the call in rush.

Prachi ' hi Maan
Maan ' hi, were u on call with someone
prachi ' haan Geet se baat kar rahi thi
Maan was bit lost there.. Geet ' she came home already?
Prachi ' haan wo 1hr phelen hi aagayen
Maan was taken a back. He abruptly cut her call & called Geet immediately

geet didn't know whether to answer the call or not.. whether to feel happy that their call ended so soon.. dam she was becoming so mean & selfish. she hated herself .. how can she be so mean to her own frd.


Geet very meekly answered ' hi
he was abt to hit the roof in anger.. that she didn't call him first' but hearing her meek voice, he got really concerned.. kya huwa?why r u sounding so dull?
kuch nahi
kya huwa Geet?
She felt like crying ' hidding her facei n his chest.. complaining why.. why did he have to be her best frds BF.. why can't life be simple straight frwd.. just him & her..she went mum
shaam taak tho teehk thi.. jaisen mujhe se door jathi ho tumhe pata nahi kya hojata hain
I am fine
she tried to pretend.
Yah right, aisen mera dil kabra raha ha hain, suno aisen mujhe pareshan mat karo tum
she couldn't bare to hear such talks from him.. it was making it impossible for her to stop falling for him. Detaching from him.
She simply cut the call & switched off the phone.

Past mid night she realized it was prachi's bday. Dam .. she just switched on her phone to wish her.. her phone rang.. she was shocked to see.. it was from Maan.
She couldn't believe..its not joke to get a call just when u switched it on.. either he is been trying madly.. or it is some kind of coincidence.. how she wished he was trying.. yes.. he was.. apparently..
he yelled yet again, confused with her sudden withdrawal. How cutely he complained the whole night.
Oh babaji.. how am I to get away from this guy...
she looked up at her babaji

Next day was special. Small close birthday party for prachi.. Maan, Geet & prachi.
Geet was terrified to even meet Maan infront of prachi. She had been avoiding his call or facing him the whole day.. actually since last night.. literally since a week now.. oh god!!!.. nothing had worked
lather in the evening

prachi held her hand & walked into the restaurant.. I guess Maan is running late. For a moment Geet felt a sense of relief in knowing she won't be bothered by his glares.. or is it eyes.. or just him.. oh god she shook her head!!! but she would see him soon enough. But mid of the thoughts she was getting restless why was he late at the first place. .. then she made a mental note the less she saw of him, the better.
Prachi comfortably settled in the sofa flipping the menu card.
Geet almost jumped when he heard him whisper in her ears don't you think it's time you stopped avoiding me?.. she gulped giving a fixed look at prachi.. who had not noticed that.
Before she could react.. Maan gave a big hug to prachi & wished her a happy birthday.


While prachi settled with her gift that he brought for her & deciding on the menu.. he stood next to Geets table in a menacing stance with hands on his hips.. oh god he seemed downright threatening. She couldn't stop herself taking a min admiring his casual t-shirt & jeans. He leaned closer to her yet again..
I asked u a question Geet.. his husky yet sharp tone made forced her to look straight back down on the table.
Prachi ' wat question Maan?
Maan causally ' she is avoiding me
prachi looked at Geet with questioning eyes
Geet was taken a back with his boldness & bit nervous how to face prachi.. she cleared her throat.. avoiding u.. sorry I rather not take that much an effort she snapped back & resumed looking into the menu card.

Prachi knew Geet would be too much for Maan.. & he probably puts up with her for her. Sadly she didn't know the hidden story.. no one knew for that matter.
The moment prachi looked away.. Maan immediately turned the upside down menu card that Geet was pretending to read.. straight & looked away.. she hid her face in embarrassment cursing herself. & he had that typical grin on his face.. the one to kill for.
They placed the ordered... Maan didn't settle down yet. He went around got a cake for prachi.. & after all the celebration bit.. came around geets side..since ur not avoiding me u shouldn't have a problem if I sit next to u? he asked as he almost tucked close to her.
She frowned inching away.. making sure no one noticed
precap
oops Geet gussa?? wondering yeh kaisen huwa
-PREV PART 85 NEXT PART 87-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
Arsheela thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Maan Ji Kya baat hai U have Started doing Openly Flarit With Geet Not Bad Wasy In this Part for a change Maan was not Angry on Geet Fell Really Good

or Mujht Parachi K phone per bhut Gusa aya when Geet was too happy ,smiling and calling Maan and she had to call ...

yar abb is prachi or Maan k Scene ka plz end ker do I can't See my Darling Geet in Guilt

wast this was as usual
Edited by Arsheela - 13 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli

5 years ago

Comment Migration Request Thread #1

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".