kriyaansh & Swaron luv cnfesion(SS) *ended* - Page 17

wow yar
simply awsm nams
kriyansh ki 1st date wo b ek farmhouse me cndle lyt dinr evrythng was amazing
n sharon cud realz her love n to b wid swayam in an isolatd place
hmm dis is gona b interesting
waitng 4 d next part to c dm talli lolz

it is awesome yaar and when update it pm me

Originally posted by: Dancedevil

DI, NOW I AM GONNA KILL U!!! IT'S MIND BLOWING!! LUVD IT!! IT WAS SO ROMANTIC, CUTE, SWEET, ADORABLE ND JUST EVERYTHING!! ITS AWESUM!! U R GOIN TO KILL ME ONE DAY!! SWARON IS SOO CIYUTE!! CNT RESIST THEM YAAR!! SHARON IS SO ADORABLE ND SWAYAM BAK TO NORMAL, YAYYY!!! ND KRIYANSH IS SOO CHWEET!! IT WAS OUT OF DIS WRLD!! lyk u r an writer, editor, dancer, u sing too lyk u do everything!! U r r amazing, just lyk dis chap!! Luv u!! :D

suprb part🤗,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,kriyansh 1st date hayeee😍 😍kash show me v esa hi ho,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,gr8888 job 👍🏼👏

it was superb. out of the world loved it very much.

omg I m dead reading it and plz pm me when you update as I cant wait for the next part now I am actually excited to read this more that the real d3 i wish that it was like this on tv as well

LOVELY FF! WELL DONE!!!

Parts I've luved-
ch1-krias goin uneasy n edgy in rey's absence, the way shes askin ppl, movin her gaze arnd searchin for him… …wow!! Beautifully written
n da part whr she sees dat swayam n sharon exchanging angry n grudgful luks n wishes dey were together,…dats SO KRIA!! Luv her down to earth personality. :


ch2: dose luv signs were vry cute |(LOVELY THOT, PATTS for dat :D )
kria confessing herself dat she luvs him in diff. sound frequencies n expressions …WOWW!!
imagining kria on 'teri deewani' is so sweet n calm
n deir kiss …woww!! But I wish u saved it for the confession day as icing on the cake :D (I kno ur imagination is paar better dan mine n u definitely seem to bring out an awesome piece of writing for "dat" day …it is just my sugession J


ch4-rey:I need u! ( the way he tld dis n turned ws very well written n I cud image it very easily by r clear writing)
n den KRIYANSH ON 'kuch khaas hai' (my most luved sonnnggg!!) AWESOMEEE
n swayams entry like a typical bolly hero ws alil taking back (sry)


ch5-ME N SHARON had neva seen sucha powerfull swayam …hahahah
swayam's dialogues were vry nice esp.-m nt r all tym servant …hahahah
n da phone thng u mentioned dat dey(weaklings n dazzlings) culdnt hear the bell bcoz of sum reasons…I din find dose reasons very appealing ! if u told dat as it is a 'sunsaan jagah' dey had netwrk prob. Coz der wer no phone towers wUD luk LOGICAL!!


ch6-seeing drenched hott swayam evn i got jumped frm my seat ;) nicely written
n the way u explained sumtyms guys cn also lyk dancing in rain was hilarious …hahahaha


n the way u use situations or scenes frm REAL D3 like the bench whr 'lv the way u lie' was shot n evrythng is very helpful in visualiising