Kriyaansh FF-YOung Love NOTE(pg 150) - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
great work :)
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Part 6

Rey in his room thinking abt kria

Rey: emm Kria...😍cute name just like her...pata nahi kyu uska chehra bhulaya nahi ja raha hai... Ab party me thoda tym spend karne ko milega uske sath..kria..kria..so cutee...Ahhh 😲yeh mujhe kya horaha hai...why am i getting excited for party..wo aaye na aaye..no no rey tu party sirf mom aur vicky k liye ja raha hai uske liye nahi...😡ab yeh bekar ki batein karna band kar rey aur tayyar hoja...he opens cupboard...kya pehenu?? Kuch samaj nahi araha..😕

Sunita:kya hua beta...aap kuch dhund rahe ho?😊

Rey:mom help me out na.. Mai kya pehenu

Sunita:aap kahi ja rahe ho?

Rey: haan mom..wo mera classmate hai sunny ussi ki party me..vicky force kar raha hai..

Sunita: shocked...Kya?? Party?? Hey bhagwan mai koi sapna to nahi dekh rahi...pinch me😆

Rey: ohh come on mom

Sunita: laughs..😆😆aapki tabiyat to thik hai na..?? Kuch hogaya aapko?? Hayeee Bhagwan ne meri sunli...Reyansh singhania party karne ja rahe hai...😆😆

Rey: mom please aap jao yahan se..mai khud hi kapde choose karlunga

Sunita: ha ha ha arrey aap itne saalon baad party karne ja rahe hai.. Mai aapko tayyar karungi...😊

Rey: mom stop dis now😡

Sunita: laughs ok ok..accha aap yeh pehen lijiye...😆

ReY: cool...abhi aap yahan se jaiye😃

Sunita: haan haan ja rahe hai😆😆

Rey gets ready comes out and sees sunita doing aarti

Sunita after doing aarti

SUnita: hey bhagwan aapka lakh lakh shukriya...aapne meri prarthna ko swikara...aaj mera beta party k liye ja raha hai...ab bas mere bete ko koi ladki pasand ajaye...toh mai ganga nahalun😃😃

Rey: mom yeh kya bakwas kar rahi ho aap😡

Sunita: arrey mere laal aap tayyar hogaye...kisiki nazar lage aapko...mera chand ka tukda...😊

Rey: smiles...aakhir beta kiska hu...Mai jaun😊

Sunita: thik hai dhyan se jayiye..aur khoob enjoy karna

Rey: luv u mom..bye.. C u

Sunita: buh byeee

In party hall

Neha: oye kya aise mu latkake baithi hai..chalna dance karte hai

Kria: mood nahi...u carry on

Vicky: party ayi ho aur party nahi kar rahi..yeh b koi baat hui..Come on...mai dance floor ja raha hu..neha kria aao yaar..

Neha: haan aarahe hai..Tum jao

Neha 2 kria

Neha: dekh tera rey boring aur khadoos hai wo nahi ayega..uske liye tu apna mood na spoil kar..

Kria: chup...wo waisa nahi hai😡

Neha: kya?? Arrey tujhe bahut pata hai uske baare me...Hello madam tune usse abhi tak thik se baat bhi nahi ki aur uski itni support..aha..😆😆

Kria: Kisiko pehchan ne k liye baat karna zaruri nahi hota..😳

Neha: haan haan ankhon ankhon ka khel...maine dekha hai filmon me..tera bhi wahi haal hai:.Kria tu gayi kaam se..😆😆

Kria: tu ja na dance kar mujhe mat paka😡

Neha: haan haan ja rahi hu..tu yahan khade rey rey karte rehna...😆😆

Kria: huh get lost

Neha on dance floor wid vicky

Vicky: hey...kria kyu nahi arahi

Neha: wo bimar hai

Vicky: wat? Kya hua usko

Neha: koi special bimari aagayi hai

VickY: matlab

Neha: arrey kuch nahi wo dance nahi karna chahti

Vicky: ok...

Kria: chey..Rey nahi aya toh mujhe kyu bura lag raha hai...kria kahin tu pagal toh nahi horahi.. Kria taps her feet like a baby and says Rey kahan ho😭😭

Rey enters in party hall... Gals starts staring him...

A gal standing next to kria shoutS Rey

Gal: rey party me...hayee mai mar jawan...he s luking so hot

Kria turns and sees rey she starts blushing😳😳

ReY: Kria

Kria: Rey

Rey: hi

Kria: hi

ReY: umm..kaisi ho?

Kria: shyly thik hu😳

Rey: blushing

Kria: aap kaise ho?

Rey: mai bhi thik hu

both start der staring session...Vicky and neha enters

Vicky and neha: Rey

Rey: haan

Vicky hugs rey and tells in his ears

Vicky: mujhe pata tha saale tu zarur ayega

Rey: accha...isliye to mai aya

Neha: hi rey..M neha

Rey: hey neha

Neha: kaise ho? Party me kaise aana hua..maine to tumhe kisi b party me nahi dekha ab tak...

Rey: haan bas aise hi vicky force kar raha tha to

Kria staring at rey

Neha: bas kar sab dikh raha hai...teri aankhen bahar nikal jayengi

Kria: ahhh sOrry

Vicky: thik kaha tumne neha yeh parties nahi jata aaj pata nahi kaise agaya..vicky luks at kria and says shayad koi special reason hai jo yeh janab aye...

Rey: blushing

Vicky: neha chalo hum dance karte hai...

Neha: haan haan chalo...😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
aww this is soo CUTE!!! I luv rey's mom. arti utar rahi hai uski 🤣
LUVD IT!!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww it was so cute. He atlast came that too for Kria n their unknowing feelings for each other.
very cute.Thanks for the pm ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww...this is sooo cute yaar...!! rey ki mom is damn funny...!!! hehehe..!!!!
and awww...kria and rey kitna blush karte hai...!!! loved kria ka per patak ke rey ko yaad karna..!!!!!!

update soon..!!!!!!!

-Saumya
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow 😍 but u stopped at rt time 😡 not happening
upload quickly plz
and thanx
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow wow wow loved it!!! sooo cute!!!! hayeee rey nd kria starring blushing!! rey getting attractd towrds her nd kria getting upset for rey nt cumin!! woow its fantabulus!! 🤗gud job!! keep it up!! update nd pm me sooon! 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
very sweet...plz update soon.cnt wait for KRIYAANSH interaction...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lolz at Rey's mom and Viha teasing Rey and Kriya
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Posted: 13 years ago
thts so so cute😍.
ray is so exited to go party nd meet with kriya.
nd when kriya knows tht ray is not coming in party she is so sad thts so cute.😍
nd then ray singhania entry is really so osum.⭐️
nd thn finally look look hawa hawa thts so osum.👏
nd pls pls pls update soon.
nd thnx for pm me
good job👍🏼👍🏼
nd lots of hug for u🤗🤗🤗🤗

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