NEW FF MAANEET; Kismat Connection upd Pt20 pg147 - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...loved it
so geet n maan r now frnds
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
...loved itπŸ˜Šβ€οΈπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 2
nice part...
so Maan ka intro bhi hogayi...
cont soon dear...

PS - can u plz use a bright color instead of that turquoise...its somewhat straining...
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awesome!!!
luved it...
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 i m tense for precap
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n awsum update! Geet is naughty lol. Well written, update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally  Maaneet mmeet!!!!!!!!!!! yeah
 
pehli hi meeting mein nok jhok ad dosti...amazing...
 
eagerly waiting for next one
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanku so much for ur encouraging comments...It means a lot to me...I am really sorry i could not reply to ur comments individually...but next time this wont happen...please bear with me this time...

A big thanks to all those who liked part2

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Part 3


Geet ended up in tears and left the place'.

Meera: nupur tujhe aise nahin bolna chahiye tha'..tu jaanti hai geet ko ye aise baatein pasand nai hai

Nupur: yar mera vo matlab nai tha'pata nahin vo shayad baat galat tarah se ho gayi'..

Meera: yar job hi ho geet to bura maan gayi na'.ab dhyan rakhiyo hame dubara geet se aise baat nahin karni samji tu??

Nupur: hmm

Geet back at her place''

Rano: aa gayi geet puttar kaisa raha aaj ka din

Geet: haan ma aaj ka din kafi acha tha'..maa apko pata hai class mein ek naya ladka aaya hai usne 10th mein 98% marks liye

Rano: hmm'.dekh le beta itne marks lene wale bhi bache hote hai

Geet: dekhna ma ab apko complaint ka mauka nahi  milega I promise

Mohinder: geet bte muje tumse yahi ummed hai'hum to bas yahi chahte hai kit u bas ache se padh likh le or hamara naam roshan karein

Geet: dekhiye ga papaji ek din aap faqr se kahenge ki geet aap hi ki beti hai''.papaji aap kahein to main apko ek gaana sunau'.

Mohinder: ye baton ke beech gaan kaha se aa gaya'

Geet: bas papaji aapse baat karte mann mein aa gaya suniye na

Mohinder: haan jab tak tu suna nahin legi tuje chain thoda na aega chal suna

Geet:

"Papa kehte hai bada naam karega

Beta hamara aisa kaam karega

Magar yeh to koi na jaane

 

Ki meri manzil hai waha'."

She points towards Kalpana Chawla's pic''.

Mohinder handa smiles and had tears in his eyes''he hugs geet''..

Mohinder: puttar tuje jitna padhna hai padh hum tere saath hai''.bas hamesha ye yaad rakhna ki hum logon ne sirf zindagi mein izzat hi kamayi hai koi bhi aisa kaam mat karna jisse teri ma or papaji ka sir jhuk jaye'.Maine hamesha hi tuje ye seekh di hai or aaj bhi yahi keh raha hu'.main jaanta hu ki tune meri ye baat hamesha dhyan mein bhi rakhi hai''muje apne geet puttar pe garv hai'..

Rano too had tears in her eyes listening to the conversation'.

Geet: papaji aap bilkul chinta mat kijiye main aap ki di hui seekh ko hamesha dhyan rakhungi'meri zindagi mein aapdono se badhkar koi or nahin hai'..

Meanwhile, khurana mansion

Savitri: so maan kaisa raha aapka school ka din??

Maan: kafi acha tha daadi

Savitri: hamein yakeen hai ki aap apne school ko kiss nahin karenge'..ye delhi ka best school hai bte'

Maan: main jaanta hu daadi'..aaj mere kaafi dost bhi an gaye

Savitri: pehle din hi dost ban gaye,,,m impressed'..maan aap khush hai to meri zindagi sukoon se bhari hai,,,,bas hamein or kya chahiye'.bhagwan ka diya sab kuch hai hamare pass'..

Maan: daadi aapko meri tension karne ki koi zarurat nahin hai''muje koi zarurat hui to main apko bata dunga

Savitri: thik hai bte'chaliye dinner kar lete hai

Maan: haan daadi uske baad muje apna school ka kaam bhi karna hai

Maan and daadi had their dinner and maan thereafter went to complete his homework. Maan had a habit of writing diary and he did the same before sleeping

He recalled all the days' activities that happened with him''he had a smile on his face remembering geet's prank and then her apology'.and then wrote everything on his diary.

Maan(self-thought) jaisi bhi hai vo dil ki buri nahi hai''

Similarly days passed on the same way''the school days were going superbly for everyone'..maan had now become one of the closest friends of Mayank and Dev.

Mayank: maan fresher party ka kya plan hai???

Dev: haan yar ye to socha hi nahin tha freshers party bhi to aa gayi na'..

Maan: kyu iske liye koi planning karni padti hai

Mayank and dev smiled on maan's answer...Baat to aise kar raha hai jaise kabhi koi party attend nahi ki

Mayank: chal chod ladkiyon se puchte hai ki unka kya plan hai

Dev: hey geet freshers ke liye kya prep ki iss bar'..tu to hamari rockstar hai koi performance hogi kya???

Geet: yar tumhe koi or kaam nahin hai ek to main aage hi itni tensed hu vo seniors ne saare dress code rakh dia hai'upar se tum log ek or nayi kahani suna do

Maan: geet saare daalne mein koi problem hai

Geet: nahin koi prob nahi hai ek baar tum daal ke dhekhna pata chal jaega

Maan: yar tum hamesha ulta jawab kyu deti ho maine to normally pucha

Meera: arey maan geet ki baat ka bura mat manna vo uska aaj ka din thoda kharab hai'isliye ussi baat ka gussa tunpe nikal gaya

Maan got bit worried'.by the time geet had left the class'.Geet was sitting all alone in the campus where maan noticed her so he could not stop himself and went to her'..

Maan: geet tum tensed lag rahi ho??

Geet: nahin koi baat nahin hai'..u carry on

Maan: geet main tumhe abhi itna to nahin jaanta par haan tumhari shakal dekhkar ye zarur keh sakta hu kit um thoda pareshan ho

Geet: vo internals aane wale hai na to ussi ke liye pareshan thi

Maan: isme pareshan hone wali koi baat nahin hai geet main kuch notes banaye hai agar tum share karna chahti ho to mujse kar sakti ho

Geet: nahin its okay maan I will manage

Maan: geet hum friends hai na to afar ek dost dusre ke kaam nahin ayega to kaun ayega??

Geet: thik hai maan tum apne notes de dena'..thanku so much'..

Maan: geet friendship ke kuch rules hai no sorry no thanks'..

Geet: hmm,,,ya

Maan: muje to laga that um vo saree wali baat ko lekar pareshan thi

Geet: tum phir se meri taang kheech rahe ho

Maan: nai baba main to chala yaha se''.isse pehle hum phir se ladna start kar de'..waise bhi mushkil se tumhare chehre par muskaan ayi hai'..chalo bye geet

Maan leaves from there'..

Geet(self thought) maan acha ladka hai helpful bhi hai''or ladko se dosti karne mein muje problem nai hai'basmuje ye khayal rakhna hai ki iss dosti ko ek limit mein rakh saku'..

Maan was having some sort of self relief after seeing smile on face of geet''!!!

At maan's home:

Anwesha was busy studying as her college exams were approaching'..he noticed maan coming back

Ani: maan aa gaye school se kaisa tha tumhara din

Maan: di aajkal to kafi ache chale hai ab bas freshers party or uske baad internal

Ani: freshers party mein tum ja rahe ho'm shocked??

Maan: di vo jaana compulsory hai isliye

Ani: hmm..chalo acha hai mera chotta bhai padhai ke alawa bhi kuch sochta hai

As soon as ani says this'geet's thought comes in mind of maan'

Ani: kaha kho gaye maan'.?

Maan: kuch nahi di chalo abhi main fresh hoke aata hu phir aaram se baat karte hai

Ani: thik hai tab tak main bhi apni padhai kar leti hu

Maan(self thought) ye muje geet kyu dikhi achanak se'..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

 

Precap: The freshers' party😳😳


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Edited by minnie_tweetie - 12 years ago