-Dhundlae aks- Maaneet FF pt72 pg140 NOV27 - Page 52

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Sushmacholke thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

fir se updating... haila... i thot u r on chutti... cudnt stay away from us na... hehehehe... love ya lots


MORE THAN MUSKI DI WE CANT STAY AWAY FROM HER,SHE MADE HUNDREDS OF HER FANS RESTLESS;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
What is this happening...???
And why...???
Things are turning worst...poor Geet...and Maan has to always misunderstand her...
I'm upset...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.


U analyze so well. Just wanted to let u know.
U bring out everything together in a great perspective.
Amazing writing skills.

Ek FF likh do. Kya bolti tu?


Oooh, thanks Rachna😃You made my day !
I wish to say the same to you - i look up to your power of expression.

But writing an FF - thats not my cup of tea, I fall short on the creativity part .. !! Till school essays it was ok😆

And this extensive analysation of characters makes me feel I will fall short of my expectation of my own characters if I write a story 😆 That doesnt say much about a writer , does it?



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sushmacholke


MORE THAN MUSKI DI WE CANT STAY AWAY FROM HER,SHE MADE HUNDREDS OF HER FANS RESTLESS;)


heyyy sush di
got u here
remember me...sweetu😳
n yeah me very glad tht muski di is updating...lol
i need to grill sumone becoz of tht!!!1
\hehehehehe😈

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mystique_girl



Oooh, thanks Rachna😃You made my day !
I wish to say the same to you - i look up to your power of expression.

But writing an FF - thats not my cup of tea, I fall short on the creativity part .. !! Till school essays it was ok😆

And this extensive analysation of characters makes me feel I will fall short of my expectation of my own characters if I write a story 😆 That doesnt say much about a writer , does it?




Wanted to PM u, but ur inbox is full.
I do not agree with what u say.
I suck at school essays, i dread them. But I can write here.
Look at u. U wrote so well in the last few pages here on this discussion.
Specially the part about self-realization..and stuff...it was just amazing.
If not an FF...how about start with one shot...den SS.
Trust me, I have faith in u.
Write just for urself, not with an expectation but just for the sake of it. N let the readers judge.
Now if u will become ur own worst critic phir kya hoga...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Again... gal whats happening??? 😉😉😉😉😉😉

I will be waiting 😆😆😆😆😆😆

Mwwwaaahhh
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Posted: 13 years ago
sr 2 ' just a big show off
Maan tried his best to ignore all their rubbish.. he even tried to put on his ear phone.. didn't seem to help.. he hated it ..wat was his problem.. thats wat he thought abt her.. a big show off!!! then why was he feeling so disturbed & troubled.. he just couldn't bare their talks..& worst they continued to just talk abt her Karan's intimate relation..

Maan got really angry & excused himself from there. He walked straight to geets class. They all had just completed the lecture & leaving. He went & stood infront of her & prachi's desk.. she was putting her notes inside.
Prachi promptly said hi
but felt little odd at his walking into the class like that he never did anything like this before.. armaan just left didn't want to put prachi in trouble.
Maan ' we r going to the huddle session
he said looking at prachi. She knew abt this IT dept competition.. so she knew wat he meant.
Geet clutched the bag close to her body... wat was he trying to say.. we.. her heart just missed a beat..

Prachi ' all the best.. she smiled & left them alone
Geet dipped her head & just took her bag & walked out. All the while she didn't speak a word. When they reached the corridor, she just continued to walk towards the main gate. He just extended his hand to stop her. She almost walked into it & stopped.. still keeping her eyes glued to the floor.
Maan ' tumhari problem kya hain?
Why r u not coming to the huddle session?
His head was splitting in rage.. part of it actually just whole of him.. he knew why she was not coming.. but he couldn't accept it or didn't want to accept it..
why would she .. if all that didn't matter to her..
or did it matter to her.. ??!! then wat the hell is she doing with Karan??!!

she didn't say word. She just kept her eyes & head down. Only she knows how her whole inner self melts hearing his voice.. but still she fails to understand why she feels so delicate & vulnerable near him. Not that she is scared of him.. but she is scared of the forbidden emotions.
Her silence only triggered his temper.. he held her arms turned her to face him in a jerk..
Geet he roared
she still didn't look up to meet his questioning eyes.
Wat u want the whole IT dept to fall at ur feet & beg u to participate?
U thing they can't do without u?
Waisen bhi tumhara model was all wrong..
He held her arms in a tight grip, despite the worse pain that arced through her now, she didn't want to meet his eyes.. she knew it was all forbidden..he was forbidden.. She tried to be oblivious to everything.. his hurting grip, his harsh words.. the pain that seared through her.. the emotions.. the confusion that begins..the moment she is around him..
he didn't know he was hurting her.. nor did she make it obvious. He shook her again.. & pushed her away.. dam u.. he sighed in fury..
he just held her hand & dragged her to the huddle room.
She snapped her hand the moment they reached near the door...
he turned back & glared at her.. she quietly walked in still looking down. All the 3seniors pounced at her with questions. She maintained a very low profile though out the session. She didn't look at him or say anything to him
They finished the discussion & dispersed. It was 4pm.. the whole college was empty now. All of them walked silently towards the main gate.. Maan walked towards his car. He offered to drop them. Geet kept quiet.. as they reached towards the parking lot she quietly left from there to the bus stand.
When Maan turned to look she was not there.
He sighed sadly.. he knew she won't come with him.. why was he even thinking on those lines.. wat is with him.. why does he have to be so bothered with her every little thing.
May be just this event.. he convinced himself... things would be much better once they finish with his competition.
Next day Maan & prachi were just discussing something in the library..
someone commented.. these love birds don't even spare the library. It was an embarrassing for either of them. & it was becoming more off late .. all this gossips & unnecessary talks. Maan was realizing kind of his friendship with prachi has gone more than mere frds, atleast infront of the whole college & to an extent infront of prachi too.. how much they knew they r just frds but that a boy with a girl thingy was playing. Much required distraction from Geets confusion for Maan. Time for him to thing abt prachi more seriously .. but he could never.. all the while he would land up wondering will that stupid sur phari Geet come to the next huddle session.

While Maan & Prachi were getting out of the college.. karan & some guys where just chit chatting.. karan couldn't stop himself from pulling Maan into a conversation. Prachi just left from there after saying a bye to him.
Karan teased ' suna hain u guys getting really close.. kissing & all...
Maan glared at him
visal ' they can't get to ur level any way he teased karan back.
Karan patted visal's back.. tu mera frd hain yaar Maan ka?
Maan ' frd tho hum bhi tumharen .. bus ek baat samjh nahi aati.?
Karan knew Maan was upto something
visal & other guys curiously asked .. kaun si baat?
Maan ' yeh hi.. we never get to see u with ur GF??
karan snapped ' when do we get to see u for that matter
Maan laughed arrogantly
visal ' common karan.. these 2 guys r always together..yeh log library bhi nahi chodthen
another guy.. but tujhe tho kabhi nahi dehka Geet ke saat
karan .. fumbles with his words..
Maan ' I even doubt that story of his that night with her
karan immediately pounces back.. why u want to tell every one u were there with my GF
Maan ' main tho kah doon.. koi meri baat thodi managa
karan .. shook his shoulder.. angrily looking away..
Maan - lekin aur nahi.. Karan.. this time we will not believe if u say ..u were with her
or u were ever close to Geet.
Maan couldn't believe his own voice.. he actually so possessively said her name. Was it more of a warning types. Or was it like a challenge types.. but it was definitely .. a stern tone.. totally unlike Maan.
precap
wondering if Geet came to the next huddle session
-PREV PART 68 NEXT PART 70-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
rr
yayyy me 1st in ur thread after sooo long

awesum1 di👏
maan was awesum at the end
bas he couldn't understand geet's emotions!!!
both r kinda getting attracted towards each other yet there is
tht "FORBIDDEN" word cuming in between
i knw this age...it all seems like tht!!!!
whens da next update di???

Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ab fir se discussion nahi karenge... muski tum jao enjoy ur holiday... poor jij ..hamare chakkar mein he is waiting... waise the update was nice... maan giving it back to karan and making karan's friends see that may be karan and geet have never been together and also maan quietly told the truth that he was in that room with geet that night and not karan...
muski - maan giving a serious thot bout prachi???? 🤢🤢🤢🤢...even after he saw how she reacted to geet's night stay in the store room, he still thinks prachi is good?? 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢...
Edited by vivacious_gurl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I think it's time for Geet to speak up.

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