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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update.really radev meeting at disco
waiting for radev meet with knowing each other specially at the ghat.
thanks for pm and update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow really lovely dear keep it up waiting for the next part ha
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 8 : MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE
Radhika continued to stare at the picture, but she came into senses as the taxi driver called her "didi" "didi:"

Radhika:haan bolo bhaiyya

Driver:didi, aapne kaha gaya ghat aaya hain

Radhika looked out and said haan bhaiyya ek minute.

she stopped ehr lappy closed it and came out. Giving money to the driver said "thanks bhaiyya"

Driver:aisa kuch nahi didi , aapko kabhi taxi chahiye toh mujhe bhula de na

Radhika smiled and said "thanks bhaiyya"

She came down steps of ghat and seeing a bench present sat there.
She aagain opened her laptop to look at the picture. Then touching the kanha's locket on her neck , she started to talk. "kanha ye aap kya kar rahe ho. Jis se main aaj aakarshit huva tha, vo mere kishankannaya tha, mere Dev tha. Thanks a lot knaha. Lekin vo mere naam sun ne par bhi koi react nahi hua hain kyun kanha."

Radhika hitted her head and said "sorry kanha mai ne bhul gaya , vo tho mujhe badi hone ke baad kabhi nahi dekha na. "
she smiled to her self. Suddenly she kept a serious face and said "lekin ye kya hain kanha, vusne humesha mujhse aisa bolte raha ki, sweety ka naam sirf aur sirf vuski Radhika ko hogi, lekin aaj mujhe na jaante vo naam mujh par use kiya. Iss baar jab hum online pe milega jaroor vusse daantega main."

Radhika kept a sad face and said "kanha do saal hogaya mere kishankannayya mujhse baat karke, nahi koi reply hain yaan nahi koi phone. kyun kanha, vo mujhse kyun aisa kar raha tha. mujhe ek achi dosti ka meethi deikhake, aisa mujhe chod kar chala gaya. ye dosti 13 saal ki hain lekin kyun 2 saal se ye dosti ko door kiya kanha. maine aisa kya paap kiya, jis se mujhe aap itni bada saja de raha tha. "

Radhika sat there and opened the Dev's childhood picture present in her lappy and joined the bigpicture with the chotidev's picture and wrote there "meri kishankannayya, meri dev , mere saathi, mere dost I always love u"
Radhika seeing that picture smiled to her self and sat there waiting for rain closing her laptop.

As the clock ticked 12 the Rain started to fall and she started to dance in the rain jumping and became a kid in that rain. Then she remembered an incident

'that day rain was falling heavily outside and she started to play in rain asusual.Devki came to her saying "Radhika ataarah saal ki hone ke baad bhi ye bachpana kya hain." Radhika:"mom please khelne do na"
Devki:tera computer mein kuch msg aaya. atleast jakar vusse dekho
Radhika:msg okay I am going
Radhika went inside thinking to ehr self that 'kishankannayya ne msg bheja hoga'

As radhika opened her mailbox she hiied to ehr self saying "yesss Dev hi tha"

She opened the msg and seeing goodmng written replied Gud evng mr.handsome.

As she got the reply saw "hey kya kar rahe ho aarthi khatam kiya?"

Radhika:yes vo toh khatam hain, maaloom hain tumhe kya ho raha hain yaha.

dev:ummm baarish

Radhika:yes aisa kaisa guess kiya

Dev:tum itna happy matlab vahi hoga

Radhika:kay okay

Dev:hey mujhe bhi baarish mein khelna ka man kar raha hain

Radhika:then khelo

Dev:yaha baarish nahi ho raha tha

Radhika:oka okay U can't play but i will show u.

Dev:sach

Radhika:sach

Dev:lekin madam ji ne aapka muh mujhe cmputer mein dikhana nahi chahte hain na

Radhika:i won't be seen to u , but i will show u rain.

Radhika moved a side and made her web cam on

Dev:hey Radh's where are u

Radhika:i won't be seen to u, I doesn't wanna u see my face till we meet first.

Dev:okay okay. hey ye toh bahut badi baarish ho raha hain

Radhika:haan I know. Kya pakora khane ka mann kar raha hain

Dev:haan lekin mujhe khana banane ka shakti nahi hain

Radhika:tum he banane ki kya jaroorat hain, pakora teri doorbell ke paas hi hoga,

Dev:kyaaa

Radhika:1..

2...

3...

Here u go


Dev:what r u sayting dear

Radhika ur bell wll ring now,

Dev:what r u sayying.

tclikol clik

Dev:wait a minute, main door bell is ringing

Radhika:hahahahah

Dev went and iopened the door as he saw out there was a boy having pakoras in his hand

Dev:yes what do u want.

Boy:sir we have an order to deliver these to u

Dev:who ordered

Boy:she said her name as sweety/

Dev had a twitch of smile across his lips and taking the order paying money to him said thanks and he came in.

As dev came to the computer. radhika was offline and had a mail saying see the below video of rain and enjoy the pakoras. Have a sweet day and bye byeee."

As radhika remembered this she had some drops of tears across her eys and wiping them off she sat there in the rain, welcoming every drop of rain to fall on her.

Next day mng...

Radhika was standing in her room infront of turning a side. She was seeing her ankle as its link was lost . Radhika was trying to keep the link tight. She was wearing a blue and white colour combinationed lehenga. Just then Dev came into her room. Assuming her to be Mrinalini he hugged her form back saying ":hi would be Bhabhi kal raat main aapke liya aaya toh, aap disco se chale gaye hain. Its unfair. Do saal hogaye aapko milke phone mein baat kar rahe hain lekin maila nahi, atleast ab toh aapka shakal dikha do. "

Radhika was strugglin in Dev's arms but she can't speak as there was ankle present in between her teeth,

Dev:what bhabhi, kyun aap itna struggle kar rahe hain

Radhika:opened her teeth which made the ankle fall down and said him:leave meee.

Dev left her startling and as she turned aside seing ehr image in the mirror he was shocked and he said Radhika ji aap

Radhika turned to Dev and was lost saying nothing.

Dev:Radhika ji aap yahaan

Radhika said nothing.Just then mrinalni came in and seeing Dev and radhika standing there Mrinalini said "hey Dev"

Dev turned to ehr and made a questioned face.

Mrinalini:oho dev common ab apni bhabhi se sharaarat karna bhandh karo.

Dev smiled and said "hi would bhi bhabhi..."

Mrinalini sighed and turning to Radhika she said "Radhu, ye Dev hain. Tum jaante ho na"

Radhika smiled and as she turned to dev , Dev said "Ye koun hain bhabhi"

Mrinalini went to radhika and hugging her by side said "its my sweet sister Radhika"

Dev said "namastey Radhika ji"

Radhika said "namastey"

Mrinalini said to Dev "dev chalo hukme jaana hain. Radhika, I will meet u later okay:"

Dev and Mrialini went out and as they went out Dev turned to mrinalini and said "Mrinali bhabhi I am sorry . Actua;ly main ne Radhika ko aap soch kar vusse back se hug kiya. I worry wether she was angry, I will apo,ogise her and come"

Mrinalini smiled knowing radhika's nature and said Okay dev

Dev went to Radhika's room who was still stabding there only and said "Sorry Radhika ji, I took u as bhabhi as i didn't see u. I never intend to hug u"

Radhika:o kuch nahi Dev ji , I didn't mind. Mistakes are universal. And I am sorry for being rude to u in the party of yesterday

Dev was surprised by her behaviour. 'main bahut saari ladkiyon se mili. kai ladkiyan hand touch hone par bhi aisa bhartav karte hain jaise main busko kiss kiya. she is differet . indeed she is special'

Radhika:helooo

Dev:yeah i too didn't mind. Indeed if u came and talked to me yesterday, i too would have been like that only. Never mind radhika ji

Radhika smiled and said:Dev ji ek baat bolo

Dev:haan

Radhika:aap please mujhe radhikaji mat boliye, call me radhika or radhu

Dev smiled and said "i will call like that only when u are a friend of mine"


Radhika as if understanding stretched ehr hand and said "mujhse dosti karoge"

Dev nodded his head and took her head saying "yes'

As Dev did this Radhika reminded their first meet at the mandir and had a tear of drop on his eyes,/

Dev noticed it and felt a twinge of pain in his heart which he felt strange.

Mrinalini who came in saw this and was having a smile of surprise on her face.

Edited by harianjana - 14 years ago
fatssrilanka thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
It was a great update.Loved Dev & Radhika conversation & both of becoming friends again.Hope he remembers his childhood friendship soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
so they r friends now.waiting for their freindship 2 into turn more,thanks for pm.tc
Mona55 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update waiting for dev to remmenber his childhood friend
ekta15 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
its so much lovely update hari.
oh my ,loved it yaar .so beautifull.
thanks for the update and post too.
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update👏thanku so much for ur update and pm😃cant wait for next
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very nice update hari 👏

Even will realize her di 😛 I am waiting for that 😉

Will wait for the next 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Liashna

Hey Dear

Awesome update!!

Thanks for the pm... You guys are making me miss Choti Bahu now...😭

oho di please aisa rona mat. we peoople are doing our best to make u all feel cb.

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