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Posted: 13 years ago
part 46
what twist are u gonna throw at us?
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
both da updates were amazin luvd dem
cnt w8 4 da twist hpe nfuin bd apens
plzz cont soo fanx 4 da pm x
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
awesome parts dear..
cont.sooon
plz add me to yr pm list..
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Posted: 13 years ago
and yeh precap may kya hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi valli i finished reading all ur ffs. jst enjoyed this also a lot. geet is so cute n innocent. y r u scaring us so much. u know hw much i am scared abt the twist. hope everyone is safe otherwise u had it from all of us yaar. keeping our fingers crossed n waiting for the nxt update. plz pm me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for ur update didi
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awesome update
loved it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
U, ME,AUR...?

PART 47

Hai friends,

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papa..i 'm thinking to go back to delhi in 2days.
beta ithni jaldi..
Rano ,vicky n chachu had no words to say..they were shocked.geet will go far away from them in 2 days.
wo kya haina..mei aur Dadima dono yahaan athe hui bohut din hogayi..we have to look after business n my college will reopen in few days...before that i've lots of work to do..aap samach sakthi haina..hum yahaan zyaada din nehi rehsakthi..
haan beta..hum samach sakthi hain..lekin gudia ko kese bathaongi hum..usei athath nehi ..humse aur is gao ki bahaar wo kabi nehi gayi hai..wo royegi..we have to talk to her n make her understand n prepare her...shadhi ithni jaldi hogayi..we have not said anything to her..
Ive made her understand...she has accepted .ask her..
Gudia..Do You know you are going to Delhi.
Ji papa..he told me..You know papa,i'm going to join college there.
Rano hugged her.there was pain in her ..her gudia will leave them all in 2 days.how can we stay away from her.but,before gudia leaves to Delhi I must prepare her more to be adjustable with maan n family.
Gudia..beto,i want to say something to you.
Ji mama..
Gudia,we will not be there always with you.now you have to proceed your life in your own way.Only maan beta will be there for you..Only he will be there to share your happiness and sorrow.you must leave your childish behaviour.And try to be a good wife.maan ka har kam mei mathath karna..pati ki har kam mei mathath karna ek achi pathni ka farz hai..gudia tum samaj rahi hona mei kya kehrahi hoon.
Geet was simply nodding her head.

Maans ST:mama is tryingto advice her,which she cant understand all in short period

Mama,why are you telling all this to her.let she be herself..slowly we can make her change.
ji beta..par kehna tho mera farz tha..yese moka phir milengi ya nehi..
Mama aap kese baath karrahi hain..
wo beta,she will be in your house..we will not be able to talk to her like this na.
why dont you all join us in dinner today..
no beta..we will come tomorrow..we have to talk to dadi also.
ji.
mei gudia ka kuch aur dress packing karthi hoon..vicky come n help me..

Geet saw the neighbourhood baby playing with few more kids.

she followed rano.mama,shall i go and play with munna and others.
Geet,you are no more a baby.Now you are married.dont behave like a child..sit quietly with your papa and your husband.
geet made a baby face and sat next to maan.
kya hua geet.why are you keeping your face like this.
mama ne muje munna ke saath kelnese mana karthiya.
teek hai .tum jao.mei mama se kehdoongi.
par mama daatengi..
no.she will not ..you go.
geet ran away outside..

vicky came out with a bag..
jiju,i'll keep this in jeep.
keep this certificates also in it.
ok jiju.
he kept and came inside.
RAMnath sneaked through the neighbour hood to reach geet.he saw geet going outalone
i think i've to go..i'll call my driver n securities..
maan searched for his phone.then only he rememebered.he left it in the house itself.
kya hua beta.
i think i forgot my phone in house itself.
use our phone beta.
ji papa.
maan dialed the number.then only he realised it was also dead.
phone is not working...teek hai..i'll drive myself...
all came out..
geet go with him..
ji papa..
mama,have you kept my sari..
wo tho mei boolgayi..i made ladoos also for you...mei lekar aathihoon..
she asked geets father to bring her sari n rano n vicky went to kitchen.now the puppy was barking more.
ma..why is this puppy barking like this.
geet is going na isiliye.
dayalnath already entered the house when all were outside..he opened the gas knob n was hiding inside the house...
geetki mama aur vicky went inside the kitchen.

vicky take that box.dayalnath locked outside..
ye kisne lock kiya..
they both knocked the door..
geets papa gave the sari n came in search of them.
he heared the knock n opened..
who did this?
dayalnath pushed him inside n closed the door.

I did this.I warned you rajender..keep ur daughter away from police n not to interfere in our life..now you n your family has to pay for itgo to hell..ur gudia will also come there soon...ram uska bahaar inthazaar karraha hai...

maneet n geets chachu were busy in chat waiting for geets family.
Geet suddenly screamed..
chodo..chodo..ram chodo muje..
maan turned hearing her sound.
then only maan realised geet was under the gun point of Ram.
both maan n geets chachu said..
geet ko chodo..
and the village womens also gathered ..
Ram chodo gudia ko..
Nehi chodunga isei..me n my father went through all bad situations bcoz of geet and this man only..i'll not leave her.
ram.geet ko chodo.how dare you touch my wife..leave her or you will see your death today..maan roared like a lion.😡
leave her..i'll leave her after i'll make her mine.
he slided his hands on her waist..
Geet felt like thousands insects moving around her body..she struggled to get away from his grip..but all went in vein.
leave me..u stupid..idiot..ullu k patta..she was cursing him
i'll leave you once i taste you.That will be the biggest punishment for your husband..
Ram..haath nikal geetse..i'm warning you..maan tried to near him..
come near me..i'll kill her..i'm not cared about my life..come come..ram kept the gun in geets forehead..
maan shouted nooo...He searched for his gun..shit..i kept it in house..how i forgot to take it ..
All said..ram if you try to harm geet we will not spare you..some tried to throw stone on him..but he kept the gun in geets mouth..
Ok all of you try your best to relieve her from me..but now all were feared at him..what if he really shoots geet.
ram,leave my wife..i'll do whatever you say..do you want money.that land..say what you want..i'll give anything..but leave her..maan pleaded..he can do anything to save his geet.
who needs that now..I want geet only..i thought of marrying her..making her mine...but now you made her yours..but im not the man to give up easily..i'll make your beautiful wife mine then you take her with you or leave her here itself..i'll keep her as mine..
Maan gritted his teeth.😡
Ram..how dare you..say cheap things ..you dont know whom you are talking with..i'll give my life.but i'll not make you harm her..he tried to near him..
Geet was terribly scared n she started to cry..
ok..lets see..see what im going to do to her infront of all..he took the gun from her mouth n pointed Maan.
Ram rubbed his stubble in geets chin..n tried to kiss her...
Raaam..a fraction of minute..when ram turned to geet maan jumped in the air n kicked him..Ram fell on the ground.his gun dropped from his hand..geet ran to her chachu ..he tried to console her..kuch nehi hua hai..gudia..sab teek hai..you are fine bcoz of maan..
all of them neared Ram to beat him..Maan stopped them.
He tried to mess up with me..I'll teach him the lesson ..
Geet saw maan..Maan took Rams hand twisting backwards..This is the hand,that touched my wifena...he broke the hand..how dare you tried to humilate her before all..he punched on his face n mouth..Rams teeth broke n bloood oozed out..How dare you touch maan singh khuranas wife..how can you even think,that i'll leave you alive after touching my wife.He was kicking him more n more..
Geet started to shiver at the sight.
Geets chachu said..Maan..leave him..see geet is shivering..
Maan dropped ram.he fell on the ground.maan came to geet n took her in his embrace.. he Kissed her forehead..Geet are you ok..
Yes..
dont cry..nothing can happen to you till im there with you..but you must be brave always..
he kept her head on his chest n nodded in yes..her tears made his shirt wet.Maan saw the villagers beating Ram .till he fall dead.

Geets chachu felt odd .ithna bada hungama horahi hai..ye bhaiya aur bhabhi kahaan gayi..he walked into the house.
Dayalnath who thought,his son will be succeeding in kidnapping his love,thought of throwing the lighted match stick from a safe distance.so that he will not be injured.But,puppyforcefully freed itself from the pole n chased him to the house n bitted him.Dayalnath fall inside the house with the lighted match stick.The house was already filled with gas..The house bursted fully with a big sound.. all were shocked to see the fire.. all happened before maneet n villagers.noone are alive.geet shouted mama papa vicky chachu..she tried to enter the fire.Maan pulled her closer.he held her tight like her bone will crush into juice.there was a next blast..Geets chachu was thrown out.maaneet ran to them..maan took him in his laps..
chachu..
his face was fully burnt..maan s securities arrived..but it was tooo late..
bahadur,help me.we have to rush him to the hospital..yes sir..they came to lift him.
No..I have no time..gudia..
Ji chachu..
from now,only maan is your family.always listen to him n obey his words.n maan please humari gudia ka hayal rakna..If she does any mistake,forgive her ..we are leaving her alone..we are giving our gudia in safe hands..of yours...promise me you will look after her ..
i i i..pr omise..i'll take care of her ..aapko kuch nehi hoga.we will go to hospital..bahadur lift him..but his head fall down...
chaaachu...uttiye na chachu😭
maan was numb.the tears were flowing continuosly in all eyes..maan hugged her tight.your chachu is no moregeet ..geet lifted her head.there she saw her house falling into ashes..
there was no more sound or weep in her..maan felt her weight light on him..
Geet..geet...
She was already fainted...
Geeet... geet...he patted her cheeks.she fell down like a lifeless body..
the whole village went in sorrow..there was no more a sign of geets family..other than geet..
What to say?the fate was more powerful .noone can change things thats going to happen.as pandit said maneet got married.but it did not save the family.hon
eko kaun ruksaktha hei.

23.11.2011..9.30pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
hai
this is awesome and great
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh dear
so emotinal
she lost the whole family
i think from now she ll matured dear
hope she should dear...
waaiting for the next

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