NEW FF MAANEET; Kismat Connection upd Pt20 pg147 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: disha_Maan.GC

congooo 4 the new ff...
nice start...
cont sooonnn...😊



Thanku 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsweet

simply fab...

continue soon...



Thanks dear😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

loved the start yaar

continue soon
cant wait for maan's intro

love you
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Thanku so very much dearie...
ab kya bolu...tuje...

ull have maan's intro today itself

love u too...
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Posted: 13 years ago




Part 2


Geet was having a quick glance at the contents and on the way back she collided with someone(was a boy) which actually made geet fell on the floor.

Geet: uff cant u see properly''pata nahin kaha par dhyan tha??

Boy: m so sorry actually m new to this school

Geet: naye to to matlab hai ki tumhe dikhta bhi kaam hai

Boy: par m apologizing na'..i admit it was my mistake par tum bhi to dekh ke chal sakti thin a??

Geet: ye acha hai'.apna blame mujhpar daal do'..waise muje tumse baat karne mein koi interest nahin hai'so why m I wasting my time

Geet was about to leave'.as the boy again stops her.

Boy: excuse me I want bother u much but can u please tell me ki class XI science section kaha pe hai??

Geet was being naughty at this time'.she was actually standing in front of the class but she decided to play prank on that boy.

Geet: ya sure I will''u do one thing'..u go upstairs go left''then straight and then u wont find anuthing then u come back and come downstairs and then to the left'.u will find the class that is class XI'. Hope u have understood'..abhi m busy wid my clas otherwise I wud have surely helped u out''I hope u wont mind

Boy: ya sure'.thanks

Geet: byeee

Geet leaves for her class and told meera and nupur about the prank she had played on that boy'on the otherhand the boy was busy in serach of his class XI'.

Nupur: geet tu hame bhi to itni baatein sunati hai or khud bechare ke saath game khel ke aayi

Meera: par geet vo agli baar jab tuje milega to tuje chodega nahin'

Geet: chod na yar usne geet handa se panga liya tha'..par yar sach batau muje ab bura lag raha hai kahin maine zyada mazak to nahin kar diya

On the other hand boy was busy searching for his class'..and he landed up at the same place from where geet told him that route'..

Boy(self thought) main to wahi pe hi aa gaya jaha se uss ladki ne muje bataya tha'.

He then realizes that he is standing in front of his own class'..

Boy(self thought) main sahi jagah par aaya tha or uss ladki ne jaan bujkar mere saath mazak kia'agar muje vo ladki dubara mili to main use chodunga nahin

He enters the class''geet is stunned to see him in her class

Boy: excuse me mam, may I come in'?

Geet: oye ye yaha kaise aa gaya

Meera: tu kiski baat kar rahi hai'.?

Geet: yar ye to wahi ladka hai jise maine ghumaya tha itna saara'.kahin isne muje dekh lia to

Nupur: tu tension mat le hum hai na tere saath

Meanwhile'.

Teacher: yes u can'.are u a new admission??

Boy: yes maam, I have joined this school'.m so sorry for being late in the class'..i was unable to locate the class maam

Teacher: its okay,,,come in and have ur seat??

Well geet was scared as she knew what she did was wrong''she was trying and hiding herself so that the boy could not see him.

Teacher: what is ur name???

Boy: maam- Maan Singh Khurana

Meera: oye teri ki'.ye hai vo maan singh khurana''

Geet did not responded as she was not in a state to think'..

The teacher was enquiring about their marks in class X'..so it was finally maan's turn'

Maan: mam I was a topper of my school''I secured 98% marks in my Class X exams''I was a boarder at a school but my grandmother wanted me to come back and stay along with her now

Teacher: very good'.so we have a whole lot of brilliant students in this class'.Hope u all will continue the same spirit in ur secondary classes also

Nupur: yar ye to topper nikla'.uff kitna intelligent hai''.ninety eighttt percent''.mere to sapno mein bhi itne marks na aaye'..

Geet: yar maine jo kia vo galat tha'main na abhi maan se maafi maang lungi jaise class khatam hogi

Meera: main jaanti hu geet tuje ache se'.tune uske saath mazak to kar lia par tuje ab bura lag raha hai'.chal jaise hi clas khatam hogi tu use sorry bol dena'afterall ab hum class mates hai na

Geet: thik hai

Teacher: okay class main tumhe ab chodti hu par please dn make noise''ur grown up now''

The teacher leaves and everyone was interacting with each other'..suddenly maan's eyes caught up geet'.

Maan(self thought): ye ladki yaha pe'..issi ki wajah se main late hua'.

Geet had already made her mind to apologise''she came up to maan to apologise'.

Geet: excuse me maan, m so sorry,,,maine tumhare saath galat kia'..please forgive me''

Maan was in quite bad mood with what geet did to him but her innocence calmed her down'

Maan: its okay chalta hai'..

Meera and nupur too had accompanied geet''

Geet: phir bhi maan please forgive me'..

Maan: muje pehle bura zarur laga par ab sach much m fine'..its perfectly okay'.

Geet: thanks maan

Maan: waise tumhara name kya hai''??

Geet: m geet'.or ye meri friends meera and nupur'..!!

Nupur and meera too had a talk with maan''and everything sorted out''..

Maan: thank god tum sab mile yaha par nai to muje lag raha tha ki main kaise naye school mein kaise adjust karunga'.

Geet: aisi koi baat nahin hai'.adjustment to ho hi jaati hai'..waise tumhe koi problem ho to hum logo ko ya phir dev ya mayank se bata dena'hum hamesha tumhari help ke liye tyar rahenge'.

Geet was still feeling guilty so she herself introduces maan to dev and mayank'..maan was having a good time with all of them'

Finally the first day of the school ended up''and geet, nupur and meera were on the way back to their homes'.

Meera: yar aaj ka din acha raha na'..hume or bhi kitne naye friends mil gaye'

Nupur: haan yar sach mein,,,, bhagwan karein sabhi din aise hi nikal jaaye'.

Nupur and meera were busy gossiping but geet was lost in her own thoughts''..

Meera: oye geet tu kin khyala mein khoi hui hai'.??

Nupur: lagta hai vo jo naya ladka aaya hai ussi ke bare mein soch rahi hai ab tak'oye geet kab tak use apne khayalo mein sametkar rakhegi'..kahi koi or baat to nahin hai??

Meera realized that nupur had actually hurt geet with what she said?

Geet: shut up nupur''!! How dare u'tune aise socha bhi kaise'tu jaanti hai muje aise baatein bilkul bhi pasand nahin hai'..main ladko se baatien karti hu, unki help karti hu bas'..aaj to tune ye baat keh di phir kabhi mat kehna'..muje inn sab baton se zyada apne parents ka sapna pura karna hai jo vo mere liye dekhte hai'.samjhi tu'

Geet ended up in tears and left'..😭😭

Precap: geet's father: geet puttar tu jaanti hai na humne sirf izzat kamai hai main hamesha tujse yahi kehta hu or aaj phir ye keh raha hu'.hamesha ye baat apne dhyan mein rahkna'


Well how was the update friends...Please do tell me how are u finding it...Ur comments means a lot to me...😳😳

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So finally with this update my Prince Charming has made his grand entry😳 aur ye kya aate hi maaneet ki tu tu main main shuru
well geet u r naughty haan maan ko achha buddu banaya but i also loved the way u realized ur mistake
okay so now they r friends but geet is still feeling bad
precap yaar ye geet k dad aisi baate kyun kar rahe hai😕
continue soon
love-Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow i love the story line u r great yar loved it ...tc continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
geeet playng prank with maan and then apolizing
loving it already
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Posted: 13 years ago
super duper update
just one request can u change the color font from light blue to something dark blue..as i find a bit difficult to read...
hope u understand...
keep writing

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