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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nivedithachand
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Abgina

@crazydevil87

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Posted: 14 years ago

#813

(created by Piya)

Thank u sooo much Pihu for d lovely banner
luv u sweety

I'm truly very sry for not updating for sooo long n thank u sooo much for bearing wid me guys...
Thanks a million for all of your love and support!!
Your comments and likes really make me feel special and motivates me to write more for u all'.
I've replied to each of ur comments... thanks a trillion for appreciating and commenting on my work''''..your comments make my day guys so pls do comment!!!
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PART 17

He went straight to outhouse for preparations then came inside mansion from backside and ordered Nakul not to tell anyone that he is back.
While entering their room his eyes were already searching for his pari... He was mesmerised by the view of his pari's beautiful face shining in the sunlight making her look divine and serene... He moved in trance and sat beside her admiring even the most unnoticeable feature of her enticing face...
Her hairs were disturbing his view now and then due to the wind... His hands slowly reached them and tucked them behind her ear...
Geet smiled slightly in her sleep with his touch... His heart swelled with happiness seeing her smile at his touch...

MAAN(thinking): Maan teri pari to neend mein bhi tujhe paehchanti hai...:-D khair ab main ise jaga leta hoon...mann to nahin kar raha kitni pyari lag rahi hai aise sote hue par koi nahin jab mera surprise dekhegi na to bari si muskan ke saath ye aur bhi haseen lagegi...

Maan patted her cheek lightly...

MAAN: Geet utho kitna so gi??

Geet took his hand and rested her head on his palm...

GEET: Please Maan sone dijiye na...

Next second her sleepy brain processed and she got up surprised and excited fluttering her lashes...

GEET: Maan aap????? Aap itni jaldi aap to shaam ko aane wale the na?????? Apne bataya kyun nahin ki aap subah hi aane wale hain????
MAAN: Geet tum sawalo ke beech saans le sakti ho there's no need to let everything out in one breath...

She dramatically lets out a lonnngg breath...

MAAN: Good! Ab tumhare answers... Haan main... Kaam jaldi khatam ho gaya to main jaldi aa gaya... Aur agar main tumhein bata deta to main apni pari ke chehre pe ye surprise aur excitement wali khushi kaise dekh pata...

She blushed at his comment... He smiled seeing her blushing...

MAAN: Achcha chalo ab jaldi se fresh ho aur chalo...
GEET: Kahan????
MAAN: Wada kiya tha na aate hi tumhara compensation doonga...to ab no questions bas chalo...
GEET: Ok...

She came out freshening up after sometime and was going near wardrobe to take her clothes out...

MAAN: Udhar kahan darwaza idhar hai...
GEET: Pata hai Maan bas das minute main naha loon please...
MAAN: Nope meri pari to aise bhi is poore jahaan ki sabse haseen ladki lagti hai... To ab chalo...

With that he picked her up in his arms and moved towards outhouse...

The hall was decorated beautifully with purple and white curtains and water lilies. There was a large picture of Rano with big belly and Maan kissing on her belly on the central wall.

Geet was in awe of beauty of the hall when her eyes fell on the picture. Tears threatened to fall from her eyes seeing her mother as she could only see Rano's face from that position and the other half was hidden by the table set at the center.
His heart flinched seeing her tears...

Maan was slowly taking her nearby the picture. Her teary eyes shone and her lips puckered up into a smile seeing maan indirectly kissing her. She even blushed slight which gave Maan immense happiness.
Maan thought he can give away his everything for this one smile of her's.

He looked deep into her eyes and wished to take away all the pain and dillema from them and fill them with happiness. He wished to keep her in his warm embrace forever.

He put her down and wiped her tears asking her to stop crying.

MAAN: Please Geet in motiyon ko apni pyari ankhon se aise mat bahao is har ek moti mein tumhare Maan ki jaan basti hai. Yehi soch rahi hona ki jis insaan ne inhein sabse zyada bahaya hai wo keh raha hai ki inke behne se uski jaan nikalti hai par ye sach hai Geet apne ghamon ke andheron mein main itna gum ho gaya tha ki main bas ek nirdai...

Geet put her palm on his mouth asking him not to speak further but he softly removed her palm taking it in his palm...

MAAN: Please aaj keh lene do Geet...is dil pe gunahon ke bahot bojh hain inhein halka kar lene do...

Geet nodded in acceptance softly and he kissed her hand...

MAAN: Pata hai Geet maine ye tasveer yahan kyun lagai hai?? Isliye ki ye tasveer tumse mere dil ke wo jazbaat bayan kar sakti hai jo shayad main lafzon mein saaf bayan na kar paoon...

Geet was intently looking at the picture... He touched the picture lovingly...

MAAN: Geet ye mere andheron mein doobne se pehle un khoobsurat lamhon ka ek pal hai jab main apni zindagi mein tumhar judne ka intezar kar raha tha bachpan ki masumiyat mein ye ehsaas hi nahin hua ki kab intezaar chahat ban gai... ye ehsaas to ab hua hai jab tumhari masumiyat aur pyar ki roshni ne meri zindagi ke har andhere ko mita ke mujhe pyar karna sikhaya hai... Haan Geet aaj jo Maan tumhare saamne hai wo tumse bahot pyar karta hai jab tum nazron se dur hoti ho to iski ankhen tumhari ek jhalak ke liye bechain ho uthteen hain, jab tum udas hoti ho to tumhare nazuk hoton pe muskurahat wapas dekhne ke liye ye dil tadapta rehta hai aur jab in khoobsurat ankhon se ashq behte hain to aisa lagta hai inke saath mera zindagi beh gayi... Geet is Maan ka poora jahaan sirf tummein basta hai sirf tumhari ek muskurahat mein...

Geet was stupefied by his words... She stood there admiring his each word his each gesture to make her believe... She never expected Maan to love her leave alone the extent of love he is bestowing upon her... She felt like she was in a dream a dream beyond her imaginations... She touched his cheek expecting him to be an illusion but to her surprise he was there standing close to her... Her eyes moved around the hall confirming it was not a dream and her heart felt a jolt of happiness gushing through it at the thought everything was done by him just for her...for her for his pari his LOVE...
The shine in her eyes revealed the extent of happiness running in her veins... Her cheeks were crimson with the thought he loves her... She had a soft but noticeable smile on her lips...

He could guess she believed him through her face and in no time same emotions of happiness were running through him seeing the acceptance of his love in her eyes...

She slightly looked up...using the chance he locked her eyes with his...
She could see his love clearly in his eyes... His eyes were promising her that he will be there with her no matter what... She could also see those eyes requesting her to come closer in the warmth of those protective arms of her Maan her masiha...

GEET(thinking with a broad smile): Yes he is her Maan only her...

She was not able to form words to speak... She just stood there looking at him in awe...
The belief she had in her eyes gave Maan confidence to do the request he's been dying to do...

MAAN: Geet is dil ki ek khwahish hai jo tumhari ek haan ki muntazar hai...

Geet's cheeks were flushed guessing his "khwahish" and her heartbeats raised in anticipation of what was coming next...she kept her head lowered waiting...

so guys what do you think his "khwahish" is????
do let me know ur guesses pls...

Pihu dear thanks again for d lovely banner...muah...

big SRY for late update and thanks for bearing wid me
Hope I lived upto all of your expectations!!!!!!
Your opinion is really precious and important for me
so pls do let me know what you all think about the update'''
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kkiddoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#814

awesome loved it ...

Edited by payalpari - 14 years ago

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sehrish79

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Posted: 14 years ago

#815

Awsome update loved it
Cont soon so sweet of MAAN

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ritzy09

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Posted: 14 years ago

#816

amazing update Abi...how sweet and romantic

Maan's words and his confession was truly heart touching and amazing. But for me the highlight was the picture. The was you described the moment in picture, it truly spoke volumes...all that which can be just felt and nod said. It was a really beautiful touch