RESCUE (Maan- Geet) pt14/pg73 last part(18thNOV) - Page 34

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!its all fast..
maan is very intelligent..
i hope maan himself make her wear the ring!
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 12
nice part...
good Maan is also here and Geet is gonna reach here soon...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome after a looong time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
i love u i love u i love u fr writing such a beautiful ff..👏
.please please please add me to ur list..😭
and cont. soon...i cnt wait fr more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
just luvd it
aww finally maan realized anjuli was geet
geet returning back yayyy
luvd how geet treasured d ring
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hope no misunderstanding come...
Continue Soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 13

D: hey, you will not understand, actually Anjuli wears ring around her neck, I mean a gold chain which has a ring instead of a pendant

Manav pulled a string he wore that had a ring and said

M: like this

The trio looked at him and said in unison: YES

D: but Maan

A: hey dude that is the same ring, I mean Geet gave you

M: um

A: but we are searching for Anjuli's ring

D: and Anjuli can't be Geet

Adi who was behind Manav came in

A: she can be

Ar: how

Ad: remember she was Geetanjuli, she might have dropped Anjuli from it

D: yes, this is possible

Ar: the surname

And Manav explained the Chawla thing to them

Just then NT's cell buzzed

NT: Anju

An: did you find it?

NT: yes, its with me

An: thanks I have just reached

NT: ok, I'll keep it with me till then

Soon Anjuli came in

An: where is NT?

D: hey Anju you are back?

An: yes, where is NT?

D: what happened Anju? Is everything ok?

Ar: are you ok?

An; yes I am where is NT?

Ar: in her room

An: ok

Geet almost ran to the room, and the boys plus NT laughed silently on her desperation

G: NT, NT where are you?

No answer

G: please don't tease me, give me my ring

Suddenly she felt a hot breath on her neck and the gold chain with the ring appeared in front of her eyes, she instantly turned back and almost collided with the person standing behind her. She gasped on realizing who he was,

M: you have grown your hair Geet, as you promised you will

She just looked in his eyes

M: but you are carrying this pigtail, only difference that one instead of two

She kept on looking at him

M: you have to open them to let me drown as you wished me to

She was numb

He slowly opened her hair and slid his fingers massaging her scalp

M: Geet you have grown out to be very beautiful

With his free hand he traced her face and his thumb slightly stroked her lips, she trembled

He pulled her close fanning her face with his breath, she shivered

M: will you not say anything?

G: Maan


that is all for today though after a long but I gave 2 parts

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part 14 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/49087453
Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan is super smart.
He acted super duper fast to reach Geet.
He got to NT's home before Geet could.
Wonder how Maaneet meeting will go
Waiting for the next part

Maaneet meeting was awesome.
Geet surely would have been surprised.
Uff Maan was totally ready to be lost in her
Wonder whats coming up
Edited by Ramhari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
excellent part but a short one

am craving for more shruti di

of god plz don't make geet misunderstand maan for engagement ceremony which didn't even took place

waiting for more parts
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shruti 🤗...simply awwwesome update 👍🏼...loved it...finally Maaneet are together 😍...thank u ...plz continue...TC 😊


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