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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lunza



actually what kinda bothers me about preet .. and has kinda confused me too is this -
preet overhears a conversation .. and forms an opinion of heer and her family being gold diggers and yet ... falls in love with meher .. who is also from that very same family ..
So , how come he doesnt think the worst of meher too ?

duh ... the dude shoots his mouth off about heer and the rest of the maans in front of the junejas .. and yet , he himself has no qualms about falling for a maan , and falling down on his knees to propose to her ...

(EDIT : Huh ... Prem knew heer for a good part of the year , he should have atleast spoken to her .. he owed at least that much to her , for whatever times , whatever relationship he shared with her .. instead he pulls off a disappearing act..)

@fatima .. are you sushant's fan too ? as much as you are of preet's ?

I don't think Preet ever thought ill of Heer (neither did Darcy of Jane). I mean he never treated her with contempt. Rather he felt she was indifferent to his brother and just going along with her family's plan.
Yes he falls in love with Meher. And we're so supposed to focus on the Premeer love story, and the tit for tat that Meet always fall prey too, that we actually don't realize that Preet has really fallen big time for Meher.
But like his brother, he doesn't propose to his soulmate, and leaves India quietly.
It's not until he's sees Meher again and has numerous interactions with her, that he's unable to surpress his feelings for her any longer, and proposes. "Dil kya kare jab kisi ko kisi say pyar ho jaye...". I'm sure if Prem had been given the opportunity he would have done the same.
As for qualms...he had plenty, and the idiot let's her know too..."This wasn't supposed to happen to me...Not with you anyway". Meher is left wondering... is he insulting me or asking me to marry him.
In answer to your question, I am a bigger Preet fan. And after the way Ekta butchered Meet, I refused to watch PR.
I am a Sushant fan though, and watched him in everything except PR, but it's not like I'll be waiting with a garland of flowers at the airport when he hits New York. Now if it was Preet, I'd definitely consider it. 😃
Just goes to show what a great actor Sushant is (I have no idea why he's coming to the USA to learn acting). I mean he has permanently engraved a character in my mind.
Make sense 😕?
Nikita did a fantabulous psychoanalysis of my thinking in the Meet Appreciation thread 😆.
Edited by ummesulaiman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ummesulaiman

Athisda.🤗,

I'm loving your Preet siggies.


Thank you Fatima 😃 These sigs are from ctnabilah. She posted them in KDIMHMD gallery. I saved them and will use one by one 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

O My God! yeh kya ho gaya? ek sweet proposal hona chahiye tha MEET ke beech lekin dono ne ek dusre ke ghalti ginna shuru kar diya?

Preet ne toh 'I love You' and 'Marry Me Meher' kehne ke baat seedha yehi kaha ki ' By my honesty in admitting scruples about our relationship'?

but still Fatima dear, it was well written...although it was a sad chapter.

will be waiting for ur next chapter...dont make us wait too long..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS


Thank you Fatima 😃 These sigs are from ctnabilah. She posted them in KDIMHMD gallery. I saved them and will use one by one 😆

thank u soo much dear..i feel soo happy and feels aapreciated when u said that..thank u once again 😊😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lunza

I agree with most of what Fatima said, but wanted to add one more possible reason.

actually what kinda bothers me about preet .. and has kinda confused me too is this -
preet overhears a conversation .. and forms an opinion of heer and her family being gold diggers and yet ... falls in love with meher .. who is also from that very same family ..
So , how come he doesnt think the worst of meher too ?

duh ... the dude shoots his mouth off about heer and the rest of the maans in front of the junejas .. and yet , he himself has no qualms about falling for a maan , and falling down on his knees to propose to her ...

Unlike Heer, who came close to Prem by scheming or Prem's requests, Meher did not attempt to get close to Preet AT ALL. Rather she disliked him in the beginning, and always wanted him to get lost, unlike Heer who actually stayed on with Prem. Even when Preet made attempts to woo her, she shooed him away and instead showed more interest in the far less richer Viren. That would have made Preet understand that Meher was not a gold digger sort of person, cos his wealth never lessened her dislike for him. She was always open about her feelings for him, no matter what. She was HONEST about her feelings for him right from the beginning, something which he must have found different in contrast to the Maan family whom he considered schemers and gold diggers. This is not mentioned anywhere directly in the book, but this is someone that we can make out.



You know, there was a line in P and P in which someone (I guess Elizabeth= Meher) says that Jane and Bingley (Heer and Prem) have similar natures, and are always so tolerant and patient and simple and get convinced easily, that they will get cheated by each of their servants and live life in this manner only. I felt it was absolutely true- they were too bholu😆. One of the faults of Jane and Bingley (i.e Heer and Prem) was that they were too easily convinced and did whatever people told them to do, ie. Jane followed her mother's schemes and Bingley followed whatever Darcy told him. At least in that version, Bingley and Darcy were friends and Bingley deeply respected Darcy, so it was still okay. Here Prem is elder than Preet, and Preet did not even impose, rather only pointed out a few things!😕
There was a wonderful article I read once where it said that P and P gives a peak into the married life of seven couples, who are different from each other and marry for different reasons- infactuation, love at first sight, for the sake of getting married etc.- out of which Elizabeth and Darcy make the best pair- to find out why, read on. 😃
Edited by nikitagmc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ummesulaiman


Nikita did a fantabulous psychoanalysis of my thinking in the Meet Appreciation thread 😆.



ohh .. thanks for mentioning it !! i just checked it out ... 😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey dear 😊
Thanks a lot for this FF 😊 I miss MEET , so it is always good to read about them 😊
I love the title of your FF , pride and prejudice 😊 I have not read the book but have watched the movie ..um...the one with Aishwarya and uh...dont know the hero 😳 But the movie was okayish type 😊
I liked the way you have included all the Kis desh characters 😊
Preet in your FF is very much like the one in the serial 😊 Meher too is somewhat similar 😊
um...If Meher can misunderstand Preet by just listening to Ash and Maya's conversation then Preet too is justified if he misunderstood her family 😳
um...I am on Preet's side in the story 😳
Waiting for the next parts 😊 Please include me in your Pm list 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Swati_
Hi,
Thanks for liking the FF 😛. I'll be sure to add you to the PM list.
I love the title too...It's so appropriate 😆.
Pride & Prejudice, is a wonderful book, a definite read if you ever get the chance.
Martin Hendersen & Ashwariya Rai starred in the so-so adaptation called Bride & Prejudice.
Hope my version continues to live up to the readers' expectation.
I don't think Meher was as mad about what she heard Ash say, as she was about what Preet did to Premeer.
Okay, that being said, I'm not on anyone's side, but , yes I actually feel sorry for Preet too. 😆
I think Jane Austen also intended for the reader to feel sorry for Darcy or Preet in this case, after the tongue lashing he received.
Like I said before it was all a bad khichdi of misunderstandings, which hopefully will clear up soon. 'Cause I sure want my Meet back. 😃
Edited by ummesulaiman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

sorry fr late reply.

update was a bit sad but u wrote it perfectly.great job.👏

feeling bad fr preet meher.now lets see what will preet do to make things better.
update soon and
thanks fr the pm.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 24 - Making Amends

Meher sat by her bedroom window, lost in thought. Bits and pieces of her argument with Preet were still running through her mind, when Shampa stopped by to see her.
"Meher", she said, "Mannie and I are about to leave for my appointment. We're going to get a brief tour of the maternity ward afterwards, so it'll be lunch time by the time we get back".
Shampa noticed that her friend wasn't paying attention. "What's wrong Meher? You've been really quiet since we came home from the wedding last night. And you didn't come down for breakfast this morning either. Is everything alright?"
"Yes Shampa, I'm fine. Just feeling a bit homesick I guess", replied Meher with a weak smile.
"Meher", said Shampa as she sat down next to her friend, "we've been best friends for as long as I can remember, so I won't beat around the bush. I saw you dancing with Preet last night. And I also saw him follow you out to the garden. Is everything okay between you two?"
Meher couldn't bear it any longer, and burst out in tears. "Oh Shampa!" she cried, giving into her friend's prodding. "Something incredible happened last night. Preet told me he loved me. He asked me to marry him!"
"I knew it!" cried Shampa excitedly. "And what did you say to him?"
"What did I say to him? What did I say...", Meher's voice trailed off. "I told him I hated him! That I never wanted to see him again!"
"What?!" exclaimed Shampa. "But why?! I thought the two of you were really hitting it off".
"So did I", replied Meher, "but that was before I overheard Ashlesha and Maya talking in the ladies room and learned that there was never really anything between us. This was all a joke. Preet had made a bet that he could make me fall for him. The Great Preet Juneja! Hmpf! How could I have let myself been fooled, especially after what I knew of him through Viren. Honestly I could kick myself!"
"Meher", said Shampa calmly. "I'd hardly go around trusting anything Ashlesha or Maya have to say. Their track record with you hasn't been so great. As for Viren...remember you said yourself that you only knew his side of the story, and would ask Preet about it as soon as the opportunity arose. You'd be a real simpleton if you let unverified information from Ashlesha, Maya or Viren cloud your judgement of a man 10 times their consequence".
"But it's not just that Shampa", protested Meher. She related to Shampa the entire detail of her conversation with Preet. "So you see...Preet himself admitted that he was responsible for separating Heer Didi and Prem. He insulted my family. Called us a bunch of gold diggers. And said that falling in love with me went against his better judgement!"
"Um...Meher...are you sure he proposed?" asked Shampa, raising her eyebrows questioningly. "It doesn't look like it from the sound of it".
"I know, right", agreed Meher. "So it serves him right that I let him have it".
"Then you should feel better right?" asked Shampa.
"Yes, I should...but I don't know why I don't", sighed Meher.
"Perhaps it's because you still have feelings for him", said Shampa. "Denying it is not going to change things". Shampa put a comforting hand on Meher's shoulder, before getting up to leave. Meher just stared at the open space in front of her. Her friend had just verbalized what she had been refusing to admit to herself.

Meanwhile...

"Preet!" cried Ashlesha. She had just answered the knock on her hotel room's door, and and was pleasantly surprised to see Preet standing before her. "What a wonderful surprise darling! I just ordered some brunch from room service. Why don't you join me", she said, as she put her arms around Preet's neck.

Preet grabbed Ashlesha by both wrists and removed her hold around his neck. Ashlesha suddenly became afraid looking at the angry glare Preet was giving her. "Ouch Preet!" she squirmed trying to release herself from his grip. "You're hurting me! Yeh kya batameezi hai? (What kind of insolence is this?)"
"Batameezi? Batameezi toh maine abhi shuroo bhi nahin ki Ashlesha! (Insolence? I haven't even begun Ashlesha!)" said Preet gritting his teeth as he pushed her away, making her stumble back into her room.
Ashlesha rubbed her wrists, which were now red from the force Preet had held her with. "Tum yeh kya keh rahe ho? Pagal ho gaye ho kya!" she cried. (What are you doing? Have you gone mad!)
"Han main pagal ho gaya hoon!" yelled Preet. "Tumne hi Meher ko Delhi ke club mein ditch kiya tha na?" he said walking towards Ashlesha and poking her in the shoulder with his finger with each accusation. "Tumne hi Sam ki party mein usko sharab pilayi. Hain na? Tumne restaurant mein uski beizzati ki...Par ab to tumne hadh kar di Ash". (Yes I've gone mad! You ditched Meher in that club in Delhi. You made her drink alcohol at Sam's party. You insulted her in the restaurant, but now you've gone too far Ash).

"Wha...what are you talking about Preet?" cried Ashlesha. Preet had backed her up to the wall and was looking at her with a deadly glare.

"Humne Meher ke khilaf 'bet' kab lagyi thi Ash?! (When did we ever make a bet regarding Meher, Ash?)" Preet hissed angrily. Ashlesha's eyes widened hearing his question. "Main to usko apne pyar ke jaal mein phansa ke usko bomb ki tarah drop karne wala tha...hain na?" (According to you I was supposed to make her fall in love with me then drop her like a bomb right?)
"Tum...tumhe kaise pata..", stammered Ashlesha. (How dd you find out?)
"Meher ne mujhe sab kuch bata diya", said Preet. "Tum aur tumhari Maya memsaab ki zeharili baton ne apna asar kar dikhaya. Woh mujhse nafrat karti hai!" (Meher told me everything. You and Maya have succeeded. She hates me now!)
Ashlesha swallowed hard. "She's lying Preet, I swear! I never said anything! She's never liked you anyway, and now she's making up stuff to create misunderstandings between us!"
"Shut up Ash!" cried Preet. "Just shut up! He grabbed Ashlesha by the arm and dragged her over to where the phone was. "Phone milao...Abhi!!!" he ordered. "Meher ko tum aik aik cheez bato gi, aur woh bhi sach sach". (Pick up the phone right now! You're going to call Meher and tell her the truth). With Preet breathing fire down her neck, Ashlesha had no choice but to comply.
Meher was in the kitchen helping Shampa's mom prepare lunch when the phone rang. She almost hung up when she found Ashlesha speaking on the other end.
"Meher wait!" pleaded Ashlesha. "Please don't hang up! I know we haven't gotten along well in the past. And I've certainly given you cause not to trust me, but please...just hear me out this once".
Ashlesha explained to Meher how she had fabricated the entire 'bet' story, just so that Meher would end up hating Preet. That she had been jealous that despite her own efforts, she had not been able to attain the level of closeness Meher had achieved with Preet, and so she concocted the whole story to get rid of Meher from the picture once and for all.
"I don't understand", said Meher, "Why are you telling me all this?" It suddenly dawned on her that Ashlesha would never have called her and admitted the truth, unless...Preet, she thought. Preet must have put her up to this. Was Ashlesha telling the truth or was this just another effort to win the 'bet'? She began to get angry again.
"It doesn't matter Ashlesha", Meher continued coldly. "Preet ne toh kal raat ko hi mujhe bata diya tha ke tum jhoot bol rahi thi. Par ab toh main na uski baat pe vishwas karti hoon aur na hi tumhari. Waise bhi, usne jo kiya...uske liye main usko maaf nahin kar sakti. Khair chodo...tumhe chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahin. Mere aur Preet ke darmiyan na kuch tha, aur na hi kuch ho ga". (Preet denied everything you said last night. But now I just don't trust him. Besides, after what he did, I just can't forgive him. Anyway, just forget it. You have nothing to worry about. There was never anything between Preet and me. Nor will there ever be).
Meher hung up the phone and let out a deep breath. Two more weeks, she thought. Two more weeks and I'll be home with Mama, Papaji and Heer Didi. And I'll never have to see, worry or think about Preet or any of the Junejas again.
Meher's last words were still ringing in Ashlesha's ears as she hung up the phone. "Tumhe chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahin", Meher had said. "Mere aur Preet ke darmiyan na kuch tha, aur na hi kuch ho ga". (You have nothing to worry about. There was never anything between Preet and me. Nor will there ever be).
Ashlesha quickly wiped the smirk off her face and turned to give a solemn look to Preet. "Sorry Preet", she said with fake concern. "I tried my best. But Ms. Ambala ki akard to dekho, kuch sunne ke liye tayar hi nahi thi. Waise... itna bhi sar pe nahin charhana chahiye in gaoon ki gawar lardkiyon ko". (But Ms. Ambala was not willing to listen to anything. In any case, it's not good to give these lower class girls too much attention. They only wind up taking advantage of you).
But Preet wasn't listening. He sighed in frustration and ran his hand through his hair. This was just the first of many steps I'll have to take in order to make amends, he thought. He turned and walked to the door in order to leave, when all of a sudden Ashlesha grabbed him in a hug from behind.
"Mujhe maaf kardo Preet!" she cried. "Main mere Preet ko naraz nahin karna chahti thi. Never! Main toh tumse bahut pyar karti hoon". (Forgive me Preet. I can't bear t see you upset like this. I love you a lot).
"Kya?!" asked Preet, shaking his head in disbelief, as he turned to look at Ashlesha. "Pyar? Tumhe is lafz ka matlab bhi pata hai? Tum agar waqai mujhse pyar karti, toh tum itni giri hui harkat na karti. Tumhare liye, apne se ziyada, meri khushi sab se ahem cheez hoti. (What? You love me? Do you even know the meaning of the word love? If you had really loved me, you would never have stooped so low as to lie about me. My happiness would have been important to you).
Nahin Ash...tum apne jootoon se, hand bags se, shopping sprees se, aur paise se pyar karti ho, par tum mujhse pyar nahin karti. Aur...tumne kaise soch bhi liya, ke main tumhe kabhi bhi pasand karoon ga"? (No Ash...you love your shoes, hand bags, shopping spres, and money, but you don't love me. And how did you ever imagine that I would ever like you in return?)
Ashlesha watched in anger as Preet once again pushed her away and left her staring after him. "Main bhi tumhe dekh loongi Preet (I'll see how long you'll reject me Preet)", said Ashlesha, as she picked up the phone and dialed a number. "Hello mom..."

A Short While Later...

Meher had just gone out to the driveway to pick up the newspaper, when she saw Preet's car come around the corner. She quickly ran back inside the house and shut the door behind her with a slam, but not before Preet had gotten a glimpse of her running into the house. Shampa's mother came out of the kitchen to see what had happened, only to find a flustered Meher peeking out the window from behind the curtains. "Beta (Child), what's wrong?" she asked.

"Auntie ji!" cried Meher as she quickly left her place by the window and grabbed the startled lady by the shoulders. "Koi aaya hai. (Someone has come). But I don't want to see him. Just tell him I'm not well...No...Better yet, just say that I'm not home".
Why is he here? thought Meher, as she ran to her room. After all that was said and done last night, he's got some nerve. And why am I running from him like a scared rabbit? No...I'm not afraid...I just don't want to see him again and get into another argument. I still haven't figured out how I'm going to tell everything to Heer Didi. And I don't want to create a spectacle in front of Shampa's mother.
"Namaste Auntie ji", said Preet, as Shampa's mother answered the door. "I'm a...friend...of Meher's. Could you please let her know that Preet's here. I really need to speak with her".
"Um...Ah...sorry puttar...ghar pe koi nahin haiga. Sab bahar gaye hain (I'm sorry son...uh...no one is a t home. Everyone has gone out)", said Shampa's mom.

Preet looked at her questioningly. He could have sworn he saw Meher run into the house as he drove up. Shampa's mom was wringing her hands nervously and staring back and forth between Preet and the staircase leading to the rooms upstairs. Lying is obviously not her forte, thought Preet.
"I'm sorry Auntie ji", said Preet as he walked past the confused lady, "but I have to see her just one last time".
Meher was surprised to see Preet suddenly enter her room without so much as even a knock and quietly close the door behind him.
"Tum?!" she cried. "Tumhe andar anay ki ijazat kisne di? (You?! Who gave you the permission to come up here?)" She tried to give Preet as angry a look as she could, but swallowed nervously as she watched Preet close the distance between them.
"Mujhe pata hai ke mujhe is tarah tumhare kamre mein nahin aana chahiye (I know I shouldn't have come into your room like this)", said Preet, "But...".
"But what?" asked Meher. "Do you want to start another argument? Or have you come to convince me that you have so overcome your aversion to my family that you're still willing to marry into it".
"I'm leaving Meher...", said Preet quietly, as he looked into her surprised eyes. "I'm going back home tonight. And I had to see you...just one last time...and leave you this". Meher looked down to see Preet holding out an envelope for her.
Seeing her hesitate, Preet continued, "Don't worry, It's not a renewal of the sentiments you found so disgusting last night. Your feelings on that matter are crystal clear, and believe me...that chapter is definitely closed".
"Preet...I don't think...", she began.
"Meher please...", interrupted Preet, "I only want to address the offenses you laid against me".
Meher wasn't sure she wanted to accept anything from Preet, but he did seem determined. She quietly took the envelope and turned her back towards him. Preet sighed and walked to the door to leave.
"This is perhaps the last time I'll see you Meher", he said. "I hope you'll believe me when I say that I never meant for anyone to get hurt, and that you'll always have my good wishes with you".
With that he was gone from her room, from the house, and now perhaps forever from her life.

Hope you all liked it 😛. Please leave your feedback.

Chapter 25 Preview - Preet tells his side of the story

Link to next chapter: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/49125043
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