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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Guys

I have rplyd to u all

I really respect ur verdicts, and all of those who has chosen nt to comment, its absolutely fine…I knew it from the strt that accepting this story as it will be difficult and thts why I said it in strt, its sumthing different im trying..

Thnks for all ur comments and being here…

Lov fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Reaching the hospital I went to reception and asked about the accident case, the nurse guided me to emergency ward and me Samrat rushed towards the ward along with chachi..

Reaching there I saw him resting his back trying to get up to sit, to wch I can't hold n rushed towards him

Nupur: donot..i said protesting his efforts to sat up

He looked up to me, n smile a bit..he seems too weak..too weak

Mayank: I m fine

His words were even not cuming proper..he lied down again whn chachi came n spread her hand on his face.n he hold her hand n kissed it assuring he is fine…

Its sumhow amazing to see him so much expresses that he is always when it cums to chachi, hugging her, praising her, being with her. He always is like a mama's boy..

I want near the his feet, n pulled the patient file near the bed to check wht actually has happened..reading it I found my mind a bit relax, but my heart was stil so much restless…

It was simple case of all external trauma, no fractures thank God, yet sum blood loss..he may be feeling dizzy because of the head injury but thank God it was even not internal..

Chanchi: beta sab dekh haina..

She asked me knowing I was going through all…

Nupur: ji…I assure her but I was not satisfied….

Mayank: he looked at me n said reassuring ….im fine donot worry

Can he actually feel in my eyes that im still so worried, his words, these words I wanna hear from him….

Gunjna: kya fine…tumhain sardak per chalna bhi nhi ata..

My whole imagination was now broken just in a sec, when I realize gunjan just came n was standing just behind me, it was not me for whom these words were it was her for whom these assurance, this smile was..it was her worried looked tht trouble him, and before she can ask how he is, he himself assure her, he is fine

Nupur: chachi mein doctor se mil ker ati hoon

Samrat: bhabi rukho mein bhi chalta hoon…

But the doctor himself enter, to my bad luck as I was feeling as if anytime I'll shattered in pieces…I want to get out of here, I just now cant stand all this feeling of unwanted, feeling so much ,now feels insulting

Doc: hey Mr.sharma..ur fine, thank to the person who brought u here, thori se external injury hai aur….eh stopped mid way n turned to me…NUPUR…hey …tum yaha kasay

I was so lost in my self tht didn't notice who the doctor was….

Nupur: sir ap…woh actually …ap tu is hospital mein nhi thay

He was the doc with whom I worked as an intern during my academics,

Doc: ya now a days im here too..…so he is ur relative..he said pointing to mayank

Mayank: hmm..my wife..

I looked at him, surprisingly he clamied me his wife….wao really mayanak, such a pity on u mayank, u need to do this. U need to tell people what u urself haven't accepted.

U know wht one part of my heart raced hearing his claim on me, and my whole body shivered. It feels so bliss, yet my mind again warned me…get a grip on ur heart

Doc: ohh congrat nupur..i smile or rather tried to…tu u must be knowing he is pretty fine, kal thak u'lll be at home

Mayank: y nt today..i have a huge presentation 2morow…

Had hai…..sumhow I feel like giving him a tight slap or scold him..its a limit..how can he be so careless abt himself..he even cant sit properly and he wants to give presentation

Nupur: u wont be able to go office for a week

Mayank: what…he almost shouted with whatever energy he has..n looked at the doctor

Doc: it's a wife's comment donot look at me..u will be fine earlier if u rest proper..tc..nupur I want to meet u do cum in my cabin ..ok..i looked at the doc questionlgly..as wht ..mayb sumthing about mayank…

The doc read my frown n eyes

Doc: no its not about mayank..its about u…ok

I smiled in relief

Nupur: sure sir..

Gunjan: haha..mayank sharma gaya..ab tum hil ker dekho zara..…aur tumhara kya deemgh karab hai kar kiya rahy thy jo yeah ho…tumhain zara bhi ehassas hai apna..kcuh bhi hoskata tha, agar woh banda nhi hota tu, pata nhi kya hojata

Mayank: relax lady ..mein thik hoon….aur mein ny kya kiya…car khud maar ker chali gai mjhy

Gunjan: tu tum car k agay kya ker rahy thy

Mayank: khud khushi….had hai yaar…demgh maat kaho sir mein wasy hi dard horaha hai

Gunjna; han tu becharay ko arm nhi doo gay tu yeahi ho ga..kaha na sab set hojay ga..tu itan stree kyun laytay hoo yaar…office ki fikar maat kero mein sab dekh logi….u need to take care samjhy..office k baray mein soch nab hi nhi

She gave a warning to him,

He glared at her giving her i-m-nt –answering u look and turn to me

Mayank: I'll rest at home..cant they discharge me now..

Lol ur husband hates me caressing his hand, I felt..he is so desperate to go home n have that with u huh..The needle that was piercing his hand …

I hate it..A) it was paining him..B) pls sumone told it why he wants to be at home….

Nupur: now im too angry on him…no u can't ur medicine tht is given u parentally by the drip will end very late at night…so u cant

Chachi: tu tujhy masla kya hai…kahmsohi se arm ker…mein ghar se kahan behjti hoon..

Tu rest kar…

Samrat: we need to leave visitng hrs are finished

Chachi: per kisi ko mayank k pass bhi tu hona chaiy..

Nupur?gunjan: mein..i whispered n gunjan said loudly aading mein hoon na….se per kari nazar rekho gi..samhj gay tum

Mayank: no way tum mera deemgh kah jao gi..

Gunjan: tu yeah hi tu thik rahy ga..

Chahci looked at me, who was finding way to hide ..

Chahci: tum rukho…she said smilingly spreading her hand on my face..

Gunjan: oki sharma…get well soon…she hugged him..squeezing him a bit..he smiled n taped her head lovingly . she said bye to me..n left..

Her voice , her gesture were holding so much of fear, fear of losing sum1 so dear. Mayank's love is like this, when I whose feelings are not reciprocated cant help but is addicted to his aura, than who gets his love in return to how much she must be glued or rather living him

Its so strange at times when I look at gunjan, does she trust mayank that much tht she isn't insecure of me, not a single time I saw her feeling like that. But any1 who knows mayank must know that , when he is in a relation he will never ever betray that person. No matter wht will be the circumstance he will fulfill every responsibility every aspect of his relation. He is truly the most righteous person I hav ever meet

parasthish Kiya Tak Ke Aye But Tujhe

nazar Mein Sabhon Ki Khuda Kar Chale
Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
men.. they are always so ready to claim things. but when it comes to taking care of the things they claim, they are no where to be found.
i am glad that nupur is feeling suffocated. people dont take initiative to break free unless they meet the dead end. and nupur is reaching there.and the next step is breaking free!
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Posted: 14 years ago
ufff kya karuin main iss gunjan ka????????? har chiz mein main main...
don't she understand she si not his wife
only a frnd
toh better behave like that
n my poor nupur
i always felt bad 4 her
thanks 4 the pm
waiting 4 the next update
may god bless u
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update again Fiza...
I can understand both Mayank and nupur
and their feelings...at this time...
well What mayank did can not be judged objectively
in right or wrong,sometimes things are beyond judging.

loved it..waiting for next eagerly.

One more thing can you please explain the last shayri u have written
coz either I am not getting the right word or might not knowing it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
this is heights of insult...!! and heights of disgust 4 fans like me...!! nupur should leave these 2 shameless creatures on their own..!! 4 god sake nupur is not a thing to b played along...what the hell is doing in hospital...!!!! cant she leave dat man 4 once n 4 all...? urgghhh!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fiza i didn't comment last part but that doesn't mean i didn't want to comment 😔 although i didn't know wa to say one minute like Nupur i thought he was assureing her that he was fine but he was saying that to Gun? i hate him i hate both of them n feeling verry bed for my Nupur
hope everything goes well 4 Nupur
n mayank realise wat he was doing to her
awesome part sis
thnx for the pms
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Posted: 14 years ago
ITS so confusing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar i like this ff so plzz keep updating and plz also tell us about the realationship between mayank and gunjan'
do they both love each other becauz acc to nupur POV it seems like
but lets see how the story goes and overall i just loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Now my feelings are start getting more strong that whatever Nupur is thinking not correct Majan have some other thing between them not what we are thinking
I hope Nupur will find the truth so soon what ever it is
thanks for pm

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