Thrd1 Darkness Personified!! Link to thrd2 - Page 21

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii

THIS IS FREAKIN AWESOME
aha i got a shiver down my spine as i read this and it wasn't even scary or anything!

Originally posted by: shah10

wow..awesome

u upate ... we wait... come soon yaar with update

AUTHOR'S IMPORTANT NOTE

Hi frnds

So here's first part of Darkness Personified! Before I give u the first part, let me make myself clear over here! And its the first and the last time I'm saying this that I have made no such promises of happy endings!!! All I said was that this is a dark story, and read it at your own risk!! I honestly don't know if Maan will change or when will he change!!! I'm just gonna go with the flow of the story... if at some point I think that story demands him to b changed, then I'll change him, otherwise not!! I'm not binding this story according to what readers want to read!! I hv done that thing once n I'm not repeating my mistake!!! This story is gonna go the way it has to go!!! I'm sorry if I'm coming out too harsh on u guys, but the truth is I cant afford to get any more tension or pressure in my life...theres already too much in my personal life, so I'm nt gonna take more!!! No no pressure, no promises!!!

So if u can handle that, then go ahead n read the first part

And the prologue is gonna happen later in the story

and again a REMINDER: its a DARK STORY

Part 1

There is darkness in the room... Nothing is really visible...

There is a ray of light coming from the crack in the door, but other than that there is no source of light in the room...

It is pitch black except for that ray that's coming from the narrow crack in the door..

The ray is falling directly on a chair in the room and a guy is tied on the chair...

The guy is maybe in his middle thirties and he is unconscious...

But he slowly moved from his position indicating that he's getting conscious...

He feels immense pain in his body...physical pain...

He slowly opened his eyes and tries to adjust to the new surroundings... But it is too dark for him to make out anything...

He tries to get up and realised that he is tied on the chair...

He tries to remember as how he came here and what is happening!!!

But he couldn't remember anything...

His intuition tells him that he should not be here!!!

He starts wriggling in the chair trying to free himself from the ropes, but the wounds on his body are making very hard for him to move...

And then he feels pain in his head and he feels the fluid flowing at the back of his neck... It doesn't take him much time to realise that he has a wound on his head too...

He tries calling to the dark room hoping that someone would come to his aid "Koi hai??!!! Is someone here!!!!????" he whimpers as he feels pain in his head from the wound!!

He again tries to wriggle in the chair when suddenly a soothing light is filled in the room!!!

He looks up to see the source of the light and the room...

He saw that someone has just opened the curtains and the soothing moonlight is coming into the room...

The person has back towards him and looking outside from the window so he couldn't see his face!!!

He calls instinctively "Who are you??? And how did I get here???" his eyes scan the room and continued "What place is th--"

His voice died within his throat as the person standing at the window said without looking at him "Shhh!!!" the voice sent chills to his spine and his stomach churned in fear!!!

There was a death-like dangerous element in his voice...

The stranger hasn't really said even a word to him, but the grave element that entangled around his voice was enough to make him shut up!!

The stranger looked towards him and his eyes widened in fear...

The stranger was almost 18-year old boy... His features still had the innocence of the teen years lingering on his face... His cheeks still had a little chubbiness of his young age... His long hair has combed back and tied into a little ponytail behind his back... His lips were still baby red with a perfect M shape... His big brown eyes were so beautiful and deep that any teenage girl would go gaga over him... All in all he was very handsome innocent-looking young boy in his late teen years!!!

But there is a saying that 'looks can be deceptive!!'

In spite of all his beautiful features and teenage innocence looks, there was something in him that was making him look dangerous!! And that was the anger and arrogance filled in his eyes!!! There was an aura of darkness surrounding him!!!

He was glaring at the guy tied in chair and at last he spoke...

But his voice did not held any innocence or kindness of his age... It held sadistic and merciless darkness in it...

"I'm giving you a last chance Mr. Mohinderlal Handa!! Sign those papers and I'll let you go!!!" The anger wasn't visible in his voice but that was just making it more scary.

Mohinderlal Handa is very scared from him but he tried persuading him... He can't sign these papers!!! That is his father's and grandfather's lifelong earnings...

"Please Maan!! I'm like your father!! Please... this hotel is the only means to my earnings... Please don't take this from me!!!" he begged him.

But his begging had no effect on Maan. He just smirked evilly and looked at him pitilessly.

"This hotel is not yours anymore Mr. Handa!! I have already taken over it!!! And you haven't been brought here to sign the hotel papers!!! These papers are not hotel papers!!!" he smirked and paused to let his words sink in him.

Mohinderlal couldn't believe his ears... His hotel!! The hotel that his grandfather has put the foundation with his own hands!!! The hotel that his father has brought to the position that it was now!!! The hotel that he has given all his life to!!!! The hotel for whose advancement he has worked in day and night!!! The hotel which was not just a building of brick and cement for him but like a blessing of his late father and grandfather!!! His hotel has been taken from him in a blink of an eye!!!!!!!

He looked at Maan angrily and said "You are lying!!! My hotel is still mine!!!! No body can take it from me!!!" he was yelling like a mad man while Maan just smirked at his condition. He was getting immense pleasure from Handa's condition!! The feeling of victory...more than that, the feeling of his opponent's defeat...was giving him immense satisfaction!!

Mohinderlal still couldn't believe that his hotel has been snatched from him but he somewhere in his mind he knew that everything is finished!!! There is nothing left anymore!!!

He was aware that when Maan Singh Khurana puts his eye on something, he gets it at any cost!!!

Maan has joined business just a year ago at the age of 17, and in just one year he has expanded his business so much that he has become the biggest businessman in the whole northern India!! He has taken over 100s of businesses... Whichever business he has put his eye on, has come under his name pretty soon!!!

But his hunger for power had just increased with time and it's still increasing!!!! His latest quest was Handa Hotel and he has took over the hotel too while putting the name of another business in the innumerable list of his quests!!!

His business sense was so strong that even people who were in business since years and years were unable to stand against him!!!

He was unstoppable!!! He took all and any means to attain what he wants!! He never thought twice before taking any evil means to reach his goals!!! He has no conscience in him!!! Most of the times people were shocked that how can a young boy can be so evil at such a young age??!! How can he have so much darkness in him???!!!

But he has never cared what people thought or said. He has always founded solace in his darkness. He has switched off his feelings a long time ago! The part of him that felt something...he has killed it a long time ago!!

Now he didn't care even if people begged at his feet, crying for mercy...he never showed mercy on anybody!!! In fact, he felt peace in other's suffering!!!

That was what he was feeling right now...happiness in this useless man's suffering!!!

He knew pretty soon the begging part is also coming! The part which he enjoyed the most!! When people begged at his feet and he mercilessly laughed at their condition!!!

But maybe Handa needed a bit of an evidence to come to his knees!!! Hmm...

His eyes moved towards the side and Mohinderlal followed his eyes and saw 2 guards standing behind him.

Maan looked at the guards meaningfully and the guards nodded and opened Mohinderlal.

As soon as Mohinderlal gets free, he tried to get up, when Maan threw another file towards him...

Mohinderlal picks up the file and as he looked into it, his whole world fell apart!! It was his hotel papers that was under Maan's name now!!! He felt like everything is finished!! His whole life is finished!!!

Maan was waiting for the begging part but it never came!!

Mohinderlal became numb with the shock!!! He was not feeling anymore!!!

He didn't really heard when Maan asked him to sign the other papers which were the papers to take back the police complaint which he has filed against Khurana Group of Industries few days ago... He didn't really know when he signed those papers... He didn't know when he walked out of his office... He didn't know when he reached downstairs... He didn't know when he reached the road...

He saw a sharp light that blinded him and then everything became dark...forever!!!!

An 11-year old young girl is sitting on the doorstep waiting for her father!!!

She is dressed up in a white frock and is waiting impatiently for her father.

Its her birthday and her Dad has promised her to get her a Barbie doll today.

She remembers that her dad has promised her that he won't be late today as she has specifically told him that she is not gonna cut the cake until he comes home!!

All her friends are waiting for her to cut the cake but she is being adamant of cutting the cake with her father!!

Her father has always been a father and mother to her. He has never let her realise the absence of her mother... She has never seen her mother's face, as her mother has died when she was just few months old, but her father has always given her the love of both father and mother to her!!! So how can she cut the cake without her mother and father??!!

She is still sitting at the doorstep waiting for her father when she heard "Geet!!"

"Ji Tayi ji??" she said with a smile.

"Come here!!" her tayi ji said.

She gets up instantly and goes inside with a smile on her face.

The smile was something that has never left her face. Even at such a young age, she has never let a frown comes on her face no matter how sad she is!!!

She goes inside and says sweetly "Ji Tayi ji!!"

"Geet, it's getting late!! We think you should cut the cake now!! Everybody is waiting!!!" tayi ji tried to explain to her.

She bends down her head and said with a smile "Ji tayi ji!" She has never learnt to disobey her elders!! She always does what others want!! She has always found happiness in other's happiness.

She was just about to cut the cake, when the phone rang and everything finished!!!

The news of her father, Mohinderlal Handa's death broke her world apart!!! In a second, everything changed!!! In an instant, her childhood witnessed another huge loss of her parent!! In a moment, she had become an orphan!!!!

NEXT: Part 2

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