Abhiya SS:Mere Brother Ki Dulhan Note Pg.44

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

hey awesome update.I guess Abhay will give Pia a surprise.So me waiting 4 ur nxt update full of Abhiya😳

Thanks and updting

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Chapter 3

Abhay and Piya went out of the Mount college and sat in Abhay's car.

Inside the car

Piya: Abhay kuchh bologe bhi huaa kyaa hai?

Abhay: Piya please kuchh der aur wait karo phir tum khud samajh jaaogi.

Piya: k

Abhiya reach near the jungle.

Abhay: Piya we have reached please get down.

Piya:😕 Abhay where are we?

Abhay: Piya this is a jungle. Lets go

Piya: Par jungle mein?

Abhay: Do u tust me?

Piya: I trust u more than my life Abhay okay chalo.

They were passing the jungle and then Abhay said

Piya please close your eyes.

Piya: Par Abhay kyun?

Abhay: Shh (Placing a finger on her lips) tum sawaal bahut poochhti ho bas chalo.

And they move towards the end of jungle and reached here

(Dont ask me ki DD mein ye kahaan se aaya😆)

Piya: Wow Abhay its really beautiful.

Abhay: This is the most special place in my life and I have brought the most special girl of life here to wish her on her special day Happy Birthday Piya.

Piya: Abhay u remembered still u ignored me.

Abhay: How can I foget this Piya on ur special day I want to say u some thing important

Piya from the first day I saw u I have loved u I want to be with u Will u make my life more beautiful by accepting my love?

A tear rolled down Piya's cheek.

Abhay: Please dont cry Piya I dont want to be the reason for ur tears if u dont love me than its okay but I just wanted to tell u how I feel before its too late and dont worry we can be friends again.

Piya: These tears are not because I dont love u but because I love u from the core of my heart I have always lovd u but couldn't tell u because I was afraid because I would lose u Yes Abhay I will be urs forever.

Abhay brought Piya's left hand and made her wear a beautiful ring

Piya: Its really beautiful Abhay Thank u so much.

Abhay brought Piya's face close to his and kissed her forhead, left eye, right eye and her both cheeks and then moved towards the lips. They were really close and could feel each others breath on their face and suddenly Piy's phone rang up and it was Misha nad they came back to their senses. Piya picked up the phone.

Misha(on Phone): Piya kahaan ho tum sab guests aa chuke hain and r waiting 4 u.

Piya: Misha mein aa rahi hoon in 2 minutes.

Misha: Okay par jaldi aana. Bye

Piya cut the phone.

Pia: Abhay woh

Abhay: Piya chaltein hain tumhare ghar par tumhari B'day party hai Lets go.

And they leave that place

Precap: Party at the dobriyals and Abhay knows abt Piya's family

I hope u like it as I am not good at writing. Please point out my mistakes

Edited by Pari-Gupta - 14 years ago

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: piyabhay4ever

Loved the story till now. Please update soon. And please add me to your PM list😊

thanks and added

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: prerna26
Wow Pari!! Amazing Update!😊

Finally Abhay confessed his feelings to Pia.😍Thank god Abhay took the initiative otherwise Pia wouldn't have acknowledged the fact that she too loves him. Misha ko kabab mein haddi bana diya.😡 Continue soon.👍🏼

Thanks prerna

Misha is misha😆

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PRERNA VERMA

@prerna26

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta

Thanks prerna

Misha is misha😆

Yup!😆Anyways thanks a lot for Pm dear.😃

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: prerna26

Yup!😆Anyways thanks a lot for Pm dear.😃

U r welcome

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#107

wow pari lovely update finally abhay confess his love for pia and abhiya r together . pia ka past i really want to know this . waiting for next part thnx 4 pm

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#108

Awesome update! That place where Abhay took Piya was so romantic and cute! 😛 And Abhay gave Piya a ring! 😳 Looking forward to the party and the disclosure of Piya's past! Continue soon 😊

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#109

pari..that was beautiful..loved it..aww..abhay proposed piya..and the ring is so beautiful...the loved the way abhay proposed...waiting to know piya's past..update soon...

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni
wow pari lovely update finally abhay confess his love for pia and abhiya r together . pia ka past i really want to know this . waiting for next part thnx 4 pm

thanks a lot