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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#621

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

with proper love n care .. geet can over come this problem ... come out winning ...

sorry 4 late comment ... happy diwali ...

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Raman

@palsweety51

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Posted: 14 years ago

#622

Awsome update finally mann realized that geet truly loves him and he all he did kept giving pain to her and now he wants his geet and baby to be fine and i am sure mann ke hote geet ko kuch nahin hoga. Can't wait till next update...

Raman

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Abgina

@crazydevil87

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Posted: 14 years ago

#623

sry guys my net was not working since 2 days n abhi m watching india vs england t20...
but i promise to update tonight...
luv u all for bearing wid me... SORRY!!!!!!

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LuvScooby

@LuvScooby

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Posted: 14 years ago

#624

I hope now Maaneet will be getting close...I really hope the baby is fine too

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Abgina

@crazydevil87

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Posted: 14 years ago

#625

my heartfelt thanks to all for showering me with ur love n support...

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Abgina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#626

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SPECIAL THANKS TO YOU ALL FOR UR LOVELY AND MOTIVATING COMMENTS!!!!!!
LUV U ALL!!!!!!!🤗

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Abgina

@crazydevil87

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Posted: 14 years ago

#627

(created by Piya)

I'm truly very sry for not updating for sooo long n thank u sooo much for bearing wid me guys...
Thanks a million for all of your love and support!!
Your comments and likes really make me feel special and motivates me to write more for u all'.
I'm really sry for not being able to reply to each one of your comments but thanks a trillion for appreciating and commenting on my work''''..your comments make my day guys so pls do comment!!!
THANK U ALL SOOO MUCH!!!!!!❤️🤗

Heres a poem that expresses both their state of heart(Maan-green, Geet-pink) by Mimu(Shilalipi)
THANK U SOOO MUCH SWEETHEART!!!!!!
LUV U!!!!!! ❤️ 🤗

jane kyu teri ore khicha chala jata hoon...kaisa hai ye deewaanapan... kaisa hai ye ajeeb sa bandhan..

kitna roka par rok na saka
khudhko tere CHAHAT ke sajde mein jhuka diya

khudko tere naam kar diya hai jane kabse...
shayad tab pyaar ka matlab bhi na tha pata..
bas janti thi itna..tu hi hai mera khuda..
teri nafrat bhi pyaari thi mujhko..
paar aj jo hai tu mere saath ...mere paas...
dil mein hai ye dar ..
shayad ho ye sapna...jo tut jayega...
phir bhi vishwas hai tujhpe mujko...ab tu hi bata main kya naam du is CHAHAT ko...

PART 14

The whole drive back home Maan was instructing his wife dos and donts...

GEET: Maan mein ghar baithe baithe bore ho jaungi pls mujhe college jane do...
MAAN: Geet tumhara dimag to theek hai yahaan main tumko bed se uthne ko bhi mana kar raha hoon aur tum college jane ki baat kar rahi ho???
GEET(with baby face): Par Maan...

Maan turns the car towards a mall...

GEET: Maan ye hum kahan ja rahe hain????
MAAN: Abhi pata chal jayega Geet itni jaldi kya hai...

Maan takes her to a computer shop...

MAAN: Geet wo maine socha ki tum akele bore ho jaogi to tum laptop le lo to...
GEET: Par Maan mujhe ye...
MAAN: Geet mujhe na wa nahin sunna bas tum choose karo...

They bought a black sony vaio...

GEET: Tha...

Before she could complete he put his fingers on her lips and nodded his head negatively asking her not to speak...

MAAN: Geet tum meri wife ho aur mujhse kuch bhi lena tumhara haq hai aur please humare beech mein aaj se no no sorry and thank you...hmmm???

Geet just nodded her head not ready to believe anything beyond his every gesture is for baby's sake...
They reached home and Maan started another session of instructions for his mother and sister and now for the umpteenth time he said...

MAAN: Aur mom zara sa bhi kuch bhi ho foran mujhe call kariyega...foran samjhin????
Gauri: Haan beta samajh gai aur agar tum bhool gae ho to yaad dila doon ki tumko aur Annie ko maine hi paida kiya hai...to mujhe tumse zyada experience hai ye sab handle karne ke liye...SAMJHE!!!! Ab hamara sar khana band karo aur office jao hum Geet ka khayal rakh sakte hain...

Maan couldn't have said anything in front of his mom's fierce avtaar but as his eyes fell at giggling Geet and Annie he glared at them to shut them up and went out...
As he moved out of everyone's eyes he smiled...

MAAN(thinking): Geet hasti hui kitni pyari lagti hai...agar wo aise hasti rahegi to main mom se hamesha daant kha sakta hoon...
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After 4 hours Maan gets restless...

MAAN(thinking): Pata nahin Geet ne kuch khaya hai ya nahin doctor ne to use chaar ghante se zyada bhooke rehne ko strictly mana kiya tha... Call karta hoon...

He picks up the reciever but suddenly remembers his mom's burst out...

MAAN(thinking): Nahin agar mom ne utha liya to wo meri band baja dengi... Geet ke mobile pe karta hoon...par uska number to mere paas hai hi nahin...shah!!! Dad se leta hoon...

He calls Pratham and ask for Geet's number...

Pratham: WHAT!!!!!!!! Tumhare paas ab tak apni wife ka number nahin hai???????
MAAN: Dad itna chillane ki zaroorat nahin hai... Zaroorat nahin pari to nahin liya abhi pari hai de do na...
Pratham: Are aise kaise ab tak zaroorat nahin pari is beech to tu bahar bhi gaya tha...
MAAN: My dear detective dad agar apko yaad ho to she got the mobile jab main London gaya tha aur uske baad jab bhi baat karni hui maine landline use kar liya to zaroorat nahin pari...
Pratham: Achcha to ab kyun pari???
MAAN: Kya dad... Sari detectivegiri aaj hi nikaloge kal ke liye rakho aur please mujhe number de do... Please!!!!!
Pratham: Achcha achcha likh number...

And finally after going through his dad's interrogation he got the number...
He immediatly dialed...

MAAN: Geet?
GEET: Maan????
MAAN: Haan Geet main Maan hi hoon waise tumne kaise pehchana??? Do you have my number??? Kyunki humne isse pehle kabhi phone pe to baat nahin ki hai haina??

Geet smiled lightly...

GEET: Maan mujhe apko pehchanne ke liye kisi number ki zaroorat nahin hai... Is dil ko apke hone ka ehsaas apki aahat aane se pehle hi ho jata hai...

He was lost feeling the deep love her heart holds for him...

GEET: Maan!!! Maan!!!
MAAN: Ha...haan Geet???
GEET: Kya hua Maan aap theek ho na...
MAAN: Haan Geet wo...tumne kuch khaya tumhein yaad hai na har chaar ghante pe you have to eat something...
GEET: Aapne ye poochne ke liye phone kiya tha???? Maan mom ne sun liya na to apko kachcha chaba jaengi...
MAAN: Pata hai Geet tabhi to tumhare mobile pe call kiya hai...ab pehle mere sawaal ka jawaab do..
GEET: Haan Maan mom ne abhi mujhe bahot tasty sa pasta bana ke khilaya...
MAAN: Hoga tasty but meri Geet ke banae hue pasta se better nahin ho sakta...

That was the first time he directly appreciated something about her... Her cheeks instantly changed color to pink and her eyes shimmered with tears of happiness...
There was silence for some moments...

MAAN: Geet!!!! Kya hua?
GEET: Kuch nahin...thank you...
MAAN: Kis liye???
GEET: Wo abhi apne jo kaha uske liye...
MAAN: Maine kya kaha Geet???

She frowned...

GEET: Chaddo!!! Aap rehne do aur apna kaam karo... Maine kha liya hai aur mom mera achche se khayal rakh rahin hain to apko tension lene ki zaroorat nahin hai... Bye...
MAAN: Achcha suno to Geet... Waise sachchi mein tumhare haath ke coffee aur pasta ki baat hi kuch aur hai...

She shyly smiled...

GEET: Thank you!!!!
MAAN: Aur haan shaam ko ready rehna... Take care Geet... Bye...
GEET: Bye!!!
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Geet was all ready when Maan entered their room... He was mesmerised by her angelic appearance... She was looking just like an angel in her white sari... He was completely lost in her...
But Geet did not notice his lost state...

GEET: Maan aap aa gae... Aap fresh ho jaiye main abhi coffee leke aati hoon...

She took a few steps when he held her wrist...

MAAN: Geet maine kaha na tum koi kaam nahin karogi...
GEET(with her trademark baby face): Par aaj hi to apne kaha ki apko meri banai coffee sabse achchi lagti hai??
MAAN: Haan Geet lagti hai par iska matlab ye nahin ki tum banane chal do... Tumhara aaram karna mere liye sabse zyada important hai... Waise mujhe abhi coffee nahin chahiye tum do minute ruko main fresh hoke aata hoon...

She gestured a yes with her eyes...

Both of them went to Gauri to inform her...

MAAN: Mom main aur Geet bahar jaa rahe hain raat tak aa jaenge...
Gauri: Tum aur Geet bahar kahan???
MAAN: Mom bas aisehi jaa rahe hain...don't worry aa jaenge...
Gauri: Achcha beta subah humein bahot lecture par rahe the ab khud use ghar se bahar leke jaya jaa raha hai...
MAAN: Dekhiye din bhar usne rest kiya hai to thodi fresh air achchi hogi... Maine doctor se pooch liya hai..
Gauri: Achchaaa!!! Khud ko shaam mein leke jana tha to din mein humein lecture pe lecture deke torture kar rahe the...kyun???
MAAN: Achcha meri pyaari mom galti ho gai ab hum please jaa sakte hain???

Gauri smiled... She was just teasing Maan otherwise she was really happy seeing them going out together...

Gauri: Ok par jaldi aana zyada raat tak jagna Geet ke liye theek nahin hai... Bye bachchon...
Maan & Geet: Bye mom...

The one hour drive was mostly silent.
Maan took her to an open field with greenery and colourful flowers all around. Geet was awestruck by the beauty and peace emitted by the place.

GEET: Maan ye hum kahan...
MAAN: Aage aao Geet samajh jaogi...

Saying that he went to a structure that stood under the shadow of a big peepal tree. He went to the structure and touched it as if touching someone's feet and fell on his knees beside it.
Geet was moving slowly admiring the beauty of the place. As her eyes fell on the name inscribed on the structure uncontrollable tears started flowing from her eyes and the only word that escaped her choked throat was "MAA". She fell beside Maan and touched the structure here and there trying to feel her mother.

MAAN: Ye Rano mom ki favourite jagah thi Geet. Unhein yahaan ghanton baithna bahot pasand tha aur sabse bari baat is jagah ke bare mein mere aur Rano mom ke alawa kisi ko pata nahin tha isiliye Rano mom ke jane ke baad main is jagah pe sirf apna haq samajhne laga. Jab wo gain tab to main bahot chhota tha par jab thoda bara hua to maine yahaan aana shuru kiya. Yahaan main Rano mom ko apne paas mehsoos karta hoon Geet isliye unki saari yaadein samet ke yahaan jama kar diya aur jab bhi unki yaad aati main yahaan chala aata. Pata hai Geet hum jab aakhiri baar yahan aaye the...

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MAAN: Ye aane wali baby kab aayegi?
Rano: Beta ye pyari si baby jald hi aa jaegi.
MAAN: Pyari??? Par Rano mom mujhe ye achchi nahin lagti.
Rano: Wo kyun beta?
MAAN: Kyunki apne promise kiya hai lekin phir bhi mujhe iske saath apka love aur attention share karna parega aur mujhe ye pasand nahin.
Rano: Par maine to apse promise kiya hai isliye main ise apna pyar aur attention nahin doongi wo to sirf mere Maan ka hai. Ye baby to apke liye aa rahi hai to ise pyar aur attention dene ki zimmedari apki.
MAAN: Mere liye??
Rano: Haan! Aap hamesha Babaji se shikayat karte hain na ki aap bilkul akele hain, apke saath khelne wala koi nahin to Babaji ne decide kiya ki wo apke liye ek chhoti si pyari si pari bhejenge...

He touched her abdomen. Excitement written all over his face.

MAAN: Sach Rano mom ye meri hai?
Rano: Haan Maan sach ye apki hai. Aap iska khayal rakhoge na??
MAAN: Pakka main iska bahot khayal rakhoonga aur iske saath bahot kheloonga. Aap bas ise jaldi se bahar le aao.

FLASHBACK ENDS

MAAN: Rano mom ki ek baat se meri saari insecurity door ho gai aur main apni pari ka intezaar karne laga. Main din raat yehi plans banata rehta ki tum aa jaogi to main kya kya karoonga. Ye samajhne ke liye chhota tha par I was obsessed regarding you Geet. Us intezaar aur curiosity ne tumhein meri chahat bana diya. Har pal main sabse yehi poochta "pari kab aaegi?".

Geet was looking at him amazed at his confession, questioning herself "kya sach mein main kabhi unki chahat thi??"...

MAAN: Par Babaji ne wo intezaar aise khatam kiya ki main khudgarz ban gaya Geet. Main khudgarzi mein itna kho gaya ki apni pari apni chahat ko maine har takleef mein akela tadapne ke liye chhod diya aur yehi nahin maine khud use dard diya tadpaya, usse nafrat ki main to Rano mom se kiya wada bhi bhool gaya Geet.

He kept his head in her laps crying bitterly. Her heart was crushed seeing his condition.

MAAN: Main achcha beta nahin hoon Geet maine khudgarzi mein sab bhula diya main kisi rishte ke layak nahin hoon.

She caressed his cheek trying to sooth him.

GEET: Nahin Maan aisa mat kahiye aap koi wada nahin bhoole balki apne to mujhse nafrat hone ke bawajood har mod pe mera saath diya thayaji ko mujhe aage parhane ke liye tayyar kiya, Sameera di ko hamesha mujhe daantne se roka, jis bhi karan se ki ho par shaadi karke meri jaan bachai aur abhi bhi hoshiayarpur se mujhe bacha kar leke aaye. Aapne to apni nafrat bhula ke apna wada poora kiya hai Maan aap to duniya ke sabse achche bete ho maa ko aap par garv hoga mujhe yaqeen hai...

MAAN: Nahin Geet Rano mom ko mujh par garv kaise ho sakta hai jab maine unke jigar ke tukre ko itni chot pahonchai hai. Geet jab tum kal hamare bachche ke liye lar rahi thi to mujhe ehsaas hua ki kin halaton ka saamna karke Rano mom tumhein is duniya mein leke aain, tum unki har khushi ho jise unhone bahot yaqeen ke saath mujhe diya ki main unki khushi ko palkon pe bitha ke rakhoonga aur maine kya kiya tumhein har mod har qadam pe sirf chot pahonchai...

GEET: Maan hum chot use hi pahonchate hain jispe hum apna haq samajhte hain aur mera yaqeen kijie maa ko apse koi shikayat nahin hogi. Unhein khushi hogi ki aap mujh par apna haq samajhte hain aur phir hoshiayarpur se aap mujhe jis tarah bacha ke laye ye saabit ho gaya ki aapko meri fikar hai aur dekha jae to apki narazgi mujhse jayaz hai. Maa ko mere karan...

Putting his finger on her lips he stopped her from speaking further...

MAAN: Nahin Geet ye sochna meri bewakoofi thi. Tumhein jeevan dena to Rano mom ka sapna tha tumhare karan kuch bhi nahin hua tum please kabhi khud ko kisi baat ka zimmedar mat samajhna. Saara gunah mera hai mujhe tumhara sahara banna tha in sab baaton se door rakhna tha aur maine hi tumhein har baar is baat ka sabse zyada ehsaas dilaya. Main bahot bura hoon Geet. Main janta hoon main kisi maafi ke layak nahin hoon par phir bhi kya tum mujhe maaf karke meri pari ki zindagi mein shamil hone ka mauqa dogi?

Her eyes sparkled with his word 'pari' that he used for her and a sweet smile adorned her lips.

GEET: Apki pari ki zindagi ka to hamesha se sabse aham hissa aap hi ho Maan to phir aap usi zindagi mein shamil kaise honge jo zindagi apke dam pe chalti hai aur Maan apne hi aaj subah kaha tha na ki hum husband wife hain aur hamare beech no sorry and no thank you to phir aap mafi mang ke hamare rishte ko neecha kyun kar rahe ho?

MAAN: Magar Geet...

She put her hand on his lips and nodded her head negatively...

GEET: Please Maan! Geet ko apne Maan se na kabhi koi shikayat thi aur na ho sakti hai. Geet ke liye Maan uske masiha hain jinhone kuch bhi ho hamesha zaroorat parne par uska saath diya aur apne masiha se kabhi kisi ko shikayat hoti hai kya. Aap hi bataiye??

He was looking at her astonished at the serenity of her heart...

GEET: Bas Maan ab beeti baatein peeche chhodkar hum aage badhenge aur apne bachche ke saath ek nayi zindagi ki shuruwat karenge. Haina???

MAAN: Geet itna saaf dil kaise hai tumhara?? Mere saare gunahon ke baad bhi tumne mujhe itni aasani se ma...

She again stopped him from speaking further...

GEET: Maan please maine kaha na ye mafi gunah ye shabd aap bhool jaiye... Jo hua wo beet gaya jane dijie na please main apko aise pareshan nahin dekh sakti... Waise apko pata hai Maan bahot rarely muskurate hain par unki muskurahat bahot pyari hai...

He smiled not able to deny her cute request and she ruffled his hair lovingly...

GEET: Hmmm ye hui na baat...baby papa ko thank you bol raha hai naani se milwane ke liye aur ye pyari si smile ke liye...

MAAN: Achcha baby ne to thanks de diya par baby ki mama kya dengi??

He said that huskily looking into her eyes but noticed the discomfort in her eyes... He understood the reluctance he knew she was giving in for his happiness but still his words from that morning haunted her heart and she was scared to believe in his love but he was confident and determined to get his Geet's trust back...

MAAN(thinking): Geet main janta hoon maine jo tumhare saath kiya use bhula ke dobara mujh pe yaqeen karna aasan nahin par I promise main tumhare saare shikwe mita ke tumhein apne pyaar ka yaqeen dilaunga aur in ankhon mein ye aansu nahin bas hamesha mere pyar ki chamak hogi.

GEET: Thanks Maan sach ye meri zindagi ka sabse pyara surprise tha pehli baar aisa laga maa mere bahot qareeb hain aur main unhein mehsoos kar sakti hoon...

MAAN: Thanks??? Abhi thodi der pehle mujhe koi hamare rishte ke rules remind kara raha tha aur khud hi tod rahi ho??? Han Geet???

She touched her ears giving a baby face to him...
He took her hands in his hands away from her ears nodding negatively...

MAAN: Geet I promise aaj ke baad tumse badhkar meri zindagi mein kuch nahi hoga aur tumhari khushi ke liye main kuch bhi karoonga bas tum ek baar keh ke dekho...

She knew he was again getting emotional and she decided to divert his mind.

GEET: Maan abhi to mera golgappe khane ka mann hai... Khilaenge aap???
MAAN: Kya golgappe??? Geet pata nahin is halat mein theek hai ya nahin. Waise bhi street food is very unhygienic hota hai.

Geet again using her trump card baby face...

GEET: Kya Maan abhi apne kaha keh ke dekho aur ab aap...
MAAN: Achcha achcha main doctor se poochta hoon...

He called the doctor and got her permission then they went off to have golgappe...
Both happy and satisfied seeing happiness on each other's face...

big SRY for late update and thanks for bearing wid me
Hope I lived upto all of your expectations!!!!!!
Your opinion is really precious and important for me
so pls do let me know what you think about the update'''
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Edited by crazydevil87 - 14 years ago

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#628

RES...

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Wow dear really this update made me cry and I have also forgiven Maan for his stupid acts that he used to commit at the starting of this ff

I guess we girls r really very emotional koi kitna bhi dard de de agar ussi insaan ne ek baar sachhe dil se humse pyar se baat kar li we will forgive that person immediately

ok now the update really loved the way maan was giving orders par i had a good laugh when maan''s mom said k tumhe aur annie ko bhi maine hi janam diya tha and i know these things better

maan love for geet is increasing day by day

ofho maan mom se bach gaye aur ab dad ke changul mein phas gaye detective dad...

wow geet's words touched my heart k aapki aahat mujhe pehle hi pata chal jaathi hai i don't need any number to recognize u...

Loved maan's surprise and believe me isse better koi aur surprise ho hi nahi saktha tha

"Pari"😳😳😳 was so sweet ... loved the way maan poured his heart out and told her k there was a time when he used to wait for her and the way he asked for permission k can u allow me to reenter ur life...was so divine

loved the way geet removed all his insecurities

Maan wants to take their relationship ahead and hence indirectly demanded a kiss from geet but geet was nervous and glad that maan understood this and promised her that one day i will rewin your trust

well geet k saath saath main bhi uss din ka wait kar rahi hoon...so that we can get some romantic moments of maaneet...

Amazing work dear Hats off to u

" Aaj tumse ye vaada karte hai k marte dam tak tumhara saath nibhayenge

Zindagi ki har toofani mod par tumhara haath thame tumhe sambhalenge

Har uljan har kashmakash ko tumhare liye suljhadenge

Kaato par bhi chalna pade toh tumhari khushi k liye muskurakar kadam bhadayenge

Tumhe palko par sajakar rakenge

Iss duniya ki har ek khushi tumhare kadmo mein la daalenge

Ek din toh aisa zarur aayega k tumhe humpar fir se yakeen hoga

Jaante hai humhine thodha tha tumhara yakeen

Mujhrim hai hum tumhare par ab aur jhooth humse kaha nahi jaata

Yeh sach hai k tumhi mera pyar ho tumhi iss dil ka karaar ho

Tumse hi iss dil ki dhadkane hai aur tumhise inn saaso ki leher hai

Hotho se nikle hue har ek dua mein bus tum hi tum ho

Meri zindagi ka wajood aur astitva bhi tum hi ho

Kaash main tumhe apna dil cheer kar bata pata

Toh shayad tumhe ye ehsaas hotha k tumhare tasveer k alawa iss dil par kabhi bhi kisi aur ki parchahyi nahi padi

Ab chahe jo kuch bhi ho main tumhara intezaar karunga

Shayad phir se ek din kismat mujhpar meherbaan ho jaaye

Aur meri roshni meri pari mujhe phir se mil jaaye"

love-Piya

Edited by piya- - 14 years ago

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#629

ossum dear

love dit

really adorable

so maan asked frgiveness

but geet have doubt

soon clear that also dear

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priyal12

@priyal12

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#630

wow
good ff
i loved it
pls update soon
please pm me

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