New FF (Maaneet) Mere Humsafar Thd5 Upd pt54 pg122 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ab update karegi ya maar kayegi jaldi kar sweety
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congrats for the new thread...

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congrats on new thread
omg ur updating😍
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CONGO 4 NEW THREAD


UPDATE SOON:)
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congrats for the new thread
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congrats on the new thread 😊
waiting 😊
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congo for the new thread dear..
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Thanks for ur love and support many of u were asking that Maaneet r in love then from where this contract marriage comes into picture
Yes I agree Maaneet r surely in love but they have not realized it till now.Another thing contract marriage not necessarily means that none of them will realize their emotions. Maybe one of them might realize this but the other one may not be ready for this relationship due to a very stong reason
Right now I can only say that the theme of this FF is still unchanged. As the story progresses all your doubts will b cleared
I dedicate this update to my sweet sister Shivangi. CongratsShivu u r rockers now
love-Piya
PART 48
Maan was not listening to anyone his eyes were fixed on his Geet

His eyes clearly reflected pain of insulting her as well as the happiness of finding her back

As soon as the police officials left Geet immediately went and hugged Maan

Dev, Adi and Mr. Chopra left the room to give them some privacy

Both of them did not speak a single word

They just wanted to live this moment' somewhere deep they were scared that they might be dreaming and as soon as they speak their dream will be broken

Geet was crying but these were tears of happiness'which was a proof that she was right'her trust had won' she was back where she belonged in the safe embrace of her Maan'yes her Maan

Maan could also not control his tears this was the first time that the great MSK was crying' his tears clearly reflected the fear of losing Geet'the pain that he went through when he had accused Geet'the guilt of insulting her'the frustration that he was responsible for making her cry'

Both were removing their insecurities through this hug' they were assuring themselves that they have once again found the most precious gem of their life'their love ' their trust' their unnamed relationship had emerged victorious' they were meant to be together and will be together'

No one could separate them not even their destiny

Maan: Geet tum wakai mein yaha ho?

Geet: Maan main aapse dur kaise jaa sakthi hoon main yahi hoon aapke paas aapke kareeb

Maan: Tum sach keh rahi hona kahi yeh mera khwab toh nahi k main aakhein khol du aur ye tuth jaaye

Geet: Darr to mujhe bhi lag raha tha k kahi ye haseen pal mehez ek sapna bankar na reh jaaye par ab aapki baho mein aakar yakeen ho gaya k ye ek haqeekat hai aap mere paas ho aur main iss duniya k sabse mehfoos jagah mein hoon aapki baho mein

Maan and Geet slowly opened their eyes

Maan gently wiped the tears from Geet's face

Maan: Geet tumhari inn aakhon mein agar aaj aasu hai toh iska zimedar sirf main hoon maine hi tumhe chot pauchayi' shayad main kabhi tumhare yakeen k kabil tha hi nahi

Geet: Aisa mat kahiye Maan aapne jo kuch bhi kiya uske peeche ek wajah thi aur aisa bhi toh nahi haina k sirf main iss takleef mein tadap rahi thi aap bhi toh andar hi andar guth rahe the

Maan: Geet tum wakai mein mujhse naaraz nahi ho?

Geet: Main aapse naaraz kaise ho sakthi hoon Maan jab main jaanti hoon k aap mera bura kabhi soch hi nahi sakthe 'kuch pal dukh zarur hua magar mera dil jaanta tha k aap mera bharosa kabhi nahi todoge aur dekhiye main aaj sahi saabit hui

Maan: mujhe toh laga tha k maine tumhe humesha humesha k liye kho diya hai

Geet: Aap hi toh kehthe the na k hum humesha saath rahenge toh phir aapne kaise soch liya k Geet apne Maan se dur rehkar kabhi jee sakthi hai'

Maan :Mera yakeen mano Geet jab main tumse who khator lafz keh raha tha tab main khud hazaro maut mar raha tha

Geet: Jaanti hoon Maan aapko kuch kehne ki zarurat nahi aur waise bhi mera yakeen aapse utha hi kab tha jo mujhe uss dubara stapit karna pade

Maan: Geet pichle dino jo kuch bhi hua'

Geet covers his mouth with her hand

Geet: ab bus kijiye jo beeth chukka wo beeth chukka ab hum unn lamho ko dubara yaad nahi karenge 'bus jo aanewale lamhe hai unhe ek saath haskar jeeyenge

Maan: Itni zindadili kaha se laathi ho Geet'

Geet: Jab aap mere saath hai toh halat chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye zindadilli apne aap aajayegi'bus aap humesha mera yuhi saath dethe rahiyega

Maan: Geet aaj main tumse ek baat kehna chahunga' aage ki zindagi mein najaane hume kaise haalatho ka saamna karna pade ye hum nahi jaante' shayad kal haalat kuch ais ho jaaye jiske wajah se nachahthe hue bhi humare beech duriyaan aa jaaye magar ek tum mera saath kabhi nahi chodogi vaada karo Geet

Geet : Main Vaada karti hoon Maan' main aapka saath kabhi nahi chodungi

Maan: Geet kya aaj ki shaam tum mere saath bitaogi?

Geet: Haan zarur par aapko meri shaam kuch special banana hoga

Maan: Hmm'koshish zarur karunga

Geet: Dekhthe hai MSK ki koshish kitni kamyaab hothi hai

Maan: Geet chalo pehle ghar chalthe hai Dadima tumhe kafi miss kar rahi thi

Geet: Chaliye

Khurana Mansion

Dadima: Geet bete kaha chaligayi thi aap aapne ek baar bhi humare baare mein nahi socha na?

Geet: Nahi Dadima uss waqt haalat hi kuch aise the k mera jaana zaruri tha

Dadima: Hum samajhe hai bete par ab aap humse vaada kijiye k aap hume dubara chodkar nahi jaayengi

Geet: Ji Dadima main vada karti hoon

Dadima: Waise Maan kaha hai?

Geet: Dadima wo police station gaye hai aap nahi jaanti dadima wo darasal'

Dadima: Hum jaante hai Geet Dev ne hume sab batadiya hai ab aap jaakar aaram kijiye

Geet: Ji Dadima

Outhouse

Geet gets a message on her mobile

"Geet taiyaar rehna main driver bhej raha hoon"

Geet: Taiyaar rehna ye bhi nahi bataya k hum jaa kaha rahe hai ab main kya pehnu' haan saree pehen lethi hoon

Meanwhile

Maan goes to a jewellery shop

Maan: Maine jo kaha tha wo bun chukka hai

Owner :Ji Mr. Khurana aur waise bhi aapne aane ki takleef kyun ki main khud kisi k haath s bhijwa detha

Maan :nahi iski koi zarurat nahi hai kya main wo cheez dekh saktha hoon

Owner: Ye lijiye

Maan was very happy with the work

Maan pays the money and goes away

Evening

The driver arrives and Geet goes with him

After some time they reach the place. Maan was already waiting there

He opened the door. Geet comes out and the driver leaves

Maan: Geet aaj tum bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho

Geet: Maan yaha inta andhera kyun hai?

Maan: Kyun dar lag raha hai?

Geet: Jab meri roshni mere saath hai toh mujhe kis baat ka darr ho saktha hai

Maan: Toh phir chalo Geet darwaza kholo

Pls listen to this song

Music

Geet opened the door and she was welcomed by a very beautiful sight.The entire floor was covered with rose petals

Tu hi haqeeqat khwaab tu

She looks lovingly at Maan


Dariya tu hi pyaas tu

Maan caresses her face and holds her hand and signals her to enter


Tu hi dil ki bekarar Tu sukoon tu sukoon

As they entered with each step the entire place started glowing with lights


Jaoon main ab jab jiss jagah Paoon main tujhko uss jagah

Geet realizes that the entire room was full of her pictures but these were not photographs infact these were handmade paintings


Saath hoke na ho tu hai Rubaroo rubaroo

There were some messages written on the painting. Geet slowly starts moving in the direction of the pics

Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera

Geet goes and stands in front of a painting and starts reading the message


Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera

"Geet shayad main ye tumse kabhi na keh paau k meri zindagi mein tumhari kya aihmeeyat hai

Shayad tumhe kabhi ye na jata pau k mujhe tumhari kitni parwah hai

Aaj bus itna ikraar karna chahunga k tum mera hausla ho mera wajood ho

Jiske bina main kabhi bhi koi kamiyaabi haasil nahi kar saktha

Tum ho toh sab kuch hai warna kuch nahi"

Aa tujhe inn baahon mein bhar ke Aur bhi kar loon main kareeb

She then moves on to the second painting

" Zindagi k sahi maiyne kya hothe hai ye maine tumhise seekha

Tumhi ho jisne har pal har lamha mera saath diya

Haalat k rukh chahe jo kuch bhi ho tumne humesha mera haath thame rakha

Kismatwala hoon Geet warna bure waqt mein toh apna saaya bhi saath chod detha hai

Dubara shayad main tumse ye na keh pau isliye ab keh raha hoon

Meri Zindagi ko apni masumiyat k diye se ujagar karne k liye shukriya"


Tu juda ho toh lage hai Aata jaata har pal ajeeb

Now the 3rd painting

"maine bhi tumse angina vaade kiye par sach toh ye hai k main tumhe dukh k alawa kuch na de saka par tab bhi tumne mujhpar apna yakeen kayam rakha

Shayad wakai mein kismat mujhpar meherbaan thi warna itne anmiol heere ko khokar dubara paana shayad namumkin tha.

Main tumhara shukrguzar hoon geet k tumne mujhe ek aur mauka diya

Tumhe paakar maine aaj apni zindagi ki sabse badi jeeth haasil kar li"


Iss jahaan mein hai aur na hoga Mujhsa koi bhi khush naseeb
Tune mujhko dil diya hai Main hoon tere sabse kareeb

" Tumhare aakhon se nikle hue har ek aasu ki keemat chukane k liye taiyaar hoon Geet. Main tumhara gunegaar hoon jo saza dena chaho de do geet

Magar kabhi mujhse naaraz mat hona main tut jaayunga

Kabhi mujhse dur mat jana main bhikar jaaunga

Kabhi apna chehra meri aakhon se dur mat karna main jee nahi paaunga"

Main ti toh tere dil mein hoon Main hi toh saanson mein basoon
Tere dil ki dhadkanon mein Main hi hoon main hi hoon

"Judai ka har ek lamha maut se bhi battar tha

Mujhse dur hotha hua tumhara har ek kadam mere saaso ki raftaar ko kam kiye jaa raha tha

Dil chahtha tha k tumhe rokh lu tumhe apne seene se lagalu

Par tab najaane kaise maine haalat k saamne ghutne thek diye

Shayad main kamzoor tha jo uss waqt tumhare aasuko rokh na sakha

Magar aaj ek baar phir tumhe apne seene se lagan chahtha hoon

Mujhe maaf kar do geet meri roshni mujhe lauta do"

Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera

"Aaj bhi bahe failaye tumhara intezaar kar raha hoon

Aaj inmein samakar mujhe iss dard se rahat de dho

Warna zindagi bhar khud ko maaf nahi kar paaunga"


Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera

Ohhooo' Kab bhala ab ye waqt guzre

Geet starts running and goes and hugs Maan

Kuch pata chalta hi nahi Jabse mujhko tu mila hai Hosh kuch bhi apna nahi

Both of them get lost in each other's embrace

Uff ye teri palken ghani si Chaanv inki hai dilnasheen

Maan kisses her eyes


Ab kise dar dhoop ka hai Kyunki hain ye mujhpe bicchi

Geet places her head on his chest

Tere bina na saans loon Tere bina na main jiyun

Maan carries Geet in his arms

Tere bina na ek pal bhi Reh sakoon reh sakoon

He places her on the swing and starts moving it gently

Tu hi haqeeqat khwaab tu Dariya tu hi pyaas tu

He takes some rose petals and showers it all over her face

Tu hi dil ki bekarariTu sukoon tu sukoon

Geet takes his hand and places a kiss on it

Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera

They get lost in each other's eyes

PRECAP: Geet: "Maan aisa lag raha hai jaise k ye sirf ek design nahi hai balki koi bhasha mein likha hua ek word hai"

Pls press d like button n do comment

Love-Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Wow Piggy….what a romantic update. I am still in my dreamland

Hug was wonderful. It was as if they were embracing each other to complete each other and let go of all the pain
Their trust on each other is unshakalble. And today Geet promised not only maan but Dadi also that she will never leave and go.

Geet is so devoted to her –

"Jab meri roshni mere saath hai toh mujhe kis baat ka darr ho saktha hai"

She has become Maan's life –

Tumhare aakhon se nikle hue har ek aasu ki keemat chukane k liye taiyaar hoon Geet. Main tumhara gunegaar hoon jo saza dena chaho de do geet

Magar kabhi mujhse naaraz mat hona main tut jaayunga

Kabhi mujhse dur mat jana main bhikar jaaunga

Kabhi apna chehra meri aakhon se dur mat karna main jee nahi paaunga

Song was a perfect choice. I loved every bit of it. Their hug, their kiss on the eyes, him holding her in his arms, rose petals…every bit of it was dreamy.

I am waiting for the precap. Maan has ordered something special for her so he will give it to her in next update I guess.

I don't know Piggy how you write such beautiful and poetic lines. But they are amazing. They truly warm your heart and leave you yearning for more.

Thank you for such an amazing update
----xxx-------

And now a little dance – "I am first…I am first….I am first"

Edited by ritzy09 - 13 years ago

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