MAANEET SS;Destiny or Faith..Thrd 2..upd Pt25 Pg71

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Posted: 13 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: ananya95
awesome updt yaar just loved it
awww so romantic
loved how maan proposed her & asked her to bcum his zindagi
geet was so happy & so was maan
it was rly a bful updt
d song was gud too
omg precap
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm

thanks dear...thanku so much
m so very glad with all ur lovely comments

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minnie_tweetie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#332

Thanks a ton for ur encouragement and support...

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minnie_tweetie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#333

PART-23

This update is for my special reader Bloomysunday(Pooja) and simm28(Simran Di)

Geet: maan main apko bata bhi nai sakti aaj main kitni khush hoon…..thanku so much maan…main kabhi socha bhi nai tha ki aaj meri zindagi ka itna khoobsurat din hoga

Maan: geet meri zindagi to ussi din khoobsurat ho gayi thi jis din main tumse mila tha…ek hi company mein kaam karne ke bawajood main tumse mil nahin paaya…par lagta hai bhawan ko kuch or hi manzoor tha

Maan: tum jaanti ho geet main hamesha se hi ladkiyon se dur bhagta tha…..mere liye inn sab baton ki koi bhi ahmeiyat nahin thi par jab se tum meri zindagi mein aayi ho pata nahin muje inn sab rishto ki ahmeiyat samaj aa gayi hai….in sab ki wajah tum ho geet…..agar tum meri zindagi ka hissa nahin hoti to pata nahin mera kya hota

Maan: geet please humesha mere issi tarah kareeb rehna….jab tum mere pass nahin hoti to main pareshan ho jata hu

Geet: maan ye kya puch rahe hai aap…..hamara pyar inn baton se kahi upar hai…main apse waada karti hu ki chahe job hi mushkil aa jaye main hamesha aap hi ke saath rahungi

Maan and geet share a hug………A song starts from behind…………….maan takes geet to the dance floor…..she too agrees.

The song starts….

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MKtTxTT1GlE[/YOUTUBE]

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Ho chaandni jab tak raat deta hai har koi saath
Tum magar andheron mein na chhodna mera haath
Ho chaandni jab tak raat deta hai har koi saath
Tum magar andheron mein na chhodna mera haath

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Wafadaari ki vo rasmein nibhayenge hum tum kasmein
Ek bhi saans zindagi ki jab tak ho apne bas mein
Wafadaari ki vo rasmein nibhayenge hum tum kasmein
Ek bhi saans zindagi ki jab tak ho apne bas mein

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Maan and geet are in a hug…….they break the hug and are lost in each others eyes……..it felt that they wanted to live each and every moment………

Geet: thanku maan…ye sab karne ke liye…………….

Meanwhile maan's cell rings up….its savitri devi calling her…maan pics up the call…..

Savitri: maan kaha hai aap..abhi ke abhi ghara aiye

Maan: abhi? Maa sab thik to hai na???

Savitri: haan bte sab thik hai…aap 10 minute mein ghar aiye…..hum apka inteezaar kar rahe hai

Maan: thik hai maa main abhi aata hu

Maan was looking bit tensed.

Geet: maan kya baat hai sab thik to hai na

Maan: pata nahin mom ne abhi ghar bulaya hai

Geet: chaliye maan main bhi apke saath chalti hu

Maan and geet head towards khurana mansion

At KM

Savitri devi and dev are sitting in the drawing room

Maan: kya baat hai mom aapne itni jaldi ghar bula liya sab thik to hai na??

Savitri : geet bte aap bhi ayi hai…..

Geet takes blessings of savitri devi

Geet: vo actually main maan sir ke sath thi jab apka call aya muje laga pata nahin sab thik hai ya nahin….isliye main saath chali aayi

Savitri: ye to apne bahut acha kia bte…jo aap bhi saath aa gayi…ab to mera kaam or aasani se ho jaega

Savitri looks towards dev and share a smile. Geet is bit confused by her words

Maan: aap bateingi mom ki baat kya hai???

Savitri: baat ye hai bte ki humne aapke liye ek ladki pasand ki hai

Maan and geet are shocked hearing this……geet is almost in tears…..but somehow she controls….

Savitri: geet bte aapn hi apne maan sir ko samjhaiye…kab tak aise chalega…..main to thak gayi hu…or iss baar to na kehne ki koi gunjaish bhi nai hai…ladki sarv guna sampan hai

Geet: aunty main isme kya keh sakti hu…ye to apki ghar ki baat hai na

Maan: mom main apse kafi bar keh chukka hu muje nahi dekhni koi or ladki

Geet: aunty main chalti hu…beeji mera wait kar rahi hongi

Savitri: arrey bte abhi to aap ayi hai hum apko aise nahin jaane denge…….hum chate hai ki aap bhi vo ladki ko pasand karein

The situation was getting unbearable for maan and geet now……both of them were in a shock……

Dev: mom kab se aap yahi kahi ja rahi hai…ab bata bhi dijiye ki meri hone wali bhabhi kaun hai

Savitri: bte bas ek minute hum abhi dikhate hai

Maan: bahut ho gaya maan ab band kijiye ye sab….muje koi ladki nahin dekhni hai…….

Savitri: kyu maan har bar yahi jawab hum thak chuke hai ab ye sun sun kar,,,,,muje or preshan mat kijiye maan…or ladki dekh to lijiye kya pata apko pasand aa jaye

Maan: maa aap samaj kyu nahin rahi…muje koi ladki nahin dekhni hai

Savitri: maan aaj faisla ho kar hi rahega…..ye roz roz ki naatak se hume chutkara chaiye hai

Savitri: nakul mere room se vo photo leke ayi…hamare drawer mein padi hai

Geet's heart beat quickens so is maan's.

Maan: ek minute nakul tumhe lahin jaane ki zarurat nahin hai

Savitri: aakhir baat kya hai maan kyu aap hamar pareshani kaam nahin karna chahte…ek baar dekh to lijiye….nakul jaiye aap vo photo leke aiye

Nakul leaves to get the photograph

Maan: maan uski zarurat nahin hai kyuki main kisi or se pyar karta hu….

Savitri devi, dev are shocked to hear this from maan's mouth

Maan: haan maa main geet se pyar karta hu…or main agar shaadi karunge to vo bhi geet se karunga or kisi se nahin

Geet is almost stunned with maan's answer……Savitri and dev starts laughing……

Maan: maa main apse kuch keh raha hu or aap mera mazak bana rahi hai

Savitri: bte hum jaante the ki aap or geet ek dusre ko pasand karte hai….ye sab to natak tha apse sach bahar nikalwane ka liye

Maan and geet looks at each other……and are really embarrased

Dev: bro aap jaante hai ki main mom se puch kar thak gaya par unhone kuch nai btaya muje bola aap khud batenge…main bahut khush ho bro

Savitri comes to geet and shower her blessings on her…..

Savitri: bte humne aapko or maan ko ek sath dekh lia tha…ye to hum maan se khud dunna chahte the….hume maan par garv hai ki unhone apko pasand kia hai……main bata nahin sakti ki main kitni khush hoon….or ek aap hi hai jo mere paagal bte ko sambhal sakti hai……aap banengi na meri bahu????

Geet is embarrassed and hugs her…….

Dev: aaj to kafi khushi ka din hai muje meri bhabhi bhi mil gayi……main ye baat meera ko abhi batata hu

Geet: nahin jijaji please abhi kuch mat bataega…abhi ghar mein kisi ko kuch nahi pata…..

Dev nods her head…..

Geet: thik hai aunty ab main nikaltu hu….beeji mera intezaar kar rahi hongi….

Savitri: maan jaiye meri bahu ko chod kar aiye

Maan and geet leaves….they are in the car now…

Maan: aaj to mom ne daara dia tha…….chalo jo hua sab thik ho gaya

Geet is lost in her thoughts…

Maan: geet main tumse baat kar raha hu najane tumhara dhyan kaha hai

Geet: o sorry maan..kya keh rahe the aap?

Maan: geet tum kya soch rahi ho muje batao???

Geet: maan beeji hamare rishte ke liye manengi ya nahin kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai

Maan: acha to ye pareshani hai…tum tension mat lo geet hum milke unse baat karenge

Geet: par maan agar vo nahin maani to

Maan: tumhe muj pe vishwas hai na geet?

Geet: khud se zyada

Maan: to bas ab kuch mat socho kal hum milke beeji ko sab sach bata denge… I promise……!!!

Precap: beeji: main nahin chahti geet kit u uss company mein kaam karein…😭😭😭

Well how was the update friends???

please do comment I will be waiting….!!😳😳😳😳

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#334

RES...

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Hmm... so finally confession k baad kasme vaado ka session chal raha hai

" Kasme vaado ki hume kya zarurat jab humara rishta inn sabse pare hai

dil k jazbaatho ko zabaan tak laane ki kya zarurat jab hum khud inn ehsaaso k saagar mein dhube hue hai

Teri har ek muskurahat mujhe apni khushkismati ka ehsaas dilathi hai

Teri maasumiyat mujhe teri aur keeche le jaathi hai

Bus ek hi tamanna hai humara saath yuhi bana rahe

Har mushkil mod par tera saaya mere ruh ko sukoon detha rahe

Khuda se aur koi guzarrish nahi bus itni si khwaish hai ek tumhara naam meri haatho ki lakeero mein wo kuch iss tarah saza de k chahkar bhi koi hume ek duje se judaa na kar paaye"

teri Shona poetry likhne k mood mein hai iss liye ye bakwaas attempt tha

hmm...loved the teasing session of savitriji ab kehthe haina seedhi ungli se ghee nahi nikla toh ungli teedi karni padthi hai

beeji...kya bol rahi i m not tensed woh kyun rishte se mana karegi

yes loved the song sequence

continue soon

love-Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#335

so Maan has to confess in front of his mother...one block is moved now what about Beeji's reaction...

wonderful update...thanx for pm

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Remya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#336

maan toh phas gaya na..pyaar or shaadi mein...lol..
awesum

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ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#337

oh I knew it...Savitry will have no probs balki she will be really happy...but Beeji I can't say yaar...thoda ajeeb to hai...badi beti choti bahu and choti beti badi bahu of same house...hmmm

let's see what will be her reaction

great update and cont soon