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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Aditi--

awesummm update

i just love this ff

finally they will confess now..plz cont soon manjari😊

thanks for the pm

Thank youu soo much 🤗 Commented after a long time eh?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princess_sara

OMGGG...What should i say now...After reading such an amazinggg update...
u realllyyy write sooo beautifulll...I can't mention a single part..to praise..The Whole update was out of the World...Just mindblowing...
Keep writing Like this...
u rokkk


Cont asap.
I wanna see sajan Confession part...
i m tooo eager too read all those Romantic updates and blushingg...
omg..i m blushing right now...
Plzzz confession part jaldi se lao...

Sarah.

Haha! 🤗 Thank youu Sarah! I am soo happy that you enjoy my updates! Well.. its means alot to me.. thank youu =)) Keep reading!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fend

hey manji🤗mindblowing update loved it👏loved sajan convo it was awesome loved the way sajan are opening in for each other 😳loved gunjan teasing samrat n him blushing aww it was soo cutee😍loved sameera n gunjans talk it was very nice😳beautifully written👏 now cannot wait for the lonavala trip😍 do cont soon n thanks for the pm

Thank youu soo much Rukma di 🤗 I am soo glad that you enjoyed the update! Haha.. I know.. you never usually see a girl teasing a boy na? Lol.. but our Samrat is soo sensitive an fragile.. what can we do? 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ar_sajan4evr

finalyyy am gona edit dis now..
though i read ur update long tym bak...bt den i dint gt d tym to unres😳

well cmng onto d update..
it was lovelyyy
i lovved d way sajan 4 gtng close to ech other..n d way dere relationship z moving on
n thank godd..dat finalyy sam opned up infrnt of gnjn..n directly asked him bout neil..unlike assuming thngs..
n d bsstttesttt scne was d convo of sajan at midnight...esp wen gnjn noticed him blushng n told him..to wch he got embarrsed..lolzzz..
dat was realyyy cuteee
evn d scene where sam cums home early followed by dere convo was cuteee
cont sooon
n
thnx 4 d pm...

Hey richa 🤗 abhi tujhse chat bhi karrahin hoon.. pata nahi kya boloon?! 😆 Thank youu soo much! I am glad tujhe time mila edit karne ka ..( I am not sarcastic).. dont worry. I can totally understand that you must be sooo busy!
Haha.. I know Gunjan teasing Samrat had to be good na.. because Samrat was blushing! haha..
Keep reading and enjoying! Thanks! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SM_317

resss


heyyy manjiii🤗🤗 Hey SP 🤗
superrr amazinggg updatee yaar..👏👏
hayeee i totally LOVED this update..😳mann khush hogaya mera yeh padhke😉
m just lovingg d way sajan r openg up to each othr..😳 haha.. Thank youu!
omggg gunjan's dreams were wonderfulll..lol😆hayeee😍🤪
par gunjan ko bhi hamare tarah samrat ke dreams aaraha hai..😲ab woh bhi hamare samrat drooling sessions ko join karegi.😍.😉😳 usko drooling sessions ki zarwat nahi hai.. because Samrat toh uske hi paas hai.. Hum hi drool kar karke mann behlaate hai! haha
aawww sajan balconyy scene was soo adorableee.😳😍
omggg samrat blushedd😲hayeee i can totally imagine him doing that☺️☺️
loveddd d wayyy gunjan was teasingg samratt..😆😆🤣 hahah!
wonderfully written
noww eagerlyyy waiting 4 lonavla trip..😍
cont asap..
lovee uu TOO 🤗
SP,,

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sashazmohit

VERY VERY NICE MANJI

LOVED IT TO THE CORE
hope the dream seq come t rue
n the trip
cant wait now
tthnz for the pm
loved it

Thank youu soo much sadia! haha.. it will be more real and more grand than the dream she saw.. ! Keep reading!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kritianya

2222 gud
hope sajan ke bich sab kuch jaldi se thik ho jaye

Thank youu sooo much kriti!
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Posted: 13 years ago
"Finally, this long lasting tender will be over"
Gunjan told herself as they sat in the car to set off for their Lonavala trip. She looked at Samrat who sat by her looking straight. His expressions changed every few seconds. Gunjan wondered what he was thinking. Maybe he was thinking about her? Or maybe, as usual, about the tender. She enjoyed his expressions for sometime. It was as if he was talking to himself trying to figure out something or imagining something. Gunjan was intrigued. She never thought that someone could actually identify when another person was talking to himself or saying something in his mind but she could. Samrat's smile slightly widened, then Gunjan came to know he was thinking of something happy. When his smile stiffened she knew it was a bad thought or idea. After enjoying that for a while, she noticed that Samrat had started to blush again, she decided to tease him again, "Samrat.." He looked at her cutting through his thoughts. "What were you just thinking about?" she asked. Samrat looked confused. "What? Umm.. nothing.." he replied. "Dont lie, I know what you were thinking about!" she replied. Samrat looked shocked again, "WHAT?" he said looking at the road again. "I didn't know YOU would think about all THAT!" Gunjan said pretending to be shocked. "Samrat started to stutter, "Wh-what.. rub-rubbish!?" he replied. "Stop denying it! I know what you were thinking about!" Samrat looked even more surprised. There was no way in which she could come to know, "Gunjan I was not thinking about you!" he replied, speaking really fast! "WHAT?" Gunjan replied. "you were thinking about me?" she smiled. "HE was thinking about me, he was thinking about me YES!!" Her heart leapt in excitement! Samrat had lost it by now! "You just said you knew what I was thinking about?" he asked. "Oh God Samrat, how would I know what you were thinking about?" she laughed. Samrat concentrated on the road and promised himself not to give in on any of Gunjan's tricks. He was so embarrassed that he almost turned red. How could he be so foolish and blurt it out! Obviously she wouldn't know what he was thinking about! For the next ten minutes the car was silent as Gunjan kept thinking what Samrat was thinking about her? Did he really love her? Did he have the same feelings for her as she did? Gunjan's mind was full of questions and the answer only Samrat had. Gunjan thought it was a good idea to make him blurt everything out during the road journey. After sometime she asked again, "What were you thinking about me?" she asked. "I wasn't!" he replied. "Samrat, I know you were so dont lie!" she replied. "How are you so sure?" he asked. "You said you weren't that's why!" she replied. "But if I said I wasn't that means I wasn't!" "The fact that you said you weren't means you were!" Gunjan argued. "But I just said that I wasn't because you were thinking that I was!" he replied. "But why would I think you were? When you weren't?" she said trying to confuse him so that he tells her the full thing. But Samrat was cleverer this time. "Ok fine I was. Happy? I was thinking of how I would handle you for these 4 days!" he said. Gunjan opened her mouth in awe. "Then why did you ask me to come?" "because I knew you wanted to come?" "But why would I want to come when I didn't know that I could come." "But I had invites so I had to ask!" "No you didnt have to ask me to come, you wanted me to come so you asked me to come." "But even if I wanted you to come then why did you say yes?" "Because I wanted to come!" she said. "Hah! There. You said you wanted to come!" Samrat said. Gunjan just stared at him in disbelief. "See, its not only you whose is good at this!" he said. In about 5 seconds when both of them had realised what they had been doing for so long they began to laugh. They didn't want to stop. They just laughed and laughed and laughed. They were confusing each other and by the end of it they both were confused. "I have never laughed this way in ages!" Samrat commented. "Be with me a few more years and you'll learn much more!" Gunjan replied proudly.

The car came to a halt and they both got off. Their hotel, Lagoona Resort, was the best hotel of Lonavala and well Gunjan was used to these kind of places now. She had stayed with Samrat for 6 months now and everywhere they went Samrat always booked the best! Gunjan loved Samrat not for the money he had but for the his humbleness and for the fact that he didn't show off his great achievements and wealth. The receptionist showed them the way to their suite. They were very exhausted, physically as well as mentally! They both collapsed on the bed and breathed a sigh of relief. "Finally we are here.." Samrat said. After a while when they had freshened up, Gunjan asked, "So what's the schedule for these four days?" Samrat opened his briefcase and took out a sheet of paper. "Day 1 – We have a company meeting, where we will portray our ideas with the help of a slide show in the business centre here. Day 2 – We have a party in the evening, where we can talk to people and increase our contacts. Day 3 – We have another meeting in the morning and then the final event at night. Day 4 – we leave!" he said in excitement. Gunjan had not seen Samrat so excited for anything before. It sure meant alot to him. "So what should we do today?" she asked. "What do you want to do?" "How about a swim?" Gunjan suggested. "What?.." Samrat said finding it really awkward. "No" he said. "Oh kaay.. then you tell me what we can do at 4:30 in the evening!" she said. "I dont know!" he said, "I am usually at work this time! You say na?!" Gunjan thought for a while and said, "I told you, lets go swim you disagreed." "Thats because" he stopped. "Because I don't like swimming!" he replied looking away. Gunjan understood what he didn't want to say. "Ok, lets go for a walk?" she asked, she didn't want Samrat to be embarrassed either. "Okay! Thats fine with me." He said feeling better!

The weather was cool and the scene was beautiful. The hotel had maintained their garden very well. There were different kinds of trees and flowers. Both of them were just strolling away talking to each other about the trees, the tender, the weather but both of them had some feelings which they wanted to share. They wanted to hold hands as their hands brushed against each other. Gunjan wanted Samrat's arm to be around her and hers to be around him. But courage. That was something they both didnt have. They wanted to confess. They really wanted to be together. But Courage. They both had a fear inside them of losing one another. They had walked till the end and now had started to come back when it began to rain. The raindrops poured down on them and they both looked at each other with surprised faces. It didn't really rain in autumn. Samrat was actually SHOCKED where as Gunjan was SURPRISED. She let the rain fall on her but Samrat had different plans. "Lets GO!" he told Gunjan. "No way! In Calcutta whenever it used to rain I always used to get wet!" she said happily. Samrat was about to leave when she held his hand. "Your not going anywhere Samrat!" she ordered. "Gunjan its raining heavily now! We will fall ill!" he said. "I dont care!" she replied pulling him back. He watched her twirl in the rain and he stood there gawking at her in mesmerisation. She stopped as she saw that he was staring at her. "What happened?" she asked. He came out of his trance and shook his head. He held is hand out to her. "Waah! Samrat's in the mood to dance. So now he likes the rain!" she thought. She readily held his hand. But instead of dancing Samrat pulled her towards him. "Lets GO!" he said again. Gunjan got irritated, "Noo Samrat! Its fun here!" she said. "Your going to fall ill..!" he said with irritation. Gunjan stopped to think once but didn't care. She tried to free herself from samrat's hold but he had different plans. In a fraction of a second he lifted her in his arms and began to march towards the hotel. There was thunder and then lightening and a frightened Gunjan hugging Samrat. Samrat looked at her with love and she looked back at him, their eyes met. She was finally there, in his arms. His grip was tight and he walked steadily forwarded. And then.. *Aiichhoo* Gunjan sneezed. Samrat said nothing. She looked embarrassed. He had warned her that she would fall ill but she paid no heed to his words and now she was ill. He carried her drenched all the way to the room not noticing that they were being seen by Neil. His eyes widened and his mouth opened in awe. "Gunjan can't do this to me! She loves me.. doesn't she? She cannot forget us so fast! And Samrat Shergill he hasn't loved anyone in his life. What will he love Gunjan! This is all just bad timing. Maybe she fell Thats why he had to lift her up. He is looking annoyed anyway!" He tried to console himself.

Back in their room, Gunjan changed her clothes and came out to see a hot cup of coffee on her side table and Samrat sitting there drying his hair. He looked up at Gunjan as she came in. "I am sorry!" she said. "No Gunjan, why are you saying sorry, I should say sorry, If you would have stayed in the rain for a few more seconds then you would have been perfectly fine by now.!" He said. Gunjan sat down next to him, "I said na I am sorry... Why are you getting so angry?" She asked. "I have never seen you so angry before!" she commented. "When someone falls ill by mistake, I feel sorry, but when someone purposely WANTS to fall ill , obviously I will get angry!" he said as he got up and took his clothes out! "I promise I will listen to you from next time!" she said. Samrat smiled slightly and went to change. Gunjan sneezed again. "See Gunjan, Samrat cares sooo much for you! He was so angry today because of you! And.. and.. that moment when he lifted you up.. Even though he was angry you could feel his love and affection. How could I fall ill when my husband took so much care of me? No one could hurt me when he was around. I am falling in love again and again. How could someone care so much? How could someone express their affection and anger together? How could anyone be soo loving and just.. just fabulous!" Gunjan's heart leapt with joy as she thought about all the wonderful things Samrat had done for her. She was indeed very lucky to have him and obviously she gave most credit to Bui.. If not for her then Gunjan would be sitting with Neil now and the most amazing person on this planet would be sitting in his office and working!

As Samrat came out of the bathroom, Gunjan said sorry again. He smiled and said, "No its okay, but I dont understand why you want to fall ill?" Gunjan laughed at his comment. "I dont, but its so much fun to just let the raindrops fall on your face and you feel so nice and cool. Rain is just amazing. You should try it!" she said. Samrat didn't reply. Only he knew how much he hated the rain. He always caught a cold and he knew exactly how terrible it was when you would have to get up at night and cough and sneeze and all the throat aches and everything! He just wanted to protect Gunjan.

"Okay, leave all this! Lets go down for dinner." She said. Samrat agreed. Both of them went downstairs. Samrat was a little silent as he remembered him lifting Gunjan in his arms. He was smiling as he walked to the restaurant. Gunjan was also thinking about it. They both took a table and sat down. The buffet was set and the variety was vast. Their was a Chinese, Thai, Mexican and Indian section. Gunjan went to the Chinese section where as Samrat just followed her. As usual he was not fussy about food. Gunjan gave him all the things she loved. He just kept looking at everything Gunjan was putting on his plate. He didn't really have to work very hard to choose. Gunjan skipped the soup counter but Samrat got soup for her thinking that it would help cure her cold. Gunjan was so happy when Samrat told her the reason he had got her the soup. She just kept looking at him every now and then to see if he was actually enjoying the food. And truthfully he wasn't. Obviously he didnt say anything because that would hurt Gunjan's feelings but she knew it. Gunjan got up from the table and went to the Indian section. Samrat looked so confused because Gunjan didnt eat so much. Chinese as well as Indian? But before he realised what she was doing, the plate he had got before was replaced by a plate with kali Dal, Paneer and hot kulchas. He smiled as he looked at gunjan. "We are so different and yet, he makes me fall in love with whatever he does and whatever he eats" Gunjan thought. "You don't need to eat something you don't like." She told him. Samrat looked shocked, "How did you know that I didn't like it?" he asked. "Because of your expressions.!" She replied smiling away. "You know what..? I have never understood how people can have noodles with some gravy and all that. How do they like such oily food?" he commented. "Samraaat! Just because I am got you what you like doesn't mean you criticise Chinese food. Its my favourite!" she said proudly. "Yes yes. I know." He said.

They laughed at the table as they talked to each other. Neil sat at the parallel table and kept wondering why Gunjan hadn't noticed him yet. But little did he know how Gunjan felt and what new feelings had risen in their hearts. Neil didnt love Gunjan either, he used to but now she was a mere possession which he wanted. He had started to want her back in his life. He couldn't bear to see her with someone who actually made her happy. She couldn't see her smile with Samrat. He wanted to see that Gunjan who couldn't move when she had seen him at her reception party. Who was so silent and sad when Samrat was around her. He wanted to see the Gunjan who loved her more than anything. Gunjan had become a mere obsession for him whom he wanted to achieve at any cost.

That night was very long. They both lay on their bed while Gunjan coughed and sneezed. Samrat patted her shoulder so that she would stop. Gunjan was feeling cold at night so she slid her hands into Samrat's blanket and almost cuddled into him. Samrat smiled as he saw her little angel-like face so close to his. His heart wanted to move ahead and kiss her but his mind stopped him. She was happy now and all this may come as a shock to her Thats why he still searched for the right time.

Gunjan got dreams every night. Dreams which she yearned to come true. Dreams that she wanted to live. Dreams of Samrat and her together.. nothing extra ordinary. Just the same old day, but the difference was that they both were in love and were expressing it in different ways... :D

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Hope you liked the update.

Well I just wanted to say that My exams are starting from next week so this is my last update for the time-being. Will be back after my exams, which end on the 25th of Oct. Well.. its my 10th so I am leaving a week early this time.

Hope you guys understand, but I will be back with a great diwali bang! 🤣 like I always come back!

Thank youu.

Manjari

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Posted: 13 years ago
res..
*Edited*

It was Amazing..Amazingg...Amazinggg...
Just fantasticcc...
Totallly superb...
silly arguements in sam car...was luvly...Adorableee
And the Rain scene was also mindblowinggg
Especially that scenes when sam lift gunjan in his arms...OMG..OMG..OMG..OMG...
I don't beleive itt...!!!!
Awesomee yaaar...
Luved gunjan expressions...

Tooo goood

Cont soon..i can understand as i m also in 10th...
soo take ur time..And study well...



Edited by princess_sara - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
reserved..:))
*edited*..😆
hey manjiii...😳..
how are you??😛
i know u r good..we talk everyday..😆
ok coming to the update( don't want to get beaten by you..😭)...it was awesome..😳
samrat is so innocent and naive...😳..loved the part when he picks her up in his arms..😳..
it was seriously an amzing update...atlast there is some progression in their relationship...want to see them together soon...and please us neil ka kuch kar...he's such a PEST!!!...😡😡😡😡
plz update soon after ur exams...
Best Of Luck for your exams...😃
love
Ambika😳⭐️
P.S.- i unressed early this time..😛😆😉
Edited by ..Ambika.. - 13 years ago

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