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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Arians

Nyc update dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Beb0

Choo sweet n cute update peehu😳😃


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: annokhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prernasinghking

really awesome update thanks for the pm...abhay is always read to help piya in changing clothes naught abhay😉


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyarockz


peehu!

update!


ahaan and palak r so


for the pm!


for next update!



nice emos..loved it...thanks a lot..will update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shafaq_abhiya

ur FF is really awesome loved it thanks for the PM


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sdoll

sooo cute peehu. babies r super cute n abhiya r super duper cute, totally loved it dear.


thanks a lot...haha..babies are devils...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rashika27.1997

awesome update dear

ye doctor kaun hai???
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thanks..will reveal in next update...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 21


The days are not being easy for raichands. There are lots of things happening around them. Some are good and some bad. They still hope that they never face the worse. Chand and haseena are keeping the prophecy a secret for the time being as they already have lots of things to worry about. Abhay is annoyed because he will have to face the freak only for pia's sake. Aliya is enjoying every moment seeing abhay annoyed.

[living area]

C: so what have we got? Whats the development? What have you got?

Arjun: I went to jungle where all the killings took place. I followed the scent but it didn't lead me anywhere. I was going round and round. She is playing her cards too well. The place where ruhi was killed..i followed the scent and it lead me to north direction but then the scent disappeared. I found a new scent. I followed that and came back from where I started.

C: so u mean..we have got nothing about her location

Arjun: not yet…its difficult but not impossible. She is doing this not alone. she is confusing with different scents and all lead to one place. The starting point. I need some time..i will surely track her

C: what about you aliya? What do you see?

Aliya: I can Maithili but right now she is at peace. She is doing nothing. As and when I find anything suspicious, I will let you know

C: alright..so there is not much we got

S: I am starting panchi's training from today. She will definitely be a tough cookie to crack

C: fine then..get back to work.

H: aliya..when is ur friend coming?

Aliya: mom today…infact she can be here any time

H: abhay…please try to behave..you know its for pia

A: I know mom..i will be on my best behavior until and unless she does something

H: she wont…

A: I am fine then.

Suddenly the door bell rings. aliya rushes and opens the door.

A: I guess she is back

Aliya opens the door and finds alina standing there.

Aliya: als…u came…so glad to see you..

Alina: me too ali…

Aliya pulls alina in the house where all are waiting for her. everyone hugs alina except abhay.

H: hey alina..glad u came

Alina: no problem..what are friends for.

Arjun: so the trouble maker is back..u and aliya are gonna make my life hell..i need help

Alina: u bet…u really need a heavy dose of my powers (winking at aliya)

A: as if we don't know

Aliya: so…mr. akdu….finally u found someone

A: yes…and don't call me that

Alina: but that's the truth….u should learn to handle truth

A: alina..dont test my patience

Alina: so akdu has patience problem too

Aliya: enough…come I will take you to pia…she might be up

Alina: but where is sid..i heard he too found someone..mr. flirt finally ready to get hitched

Aliya: oh…he was here…I guess…he disappeared when he realized that u have come

Aliya takes alina to abhay's room. Abhay follows them.

[abhay's room]

Pia was up and was staring the walls. Aliya and abhay enterd with a new girl. But she seemed familier to pia. she was staring at alina and suddenly her mind struck and realized who she is.

Alina on the other hand is shocked to see pia and that too in this condition.

Alina: pia!! omg…is that you

Pia: alina…its you

Alina runs and hugs pia. abhay and aliya are confused seeing them this way

A: u both know each other?

P: obviously!!

Aliya: but how?

P: alina and I are childhood friends. Same school…but later she went to US for further studies. She wanted to be a doctor. But we were always in touch. I called her for our marriage too..but this devil was too busy

Alina: sorry pia..but look at you…u married this akdu and look what he did to you…he is gonna have bad time around me…but how did this happen

Pia: what?

Alina: I mean….not this….i mean u and akdu

A: u freak…don't call me that

Pia: but alina is right…u were akdu

A: u too pia…not fair…u will pay for this

Alina: don't u dare do anything

A: she is my wife..u freak..u cant stop me

Aliya: will you both stop..enough

P: but alina…how come you here and how do u know them

Alina: well..i am doctor remember…so came for you and ur little devils…I know everything about them..but there is something u don't know about me

P: ek aur secret!

Alina: well..actually I am a hybrid..just like ur devils..difference is that I am half vampire and half witch

P: what? But how come? And if u are a half vampire..then why didn't u age faster..i mean these kids..

Alina: but I am witch too. I had the power to control my ageing…so enjoyed every bit of my childhood. And now…I cant age

P: and how do you know them?

Alina: I was in US and raichands have stayed there. Actually we were neighbours..u can say that

P: I didn't knew this..i was always surrounded by supernaturals from my childhood.

A: oh pia..u are disaster prone..wherever there is danger…u are always found there

P: very funny

Alina: so lets check you…now am a doctor on duty..so pia behave

P: yes mam..

Alina gets her all medical kits and checks pia. she checks her bp and finds it quite high

Alina: pia..thats not good..ur blood pressure is very high and it needs to be lowered..now pia..close ur eyes and rest…I am gonna use my powers to check these kids..u will feel uncomfortable..restlessness…but please bear it…its for ur own sake. Abhay..hold pia..she might need ur support.

Abhay nodded and got hold of pia. he care fully placed his arms around pia and with othere supported her to sit.

Alina closed her eyes and chanted some chants. While chanting she placed her palm on pia's abdomen. Alina felt the kids presence and their aura. Pia on the other hand was feeling weird. Alina opened her eyes with a jerk and removed her hand and looked at abhay.

A: what?

Alina: these kids are different…

A: I know that

Alina: u are not getting my point..these kids are powerful..their aura is so strongthat I can feel their presence right now..right here. Abhay..they are special and have a great future ahead..and they surely are devils..they have powers which I cant describe but they were putting me off the radar continuously..

P: meaning?

Alina: they didn't wanted to be checked…anyways..right now..its fine..but don't know till when..because these kids are growing and have started craving for blood.

A: so what do we do?

Alina: right now wait..

[backyard of raichand house]

S: panchi…what are you doing

Panchi: what did I do

S: I am teaching you how to fight and you having frolic time

Panchi: fine..i will behave

S: consider me as ur enemy and run towards me to attack

Panchi sets her target and runs towards sid. They start fighting so fast like they are flying in air which can be hardly visible to human eyes. sid suddenly throws panchi on ground.

Panchi: you fool..what did you do?

S: that's fighting

Panchi got up and closed her eyes and concentrated. She swayed her arms in air and pointed towards sid. This time sid fell on ground.

S: what was that? How did u do it?

Panchi: don't know…it just happened..does this mean

S: yes..u can control wind..wow…I didn't knew this…

Meanwhile aliya comes running to backyard listening to noises

Aliya: what was that? Plz..dont break anything..mom will kill you both

S: panchi can control air

Aliya: what? Seriously? Vaise come fast..ur parents have come

S: not again

[living area]

Madhu: panchi..its time to leave..how long will you stay here. And we have a surprise

Panchi: what?

Madhu: ur marriage is bound to take place in 3 days..then u can stay here forever

H: I also wanted to talk about this. madhu..we wanted this marriage to a small affair as u knw pia is not keeping well thses days

Arnab: ofcourse..thats why we said 3 days…so that panchi comes here and can be with pia

Madhu: where is pia?

Aliya: she is with abhay..gone for checkup

Madhu: oh..i see…so panchi..lets go

Panchi: let me pack my bags…

Alina: hii aunty…how r u?

Madhu: alina..is that you

Alina: yes…I am here..and don't mind..but I am coming with panchi for three days..

Madhu: ofcourse..anytime..did u meet pia..

Alina: yes…happy to see her..but could you do that to pia…u let her get married to that akdu

Aliya: sorry aunty..abhay and alina are not fond of each other and she is here..because of me..she is my best friend form US

Arnab: the world is small..panchi..get going fast

Panchi leaves for packing and aliya and alina have mental talks.

Alina: als…don't worry..i will keep panchi away from blood..i will take care of her..

Aliya: u better ali…because we got no other option.

Alina and panchi leaves with arnab and madhu.

Abhay brings pia to the living room for a change and supports her to sit on sofa.

P: sorry..i was getting bored..so came here

Aliya: no entertainment factor going on

P: I heard..panchi getting married in 3 days..sid…u are gone

S: my dearest bro's wife…I can handle myself well…I the devil

A: no..u are not..someone are arriving to give you competition.

S: I wanna talk to them

A: Go ahead..try..if u wanna connect

Aliya: we all will connect together to the devils

Aliya, arjun, sid and abhay…holds each other hand. Abhay concentrates and connects himself to kids.

A: ahaan and palak..look who is here

Both: hi dadda…

Ahaan: dadda..u didn't teash my mom na?

A: no I didn't

Palak: so..aunt aliya, uncle sid and arjun chachu is here

Aliya: how come u called arjun chachu and remaining as uncle and aunt

Ahaan: becoj we know…u will plefer that..uncle sid wants to be called as jusht sid

S: u both are intelligent

Arjun: u said that abhay teases ur mom..what does he do?

Palak: solly chachu…I wont tell you…and u alsho..dont teash my aunt aliya

A: today..what do you want

Ahaan: dadda..u shpend shome time with my momma…alone

S: that he always do

Palak: sid..u take care of my maashi…

S: u kids know everything

Ahaan: sid..u will play football with me na…I wanna kick someone..palak I mean

Palak: no..sid will never do that..

Ahaan: he will

Palak:P no

Ahaan: yesh

Palak: no

Ahaan: yesh

Palak: no

Ahaan: yesh

Palak: sid will not do this otherwise I will make him my carriage

Ahaan: yesh..he will..otherwise I will make him my carriage

S: stop it..u little devils..why do you wanna make as ur carriage..look for ur dadda..not me

Ahaan: sholly sid..but u are booked..and I know..dadda will be bushy with momma

Arjun: they surely are true raichands

Aliya: they know you too well bhai..

A: very funny…and u kids..behave…

Both: ok..and remember your plomish dadda…bye evelyone

They break the connection.

Everone are staring at abhay

A: what?

Aliya: how do u tease pia?

S: tell me na..i need some advices from experience holder

Arjun: how about dad..he can give you advice

S: shut up arjun!

A: are you done? And pia…u need rest…

P: but I came just now

Aliya: go pia..he has a promise to fulfill

Abhay rolls his eyes and takes pia to his room and makes her sit comfortably

Abhay is staring at pia mischievously and sits next to her

P: what?

A: u r the main culprit..u told kids everything

P: oh I was just talking about you..they should know their dadda inside out na

Pia puts her arm around abhay and pushes him on bed.

A: what are you doing? U need rest pia..u should be carefull…always being so stubborn and

Before abhay could finish..pia came closer and kissed his upper lip and then lower exploring everybit of it. abhay finally gave in and responded with same passion. They lay their kissing for some minutes. Finally abhay broke off and looked at pia

A: you surely are momma of these brats

P: and u dadda..

With this…abhay made pia sleep in his arms kissing her forehead

A: good night











That's it for now. I hope you like it. hit like button if you like and do comment. I will be waiting for them.

Edited by peehu24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey dear awesome update I so loved it yaar😆😆.Abhiya scene was cute.Thnk god alina was not Abhay's ex & was Pia's Bff thts gud yaar.Sidchi marry.Agn happy moment.Abhiya's baby r so cute yaar.I adore thm.Sid ki wat lagne wali hai😆😆

Edited by cuteshrishti - 13 years ago

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