FF- Shaadi Mubarak! IMP NOTE pg. 83 - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago
luvly update dear
luvd shanak convo & abeer - laher's cute scene
update the next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one yaar.plz cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
afiya...dea yr going superb
short updates hi sahi but they r super fab

i missed parts 6 7 8 n read them in one go n they r all so freaking good

cant wait fr more
pls update soon:)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Afiya

Loved the update,👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Loved the convo with the familes.😃 Specially Abeer's Mom Dad are very Cute & sweet.😃 As always Arohi arjun rocked the update 😉,,,,,,,,but yeh Shanak ke baare mein kab likh paungi. Plz yaar give more space to Shanak.😳 Waise loved the Discribtion of plam Beach.😍 Couples enjoyed very much & Arjun as always Rocked it. Crap part was Feb.😆 😆

Shaan & khanak's convo was beautiful & touchy.😊 Thank u for showing the romance between Abeer & Lehar.😍 Warna who dono Bor bante ja rahe the,😊 Loved their romantic exchanges.😍 Loved the bonding & relation shared by Friends.😊 ROFL @ Shanshank timings 😆 & Abeers irritation.😉 😛 Waise yaar bahot time le rahe ho ap update dene mein.😒 Busy with Studies Kya???😃 Chalo try to update soon if possible.😊 & Do well in Studies.👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼


Take care. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Waiting for the next part………Jaldi dena,😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

Love 😊

Pranjal.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Hey Afiya

Loved the update,👏

Loved the convo with the familes.😃 Specially Abeer's Mom Dad are very Cute & sweet.😃 As always Arohi arjun rocked the update 😉,,,,,,,,but yeh Shanak ke baare mein kab likh paungi. Plz yaar give more space to Shanak.😳 Waise loved the Discribtion of plam Beach.😍 Couples enjoyed very much & Arjun as always Rocked it. Crap part was Feb.😆 😆

Shaan & khanak's convo was beautiful & touchy.😊 Thank u for showing the romance between Abeer & Lehar.😍 Warna who dono Bor bante ja rahe the,😊 Loved their romantic exchanges.😍 Loved the bonding & relation shared by Friends.😊 ROFL @ Shanshank timings 😆 & Abeers irritation.😉 😛 Waise yaar bahot time le rahe ho ap update dene mein.😒 Busy with Studies Kya??😃? Chalo try to update soon if possible.😊 & Do well in Studies.👍🏼


Take care. 🤗

Waiting for the next part'''Jaldi dena,😳

Love 😊



Pranjal.



Blarghh yess!! i never get a chance to write anymore :( but i will try! especially on shanak, i don't know how to take their story forward, any suggestions??
Edited by AfiyaZ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful afiya loved the beach talk of shaan and khanak .arjun man this guys is such a joker .love him but .and leher and abeer romance in the night hayeee.it was a nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for not updating sooner! I hope this part is long enough for you guys! :)

Part 9 -

What the HELL Arjun?!?! Tu apni boxers me khara hua hain, aur tera saamaan sab jaga hain, You're such a pig! Shashank yelled looked disgustedly at Arjun


Haan, toh kya hua? Ye mera kamra hai *he pointed at himself* Aur ye ek aazad country hain, I can roam around in my boxers if I feel like it! Arjun exclaimed.


Chee yaar, teri boxers mein "Pure Punjabi" likha hua hain, how downmarket! Aur tera kamra hain? Yeh mera kamra hain, we share it Idiot! Atleast clean your stuff, and for god's sake wear some pants!! Shashank screamed.


Kyun, tujhe sharaam ata hain kya? Arjun asked smiling at Shashank , nudging him playfully


ARJUN!! * Shashank threw a pair of pants at him*


*Shaan and Abeer walked into the room, plugging their ears* I told you they wouldn't be able to share a room together, Shaan told Abeer. Ek Shaadi shudha couple ke tara jhagra kar raha hain, he said


Shaan, yaar tu dekh, hamare kaamra ka kya haalat kar diya! Aur upar se who naanga ghoom raha hain! Shashank exclaimed.


Aye! Half naanga! Arjun said accusing Shashank


Dude, kya kar raha hain, wear some pants, Abeer said.


I was, until this gaddha * Arjun pointed at Shashank* started to yell, mujhe raat main garmi ata hain, you know that! Arjun said


Haan, lekin meri bhai, yeh college nahi hain, is ghar mein 3 ladkiyaan rehte hain, kuch toh sharam kar! Shaan said while Arjun pulled on some pants, aur Shashank tu chillana band kar, I swear I'll go deaf in this house! He said.


Now come on, hug each other and say sorry, Abeer said.


*Arjun scoffed while Shashank rolled his eyes* Very funny, Never! They both exclaimed.


Shashank went into the bathroom, muttering about Arjun, while the other three guys went downstairs for breakfast, there they found Leher, Khanak and Preeti laughing and making breakfast.


*Khanak giggled* Aaj kya hua? She asked Shaan.


Poochho maat, ye dono ka jhagra jab shuru hota hain, toh khatam nahi hota! Shaan said taking a seat.


Arohi and Shashank both came down the stairs and took a seat in the kitchen


Good morning Shashank, Leher smiled at Shashank


Good morning, He said unenthusiastically


Kya hua, aaj itni upset kyun lag rahee ho? She asked.


Bhabhi! Kya bataoon, yeh Punjabi Idiot * He pointed at Arjun while Arjun threatened him by holding up a butter knife* to jeena haram kar diya! Shashank said


Tum dono, jhagra kyun karrahe thay? Arohi asked.


Shashank told everyone about what happened, while the rest beside Arjun and Arohi were laughing.


HOW CHEAP! Itna ganda koi kaise ho sakhta hain? Arohi asked Arjun.


Ganda?! Excuse me, I'm the hottest guy there is here! Arjun said


*Arohi looked like she was going to be sick* EWWHH!


You, know it's true, Arjun smiled as he drank his coffee


Just then the phone rang, and Leher went to pick it up


HI mumma, jee… okay..mmhmm, theek hain toh milte hain, Leher said as she hung up the phone.


Kya kahhan unho ne? Abeer asked.


They're all coming here, to plan out everything, there's so much to do, Abeer! Leher said.


Shit, Leher isn't today the 15th? Don't we have our Wedding card appointment today? Abeer asked.


*Leher looked horrified* Abeer! I don't think we have time to go there, it's so far away, and Mumma wants us to stay home, what are we going to do? She said looking stressed.


Everyone sat there awkwardly looking at Leher pacing around the room


*Leher seemed to get an idea* Khanak! Kya tum waha jaa sakhtee ho? Leher asked.


Kya? Kyun, main udhar ja kar kya karoongi? She asked.


Khanak, you're the designer out of all of us, and you know my style, can you please go there! Pleaseee! Leher wailed.


OKayy, but it's you wedding card, don't you want to pick it? Khanak asked looking unsure


Haan toh, tu waha jaa kar 3 design pick kar, or whatever and then bring them home, and me and Abeer will choose the one we like! Leher said.


Hmm, sure I guess I can do that, Arohi you wanna come with me? Khanak asked.


Noo, Khanak Star One's having a Shahid Kapoor marathon today, on tv! Jab We Met, Kismat Konnection, all of them! Arohi said.


*Khanak rolled her eyes, while Arjun pretended to choke on his coffee* I don't want to go alone! Khanak wailed.


Shaan, why don't you go with Khanak? Abeer asked Shaan, while he was on his Blackberry


Yea! Shaan please go with Khanak? Leher pleaded.


Umm yeah, sure no problem! Shaan agreed.


*Leher sighed* God, thanks guys! Okay so you guys just go ahead for the appointment, and Abeer give Shaan the directions, Leher said making a checklist of what needed to be done


Khanak went upstairs to get ready, while Shaan got directions. Arohi went and plopped herself on the couch and Preeti and Shashank followed her.

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All set? Shaan asked putting on his sunglasses


Yup! Khanak answered, closing the passenger door behind her.


Shaan set the GPS, while Khanak browsed around Abeer's car for Cd's.


I love Abeer and all, but he has horrible taste in music! Khanak said, while putting back the CD's


I know, he always had different taste in music, Shaan agreed.


Do you mind? Khanak asked pointing at the radio


Not at all, Shaan said


Khanak browsed through the stations, not liking any of them until she stopped at Hum Desi Radio, Shaan burst out laughing


OH my god, remember that night, and that taxi driver? He asked


*Khanak giggled* How could I forget him jee! He was so interesting jee! She exclaimed mimicking the taxi driver


*Shaan chuckled* God what a night! He said.


They decided on that station and listened to advertisements of random indian stores, and old songs, until Anjaana Anjaani came up and Khanak turned up the volume


I love this song! She exclaimed.

She sang along to the lyrics

All the anjaana's say yea yea yea
All the anjaani's say yea yea yea
I met a boy and his name is anjaana


Shaan started to sing along, while Khanak smiled


Anjaani raahon mein ek humsafar mili …I met a girl and her name is anjaani * he smiled at Khanak

Anjaana khwab tha, ban gaya zindagi


Both of them sang enthusiastically

Yun hi hoti hai na
Sab ki kahaani
Shuru hogi kahan
Kisi ne na jaani
Itfaaqon mein, laakhon mein, milte hai ajnabi

Anjaana aa aa
Anjaani ee ee
Mil gaye eh eh
Toh bani ee ee
Kahaani ee ee

Anjaana aa aa
Anjaani ee ee
Mil gaye eh eh
Toh bani ee ee
Kahaani ee ee

The song stopped and they smiled to themselves


You know, the song fits us, I mean we didn't know each other, and maybe we'll have a kahaani! She exclaimed jokingly


*Shaan laughed* Maybe…


They had reached the Wedding Card place, and stepped out to head into the store


Hi, we have an appointment here for 2:30, Shaan told the receptionist


Right on time, you guys can go in, she smiled at Shaan and Khanak


As the two walked into the room, they were amazed with the decoration of the room! There were posters of every Bollywood wedding movie you can think of! Band Baaja Baarat through Dilwale Dulhania Le Jayenge, everything was there.


Wow, this is HEAVEN for Arohi, Khanak laughed.


*Shaan chuckled* She'd faint in here


Just then a short stubby man walked into the room


Hello, are you here for appointment? He asked taking a seat.


Yea, we'd like to see your wedding card options, Khanak said choosing a seat while Shaan sat next to her


Oh, okay, *he placed many samples on the table* What kind are you looking for? He asked.


Umm, nothing too over the top, simple, yet elegant, Khanak said.


He placed 5 different designs on in front of them, and Khanak choose three of them


I like these, Leher would too na? Khanak asked Shaan

Yea, especially that one * Shaan pointed towards the one that was like a scroll* I like that one, Shaan replied.


Me too *Khanak smiled* We like these three, can we take the samples home and decide on them? Khanak asked.


Ofcourse, ofcourse! Decide on what you like Ms. ….., he stopped short asking Khanak for her name


Khanak, Khanak Kapoor, she replied.


And you? He asked Shaan


Shantanu Khandelwal, he answered.


Great, great, so how big would you want the text to be? Do you want "Shantanu weds Khanak" in the center, or at the top? Or we could make the design heart-shaped and we could have your names there, he said.


*Khanak and Shaan looked baffled* Oh no no no. No we're not getting married, our friends are, Khank answered quickly turning red


Oh I see * the man chuckled* so when are YOU two getting married? Too scared for responsibility? He laughed


No sir *Shaan gritted his teeth* we're not a couple, just friends, * God, why does everyone assume we're a couple! He thought in his head*


Oh, my apologies * he took a pause* But you know, you two would look great as a couple!


*Khanak laughed nervously, while Shaan turned red this time* Thank you, we'll take your leave now, with that Khanak and Shaan left the room as fast as they could.


*After walking back to the car in silence…* Well, that was awkward, Shaan said in the car closing his door.


Tell me about it, Khanak relaxed in her seat and opened her window


Shaan turned on the radio and hummed to some of the songs


Shaan look! * Khanak pointed towards some Kangaroos that were on the field close to the highway*


Shaan turned around and Khanak's hair clouded around his face, he took in a whiff of strawberries and jasmine, losing his senses to the softness of her hair


Shaan, did you see that? Khanak asked eagerly turning around


Shaan snapped back into reality and faced Khanak's big, brown eyes


Wasn't it amazing? She asked


Yeah* he was lost for words* amazing. *The word lingered on his lips as he drove down the highway.* __________________________________________________________________________________


As they were driving the wind turned warm, and there was a light breeze in the car, Khanak slowly nodded off into a nap, the sun kept coming up and bothered her. Shaan noticed this and used his hands to block the sun to cover her face, he saw that a piece of her hair was on her face, annoying her. He pushed it back feeling the smoothness of her skin...


Please Comment!! I don't know if this part was good or not...


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Posted: 13 years ago
wowiiieee!! :) nice updatee!

i was actually smiling of the stupidity of Arjun and Shaskank :P hahahaha it was ffunnny!!
and shaan and khanak, everyone thinks they are a couple... looks like they will beee an awesome onneee :)

waiting for their nok- jok and shanak times! :D

i miss ur updates! please update more often! i wanna get into the shanak times ASAP :) hahaha
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww lovely update dear .loved the shashanak and arjun fight in the room .typical boys u see .loved it and the dinning table part were shashank said wht happened arohi giving that weird expressions .loved their sweet tug of war .they are simply adorable.shaan and khank going to pic the wedding cards for their friends loved the drive to the shop the song is just perfect for them.loved it and the guys thinking these two as couple was really sweet loved their reactions .hmmm and the last paras were just blisss hayeee maar jawa .cant wait for the next
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update afiya👏

they guys room art was fun😆

the dining conv was nice😊

loved the car ride part and the way shanak were singing😉

hmmm undoubtedly they'll make a gr8 couple😍

hmm finally he realized that she's amazing🥳

continue asap

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