MAANEET SS;Destiny or Faith..Thrd 2..upd Pt25 Pg71

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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: sukklover

wid...😉

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me 4 that...😃

ur updates r wid

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me dears...

so much.....

really

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dear...👍🏼

tons of 4 u dear...

at last wishing u

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Tama

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Posted: 13 years ago

#192

Thanku so much friends...the highest ever likes i have got for my SS

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minnie_tweetie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#193

PART-20

A car stops in front of geet''.geet is completely shocked'..its a group of boys''geet is getting worried now'..a boy comes out of the car and starts moving close to geet.

Boy: lagta hai aap kisi auto ka wait kar rahi hai'chaliye main apko chod deta hu

Geet: jee nahin muje apki koi zarurat nahin hai'main khud chali jaungi

Boy: arey aap samaj nahin rahi hai'raat kafi ho gayi hai'chaliye main apko chod deta hu'aiye aap car mein baithiye

Geet: lagta hai apko sunta kam hai..maine kaha nai main chali jaungi'aap jaiye yaha se

Geet is about to move from there''.the boy starts following him'..he is about to touch geet'..where in someone comes from behind and stops the guy from holding geet'..

Boy: tum kaun ho??

Maan: main tumhe ye batana zaruri nahin samajta

Geet overhears the conversation and feels maan's presence near her'.she turns back and its maan

She runs and hugs him''..maahi all the way'maan breaks the hug and tells geet to move behind. He approaches that boy

Maan: tumhari himmat kaise hui geet ko haath lagane ki

Boy: main to unki help karni ki koshish kar raha tha aap to mere pichhe pad gaye'.

Maan: agar ek minute mein tum yaha se gayab nahi hue na'to tumhara aisa haal karunga ki zindagi bhar apni shakal ko pehchaan nahi paoge

Maan stares him so badly that the boy thinks to leave from that place''.

meanwhile geet comes towards maan and tries to cool him down

Geet: toh maan singh khurana ko gussa bhi aata hai??

Maan: chup kar jao geet'.ye kaunsa time hai ghar jaane ka''tumhe time dikh raha hai kya ho raha hai

Geet keeps quiet and listens to him

Maan: agar aaj main waqt pe nahin aata to pata nahin kya ho jata,, tum bhi na geet'or jab tumhe adi ne kaha tha office ki car le jane ko to tumhe aise hi jaane ki kya zarurat thi???

Maan: main tumse kuch puch raha hu geet'.muje jawab chaiye??

Geet: vo main'..

Maan: vo main kya geet'..agar tumhe aaj kuch ho jata to???

Geet: kuch nahin hota muje aap jo ho mere saath''.

Both of them share an eyelock'''.finally geet breaks the eyelock''

Geet: par aap muje bataiye aap yaha par kya kar rahe hai'..apko aaram karne ko bola hai na''

Maan: vo geet'main bilkul thi ku,,,,or ghar pe aaram karke bore ho gaya tha to socha office aa jau or kal ka thoda kaam dekh lu

Geet: dekhiye aap apna bilkul khayal nahi rakhte'..ek din aap aaram se nahi baith sakte

Maan: ye acha hai'ek to maine tumhari madad ki or tum muje hi upar se suna rahi ho'or maine kaha na main bilkul thik hu

Maan: agar aaj tumhara ladne ke hi iraada hai to thik hai'hum yahi reh lete hai'.waise tum agar bhool gayi ho to main tumhe yaad karwa deta hu ki tum ghar jaane mein already late ho gayi ho

Geet: hey babaji,, main to bhool hi gayi thi''chaliye ab main chalti hu'beeji or meera dim era intezaar kar rahi hongi

Maan: ruko akele kaha ja rahi ho'main tumhe chod deta hu'..waise bhi kafi raat ho gayi hai'or main nahi chahta kit um akele jao

Geet: nahin maan sir main chali jaungi

Maan: tumne suna nahin maine kya kaha chup chap se jakkar gaadi mein baith jao nahin to muje tumhe khud uthakar gaadi mein bithana padega'ab soch lo tum kya chahte ho

Geet nods her head and goes and sits in the car quietly''..the full way they both kept quiet and dint spoke up at all'..finally they reach geet's place''maan comes and opens the car's door for geet'.geet comes out of the car'..

Geet: aap andar nahin ayenge

Maan: phir kabhi geet abhi muje kafi kaam hai or phir mom bhi mera wait kar rahi hongi

Geet: aayiye na beeji apse milkar kafi khush hongi

Maan: nahi geet phir kabhi..or ab tum jao subah jaldi aana hai na office..kal imp meeting bhi to hai na

Geet: ab uski tension mat kijiye bas apna khayal rakhiye''maine presentation ki saari tyari kar di hai

Maan: thanku geet'tumhari hote muje kisi baat ki tension nahi hai

Geet: par aap muje promise kijiye ki aap abhi ke abhi ghar jaenge or aaram karenge''

Maan: thik hai geet

Geet: chaliye thik hai ab main chalti hu'subah office mein milenge

Geet goes towards her room'.where maan calls her.

Maan: geet

Geet turns back'..

Geet: kuch kehna tha kya???

Maan: main yeh kehna chahte tha'.

Geet: kahiye na kya kehna tha

Maan: main ye kehna chahta tha ki raat kafi ho gayi hai'.good night geet

Geet: ye kehna tha apne or maine socha ki aap

Maan: main kya geet

Geet: chaliye chodiye'..good night maan sir

Geet leaves from there'..

Maan(self thought) main jaanta hu geet ki tum mujse kya sunna chahti ho par main itni aasani se vo nahin kahunga '.tumhe thoda intezaar or karna padega geet

Both of them leaves'..

Beeji: puttar aaj to badi der kar di aane mein hum kab se intezaar kar rahe the

Geet: vo beeji office main kafi kaam tha kale k important presentation hai upar se maan sir aaj office mein nahin the..unka accident ho gaya aaj subah

Meera: to ab vo thik hai na

Geet: haan bilkul thik hai..ab wahi to muje chodne aye the

Beeji: par tune unhe aise hi kyu jaane dia'andar to bulati na unhe

Geet: beeji maine kaha tha par vo mane nahi'.bola phir kabhi ayenge

Maan in the car thinking to gift a mobile to geet''

Maan(self thought) main kal hi geet ko ek acha sa mobile phone gift kar dunga'.phir use baat karne mein bhi problem nahi hogi..haan yahi thik rahega

Savitri: maan bte aap kaha chale gaye the'pata hi muje kitni fikr ho rahi thi aapki

Maan: vo mom geet office mein akele kaam kar rahi thi'..to socha main uski help kar du

Savitri(smiles): acha to aap geet ke pass gaye the

Maan: mom kal ek kafi imp presentation hai to vo bechari akeli kaam kar rahi thi

Dev: bro apne mujse keh dia hota main chala jaata geet ki help karne

Maan: aisi koi baat nahin hai dev..ab main bilkul thik hu or project ka tumhe kuch bhi pata nahin than a

Savitri: chaloye maan jaisi apki marzi'ab aap jaakar rest kijiye

Maan: ji mom..waise bhi kal muje jaldi jana hai office

Maan leaves from there'..savitri is smiling'

Dev: kya baat hai mom..abhi thodi der pehle aap pareshan ho rahi thi bro ke lie or ab aap smile kar rahi hai

Savitri: mere muskurane ka kaaran aap bahut jald samaj jaenge dev..bas thoda intezaar kijiye'hum chahte hai vo baat maan hum sab ko bataye

Dev: main kuch samja nahin mom'..

Savitri: bhagwan ne chaha to ako jaldi hi ek or achi khabar milne wali hai

Savitri devi leaves saying so'.on the other hand maan and geet are both lost in each other thoughts and they sleep in the same way'''

Next morning:

Geet comes to the office and sees a gift lying on her table'..she opens the gift and finds a mobile phone in it'.alongwith it is a letter for geet.

Geet,

Ye meri taraf se ek chotta sa gift tumhare liye'..main jaanta hu tum soch rahi hogi ki achanak se mobile ki kya zarurat aa gayi par ye zaruri tha geet'or muje ye kal samaj aayi'' main jaanta hu ki tumhe ye gift lene main pareshani bhi hogi par please isse lene se mana mat karna'..isse tumhari beeji jab chahe tumse baat kar sakengi or main bhi tumse baat kar sakunga

Maan.

Geet is so happy reading that letter'she immediately msgs maan with a Thank you msg''

Maan is in his cabin with that lady'.he dint see his mobile as it was on silent mode'

Geet(self thought) ye maan sir reply kyu nahi kar rahe hai'.ek kaam karti hu unke cabin mein jaakar hi unhe thanku bol deti hu or unki tabiyat bhi puch lungi kaisi hai..haan yahi thi rahega

Precap: geet feeling jealous'''..😉😉

Please check the next page for next update😳
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Part 21

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#194

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hmm...aisa kaise ho saktha hai k maan ki mishty ko uski zarurat ho aur maan waha na pauche

hehe uss ladke ki toh saase rukh gayi hongi jab maan ne usse apne gusse bhare lal aakhon se dekha hoga 😆😆😆

loved d way maan ordered geet to sit in his car o geet tune kyun maan ki baat maanli warna wo tujhe khud apni baho mein utakar le jaatana ...achha kasa oppourtunity miss kar diya

ok so maan ne geet ko mobile gift kiya hmm...jealous geet

let me go to the next post

and look me first again

love-Piya

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minnie_tweetie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#195

PART-21

Geet goes to maan's cabin'..Adi stops her in between and tells that maan is discussing something important about the project with the lady and has told that he should not be disturbed'.geet feels awkward about this'.she still goes. Maan and the lady are smiling on some talk.

Geet(self thought) acha to ye important meeting chal rahi hai'.isliye inhe disturb nahi karna chaiye'dekho zara kaise muskura muskura kar baatein kar rahe hai'..mere msg tak ka jawab nahin dia'dekh rahe hai na aap babaji..ek hi raat mein itna badal gaye hai

Geet(self thought) muje bhi inse baat nahi karni chado'..

She is about to go as she bangs in with the wall'maan notices her and immediately comes out of the cabin'..she has hurt her head badly'.

Maan: geet tum thik to ho na

Geet(angrily) aapko kya farq pad raha hai..jaiye or apni vo angrezz ladki se jakar baatein kijiye

Maan: geet lao muje dikhao'dekho ispe to swelling aa rahi hai

Geet: maine kaha na main thik hu'.aap jaiye yaha se

Maan: bas geet bahut hua,,,,dikhao muje abhi'

He sees her head, takes out her handkerchief, and tries to bring down the swelling

Maan: dekho geet hame doctor ko dikha dena chahiye

Geet: main bilkul thik hu'.maine kaha na'or apki vo miss'' job hi hai..apka wait kar rahi hai..ap jaiye yaha se

Geet leaves from there'

Maan(self thought) ab isse kya hua'..aisa karta hu pehle meeting khatam karta hu or phir geet se baat karunga

Maan finishes with his meeting''it was quite successful and the deal was fixed'.he mentions geet's name with the lady client that she had all alone worked for this project. Maan notices his cell and it was geet msg flashing on the cell..

Maan(S.T) geet ka message'ye to usne kafi der pehle kia tha'shayad tabhi gussa hogyi muje''ab kya karu''.aisa karta hu use msg karke dekhta hu shayad mood thik ho gaya ho

Geet is sitting in a disastrous mood'.she receives a message on her cell

Geet(self thought) ye message kiska aaya'.abhi to muje cell mil hai..na hi maine kiski ko apna number dia hai to phir'chal dekh geet she opens the message'its maan's number

Maan(message) M so sorry geet'.vo meeting main busy tha cell dekha hi nahin

Geet(self thought)'haan haan aap dhyan kyu denge''.vo miss foreigner se fursat ho to cell dekhenge na'.muje nai karni hai unse koi baat'.

She keeps her cell aside and starts working''.in the meantime she receives a message again on her cell'its again maan's message

Maan(message): ab itna bhi kya gussa hua ek reply to kar hi sakti ho na'..main kaha na meeting mein busy tha to kaise reply karta

Geet finally replies him

Geet(message): dekhiye aap free honge par muje kafi zyada kaam hai'so please muje disturb mat kijiye

Maan(self thought) lagta hai madam ka mood kuch zyada hi kharab hai'ab muje hi kuch karna hoga

Maan messages her again

Maan(message): thik hai geet..main office ke kaam se bahar ja raha hu'tum bhi apna kaam kar lo'..main nahin chahta meri wajah se tumhara kaam kharab ho

Geet(self thought) he babaji dekhiye zara inhe'.. "main nahin chahta ki meri wajah se tumhara kaam kharab ho"'..pata nahi kya ho gaya hai'..mujse baat karne ki jagah kahi ja rahe hai''chaado..muje bhi unki koi parwah nahin hai''kya socha tha ki jaise hi project hame milega'hum dono coffee pene jaenge'..par saara ka saara programme mitti mein

Maan leaves from the office but before that he tells adi that he would be late as he is going for an important piece of work'..geet is busy in her work'..but at the same time she is feeling bad too'..

Geet(self thought) pata nahin ye maan sir kaha chale gaye hai or koi pata nahin'..abhi abhi thik hue hai...ab kisse pata karu'adi sir se puchti hu shayad unhe kuch pata ho

Geet: adi sir vo maan sir kahin dikh nahi rahe'apko pata hai ki vo kab wapis ayenge

Adi: nahin geet pata nahin kaha gaye hai par haan unhone kaha tha vo thoda late ho jaenge

Geet: acha'thik hai sir

Adi: koi kaam tha kya geet??

Geet: nahin sir vo project ke silsile mein koi baat karni thi'..chalo jab vo ayenge tab baat kar lenge

Adi: chalo thik hai geet

Adi 's cell rings up and maan is online'..maan tells him to tell geet to come for an urgent meeting''he tells that he had skipped some important details which were with geet'.and also tells him to tell geet to come in the office car as the car driver knew the exact location where maan was.

Adi: geet maan sir ne tumhe abhi bulaya hai vo koi details hai jo tumhare pass hai unhe abhi chaiye or haan office ki car mein aane ko kaha hai

Geet: par adi sir maine vo saari files maan sir ko de di thi ab or kya hoga

Adi: pata nahi geet muje sir ne jo bola maine tumhe bata dia,,or haan jaldi jao

Geet: thik hai sir

Geet(self thought) ye maan sir kaunsi details ki baat kar rahe hai'..maine subah hi to sab files unke table par rakh di thi'..chalo jakar dekhte hai''waise bhi ab time ho gaya hai apna bag bhi saath le jaati hu'..chal geet warna maan sir pata nahi gussa ho jaenge

Geet goes with the driver''the driver drops geet at a hotel''.

Geet: maan sir ne yaha par aane ko kaha tha kya??

Driver: ji madam sir ne yahi address dia tha'..

Geet: chalo thik hai''tum jao main pata karti hu

Geet(self thought) ab main kisse puchu ki maan sir kaha par hai'..or ye metting kaha ho rahi hai

Suddenly geet's cell beeps and its maan's message

Well what do u think guys what will happen''I won't be giving any precap so u guys will guess and tell me'..😉

Will be waiting'..😃

Hope u like the update😳😳

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#196

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jealous geet was too too good yaar hehe i couldn't stop laughing

maaneet k messages bhi achhe the sach kahu i m falling short of words today itna achha update tha

khair aage kya honewala hai wo toh mujhe pata hai isliye main filhaal chup hi rehthi hoon agar maine apna muh khol diya toh sabko pata chal jaayega u know na teri friend kitna bolti hai

amazing update and yes me first again

love-Piya

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-knirwal-

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#197

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me second o balle bale shawa shawa

di apne to double update deke muje shock me shod dia...

both update r mindblowing...kehte hai special peices

pehle first update

muje laga tha maan ki gadi hogi but ye to gunde nikle...sale kase geet ke peche pad gai..lagta tha behre hai aur ande bi...pata nahi tha ke kise panga le rahe ho.would be MRS khurana se..to maan ji apko ase hi apne geet ko chune dege...hut dufar kahi ke😆..maan ko to marne ki bi jaroort nahi padi..uski ankhoo se hi dar gai..agr mar kahte to unka kya hota😆wase sooch kar deko

geet ne maan ka gussa pehli baar dekha...vo bi bahot katanak...

maan ka dialogue..apne app gadi me baath jao warna utakar leke jaoga..geet apne ap kyu jakar bathi..maan bechara soch raha hoga acha kasa chance haath se gaya geet ko utane ka..

savitri ji ki tarah meri bi hasi nahi ruk rahi..apne aur piya di ne muje bahot hasa diya ajj..me not stoping😆

maan ka idea bahot acha tha geet ko mobile gift kane ka...imean idea to apka tha..😉

now second update

geet maan ke husne se kitni jealous ho gai...agar kbi koi maan ke karib ane ki kosish kar tab kya hoga😲...sayad use to geet mar degi...

but i like she feeling jealous...

maaneet msg is simply superb...

pehle to geet ne baat nahi ki baad me maan ke lia pareshan bi ho gai...that is love

wase precap me guess karo ke rehne do...tuka marke dekte hai...

maan ne geet ke kuch surprise plan kia hoga...and hope he will also confess...

wase itnk bada commnt chalega kya

cont soon di

love u alot my jaan