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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Another fab update Nayika ..gr8 work ... luvd how Arnav rested his forheard on Khushi's ... sooo cuteee ... cant wait to find out wats gonna happen next , pls update soon n thanks darling for d pm 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
lovd it!!!!
it ws hilarious as well as romantic!!!
do cntinue soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
So he does want to marry her and doesn't want to marry her.🤔
He is confused which is making me confused =p
Awesome Strory btw and i soo wish he ends up challenging khushi to marry him.😃
Please add me to ur pm list😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Arnav was so lost in her. It was a nice scene betwwwn the two.
He doesn't want to marry her but he couldn't say no. Lagta hai Khushi iske poore dimag mei phile gaya hai.
nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Thanks!! your updates are the bestst!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
THis fic is really something else. I really have enjoyed it so far, and Im looking forward to more

Yuks
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67




Originally posted by: Suhanie

Thanks!! your updates are the bestst!!



Originally posted by: moon_mine

lovd it!!!!

it ws hilarious as well as romantic!!!
do cntinue soon!!!





Originally posted by: littlemoi

nayika this was soo good!!

loved it !!



Originally posted by: aquablue17

aww thts such a cute squabble!



Originally posted by: princess84

thanks for the pm and arnav stuttering is too funny contineue soon



Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious

fab stuff... ⭐️... eagerly waiting to read the next part ...



Originally posted by: shaheerdiwani

Another fab update Nayika ..gr8 work ... luvd how Arnav rested his forheard on Khushi's ... sooo cuteee ... cant wait to find out wats gonna happen next , pls update soon n thanks darling for d pm 😃



Thank you all! It really does inspire me to write more when you write such encouraging comments :D I'm writing tonight so next update should be tomorrow :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Hey Nayika!

Another smashing update sugar!
I love the way Arnav rested his forehead on Khushi's. It was such a simple gesture yet so expressive.
I really liked the exchange they shared.
Looking forward to reading where its headed!!
Thanks for the PM darling!!
😊



Thank you so much, I think I've finally got a vague idea of where it's all going so that should mean I can write and update faster! :)

Originally posted by: Suvi7884

loved the update!

Arnav resting his forehead on hers...and just relaxing...and then Khushi asks whether he wants to marry (her) lol...and now he catnt say he doesn't want to!
Great!



Thanks! Haha, well Khushi's saying loud enough for both of them that marriage wouldn't work between them :P

Originally posted by: marishka.khan

So he does want to marry her and doesn't want to marry her.🤔

He is confused which is making me confused =p
Awesome Strory btw and i soo wish he ends up challenging khushi to marry him.😃
Please add me to ur pm list😊



Thank you so much, I will add you! I don't think I'm going to go with the marriage without love route in this fic because I think so many other people have explored it so I'm going to aim for something a tiny bit different.

Originally posted by: queenyuks

THis fic is really something else. I really have enjoyed it so far, and Im looking forward to more

Yuks



Thank you so much. I'm having loads of fun writing it as well :)

Originally posted by: shivahari

Arnav was so lost in her. It was a nice scene betwwwn the two.

He doesn't want to marry her but he couldn't say no. Lagta hai Khushi iske poore dimag mei phile gaya hai.
nice update



Thank you :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Very very short chapter today sorry! (Which is why there's no PMs but will definitely send them again for the next chapter)

Please like and comment as usual.

Thank you!

Chapter 6


Khushi felt she had to say something to break the silence, 'so...so what should I tell Nani and Anjaliji?'


Arnav turned around, 'say whatever you like. This is all because of you so it's up to you to get them off my back. Now go.' Arnav gestured towards the door with his head and watched as she started towards the door without turning her head and bumped into the handle. He sighed in exasperation and walked over to her.


'Usually Khushi, you have to open a door before you can go through it,' he said sarcastically as he opened the door for her. Khushi still wasn't moving, she was just looking at him in a bewildered fashion, Arnav put his hand gently on Khushi's shoulders and ushered her out of the door, before closing it again and locking it this time.


Khushi couldn't understand why her heart felt so much lighter all of a sudden. Arnav didn't want to get married, he didn't want her to find him a wife. Fine, that all suited her just fine. But Khushi couldn't help but think about Lavanya, recently Lavanya had turned into a friend and here Khushi was, almost feeling pleased that her friend's relationship had ended.


'No, no, I can't think about all that now. First I have to tell Nani and Anjali that he doesn't want to get married. Then I have to figure out where to find a new job from. I still need money and it's not like I can stay here and train Mami or something can I?' Khushi spoke to herself trying to figure out what she would say to Nani as she walked towards the living room.


Chapter 7: Here

Edited by nayika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
Short but sweet!!!
Looking forward to the next.
I really want to know what Khushi's going to do now!!
😊

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