MAANEET SS;Destiny or Faith..Thrd 2..upd Pt25 Pg71 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago


PART-19


Savitri devi leaves from that place.

Savitri(thinking) aaj hamari zindagi ka sabse khoosurat din hai….jis din ka hum hamesha se intezaar karte the aaj vo baat puri hoti nazar aa rahi hai…..geet or maan ek dusre ke saath……aisa lagta hai bhagwan ne hamari saari mushkile aasan kar di hon…..bhagwan kare jo abhi humne thodi der pehle dekha or suna hai vo jaldi hi haqeeqat ho jaye……

Maan's room

Geet realizes that she had confessed her feelings for maan. She hesitates in speaking to maan now. She breaks the hug and is about to leave.

Geet: thik hai sir ab main chalti hu aap apna khayal rakhna

Maan: ruko geet

Maan: geet agar mujse koi galati ho gayi ho to please muje maaf karna…..mera iraada tumhara dil dukhane ka bilkul bhi nahin tha….main to bas yahin jaanna chahta tha ki….


Geet: ki…………..? waise aapko apki baton ke jawab mil gaye na….bahut pareshan karte hai aap muje….

Maan: geet agar aise jawab muje milna tha to main apne hazaar baar accident karane ke liye tyar hu…

Geet puts her hand on maan's mouth.

Geet: chup kijiye aap…samjhe…samajhte kya hai aap apne aap ko….bade aaye haazar accident karane wale…..khabardaar aapne agli baar aisi baat ki to….sach keh rahi hu…main apse kabhi baat nahin karungi……


Maan: geet main to mazak kar raha tha…

Geet: maan sir aap please aisa mazak dubara mat kariye ga nahin to

Maan: nahin to kya geet?? Kya karogi tum????

Geet: ye to main apko waqt aane par hi bataungi…chaliye ab aap aaram kijiye main chalti hu

Maan: geet tum do minute rukti nahin ki saath mein hi chalne ki baat kar deti ho

Geet: vo kya hai na sir muje office mein kafi kaam hai or agar maine vo kaam nahin kia to mere jo maan sir hai na unhe kaam time pe chaiye hota hai nahin to meri khair nahin.

Maan: acha tumhare maan sir aise hai…main bhi mina chahunga unse..

In the meantime adi calls maan and tells him that there is an important meeting for a project and the project has to be signed by today itself. He said that a lady is coming to sign the project and maan's presence is must. Maan agrees and tells that he will be coming to office.

Geet: kaha ja rahe hai aap??

Maan: vo geet ek important project sign karna hai or aaj hi office jana hoga….bas main project sign karke wapis aa jaunga.

Geet: kahin nahin jayenge aap…suna aapne….or aaj koi project sign nahin karenge

Maan: par geet vo lady aaj hi project sign karna chahti hai samajne ki koshish karo

Geet: main kuch sunna nahin chahti…aaj aap ghar se ek kadam bhi bahar nahin nikalenge….aap abhi ke abhi adi sir ko call kijiye or unhe kahiye ki meetinh kal ke liye postpone karein…..agar aapke liye ye project important hai to dusri company ke liye bhi uski utni hi ahmeyiat hai…..or abhi aap puri tarah se thik bhi nahin hue hai

Maan: geet par suno to

Geet: maan aap meri baat sun rahe hai ya nahin aap ki kijiye adi sir ko abhi phone??

Maan: kya kaha tumne??

Geet: maine kaha ki aap adi sir ko phone kijiye or mana kijiye ki aap aaj nahin aa rahe hai

Maan: haan vo to maine sun lia par use pehle kya kaha tumne

Geet: maine to yahi kaha..kyu kuch or bhi kaha kya maine??

Maan: tumne muje maan kaha

Geet embarrassed.

Geet: m sorry sir vo galati se mere muh se nikal gaya

Maan: par muje tumhari ye galati kafi pasand aayi…ab se tum muje maan kehke hi bulaogi samjhi tum


Geet: muje pata hai ki muje kab maan bulana hai or kab maan sir.

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Maan smiles hearing this

Geet: par abhi aap adi sir ko call kijiye

Maan calls adi and tells him to postpone the meeting for tomorrow as he is unwell today.

Maan: or kuch madam

Geet: bas kuch nahin…bahut baatein kar li aapne ab….ab thoda aaram kar lijiye….main bhi ab office chalti hu….kal ke meeting ki tyari bhi main kar lungi..aap tension mat li jiyega bilkul bhi or sirf aaram kijiye ga…main ab apse kal office mein hi milungi. Apna khayal rakhiyega please maan or promise kijiye aap pura rest karenge

Maan: promise geet

Maan and geet share an eyelock..Geet kisses maan on his forhead .


Geet: acha to main chalti hu.

Geet leaves from maan's room.

Geet(thinking) main bhi na ek number ki buddhu hu….na hi main jija ji se mili or na hi aunty se…ek bar unhe namste bol ke chali jati hu…pata nahin vo kya sochengi

Savitri is sitting in the drawing room. She pretends as she dint know that geet is there in Khurana Mansion.

Geet: Namaste aunty

Savitri: arey geet bte aap yaha….what a surprise

Geet: vo maan sir ka pata chala to main unse milne aa gayi

Savitri: haan kyu nahin bte aap jab chahe yaha aa sakti hai ye bhi to aap hi ka ghar hai na

Geet: ji aunty….waise jijaji kaha hai

Savitri: bte vo office ke kaam se gaye hai..ab maan to ghar par hai to unhone dev jo instructions diye hai office dekhne ke kiye

Geet: ye maan sir bhi na har waqt kaam kaam or kaam ye nahin thodi der chain se aaram kar le…ab khud kaam nahin kar rahe to jija ji ko laga dia..abhi bhi meeting par jaane ke liye tyar ho gaye the…badi mushkil se mana karwaya


Savitri: bte hum to keh keh ke thak gaye hai…..hamari to sunte nahin…shayad aap hi ki sun le vo

Savitri: hamari to bhagwan se bas ek ki ptarthna hai ki hamare maan ko ek pyari si jeevan sathi mil jaye bilkul aap hi ki tarah jo unka ache se khayal rakhe…or hamare sir phire bte ko zindagi jeena sikha de…..

Geet blushes…

Geet: acha aunty hum chalte hai office ka kafi saara kaam pada hai

Savitri: thik hai bte par aate rahiyega

Geet: zarur aunty

Savitri(thinking) sharma gayi…..badi hi pyari bachhi hai……

Geet goes to the office works with dedication and completes the work. Maan was calling her at the office but she was not available as she was busy in completing the work. It was late at night now….geet was still in the office…everyone in the staff had left…Adi was about to leave when he noticed geet still working.

Adi: geet aap yaha…ghar nahin gayi kya??

Geet: vo adi sir bas thoda sa kaam bacha hai…use khatam karte hi chali jaungi

Adi: par geet kafi raat ho gayi hai aap akele kaise jeyengi

Geet: koi baat nahin hai sir main chali jaungi aap jaiye or rst kijiye…kal kafi important meeting hai na

Adi: thik hai geet take care or jaldi hi wapis chali jana….niche office ki gadi hai tum use use kar lena ghar jaate waqt


Geet: thanku sir.

Meanwhile maan calls up adi and enquires about all the preparations for the meeting. Adi tells him that everything is done perfectly and mentions that geet had helped a lot in doing everything. He tells him that geet was still at office busy doing the work on which maan is worried.

Maan: geet abhi bhi office mein hai…tumne use jaane ke liye kyu nahin bola adi

Adi: sir maine kaha tha par geet ne kaha ki vo kaam khatam kar le phir jaegi…sir maine geet se keh dia hai ki vo office ki car use karke ghar jaye

Maan: thik hai adi main phone rakhta hu


Maan was getting tensed that how will geet go back home all alone when its too late at night. He decides to go himself to the office now.

He was leaving as savitri devi noticed her

Savitri: maan kaha ja rahe hai aap?

Maan: vo mom kuch imp kaam hai main thodi der mein wapis aata hu

Savitri: par bte abhi to aap bilkul thik bhi nahi hue aap kyu nahin samajte.

Maan: mom mera jaana kafi zaruri hai main bilkul thik hu ab or apse wapis aa ke milta hu

Maan leaves in a hurry from KM.

At Khurana technologies……

Geet completes her work finally.

Geet: shukar hai babaji ka ki kaam ho gaya…chal beta geet ghar chal jaldi beeji pareshan ho rahi hongi….waise bhi kafi raat ho gayi hai.

Geet takes her bag and is moving out of the office.

Geet(thinking)Ye adi sir ne to kaha tha ki office ki car hai niche muje to koi bhi nahin dikh raha. Lagta hai muje auto se hi jana padega.

She moves out of the office wherein a car comes in and is stopped right in front of her…..Geet shocked……


Well how was the update friends????

Tried giving a longer update this time…hope u enjoyed reading it…..!!!😳😳😳

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES
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Caught u updating and look me first
Yes u r right the update was big hmm... aaj lagta hai meri carbon copy ka mood kafi achha tha isliye hume itna bada aur achha update mila
loved the maneet moments especially when she says MAAN😳😳😳
aur maan bhi na kudi ko jaanbujkar pareshan kar raha hai tumne abhi kya kaha hai😳😳😳😳😳
Dadima k kya kehne sab kuch sunn liya par aise behave kar rahi hai jaise k wo kuch jaanthi hi nahi
loved the way geet tells maan to postpone the meeting kya haqh tha uss dialogue mein
Geet working late night aur maan waha na pauche aisa kaise ho saktha hai babaji
geet k kadam office k baha r pade nahi k maan apni mishty ko lene aa gaya
by the way where is the precap????
continue soon n take care of ur health
love u darling
- Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey congerats on ur second thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg di ajj to apne sach much long update di hai...
but sorry for late comment...
come to update
i can say one thing ''rocking''...
most lovely word ''maan'' by geet...😳...
savitri ji ne sab sun lia and pretending ke une kuch pata nahi..aur jab geet unki baat pe sharmai thi..off turi ye adaa...😳
funny scene pata hai kya tha...geet 1 min baad fir kehdeti muje office jana hai bahot kaam pada hai...
maan ko jabar dasti sulla diya...😆...
u know maan ka kon sa dialogue best tha mere lia...aur koi hukam madam...
geet bi na bilkul maan jasi hai..jab kaam karne lagti hai time bi nahi dekti...but humare maan ji time pe jaroor pouchgai geet ko lene ke lia...
eagerly waiting for maan confess...
cont soon di
love u alot
khushi
Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...
loved it a lot...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update dear...
loved it...
maneet scenes r cute...
continue soon dear...
thanks 4 the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful...
Loved Maneet scenes...
Now waiting for d nxt..
Continue soon...
Thnxxx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 19
nice part...
hope thats Maan...
lovely...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
chak de phatte...what an awesome update...confession almost ho gaya hai na...kudi ne to keh diya "Main aapse pyaar kartu hoon"...Maan babu kab kahenge...
Saviti's dream is going to be a reality soon...
waiting for next update already
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum . . Thanx 4r updatin silky di

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