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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
luvd the guys convo
& arohi, she is very cute...
update the next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi everyone! I'm sorry about not updating soon, my internet connection was lost, and then I just didn't get the time to write the part, anyway here's the next part.

Part 8 -
Alright my darlings, what are your thoughts on outfits? Khanak asked sitting cross-legged on Leher's bed.

Khanak, do you still have your sketch book from college? Preeti asked.


Oh yeah! The one where we all decided what we wanted to wear at each other's wedding, god that was ages ago, Leher said.


*Khanak laughed* Actually I found it while I was packing, so yes I did bring it along!


Eee! Yay, omg I loved mine, it was pink and gold and soo pretty! Arohi said.


The 4 girls laughed and remembered all the fun they had in college looking at the sketch book. _______________________________________________________________________

Lunch (Leher's House)

Arrey, Khanak, Preeti, Arohi, meri betiyaan, kaise ho? Leher's mom asked warmly giving each girl a hug.


Auntie!! We miss you soo much, Arohi gushed.


Yea auntie, it's lonely without you in Delhi, Preeti said.


I know beta, I miss your mom's too, time flies doesn't it? Leher's mom asked
J

ust then Abeer's mom walked up to the group

Toh meri pyaari bahu, tumhare doston se abhi theekse mulakaat nahi hui?
Abeer's mom asked to Leher.

Jee bilqul! Mumma, yeh Khanak, Preeti aur Arohi hain. Meri sabse acche dost college se, Leher said pointing at each girl.


Namaste Auntie, the girls said in unison.


Kitne pyaare ladkiyaan hai, tum log kaam kya karta ho? she asked.


Jee, main ek fashion designer hoon, Khanak said.


Aur main Interior Designer hoon, kabhi kabhi London main rehti hoon, meri parents waha rehte hain, Arohi said.


Leher's mom smiled, aur beta tum? She asked looking at Preeti



Main architect hoon, Shashank ko jab pehle mila to uska secretary thi, phir uss ki business mein, main hire hui, toh ab hum saath kam kerte hain, Preeti explained.


*Leher's mom laughed* Tum dono ki jodi bohot pyaara hain!


The girls and ladies laughed teasing Leher and Preeti about Abeer and Shashank. Meanwhile the guys were busy talking to Abeer's dad, when suddenly Abeer invites Leher's dad to the conversation

Papa, yeh mere dost hain, college say, Abeer said to Leher's dad


Accha, toh yeh hai tumhare dost, kya karte ho tum log? He asked.


Main Investment Banker hoon, kuch hi din pehle parhai khatam ki hain maine, Shaan said.


Aur main apni family ki buissness main CEO hoon, Singhania Industries, uski ek branch Mumbai mein hai, Arjun said.


Aur main meri Family ki business ka CEO hoon, Sharma and Sons, Shashank laughed.


*Leher's dad laughed* Beta Abeer, bohot accha dosts hai tumhare, bohot kamiaab! He said.


Kamiaab, lekin bohot shaitaan bhi, college mein kya, kya karta tha! Abeer's dad joked.


*Leher's dad laughed* I always say that "your friends are your biggest support in life,"
He said.

Woh to hain! Arjun and Shashank said simultaneously, while Abeer and Shaan grinned.


Hello boys!! Leher said as she walked up to them


Hey, whatsup? Abeer asked hugging Leher


That's exactly what I was going to ask you, what's our plan for tonight? Leher asked.


I was thinking why don't we go to Palm Beach? And then we can drive around Gold Coast, maybe shop a bit? Abeer said.


YES!! I need to go to Gold Coast! Khanak exclaimed, they have the best designer stores!


I heard the beach is very pretty, Preeti said.


And romantic, Shashank nudged Preeti, while Preeti blushed.


Then it's all set, we'll go to Palm Beach and then sightseeing in Gold Coast, Shaan said.


Cool, then guys I think we should head out soon, it's getting kind of dark, Abeer informed.
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Palm Beach Australia

Wooo!! The guys yelled while running in the waves rolling up their pants.



Ah CRAP! CRAP CRAP CRAP!! Arjun yelled.


*The guys burst out laughing* Arjun you're such an idiot! Who steps on a freaking crab?? Shaan laughed.


Oww! Guys it hurts! Arjun yelled.


*Arohi smirked to herself* What an idiot, she said to the girls.


The gang relaxed and had fun in the beach as the sun set, near evening all the couples had separated into themselves. Abeer and Leher were sitting on the towel talking amongst themselves. Shashank and Preeti walked along the shore holding hands, Arjun was sitting analyzing his injured foot, and Arohi had gone to the gift shop. Only Shaan and Khanak were left alone. Khanak was sitting on the beach looking at the horizon, when Shaan walked up to her, and sat next to her

It's so pretty, isn't it? Khanak asked.


Hmm, beautiful, he replied.


Life is so strange na? At one point everything seems perfect, and then with one event, everything changes for good, everything'. She said.


Everything changes for good, Shaan thought playing her words in his mind.


The two looked on to the sunset, lost in their own thoughts.
Back at the house

*Shashank yawned* Guys I'm so tired, what a day, he said as he plopped onto the couch


Me too, stupid crab sara evening kharab kar diya, I swear crabs are pointless creatures, they should all just die! Arjun exclaimed.


First you said that Bollywood films are pointless, and now crabs, everything's pointless in your world, na? Arohi asked annoyed.


Yeah, everything Stupid is, he replied


Arohi huffed, threw a pillow at him, and left to her room, Preeti laughed carrying the remaining of the shopping bags into her room.


After saying goodnight everyone headed off to their rooms, Leher was the last one to return, just when Abeer pulled her into the hallway

What? Abeer! Leher whispered surprised.


Hmm and you think that just because are friends are with us, you're not going to give me a goodnight kiss, not fair doc, he said.


Abeer, saab sonay ja rahe hain, Leher said.


Yeah, exactly' Tum kya saab ke saamne yeh karna chate ho? He asked smiling.


*Leher rolled her eyes, and gave him a quick peck on the cheek* Happy? She asked.


Ehh, somewhat * he pointed at his other cheek*


Just as Leher was going to kiss him, Shashank walked into the bathroom in the hallway, the two jumped, breaking apart

Leher laughed, and took the opportunity to run off to her room

Shashank, I'm going to kill you man, Abeer thought

Edited by AfiyaZ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hei afiya,
nice update..but i felt it is too short..
the palm beach was so nice...ur description abt arjun stepping on crab,the couples talking n walking hand in hand,shanak enjoying the sunset with their thoughts was so nice..
when is abheer-leher's marriage??
u r taking more days to update so i forgot when their marriage is..
do continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
afiya awesome update loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: RB81

hei afiya,
nice update..but i felt it is too short..
the palm beach was so nice...ur description abt arjun stepping on crab,the couples talking n walking hand in hand,shanak enjoying the sunset with their thoughts was so nice..
when is abheer-leher's marriage??
u r taking more days to update so i forgot when their marriage is..
do continue soon..



hi ramani! i plan to take this ff further so as of now i have no idea when their marriage is going to take place, the whole ff is based on 3 months of summer, and Shanak/Arjuhi need to fall in love!
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Posted: 13 years ago
crab and Arjun.. nice combo.. I liked the Shanak and horizon talk.. update soon and a long one with full of Shanak..
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the updatteee!! but too short! heeheee ^^

please update sooon :D cant wait to get into shanak romance and stuff ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update afiya👏

cute conv between all

finally we know wht they all are doin almost everyone is opposite to each other i mean those who'll become the couple

the palm beach part was cute

awww poor arjun... it was hillarious

very liitle but meaningful conv between shanak everything changes but even i was wondering for gud

gud that u want to extend and dunno wen will marriage take place ... em liking it the way

they all are getting to know each other

continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice dear ... everyone is enjoying the wedding.

Shaan remembers what Khanak told him...lovely. Hope they bond together soon...

Ye baki ke logon ki love story sahi dikha rahi ho ... Abeer-Leher, Shashank-Preeti ... Shanak kab?????

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 13 years ago

Lovely update Afiya👏...Love the conversation and light-hearted banter between all the characters😊

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