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Posted: 14 years ago
Again a romantic update 😊
Loved Radev's moments and loved the way you wrote it 😳
Wonderfull update and can't wait to next part.😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW !!!!!! DI ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ... speechless we just wonder how every time you mange this 😉 ... you are amazing , you exactly know how to mold old situations to give them a new form... lage raho 👏 .
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow superb part devika..one and only with radev..very romantic dear☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanku for ur update😊really i liked this paris trip👏eagerly waiting for next part😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely updates devika
update sooon
Luv Jyoti
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am in love with ur imagination, writting style and these characters!!thank you devika!god bless u!
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting for next update plzzz post it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

@shankar: finally u said it… thanks.. I love to hear it, when you can say that lovely "I hate u".. I was singing that amir's number song other day"I hate u, like I love u" my girl and her friend "mom, what r u singing?' then only I realized, I told her it is not something that I made up and showed the music… u should have seen their face .. they r thinking something is not right… I am like, everything is right, just listen.. OMG! It end up in big debate, poor girls, finally they left me alone to enjoy the song as they got totally confused with the lines… ha ha.. thanks dear for liking it to hate me…

@ekta: told you, u are going to love my radhika.. because I have seen many times readers asking me "why radhika is not saying anything, why she is not speaking up, so this one is for those who want to see a different radhika, I know it started out with dev, but now dev will be there in every step, but it will be Radhika's growth, holding onto him… so hopefully u 'll love her dialogues more.. thanks dear

@lavalina: he he.. I was posting it in a half sleepy mood… but after reading urs and two other PM's.. I came back and read it myself in full sense…oopss.. arre yaar, I deleted few lines prior to posting, imagine if I have posted the unedited version… OMG! Ha ha.. I am glad I edited it to tone it down little… he he.. feeling shy..

@hari: there is a movie, don't remember the name. afthab and Esha deol.. and in that one comic character is there, he imitates SRK from that college movie (with amithab)and he always say "I am the best" ..the action the comedian portray when he says is so good to watch, I love it.. the facial muscles will tighten and his eyes narrow and say "I am the best " and then do that SRK throat laugh.. so after reading ur comment I just want to imitate that comedian.."yes, I am the best" ha ha ha ha… thanks buddy… I know dear, we all are at our best …

@vini: um.. thanks.. yes, the cte argument will never end, it will continue.. because she already said "she is special" so he will smile it away…. Let see… the next upcoming part, hopefully u 'll like it.

@fastsrilanka: thanks dear.. u blushed.. I am feeling shy… he he… ok, I am ready to update.. hopefully u 'll like next part too…

@radhika5: um, ummm , ummm u have to imagine dev's tone to dadi… so u r envying now.. I envy ur kavitha's , I envy ur nice attitude, I envy ur flexibility… and so on and so forth.. if we take the list, I envy u more than my simple imaginations…. Urrr

@ NiHa24: thank you dear… I am glad to hear that u were able to catch up with the updates. Some time i goin a speed pace, depending on how hard my assignments are… if it is too hard, I will update more… ha ha.. if it is relaxed one, then I take my time… how is that..??

@laxmi: can't wait for the next one.. coming up soon, a radev talk and then their return… life should move on, if it gets stuck in one place, its not right, it should face everything and move on and get to the final.. so yes, next part coming up soon..

@diary25: thanks buddies… um, I know , now what I have to say.. hope now u know somewhere one screw is lose , right.. arrre yaar not urs, but mine… mine,… jumping from one to another.. yes it was demand of the situation and my radev is different here, but they are not going to stuck at that place, they should move on…

@jeffin thanks.. yes one and only with radev . last two updates there was only radev… and next one half way it is only radev and their talk.. hopefully u will love them… thanks

@ak442376463: thank you.. yes, one paris trip to remember forever in their life.. lets love the world.. thanks for waiting, coming soon

@abhakaran: thanks jyothi.. yes next one coming soon..

Myra: thank you for all ur kind words.. thank you

@meenaluma;: yes, it is coming up soon… hopefully u will request for next one soon..

Thank s AditiD, khus1973, waukesha, avina21, AVINA4ever, maia22, imissouri, sweetfamily, ak4423766463, masumasrilanka, thujaa, *Maleena*, vinianil, DAIRY25, NiHa24, chalhov, lavalina, radhika5, laxmi_avinafan, radha_bilahari, fatssrilanka, ekta-avinafan, -Shankar-, Abhakaran, for ur response friends…

Yes it is 3 rd time I am going thru this phase in radev life… so, I don't want you to feel things repeated.. that will bore, and myself don't like repeating unless it has some significance.. but between each story.. so if u r able to connect this as a different radev, then I win.. so thank you for responding back… next part coming up soon

Devika

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Posted: 14 years ago
I am going to make dinner,when i come bk i better find an update here! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part-14

The dark sky was looking very gloomy above the shining city.. Radhika's light green satin night dress layer was blowing softly with the wind... the couples were enjoying the illuminated Paris from the patio of their hotel room... Dev in his shorts was holding Radhika closer standing behind her, resting his chin over her shoulder...

' I think it is going to rain soon.."..
Radhika felt tickly as dev said that in his soft voice near her ear..and she moved her head to the side slightly..

"are you feeling ticklish?" Dev asked tightening his arms around her waist level and moving his lips more closer to her ear...

She just smiled and looked at him with her corner eyes as if asking him not to tease her…

'ok .. But tell me how you are feeling here?".. Dev asked seriously..

Radhika took a deep breath..and then said " feels like a dream... can't believe this is all happening with me...I can feel myself now, I exist because of you, I am living in this moment, and I am the happiest... I want to take it as the blessings from Kanha.. who gave you to me..and just mine"..

He felt so touched with her words, that he turned her around..radhika just smiled and wrapped her arms around him and rested her head over his chest..

"ha, sach keh rehe hum mei.. I don't know why or what I am happy for? Is it because I am seeing a new place or is it because I love being near to you all the time, and your eyes and your smile are just for me,... ..Dev was strolling over her open hair... he was feeling her breath falling on his chest... he tightened his grip and was feeling her heart which was beating next to his...Radhika continued... 'You took me to all those places, maybe that I dreamed to see , I saw the smiley flowers in the middle of this crowd, I saw the smooth flowing of the river in the midst of fast moving roads and rail roads... nobody bothers about others... Just doing their duty, and going with their flow... but you walked with me, and you let me see all these without any fear of losing me in this crowded place...
...With all these magic around, your eyes were on me, just on me, with all these noise around , your ears were only for me...
.. you protected me as I got lost in the beautiful work of that illuminated Eiffel tower and the lighted water fountains in front of it.. you held me tight in your limit as I enjoyed the beauty of this dreamy city..Paris.. I love her more now, because of her I have you so close to me..'.. she paused..

'hum.. then…" Dev was listening to her in trance with a tinge of smile on his lips, with the happiest beating heart,...

She looked at him … "I am only talking for long , right? Now you tell me something. I will listen".. RAdhika demanded and rested her head back on his chest., holding him losely in her embrace...

"what do I say Radhika, the lights of these big cities never amazed me. I have been to all these famous places many times in my life, and maybe all those times the city was looking this beautiful with the spread of its lights every where , maybe in different colors and texture., but nothing was able to pull my heart into it... But I started liking it now, .. HERE .. PARIS... because you are with me, and I am spending the most beautiful time with my love,... like you I am also trying to believe that you are with me, and the crowded street of Paris showed me the excited eyes of yours, it let me hear your laugh and your excited words of this beauty...
... and I love it here, PARIS.., because first time we went out for shopping together... and you are wearing what I choose for you and walking around holding onto my arm, every inch that I take, every breath that I take, you are close to me, clinging onto my arm.. reminding me that you need me to move forward.. so I am loving her too, PARIS... " .. then in a loving serious way he said ..." Radhika, you don't need to worry about anything... I just want to see that happy smile on your face every day, nothing else matter to me... when you are near me, i got my life in me...'
For few seconds the silence engulfed them, as RAdhika tightened her arms around him, to reassure him that she is with him... ... soon it started raining.. the cold drops started wetting them.. RAdhika tightened her arms around him more as the cold wet drops started rolling down her body... and the coldness were rolling down his face.. but now he enjoys it very much, along with his Radhika.. they stood completely drenched.. but their heart started beating fluttery..

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Weeks just passed by.. later one day inside an office building…

Dev: Thank you so much for keeping our appointment secret..

"Its My pleasure Sir, more than that ... feel like I am honored to meet you like this..".. the man replied in his proud voice..

Dev replied with a thankful smile.." so what you think"

"not a problem at all, I checked all the certificates, and she is a very brilliant student.., so we are more than happy to have her in our college"..

"Good to hear that Mr. Principal.., so what's the next step..?' Dev asked.

Principal: nothing specifically. We got all the required documents. Class started a week ago. Its all starting up only.. so not a big deal. I am sure she will catch up easily... But can I ask you a personal question..?"... he asked in a doubtful way..

Dev gave a look encouraging him to ask...

"If you don't mind, why do you want to keep her admission details secret? Who is she?.. if you don't mind.."

Dev smiled.. " I expected this from you Sir. And I am sure you checked her certificates.. but didn't see the new application and did not notice the name.. Radhika is my wife, and ,yes her last name is Purohith. She is Mrs. Dev Purohith, not Radhika Agarwal that you noticed in old certificates.."

Principal stood from his seat with an exclaimed face,.. " what!!, but..."

"yes Sir, that's truth, RAdhika is my wife... but you don't need to give her any special attention, nor I want anyone else to know about it. She is just another student in this college, and more than me she will prefer that, I don't want any lectures to know about it either. Keep this as a secret between you and me...". Dev said with a smile...

"but".. principal tried to clarify something..

"Yes, I know.. Very few knew about my marriage, and we don't want to disclose it to the world for now. take it as a security reason too.. by the way… I need to mention this too.. do you mind if I keep two guards here at campus, I know others may question you... but you can say newly appointed guards or.something for college security and all...' ..and then looking at his face.." you can make up something.. with asmile he added ...but don't worry, I will be paying for them... ha ha., all i want is to make sure RAdhika is safe here, because few are out there looking for her and I don't want she to know about it either, or anyone to know about it. I hope I can trust you."..

Principal: Yes, of course Mr. Purohith. Don't worry, we can take care of it. And you can trust me. I got your point and i don't mind that security guards in my campus.. after all it is good for our college...

"Thanks Mr. Principal'. He stood from his seat and shook his hand and they both walked out. Dev wore his goggles on as he stepped towards his car..

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Later that day at mansion.. at dinner time..

Daadi: RAdhika , so are you ready to start your college days..

RAdhika: yes Daadi, But I am feeling little nervous too. I don't know how it is here, and the class already started too..

Dev: don't worry about the class RAdhika, it just one week and they didn't even started it seriously... it is just the introduction and all..

Radhika: if it is in Shivpur…. She started blabbing on her school days.. her friends.. her trips to and from school….

Daadi and Dev just listen to her stories with a smile on her face,..

Dev: "Ok Ms. Shivpur.. Now finish your food.. and get into bed early , you are already late. Don't you need to pack up ur bag in the morning... I will drop you at college while going to work, ok...

Radhika: what?!!!!! No no.. I will go myself.. you don't need to drop me.. I am not a kid.. you are telling as if I am a kindergartner and my mom is coming to drop me..

Dev with a smile : "RAdhika it is your first day, and I am going to drop you". Then looking at Daadi.." daadi, note what she said today, soon you are going to see her requesting me to drop her…"

Daadi: no , Radhika is not going to ask for that.. If you want to drop her at college everyday , then tell me frankly, because I ordered a new car yesterday for RAdhika .. for my bahu, for taking such a challenging step of her life. I am so proud of her., let her go little stylish...

Radhika: nahi daadi. I am fine.. i don't need any new car or anything...

Daadi: no Radhika, this is my gift... and I will help you with finishing your homework too…

Dev: no cheating.. If there is homework, then RAdhika only has to do it..

Daadi: no, it is my duty to help my daughter..

Dev: no daadi, you can't do that..

Daadi in an angry tone: no I will help her, and that is final..

Dev also stood from his seat: if you do that then she won't learn anything.. she needs to do it.

Radhika was looking at both of them… finally she stood up..

RAdhika: don't worry.. I have a solution..

Both Dev and Daadi looked at her..

Radhika in a very serious tone:: I will separate my home work and give both of you half half.. and then looking at Dev, ha, you too have to help me with my work..its not cheating, it is your responsibility..., understand... I will go to bed, and you both finish my work..ok.. but for now, let me finish my food.. you two finish na.. and I am still feeling hungry… and she sat down and started eating..

Dev and Daadi looked at her and then to each other… and then asked together "what?"

Radhika smiled at them and said .." don't worry about me now, I will try my level best and will come to both of you if I need help.. after all this is a dream come true for me..'

Dev and Daadi smiled and watched her eating her food…..

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Next Radhika in college…. Oops again…🤔.???? Yes, no escape from me.. as you choose to read it…
Take care friends...
Devika
:)

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