MAANEET SS;Destiny or Faith..Thrd 2..upd Pt25 Pg71

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soni4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

awsome luv ur ff

cn u plzz add me 2 ur pm list x

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maanluver

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Water

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Hey,

I had no idea u opened a new thread...

Maan asking her for a coffee 😲, dadi n dev noticing the diff in maan...

loved the updateee Geet taking so much time in selecting her dresses...hehe

Geet asking pinky about maan, den not being able to concentrate...den asking adi...

Muahhh

It was smashing...poor Geet running all the way to KM...

Precap...very very interesting...

loved it...

Thanks for the update..

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minnie_tweetie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

abhi busy re will try and update soon

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

...😛..😛...

4 pm me dear...😃..

i dear..ur updates...

really dear..

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dear...👏👏..

tons of 4 u dear...😳

once again dear..😃

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gururockss

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

awesome update

and a very lovely ss silky dear

u knw i read all ur updates in one go last nite

and loved it

continue soon

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sweet scorpio

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

just read the remaining parts!

awesome!

loved the way how things turned up!

continue soon!

thnx 4 the pms!:)

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minnie_tweetie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Thanku so much for the encouragement and support...😃

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minnie_tweetie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

PART-18

Geet is in tears to see maan in that condition. When she enters inside her room she sees Maan is sleeping…..she immediately goes and hugs him. maan feels someone's presence and finally realizes that geet is crying.

Maan: geet tum yaha?

Geet: kuch mat kahiye aap….apne aap ko aap kya samajte hai…dekhiya ye kya haal bana liya hai apne apna

Maan: geet tum bhi na itni si chot to hai…vo to aise hi chotta sa accident ho gaya subah office aa raha tha

Geet: chup bilkul chup isse aap chotta sa accident bol rahe hai dekhiye zara kitni chot ayi hai

Geet: waise bahut dard ho raha hoga na

Maan: nahin geet bola na thodi si chot hai jaldi hi thik ho jaegi

Geet: maan sir aap apna bilkul bhi khayal nahi rakhte….itni chot ayi hai or aap keh rahe hai kuch bhi nahin

Maan realizes change in geet's behavior,,the way she is feeling maan's pain….he decides to tease geet.

Maan: geet ek baat batau??

Geet: ji kahiye na sir

Maan: geet mere na sir mein dard ho raha hai…kya tum mera use daba dogi???

Geet: ae lo itni si baat…..maine to socha pata nahin kya baat ho gyi…kyu nahin sir

Geet starts massaging his head…..maan is noticing all the care done by geet for him…..he is enjoying every moment

Geet: par sir thodi der pehle to aap bol rahe the ki aap bilkul thik hai…phir achanak se ye dard….aisa karte hai hum doctor ko bula lete hai..kahin kuch serious na ho

Maan: nahin geet thoda se to dard hai jaldi hi thik ho jaega…upar se tum ho na mera khayal rakhne ke liye

Geet keeps quiet and sits besides Maan massaging his head.

Maan: acha geet ek baat or puchu??

Geet: sir apko jo puchna hai aap mujse kabhi bhi puch sakte hai

Maan: dekh lo geet kahin aisa na ho ki tum baad mein meri baat ko taal jao

Geet: sir main kuch samjhi nahin

Maan: kya aaj tum mera accident sunke ghabra gayi thi na???

Geet(embarrassed and tries to hide her feelings): sir ye kaisa sawaal hai

Maan: geet sach sach batana

Geet: sir muje office main kaam hai ab main chalti hu….aapko sham mein aakar milungi

Geet is about to leave and maan hold her hand from behind….

Maan: geet aaj tumhe jawab dena hi hoga

Geet: sir please muje jane dijiye aisi koi baat nahin hai or waise bhi main ghabra isliye gayi thi kyuki muje laga ki aapko kahin zyada chot to nahin aayi

Maan: acha chalo maan liye geet par phir tum ro kyu rahi thi???

Geet has no answer to maan's question

Geet: aisa to kuch bhi nahin hai sir ab aap aaram kijiye main chalti hu

Maan: geet tum aaj mere sawaalo ka jawaab diye bina nahin ja sakti ho or ye mera order hai

Geet: sir aapke order office mein chalet honge yaha nahin

Maan: geet baat badalne ki koshish mat karo

Geet keeps quiet…..

Maan: geet tumhe pata hai tumhari aankhein sab kuch keh deti hai…..agar aisa kuch nahin hai to tum mujse aankhein kyu chura rahi ho???

Geet: sir muje kuch samaj nai aa raha ki aap kya keh rahe hai

Meanwhile savitri devi is preparing food for maan.

Savitri devi: nakul dekh ke aao zara ki maan uth gaye hai ya nahin??

Nakul: vo malkin abhi thodi der pehle maine kisi ladki ne mujse maan ke baare mein pucha tha

Savitri: ladki or maan ka puch rahi thi??

Nakul: haan or vo bhi kafi ghabrayi hui si lag rahi thi….mujse maan sir ka karma pucha to maine bata dia

Savitri: chalo thik hai tum ye dalia dekho hum abhi dekhkar aye ki ye maan se milne kaun aaya hai???

Maan's room:

Maan gets up from the bed and starts approaching geet.

Geet: ye aap bed se kyu uth gaye sir aapko aaram karna chaiye….abhi aapki tabiyat thik nahin hai

Maan: geet agar aisi koi baat nahin hai to tumhe meri itni parwah kyu hai??? Kyu tum meri itni si chot se ghabra jati ho….aaj hi nahin uss din bhi jab mere haath pe chot aayi thi tab bhi tum utna hi pareshan thi…kyu aisa hota hai ki chot muje lagti hai or dard tumhe hota hai kyu geet kyu???

Maan: aaj muje in sab baton ke jawab chaiye hai geet.

Geet: sir aisa kuch nai hai please muje jane dijiye

Geet is about to leave where in maan stops her again. He holds both of her hands tightly and lean her against the wall

Maan: geet aaj tum aise nahin ja sakti

Maan: geet muje ek baat ka jawab de do agar aaj accident mein muje kuch ho jata to?????

Geet is in tears listening this. He keeps her hand on maan's face.

Geet: bas kijiye aap pata nahin kya bol rahe hai……aap jaante hai jab se muje aapke accident ka pata chala hai mera kya haal hai…upar se aap aise baatein kar rahe hai. Jab subah main office pahunchi tab aapko waha ne dekh kar mere dil par kya beet rahi thi apko iska andesha bhi hai. Kitni aasani se apne keh dia na ki muje kuch ho jata to…….

Maan: geet mera tumhara dil dukhane ka koi irada nahin tha

Geet: aapko main ek minute apne samne nahi pati to pata nahin kaise khayal aane lagte hai…maan sir thiik to honge na…pata nahin kaha reh gaye hai aaj…..kitna aasan hai na apke liye ye sab kehna….

Maan takes her to the bed and wipes her tears.

Maan: geet tum muje galat samaj rahi ho…m sorry geet..muje maaf kar do please

Geet: aap jaana chahte hai na ki muje aapki itni parwah kyu hai??? Kyu muje aapki chot dekhkar pareshani hoti hai dard hote hai……kyu main ghabra jaati hu apko apne aas pass na dekh kar…..haina??

Geet: to suniye kyuki main apko pasand karti hu….nahin reh saktii main aapke bina……suna aapne main apse pyar karti hu

Maan: m sorry geet muje maaf kar do….or please rona band karo…kisses her on her forhead…..

and hugs her…

Savitri devi is standing outside maan's room and listening to what all happened….She is really happy to see maan and geet together. It felt that all her worries for maan had disappeared completely

Well how was the update friends??? Geet's confession was just a trailor….picture to abhi baaki hai…….😉😉

Please do comment ……Will be waiting…………..!!😳😳

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago