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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
2 in 1, cb1 and 2,lets see how u go on with the story,nice work
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Posted: 14 years ago
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masumasrilanka, thujaa, DAIRY25, -pratyasha-, fatssrilanka, anu17,

thanks friends for liking my update😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
@thujaa thanks dear and will continue soon

@fatssrilank thanks dear but i don't know what will happen in my ff and coming to name confusion u have to wait and see😉

@anu di only my second ff ... isn't my first ff lovely

@ekta soon u will have an answer for all ur questions and coming to the relation between pb and sharmas radev only can unite them , how it happen and what heppen i don't know😉

@palak u got it exactly and the way u are thinking was right and u were the only person who can better understand about my thoughs along with ekta, but ekta is sometimes confused and u not at all

@myra 2 in 1 may be actually may be i like to see cb1+cb2 = cb3 cool na😉



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Posted: 14 years ago
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KAASI MAHARAAJ PREDICTION ON RADHIKA'S LIFE

Radhika waves at the moving flight and goes into her room. she felt very lonely and stopped to play all those games she used to play regularly.

Just then Debkli came to Radhika:"radhu chal, kal mandir mein staphna hai na tayariyan nahi karogi"

Radhika who was there in her room reluctantly said "haan mammaa, aarahi hun"

Radhika left along with Devki to the mandir and there Devki saw Vasihali standing with tears in her eyes

Devki:Bhabhi kya hua , aap kyun ro rahe hain?

Radhika: mumma bhabhi kyun bol rahe ho ye toh aap ki saheli hain na

Devki:wooo iski pati ko main apna bhaiyya maanta hun isliye isse bhabhi bol rahi hun

Radhika:toh kya hum isse kaaki bula sakte hain

Devki:haan aur radhu please ek minute chup raho

Devki:kya huia bhabhi

Vaishali:wo meri donom bacha mujhse door ho gaya hauin

Devki:aisa kya hua bhabhi

Vaishali: Dev bhi aaj vivek ke saath London gaya hain

Radhika listening the word London looked at Vaishali with keen interest

Devki:bhabhi maine vivek ko dekha tha lekin dev ko kabhi nahi dekha hain bhabhi

Vaishali looked at Devki and and opened her purse took a photo and showed it to devki.Ye hain mera Dev.

Radhika too looked at photo and was surprised to found KK in that photo and asked kaaki ye koun hain

Vaishali:yehi mera dev hain bittooo

Radhika thought to her self "why did u lied to me kk, I won't talk with u"

Devki:Radhuuu kya hua

Radhika:kuch nahi mummaaa

Main thoda sa samya apne kanha ke pass jaavungi

Devki smil;ed at her and Vasihali was looking cnfused.

Radhika left and still Vasihali was looking at her .

Devki:bhabhi kyun Radhu ko aisa dekh rahe ho

Vaishali:ye kiske pass jaa rahi hain

Devki:apni kanha ke paas

Vaishali:kanha ???????

Decki: I forgot to tell u di, Ye naam se hi radhika nahi , apne character mein bhi ye bilkul Radhrani hi hain. Wo kanha ko bahut pyaar karti hain aur, aj vuski wajah se hi humaari parivaar mil gaya hain

Vaishali:tum bahu achi kismat wale ho devki itni achi beti mili tumhe

Devki: yahi toh problem bhi hain , wo itni achi ladki hain, vutni buri bhi. humesha chup rehti hain aur jo bhi dukh hain apne aap mein hi rakhti hain,aur kisi ko bhi nahi batavogi. kya karoo is bachi ko"

Vaishali:devki maa toh humesha mujhe ye khti rahti ki tumbhi bachpan mein aisi hi the lekin jab mohan bhaiyya se mila tha tum bahut badall gaya aur ek ache dost ko vus mein doonda tha. Radhika bhi aisi hi hain, jab vo apne special person se milogi na tab sab ddoriyan aur dukhiyan apne aap hi khatam hoge.

Devki:hope that happens, par mujhe aapki bhaiyya par vishwaas nahi hain, jo hum donom se hua vuske baad mujhe toh viswaas nahi ki vo radhu ko lovemarriage karne ke liye permission doge

Vaishali:mere paas ek idea hain, kaasi maharaaj ji se milna hain hume

Devki:kyun

Vaishali:wahi Radhika ki asli gun aur vuska future hume bata sakte hain

Devki:toh hum kab jaaoge

Vaishali: Abhi jaayenge

Devki:what???????

Vaishali:its ur friend order to u chal, kal toh wo mabndir ke kaam mein bahut busy honge isliye aaj hi chalenge hum.

Devki:are u sure????

Vaishali:yep chalo

Devki and Vaishali went to mutt which was beside the temple. As that mutt was organised by people of Purohith trust vaishal and devki easily met the kasi maharaj ji who came for opening of mandir.

Vaishali:namastey maharaj

kaasimaharaj: Rajpurohitain ji , Devki ji aayiye baith jaayiye

Vaishali and Devki went to him touched his feet seeking blessing and sat there

Kaasimaharaaj: mandir ki sthaapna ki tayariyan kaise ho raha hain

Vaishali:aap ki kripa se sab kuch samay mein ho raha hain

Kaasimaharaj ji: Devki ji aap jske baarein me poochne ke liye yaha aaya ho vo bahut kismat wali hain aur radha ka pratiroop hain. Vuski shaadi toh jaroor apni kanha se hi hogi, lekin aisa hoga ki vuski pyaar mein todha sa mushkil aajaye lekin vo aur vuski kanhaaa humesha ek hi rahoge

Vaishali: maharaj, kya ap bata sakte ki vuski kanha koun hain

Maharaaj: Rajpurohitain ji, bhagwaan ne mujhe vuska naam bolne kaa aagna nahi diya tha, lekin main ek keh sakhte ki jiske liye ye radhika apni jaan bhi dene ke liye tayar hogi, wahi vuski kanha hain.

Vaishali:dhanya waad maharaj

Maharaj:devki ji, aap ko ek baat batana hain aapki beti ki jaan ke liye vuski kundli ke anusaar bahut saari problems hain, aap toh ek kaam karna ki vuski 18 saal poori hone tak vuski har janamdin par yamuna nadi ki jal se abhishek karna hain.

Devki: ji maharaaj , lekin khtara to badi nahi hogi na

Maharaj:devki ji khatra badi yaa choti ho sab kuch humaari sankalp mein hota hain, agar aap apni beti ko jeena chahte ho kabhi aapki moh se marna ke baat mat le na , jis din aap apni mooh se aapki beti ki jaan ki baat karegi vus din hi vuski aakhri swas hogi

Devvki:main kyun meri beti ki jaan ke baarein kahengi

Maharaj:kya aap ne kabhi socha ki , jo pita aapko sab se jyaadaa pyaar karte hain vahi aapko takke maarkar ghar se bahar nnikhal denge. aur aap ane maayke se 10 saal door rahenge ye sab niyati ka khel hain. ye bhi aisa hi that, lekin hum ek baat kehenge ki radhika ko kanhaaa aur vuski kannayya humesha protect karega.

Devki:dhanya waad maharaj

Maharaj: aur ek baat bhi hain devki ji, aap apni maayke se aur door rehne ki jaroorat nahi hain aapki pati aur pita donom badal gaya hain

Devki looked at vasihali with tears in her eys and looked at kaha and joined her hands with happiness and said "maharaaj, kanha ne meri baat sunli hain"

Maharaaj: haan devki ji aur aap jaakra abhi apni bhaiyya se milo, yahi kanha chahte hain

Devki:jaror maharaaj, lekin radhika ko,...

Maharaaj: aapki sas n sahi nirnay liya hain, waisa hi kariye jaise aapki saas ne bola tha

Devki and Vaishali bowed their heads infront of maharaaj and he blessed them with some smile on hi face and they left.

Devki went to Radhika who was sitign at mandir and arranging the place of mandir prathishta with flowers.

Devki: radhika beti tum ye sab karne ke baad ghar jaavo na, main ek jagah jaa rahi hun aha se ghar aavuingi

Radhika nodded her head and Devi left to purohith bhavan along with Vaishali.



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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
thanku very much for ur pm and nice update👏but can u please try to do most of the dialogues in english because i cannot understand some lines😊eagerly waiting for next part😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
Thnx for a lovely update. Waiting for Dev & Radhika to grow up & meet soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
lovely update and thanks 4 the pm. waiting 4 the next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
lovely update
and in today's uppdate my confusion is cleared hari.ya now next ,why devki will talk to radhika about death?
loving curiousity here.
will wait for next and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey i loved it that was awesome so radhika angry on dev coz she found his real name, y would devki talk about radhika death, but loved the whole part im glad devki is going to the purohit house now cant wait till the next part and when radev have grown up, so their love story wont be easy there will be some problem hmmm update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
hari thanks aha...love it gr8 work...

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