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Posted: 13 years ago
me waiting tooo. pls update
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Dreams
part 62
She was so transparent; her feelings were right there .. like an innocent child. Her eyes admired his features ..moving close to his lips. He held his breath & looked at her as her scent filled his senses. Her hands dangerously reached his cheek. It was like currents passing through them.. being so close..
reality stuck & she realized how shamelessly her hands were reaching his cheeks. How could she.. guilt ..shame.. astonishment changed the color of her face. She didn't know how on earth will she explain wat she was upto.
Maan kept looking at the changes.. he knew .. his eyes almost filled up.. when suddenly her soft palms.. fell on his cheek with a small thud. His eyes first snapped at the sudden pat ..& then a shock followed.. she actually slapped him.. more of patting..he held his cheek & innocently looked at her.
Confusion...naughtiness..being mirage by her cute anger..
when he stared first she immediately pointed her finger & warned more of a counter attack
aap baby ko kuch nahi kahogen
she twisted her lips.. like being caught
but well that was her.. she won't give in so easily.
especially the fact wat her hands were doing near his cheek lost in those eyes.
Next best thing she could think was to pat his cheek...
she bit her lips dipping her head trying to hide the sweet giggle that teased her thinking of the fact she slapped him for no reason.. actually to hide her own forbidden intention.
How could he not fall for her cuteness. He smiled looking at her as she knotted her duppata..getting anxious & a bit of scared.
Her heart paced faster getting curious to know his reaction.. when he didn't say anything. She slowly lifted her lashes to see him.. he instantly looked down.. his hands were still resting on his cheek more of a shock..or was it feel of her touch.
She felt naughtily guilty at the liberties & audacity of self with him.
His silence only made her more courageous.
Wo aap baby ko kuch nahi kahena. She warned again with a sternness in her tone to her surprise.
He silently nodded ..though his heart was jumping in joy with the closeness she exhibited with him.
Her bossing on him was like his dream come true. Her innocent effort to hide her feelings was tantalizing his senses.
She was feeling really conscious.. behaving so different. She was being too bold.. talking so much.. almost non stop..
she was angry.. she sighed.. she could never lose her temper so easily..but with Maan she was being over expressive way beyond her control. She thought of so many things to stop thinking abt him.. immediately killed the silence between them
aap kuch bhi teehk se nahi karthen ho
he looked at her wondering wat did he do wrong now
aapne abhi taak mujhe baby ka naam kyun nahi bataya
he kept quite
batvo na baby ka naam kya hain?
Like she could read his eyes
don't tell me u haven't decided yet
tum hi rahk do

her heart filled with happiness. It was like an honor she felt.
U will really let me select his name..
she asked in utter disbelive.. probably falling all over again for him
he smiled & nodded..
she almost reached to hug him. Her hands went around his arms & her neck to his shoulder.
She stopped biting her lips..her breath restlessly tickling his shoulder. She immediately pulled back. He dipped his head down..holding back the shudders that he felt through him. She smiled seeing him shy.
Her hands reached his cheek & pulled them sweetly... thanks u..she giggled. A blush spread on his cheek & he looked away nervously hidding them.

His blush had calmed down a bit, but his cheeks were still pretty red when she sat next to him pressing something on her phone. He slowly inched away feeling impossible to be in his senses with her propinquity.
Umm.. umm...
she thought for a file..
G se
he was so tempted to tease her why G.. but he didn't want to lose the closeness she had developed. It may just push her away.
She looked at him .. G se kyun ki mera baby hain.. she said cutely..
I am Geet.. so I want my baby also should have a name with G
she dipped her head sadly shuddering her shoulders ..scouting closer..
actually I want baby to remember me
her voice was heavy & sad
when he grows up ...main kis haaq se ussen
Maan immediately closed her mouth with his palms
tumhara haaq nahi tho kisi ka nahi
she fluttered her eyes .. looking at him, those eyes spoke .those twinkling eyes,
it always spoke of a thousand things to her. The glow in them making her drown in its intensity. She just wanted to stay in them forever. Like it evoked a myriad memories which lead an imprint in her soul. Every time she looked into them she was lost in innumerable feelings forgetting the world forgetting the reality..which seemed to make no cognizance.
When u give ur heart to someone, when you know u can tell them anything and everything...when you know u have HAAQ on them...words flow automatically, transparently...

Even though she has forgotten...her heart, her soul still beats for him and him only...
by rachna

She just hugged him.. without thinking. Sachi he will remember me as his mama. She asked burring her teary eyes in his chest. He closed his eyes dropping his head backward. His hand rested on the side fighting self..to hold her tell her.. take her into their world.
Aap ussen kahoge mera baren main
aap ussen kaho ge.. wo Geet ka garv hain..my pride.. our pride

he nodded... our pride.. ussen ki khushi ka tho mano koi tikhana hi na raha
she slowly pulled away to meet his gaze..
do u like garv?
He smiled in acceptance. ..whole of him craving to be lost in her arms again for ever.
missed u a lot plz plz..
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love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

me me me me 🥳

will edit later
EDIT
loved the update ...
finally our cuty has a name ... 😊 ,...
me missing my cuty next update mein cuty hoga muski ... btw when's the next update ...
greedy me 😃
Edited by sindu555 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res
posted my comments on pg 109 😊
Edited by Dilsay - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum updte di. . . Cnt w8 hr nxt updats . . ThaNX 4r updatin . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet ka garv was awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
just whn i was thinking ...lets c if muskaan updated...and...tadaaa u did
thanx alot.
awww geet first touched his senses with the advancing hands and oops..it was a slap. ouch. shweeto maan. shooo shweet and then he was blushing 🤗❤️

geet ka gaurav, our pride was awesome.👍🏼

oh how i wish this gets updated again quickly😍
Edited by basicquestion1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited.

Garv! Beautiful name and wonderful update...she has moved forward with him with her unconscious actions..loved it...v much...Maan kinda getting a small slap, he surprised that she touch him, she came to hug him, held his cheeks...den hug him...with tears in her eyes...her wanting the baby to remember her as his mamma...humara Garv..

loved it

when will the truth come out

Edited again...

When u give ur heart to someone, when you know u can tell them anything and everything...when you know u have HAAQ on them...words flow automatically, transparently...

Even though she has forgotten...her heart, her soul still beats for him and him only...
Edited by Water. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hai

this is awesome

and this is great part
jasraj123 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update. omggg geet slapped maan to just hide her feelings😆😆😆😆😆. she is really taking advantage of maan😉😉😉😉 but he still likes it. feel bad for maan's plight. he can't tell her and can't hold her sooo bad.

hayeee baby name is garv. sooo nice muskaan. their pride. wowww what a way u wrote that our pride. my heart fell for them and for ur writing tooo.
thanks for lovely update. pls continue. r u back to normal schedule or still busy

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