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Posted: 14 years ago
srry i m late...just read missing parts...v v butyful updates spcly 11&12
thnx alot for hattrik...u made me addict thrice...

radev romance krte tkhte nehi kya!!!

waiting 4 nxt 1...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update dear...!!!so rads will go to college and also a trip.
waiting for the next dear..
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Posted: 14 years ago
I finally had a chance to catch up with the last four parts...although it took me sometime to get into this FF---I am loving it now...

What amazes me about you, is that each one of your FF is different and even though it has Dev and Radhika, their personalities are different...

The story has really evolved and it is really nice to see the support Dev provides Radhika and Radhika to Dev..each one completes the other...Just three main characaters in this story and each one leaving its mark...
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Posted: 14 years ago

wonderful updates. waiting to read radhika entry to college and also their their trip 😍

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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing !!!!!! loved it
it was more romantic part and enjoyed their lovely & memorable moments 😳
wow !!!! they are going to trip ! can't wait for the next part 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update hope every woman gets a hubby like dev.who is doing everything for his wife.loved it.what i hear u r going away from IF.we r becoming less now no u musnt leave u must stay .give u comments 2.not only ff,tc🤗🥺
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting 4 next update plzzz post it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome updates devika
Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update,u r a rocker,do give as u n dont u dare move out.u need 2 stay n suppoert avina,😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part- 13

Radhika held her hands tight on Dev's biceps as the plane took off. Dev looked at her with a chirpy smile on his corner lips. Her eyes were closely tightened as the force took her up from the land. She felt a kind of floated feeling.. Her nervousness was clearly felt by Dev by her tightening and loosing grip.. Minutes ticked by.. Finally he felt the relief as she loosened her grip..

Dev: RAdhika , you can open your eyes now, you are safe..

Radhika slowly opened her eyes and looked around.. It was all white and blue chunks floating in front of her eyes...' she looked down through the oval window, but could see only the white spread beneath. She looked back at him with an amazing expression...'

"how is it?"..Dev asked..

RAdhika tried to smile.." nice'.

Dev: "I never thought it can be that scary for you"..

RAdhika: ?, ...No I was not, not at all.. tried to straighten herself..

Dev: so you are not scared..?

Radhika with confidence: nope.. not at all.

Dev: then what is this? Pointing to his upper arm..

RAdhika: what? And looked at where he pointed.. her eyes gone wild as she saw the nail marks on his upper arm..

RAdhika in embarrassment: why don't you wear long sleeves, at least during our trip.. Why you need to wear this short sleeve dress for a trip...

Dev in his lowest voice: Ms. Shivpur, so problem is with my sleeves now.. Ok, I will change it once we get there. Ok.. now you can take that belt off if you want..

RAdhika looked at him as he was taking it off'...but then: no, no I am fine.. I feel more comfortable with this on...'

Dev tried to control his smile again: ok, so you are not scared!..

Radhika in a very cool way: no, I am not..

"sir, juice, water, or any other drink".. a sweet voice grabbed their attention.. Dev smiled and ordered for them.. and then looked at RAdhika and tried to control his smile...'

As they were sipping onto their drinks..

RAdhika: Why dadi selected Paris..?

Dev: "why Paris.. because.." but she interrupted him

Radhika: because Paris has the oldest and famous gardens and the river Seine adds beauty to those gardens..it will be more lovable to see such place..

Dev got surprised listening to RAdhika's talk on Paris.. Everyone first relate Paris with the famous Eiffel Tower .. but here she is , he looked at her face.. she was continuing in trance.. " I have to walk on those crowded streets holding onto your arms.. I have to see those flowers which may be dancing with the wind, how they can be happy being in the middle of that loud noises of people around along with the funky sounds of horns".. "you tell me.. will they be happy where they are, how many colors may be there na.. , Tell me, what you think?'

Dev in trance too: what can I say RAdhika, I just want to be a listener for now. You tell me about Paris.. I want to know more about it..

He sat in a relaxed posture as she rested her head on his shoulder keeping her eyes open to that oval window, watching the clouds flying away near to her eyes...'. but her eyes were seeing the flowers in that imaginary garden'.. And her lips were moving with each scenery...'.

"Is Radhika is special because of this nature'" Dev also tried to look thru that oval window to see her descriptions outside'...

It was already dark as they stepped into their hotel room.

"Radhika, let's take rest today and we will explore the gardens tomorrow".. Dev said as he was taking his west off. He didn't hear any reply back , so he looked and found her standing near the window. He went and joined her and looked out.. The illuminated figure of Paris just took her breath away'... and he joined seeing the lighted beauty..
Radhika , as she felt his presence near : as if we are standing in heaven and the stars are blinking around us...'

Dev circled his arms around her at waist level and held her closer and said: whenever you are closer to me like this, I feel like I am in heaven and the stars around me blinking their eyes., feeling jealous seeing the brightest one near me...' saying that he placed a kiss near her earlobe.

She turned her face to look at him, and felt shy .. she circled her arms around him: don't tease me now..

Dev: No I am not.. Ok, let's get fresh up and have some dinner.. I am really feeling hungry.. This airplanes are going cheaper with budget cut..

Radhika loosened her arms and looked at him: what! We had everything served before landing too. And You are feeling hungry'!

Dev: No RAdhika, if we were sitting in that economy class, we might be starving by now..

RAdhika: what?

DEv: I was just testing to check whether you are with me or not? or did dig yourself into the beauty of Paris..'

Radhika: what!

Dev: just joking... ok then, Go get fresh up..

RAdhika: ok.. she went near the suitcase which was already opened by Dev.. Glanced through her dress. And kept her finger over her lips..
Dev: what happened?
RAdhika: oops, I forgot to take my night dress..

Dev: so what?

RAdhika: what will I wear..

Dev: wear anything..

Radhika was checking for a simple suit..

Dev came near: do you really need something? In his husky voice..

Radhika: aap bhi na.. and she went on checking.. Finally she found one of his long white kurtha.. and took it out and wiggled her brows and : this will be fine..
Dev: no, that's mine..
RAdhika held that tight to her grip: but now it is mine.. Buy me something new tomorrow, I will return this ..ok.
Dev: why you need to win all the time..
RAdhika: because... I am Mrs. Dev and she is so special.
Saying that she went into washroom..
Dev was changing his dress.. he took his shirt off'... he heard RAdhika's voice again.. Dev went near the door: what is it RAdhika?

RAdhika: I don't know how to turn this knob?

Dev : ok let me check.. he tried to open the door, but it was locked..

Dev: RAdhika open the lock, let me check..

Radhika:one minute..

Dev opened it as he heard the click and asked RAdhika in casual: so what's it?

Radhika: I don't know how to turn the knob, and it is too tight..

Dev: which one..

Radhika: this.. pointing at the standing shower one..

he went near.. and turned it on, and the water just showered onto her head and rolled down her body..

"its too cold'.. Radhika in a shivery voice...' "uyi ma''..

Dev: one second RAdhika, let me turn it off and he tried hard saying that and then looked at the knob clearly and turned it in neutral position..

"is it Ok Now?".. he looked at RAdhika as he said that..
His expression changed as he saw her wet face'... she was holding onto the towel knot tight'... RAdhika unaware of his look was trying to feel the warmth of the water to feel more comfy... the showering water just wet her hair, her face and rolled down her neck.. he felt the shiver as he saw those water drops rolling down her naked skin over her neck... his eyes trialed down his eyes caught her wetting legs ...

"this is fine" Radhika replied as she was getting comfy under that warm shower...'

She looked at him, as she didn't hear any voice.. found him standing next to her, looking at her passionately..
A lightening passed through her spine.. suddenly she looked down.. her heart started beating faster' she saw his feet getting near to her.. her breathing started going heavy' she felt the shiver as she felt his hand under her chin' she looked into his eyes shy fully..

"we came here for our honeymoon, right? Then why we need to be separate? We need to be together all the time.. This time is meant for us, only us, no one else is going to interfere our togetherness'.. saying that he joined her under the shower.. he looked at her wet hair.. he strolled his fingers through them.. "do you know how much I love your wet hair'" he placed a kiss over her forehead "and how much I love your wet rosy cheeks..' slowly it brushed down to her lips'...'and the wet lips".. his lips took over hers and she tighten her grip over her towel knot'...

,...but soon she realized she can't control her emotions'... her hands wandered over his back and the towel just fallen onto the bath tub . . ... she just held him closer to her body, closing all the possible space between them'.,... time just ticked by...

"Radhikaaa, are you ok".. Dev asked in whispering voice..

"hum'.. she nodded in agreement..

'You were feeling hungry na".. she questioned in a teasing tone..

"hum, to be with you'''..his husky voice replied

"so''. Radhika loosening her arms around him..

"so what?...as he saying that he took a dry towel from the near rack and started drying... and then continued .." We will go tomorrow to see the garden..and will see the colors and will ask the flowers all that you asked me throughout.. ' ' then wrapped the towel around her and lifted her up in his arms and walked towards the bed saying 'who said you need night dress...' ha, we will buy new ones, but my choice', ok..' Radhika was smiling as his voice was trailing low...'.

The view was getting far from their bedroom...' the focus changed from the white roof to the stars up in the sky' and they were feeling jealous to see the beauty sleeping comfortably under the warmth of her love'...'

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thank you , hope you will like this Paris trip...

take care Devika
Edited by Devika. - 14 years ago

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