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Posted: 13 years ago



Nice update...

will be w8ing for ur nextupdate..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update but a short one, continue sooon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update, waiting to see Maan's next move😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
okay i have a very very very long way too go budddy!!!!!
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Saath saath thk hai
oMG maan manager
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Part 23

Maaneet ff--is pyaar ko kya naam du

In hotel room

Maan: phle hi khud hi galati karti hai

Mujhse bina puche meri meeting fix kr di

Uske baad maine kuch kha bhi nhi

Ulta mujhe kh rhi hai

"mein gussa kr rha hu"

"khud hi gussa krti hai

Khud hi call cut krti hai

Thik hai geet

Phle to ab tum hi mujhe phone krongi

Ye tumhare Maan ka tumse wada hai Mrs.Khurana"😉

Ab mein tumhe phone nhi krunga

Tum krongi geet😆

Maan calls adi

Maan: adi

He instructs the some details to adi.

Maan: adi, jitni jaldi ho ye kaam ho jana chahiye

Adi: yes sir

Hysterical chirping of the birds woke her up in the morning. She opened her eyes to find herself alone on the bed.

"Ye maan itni subh subh kha gye".

Oh geet tub hi na

Tu abhi ooty mein hai.

She checks her cell.

Unhone mujhe ek baar bi call nhi kiya.

Abhi btati hu. She dials his number and without delay cancels the call.

Nhi geet, ydi unhe teri yaad nhi aati

To tujhe bi unhe yaad krne ki jarurat nhi hai...

She checks some paper.

Babaji ab mein kya karu...unke wajah se mein puri raat chn se so nhi payi...aur na hi kaam kr payi...

Ab geet ye design jldi se pure kr...di ko aaj hi complete krke dne hai.

At further side

Maan: aapne abhi usse kuch btaya to nhi hai na

Unknown: nhi

Pr soch rha hu bta du

{I think I will tell to her}.

Maan: nhi, bilkul nhi😡

Unknown: maan aaram se, to hyper mt ho

Mein kuch nhi btayunga

Tu relax kr

Maan: thanks

Unknown: ab thanks khke mujhe pray amt bna

Maan: hmmm

"KavyaAnjli --the fashion Designer Showroom"


Kuch bi nhi bdla aaj bhi waise ka waise hi hai

Yash: hey geet

Geet: hey yash

Yash: geet tumne shi kha kuch nhi bdla,

Pr tum kha gayab ho gyi thi achanak bina kisse ko btaye

Geet: kuch kaam tha yash

Yash: asa kya kaam tha geet ki dost ko btane tk ka time nhi mila

Anjli: geet

Geet: di

She hugs the di and said "miss you so much" di.

Both came out from the hug.

Anjli: geet jhoot mt bol

{geet don't say lie}

Di kha yaad aati hai, shaadi ke baad to , tu apni di ko bhul gyi

Yash: oh ye baat thi

Geet tune mujhe shaadi mein bhi nhi bulaya

Geet: wo mein

Yash: chl chod

Km se km apne pati se to mila de

Geet: wo mere sath yha nhi aaye hai

Anjli: wo😉

😳Geet: ye sb kya ho rha hai aap dono mujhe ase kyun pareshan kr rhe ho

Yash: oh geet

She left the place and enters in anjli's cabin.

Yash : geet sun to shi

Chli gyiii

Anjli: yash tum apna kaam karo mein baat krti hu.

In anjli's cabin

She was talking with her babaji.

Dekha babaji,

{anjli silently enter in own cabin.}

yha sb mujhe maan ka naam lekar pareshan kr rhe hai. Ek wo hai , unhe to meri parwah nhi hai.

Subh se mujhe ek baar tk phone nhi kiya

{ oh ye baat hai geet ki pareshani ki}

She turns and said di aap kb aayi

Anjli: jb tum apne babaji se maan ki complain kr rhi thi

Tb

Geet: wo mein

{She stammers between the words}

{di ne sb sun liya}

Wo di

Maan na

Anjli: kya hua maan ne phone nhi kiya

She nodded.

Anjli: jarur tumne kuch kiya honga

Geet: di aapko hamesha asa kyun lagta hai, maine kuch kiya honga.

She make baby face.

Anjli: wo kya hai na geet

Tum bolne se phle sochti nhi ho

Geet: di aap dono hamesha ek jase baat kyun krte ho

Anjli: kyunki hum dono tujhe bhut achi trh jante hai

She smiles😊

Anjli: hmmm

Kuch changes lag rhe hai

Geet: di kha kuch bdla hai

Sb kuch to waise ka waisa hi hai

Anjli: pe ek cheez bdl gayi

Geet: kya di

Anjli: tum

Geet: wo kaise

Anjli: phle tum sirf meri geet thi

Pr ab tum

"maan ki geet" ho😉

Geet: di aap bhi na😳😆

She blushed and hugs the di.

part 24

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 13 years ago
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Yipeee...me first...

Nice update...

Whats maan cooking To do...

I always love their cute f8s...

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey friends pta nhi pm nhi ho rhi hai
please tum sb ase hi read krlo

thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update.
love geet 's talk with baba ji

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesooome...
superb...
rocking...
wonderful...
loved the upd.
thanx for the pm...
take care...

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