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Posted: 14 years ago
Thnx for an awesome update.Enjoyed it immensely. waiting for the next.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ekta-avinafan

LOVELY UPDATE
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
no more comments
and can we expect dg update
i am missing chudki very much di.
☺️☺️☺️☺️

thanks ekta
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Posted: 14 years ago

taking it off, will update on weekend

sorry about the inconvenience..
Devika
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Posted: 14 years ago
Devika, i read it before u taking it off, its perfect,sincere thanks!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART-12

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The candles melt away leaving its trail behind.. The moon faded as the sun took over...'

Radhika was sleeping sound in Dev's warm wrap. She cued further and tightened her arms over his shoulder to his back to feel more warmth , while Dev moved slightly and tighten his arms around her in a comforting position.

They didn't hear the cell phone ringing.. a smile of satisfaction was playing around their lips even in that sleeing form...
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The cell started ringing again.. tried to pierce their ears this time.. Dev nodded his head in his sleep'... the ring tone started annoying Radhika..

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Radhika: Pick the phone na.. in her sleepy voice

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Dev: muhum'..

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She didn't say anything further as she felt his warm body pulled her more closer and his hands pulled the peech color comfy further up to their shoulder...
The seconds were passing by... both started waking up slowly.. Dev felt the loosening arms around him.. Radhika slowly opened her eyes... she felt her skin against his..

'.. Oh God.. what do I do now? How will I get up? Her eyeballs circled within its frame. All she could feel was the smoothness of that comfy around them.. but then.. she slowly pulled her hands to his chest level, and shake little bit to move away from his embrace.

He slowly opened his eyes as he felt her moving.. a happy smile was playing on his lips.. this was his dream for long... He loosened his grip too, and then slowly tried to touch her chin to make her to look at his face.. Radhika was feeling too shy that she forced herself down.. Dev realized her hesitance.. a teasing smile appear on his lips... and then with a force he just moved to the side and brought down Radhika on her back..

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Her eyes gone wild and she looked at his face fearfully.. Dev lifted his upper body towards her and went closer to her face.. she saw the passionate teasing look in his eyes.. she felt shy.. she closed her eyes as she saw his face neared hers and her lips shivered as his lips touched her forehead..

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In his natural lovely husky voice he said " I love you Radhika, now you look more beautiful than ever".. and then waited for her to open her eyes.. she slowly opened her eyes and looked at him lovingly with a shy smile on her lips..

" now you are mine , completely mine, ...'. Then with a pause he added.. ". I complete in you Radhika."..

She took that moment into hers' she completely merged into his talk.. she extened her arm out and circled around his neck level and held him tight, to feel that moment'... time just passed by...' Radhika was feeling his lips on her neck and was tightening her grip on his neck'. The phone rang again...

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Radhika paused for a second...but continued to feel him on her..

Radhika: phone..
Dev didn't say anything back..
Radhika: your cell phone..
Dev;: hum..
Radhika tried to move: may be some important call'
Dev: hum..
Radhika: check on it.. please..
He lifted his face upto look into her eyes with a note... Chup
Dev's eyes pleaded him to check on it..
With little hesitation, he extended his arm to take the phone and said " hello"
He was listening but his eyes were on her.. Radhika tried to move, but he held her back tight' she showed her face to excuse her.. he kept his teasing smile as he listened to the other end'
' no problem, I will be there".. he kept the phone down..
'now you need to go, right?, so let me get up too.".. Radhika said
"No Radhika.. I don't have to go anywhere.."..
"I heard you saying it".. Radhika
"but I have time".. Dev
" But I don't.. I need to be there.".. Radhika
Dev :" no RAdhika , I will take care of that too"..
Radhika tried to sit and said " No you don't.. I need to go, you already told me you don't have time...
Dev pulled her back onto his body.." How will you go.."
Then only she got aware of her situation.. suddenly her eyes fallen on her body' she looked around, found her saree on the floor.. she looked at him helplessly'
" You close your eyes".. Radhika ordered..
" no, I am not".. Dev replied with the same teasing smile..
"yes, you are"' Radhika
" No Radhika, I am not"..
" chodiyena, please"' Radhika pleaded..
Dev melt there.. he can argue with fighting RAdhika but not the pleading Radhika..

He loosened his grip..

" Ok , I will leave you, but how will you go..?".. he asked in doubt..
Radhika took advantage of the situation, she rolled out from the bed along with the blanky around her. And with a winning voice said : this way' and she disappeared into the bathroom'

Dev just looked at her and smiled'

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Dev saw Radhika standing in front of the mirror, getting ready to go to office..

He was buttoning his shirts.. he went near and picked the sindoor bottle from her hand said " this is my right, let me help you".. with that he took a pinch of sindoor in his fingers and applied over her hair partition.. she looked at her husband's face in gratitude for giving her such importance'.. he kept the bottle down. and then looked at her. RAdhika was standing in that position looking ino tthe mirror.. he noticed the blush on her cheek..

He held her from behind and stroked on her slender arms... and whispered into her ears: look so beautiful...

and saw her bushing hard. she lowered her eyes in shy..

Dev: now also you are feeling shy?..
Radhika was unable to hold her feelings, she turned quick and hugged him tight..
"Now what happened?"' Dev asked brushing her hair down..
"nothing, I want to be near you like this all the time"' Radhika said
" Ok then, I have no problem, let's stay like this".. Dev with a teasing tone
Radhika " i know you are always like this".. and then with Imrati style, she moved out and put her foot wear on and said ..." let's go"'
Dev just smiled and followed her..
Daadi was noticing all these changes in Dev and the blush on RAdhika's cheeks.. and she smield to herself..

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Everyone at the office was in tension.. Meeting is going to be in one hour. Dev is not there yet. Client will be here soon'.
The employees got alert as they heard Dev's footsteps.. he walked to his cabin keeping his head straight, but as usual his eyes were cornering on everyone's action. Vishaka was on her heels, trying to find excuses and Amba just behind her . Gopal das followed Dev to his cabin, to listen to the expected tantrums'. so did Vishaka
Dev went and sat on his chair. Checked on his daily schedule.. and still looking into that program chart..
" Vishaka make sure the copies are ready for the clients.." and then looking at her face " also the conference room is ready, right?"
He looked at her for an answer. Vishaka stood in confusion how to answer..
"What happened? any prblem? Dev
" hu.. ha' vo' Mr. DP.. the file is not ready yet' and I can't find it on my table either.." she tried to finish her sentence in tremble voice.. imagining the response..
"oh..that.. file is ready' "... in a cool tone. He stood from his seat and went near to the file cabinet. Vishaka, and Amba dropped their mouth as they saw the well arranged cabinet. Dev easily picked the file from it and about to handed it to Vishaka but then as if remembering something.. " one minute".. he went and took his cell and dialed one number..

Unknowingly a lovely smile appered on his lips and that gave a glow to his face.

Gopal Das, Vishaka , and Amba all looked at his calm face, and shyful smile and was standing in shock..

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" um' you were remembering me na' ,".. they heard Dev's loving voice and was about to faint..
"ok, I am sorry, ' ye.. don't hang up, it's really important.. I won't take much time.. I need your help...' what did you tell me yesterday.. I didn't listen to you properly'''.. no no.. not that' listen, after arranging the file cabinet.. what do I need to do with this'' ha' ha.. you said something' . oh, ok.. ok'. I got it.. will call you soon'' ok ok' later".. he kept the phone down.. and then turned to Vishaka.

" Vishaka, there is a book to log in, do that before taking it out, and replace it on the same place after work, and you need to enter the log out too".. now onwards all the files will be arranged here and Amba you will check it at the end of the day' did you get that?" Dev asked in his magical tone..

"yes, yes' yes sir".. she tried to reply back..
Vishaka did as Dev ordered and walked out still with drooping jaw'
Dev and Gopal Das went on discussing on the project, its budget and all..

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Vishaka: Amba whom he was talking to? And what he was telling that person.. who is this, who arranged all the files..!!!?
Amba just imitated her action and said: I am also thinking the same, who is this new person?.. but whatever, now I end up with one more work?'.. stupid person who ever it is..
They saw Gopal Das coming out.. Vishaka went near him: Gopal , who is that?

Gopal in confused tone: wh wh who is who?

Vishaka:: Whom DP was talking to? who arranged the file cabinet?

Gopal: with a confident smile: Oh that...

Vishaka:: "ha, that.". AMba joined Vishaska with same tone..
Gopal looking at their curious face: I don't know. It is DP... may be he hired somebody, or...or.. I don't know.. with that he just walked away... Vishaka still stood in shock ..and Amba stood with a froggy face...

Everything was going on fine' for Dev that day. He was so relaxed.. .. he went back home with a happy mood..

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At dinner time..

Daadi: so how you two are doing..?

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Dev: why daadi? We are doing fine.."
Daadi: no no' it's been months after your marriage.. you didn't even gone for any vacation yet?
Radhika: Vacation..!!! no way Daadi, I am already screwed up.. and I am going to admit today that I don't know abcd of business.
Dev tried to smile looking at Daadi, thinking of her challenge.

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Daadi: RAdhika, that is not fair.. I am here and you are saying you already accepting your failure.

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RAdhika: No daadi, it is not you.. but me.. I am totally depending on both of you.. I can do some but not all.. I feel terrible.. she continued her frustration.. each time something come in front of me, I try hard to figure it out... but then I don't know whether it is right or wrong? she continued... Dev and Daadi listemed and they understood her words..

Daadi: Dev what you think?
Dev looking at Radhika's face: I can help her..
Radhika: that is not a solution..
Dev: I mean, I can help you to learn the skill.. are you ready to take that challenge..
RAdhika: what?
Dev: are you ready to take a challenge so that you can be your own..
RAdhika with a confident voice: yes , I can.
Dev in a very cool voice: Ok then, join back in college..
The fork just fell on the floor. The time froze for RAdhika...' this is what she pleaded to her family when they fixed her marriage.. this is what she always dreamed of.. and now she is hearing that from her husband's mouth as his wish' and as a challenge..
Dev: what? Ms. RAdhika rejecting the suggetion..?
Radhika looked at him with tear filled eyes: no, I am accepting it, if you are there with me, I can face any challenge' but how can I believe this, will it be possible?..
Dev: don't worry about your admission and all. I can get your certificates easily.. just need your signature... and rest of the process.. In fact I checked on it already and you were a very good student with the highest grades in your class.. you have the potential.. so why don't you continue it... and you don't have to get your face in anything for the admission process.. I just want to hear yes or no .. from you.. that's it
Radhika: so you planned this earilier?'
Dev: I was seeing your frustration.. and I know Ms. RAdhika doesn't like to depend on others for decision making... so I was kind of expecting ... but that is not the question.. are you ready for it? say Yes or NO...
Radhika with a teary smile: yes.
Dev: Ok then get ready with your backpack soon'
Radhika was still in a dreamy world..
Daadi: ok ok.. that is very good.. but when you get all those process done' here is my gift for you guys'
Dev took the paper piece from her..: tickets to Paris!!!!!
Daadi: ha Dev, you can delegate your three weeks work to trusted people and enjoy your time with your wife.. and if everything goes as planned' RAdhika beta, this is your free time..., once you join school, I don't think you will be able to go anywhere, even if Dev wish..
Radhika looked at daadi thankfully'
RAdhika helped Birju to arrange everything back in kitchen' she ran to her room with the happiest heart ever..
Dev was talking on his cell to someone at the balcony.. she went and just wrapped her arms around him.. Dev held her close with his right arm and continued to talk' after few minutes.he turned off the cell..
Dev: happy..
RAdhika nodded her head in agreement..
Dev: me too'
Radhika moved back to look at his face said: but one thing..
Dev: what?.. while tucking her hair behind her ears..
RAdhika: I am not Ms. Radhika
Dev: then who are you?
Radhika in a proud voice: I am Mrs. Dev Purohith
Hearing that he felt happy: hum' but when I feel like challenging you, the old face comes in front of me.. what can I do..?
Ra
dhika: no.. not anymore..
Dev: ok' after a pause.. RAdhika can I ask you something?
RAdhika looked at him ?
Dev: Do you want everyone to know about our marriage? I mean, cam we announce our marriage?

Radhika's response was quick: Not now.. anyway IP people knows it.. and I have seen their happiness on the day you gave them the party. They are simple people with good heart.., they live in their world, they don't know how big you are, and i am happy to work with them... but otherwise, no, I like this privacy.. For now I just want to feel that you are mine' Just mine.. I don't want anybody to look at me and mock at me.. I am fine in your arms.. I have Daadi with me.. May be later.. but not now' I don't want to face the media.. Then they will be back of us like earlier and ask all those nonsense'

Dev: Ok baba.. its all your wish. I just asked.. so Mrs. Dev Purohith need to enjoy this private time.. Ok.. I am ready for it.. a cat and mouse game..
Radhika: ye, don't we have to get the things ready for the trip..
Dev: yes, but not now.. will do that tomorrow.
RAdhika: but..
Dev: no, no but.. I just need you by my side RAdhika.. then with all that dress packing-. Just pick whatever you wish.. But don't take much.. we can shop in Paris.. and I want to see you in all those dress that I will select for you over there.. so beware before packing..

Radhika: so..

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Dev looked at her with a corner smile: so' within fraction of second he grabbed her in his arms and carried her to the bed'..
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The moon hide behind the dark cloud with shyness'''

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thanks and take care

Devika

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Devika, i read it before u taking it off, its perfect,sincere thanks!!

Thanks,myra, i was doing it in half sleepy phase... and i lost the track... 😕, but luckily caught it before and i tried to correct it, but then the format went goffy.. i felt so impatient, i took it off. now also did in half sleepy state, but i think it is ok.
:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Devika,it was a beautiful update. Loved it. Will RaDev be in Paris in the next update? Waiting for the next one.Pls update soon.Can't wait any longer.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks devika For nice post waiting for next
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Posted: 14 years ago
VERY VERY VERY LOVELY UPDATE DEVIKA DI
loved it,excitement for the honeymoon trip and rads joining college too ,wonderfull idea.and u know i liked the curious faces of vishakha,amba and somewhat frustrated too.loved that.
and i liked ur idea of arranging files and amba again felt bad for more work,woww
ready for travelling and seeing paris with ur thoughts and eyes.
thanks di.

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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u di and basically i always love ur ff and today it increased a lto, vishaka and ambas frustated faces it was realy funny and also radev paris trip wow and radh joining back in college superb i loved each and every scene today but soon want radev to confess their marriage infront of media becoz no other rohan can peep through radh when she entered the college

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