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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
really i enjoyed ur update.thanku so much for ur FF.please can u add me to pm list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART3:

Radh went to her mom and just then Vishaka and Mrinalini came there.

Mrinalini:"good mng kaaki"

Devika:"kaise hpo mrinu"

Mrinallini:"I am fine aunty"

Daadima and Vaishali who were stading there are watching at a 13 year sweet mrinalini.

Daadima: Devki, Ye bachi kaun hain

Devki: maa ye mrinalini aur vishaka hain humaara devar hain na Ranjiv ji vunki beti hain ye

Daadima: achaa thik hain beta

Just then Dev who was coming in that way saw Radhika and stopped and listened to the convo of his mom and when Devki was pointing to Vishaka Dev was confused and took Radhika to be vishaka,

Dev thought to himself "Vishaka ki bachi, mujhse apni behan kaa naam apna naam bola , dekho main bhi tumse kaise khelonga"

Dev hid behind the tree and waited till Radhika left along wiht her parents, After they left Dev came to vasihali and hugged her asking " wo koun hain mom"

Vaishali:"Dev wo tera kaaki aur daai hain"

Dev nodded his head and left silently.


Fifteen days run off and all these fiften days radev as usual used to meet at the temple place and play with eachother. BUt radhika used to call her kk and dev used to call him radhika but he was tinking that her original name is vishaka

As usual Dev and Radhika met at the temple and Dev said to Radhika
"main kal london jaane wale hun"

Radhika with a gloomy face:kyun jaa rahe ho

Dev:wo meri mom,dad apni padaai ke liye vaha bhejh rahe hain

Radhika: tum yaha bhi padsakte ho na

Dev:lekin dad bol rahe ki vahaan jaakar pada toh ,bahut achi kaamyaab banenge

Radhika: agar tum gaya toh main kis ke saath khelo

Dev: teri woh friends hain na bnty, billu vuske saath helo

Radhika:nahi main kisi ke saath nahi khelungi, agar main kisi ke saath khel diya toh vo mujhe chod kar chali jjaaoge

Dev: aisa kuch bhi nahi hoga tum chinta mat karo

Radhika: tum mujhe chodkar jaa rahe ho

Dev: aisa kuch nahi hoga tere ghar mein computer hain na teri email id de do main tumhe email karoongi

Radhika: sachi

Dev:muchi

Radhika: toh ye lo "bittu.pari@gmail.com"

Dev: ye hui na baat, main jaroor tumhe emailkaroongi

Radhika: era bhi mal id do , agar tum nahi kiya toh main karoongi na

Dev:"funny guy@gmail.com"

Radhika: thank u

bu byeee

Dev: abh kyun jaa rahe ho

Radhika: mujhe ghar jaana hain, day after tomorrow mandir mein kanha ki statue sthaapith kar rahe hain hum

Dev: ohhh ab chalo

Radhika: kyun tumhe kanha par viswaas nahi hain

Dev: no way, agar main bhi tera tarah mandir gaya oh, meri friends ke saamne mera image kam hoga

Radhika: lekn kyun

Dev: thats a matter fo boys u never know

Radhika: go to hell, um london jaane ke pehle hi aise ho toh, lndon jaane ka baad kitna badlogi, ye toh main soh bhi nahi sakta

Dev:hahaha

Radhika: I have to go bu byeee, miss u kishan kannayaa

Dev: bu byee

Dev to himself after Radhika left " tum ne apna id diya na, london jaane ke baad main tumse bolungi ki main teri asli naam jaanti hun but u are always my cute friend"

The nextday...

Dev with Rp, Susheel, Vivek

Rp: main tum he apni chachaji ke saath bej raha hun na, tum vusse tang mat karna aur sikhayat ka koi mauka mat dena, achi se padna apne bhai ki tarah aur apni khyaal rakhna.

Dev was crying saying: main tumhe aur mom ko chod kar nahi jaavungi

Rp: nahi beta aise nahi kehte, tum achi tarah padna hain na

Dev:lekin aap har din mujhe mail karna hain

Rp: fine baba i will call u and mail u

Rp: susheel, iska jaraa khyaal rakhna , yr toh vivek ki tarah nahi, bahut sathaate hain, buraa mat maan na

Susheel: Bhaiyya, aap chinta mat karo aur main jaise meri arjun ko dekh raha hun waise hi isiko bhi dekhungi,

The reporting time was announced and Susheel took Dev and vivek to the boarding area and Rp was waving his hands telling them bye.

Radhika who was standing in the balcony of her house was seeing at sky and finding a flight going she waved her hand saying "bye kk"

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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
friends, thanks for all ur support and this is a short update and i know it but i updated it to give a continution and will update later again a long update, so now the mad world begins and please don't check the mail id's i gave there becoz, they were not at all in existence😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: ekta-avinafan

NICE PART HARI
LOVED radev meet and again name problem,wonder whats poblem it will create here and i loved dev's dialogues there and tell u i am so eager to know the real mystery yaar ,i got some hint but this hint is creating more problems. here purohit mansion devki's maternal home ,problems are related to tis but how u will unite our radev then.its too much i think ,pls update soon dear.

no worry all the folda will be unfolded soon and what hint u got i don't know and i also didn't understand what wil; create probs leta wait and see what happens
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ harrokh ur reply was really funny but i don't know what i write when i comehere to type just the words will be flowing on

@fatssrilanka , thanks dear and i wish i update soon

@thujaa: thanks dear

@imarti:there is no mystery yaar, just peoples foolishness is the topic of this ff and yep there is something in past which i release in future😉

@jeffin: thank u dear

@anu17 , thank u di love u a lot❤️

@myranelly, well i like funny parts 😉 and thanks dear

@chayya: thank u dear and here is ur forward one

@masumasrilanka: yep the children are friends and they are the best friends ever

@avina_fan1 thank u asmaa

@ak4423766463 thanks and will sure pm u , i added u to my pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
very nice update. like it. waiting 4 the next part. continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Thnx for the update & PM. Hope there won't be name confusion & gets sorted out soon as they grow up. Waiting for your next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
hari wow your second FF lovely...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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what should i say confusion -single double or combined.
i think combined confusions of cb1 and cb2.firstly dev thought her name is not radhika and now next her name is vishakha .but he really likes her yaar so positivity na.
will wait for his coming back and clear confusion.
now u have to clear cofusion as well as mystery of pb and shastri relation.u are saying its not mystery then if they are really relativesthen how will u unite yaar that itself is a mystery.
oh oh oh.leave all questions.waiting for next only.and thanks a lot .
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
loved it hmmm so a mystery in dis one so radhika mum and dev dad brother and sister, i loved the bond between ammo and radhika and then the friendship between radev oh no the name confusion hope its gone soon update soon and thanks for the pm

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