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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

Wow! Nice FF. Waiting for both Dev & Radhika to grow up.

thanks dear ur wish will be compketed soon becoz i am also waiting for it😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks hari.
cant wait for grown up radev.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
thanks dear beautiful start.waiting 4 more tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
really a good start looking forward for radev first meet and also i m curious about the mystery behind radha kanha milan as said by devki
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
nice update hari ,so first meeting going to come of our radev.will some magic will happen?
whats the story b/w mohan and purohith to not keep relation untill now?will wait for next.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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The little Radh jumped out of car as soon as they reached the mandir and ran into it.

" arey radhika bitiya suno rukho" ammaji came from the car calling radhika( " radhika stop")

Devki: koi baat nahi hain maaji wo thik hi hogi, vusko ye mandir jaan pahechani hai na( no worries, she will be fine as she is used of this temple a lot)

Ammaji: lekin bitiyan main meri Radhu ko Sharada se milna chahti hun , vo kitni tadap rahi hain tum jaante ho na. ( but i wanna introduce radhika t sharada, u know for how long sharada is waiting)

Devki: aakhir Main bhi Radhika ko apne naani se milna chahti hun lekin( even i too want Radhika to meet her grandmother).

Ammaji: bahuriyaan ek baat bolu , achi baat yahi hogi kli Radhika ko in rishton ke baarein mein pata na chal jaaye, takhi vuski man mein koi khrodh bhav nahi aaoge( shall i say onethng, it will be good if radh doesn't know her relation ship with them, becoz if she know truth she may reject them and develop anger on them)

Devki: lekin vo toh vuski naani ka pata jaane tak haq toh hain na( but she has to know who is her gm na)

Ammaji: main samajh sakthi hun lekin ye jaane ka baad Radhika ke mann mein jo prashn vuthayega vuska jawwaab hum de sakte hain kya( i can understand but do we have answers for those questions of radhika , is she knows the truth)

Devki: aap bhi sahi keh rahe hain. lekin kabh tak ye sach nahi patayenge hum radhu ko( thats also right, but till when we will hide this)

Ammaji: jab tak wo samajhdaar nahi banoge( till then she grow up and becomes responsible)

devki: thik hain(cool)

Ammaji: acha ab chaloge apni maa se nahi milogi.( okay shall we go, wn't u meet with ur mother)

Devki: mujhe meri maa se aur meri bhabhi se bhi milna hain.( i wana meet her and my sis-in-law too)

They both start to walk towards mandir.
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Radhika was at the place of kanha's statue , when ever she see the kanha statue just start to sing the song on him.with her cute voice and today also she sang in the same way.

A 9 years boy playing there noticed it and ran towards the statue, he saw a small girl singing there.

Boy:"oyee ladki"(hey girl)

Radhika was immersed to such a level in the song that she didn't respond to him

"Oyee ladki"(hey girl)

no response.

Finally the boy who was vexed took his flute fom pocket and started Playing it.Radhika stopped her song and looked at him " aap koun hain"( who r u)

The boy looked at her but didn't answer her

The girl: " aap koun hain"(who r u)

The boy didn't answer, a vexed girl gave him a slap on his back, the bo suddenly stopped his flute and looked at her with anger " kyun maara mujhe"( why did u slap me)

Girl:"toh kya karoo aap mujhe answer nahi de raha that is liye marna pada."( then what should i do, u are not answering me)

Boy: "why didn't u answer me at first"

Girl: kab(when)

Boy : jab tum vo gaana gaa rahe ho( when u are singing a song)

Girl: wo mujhe pata nahi chala ki aap ne mujhe bhulaaya( i didn't notice u calling me sorry)

Boy: any how u did sang nice

Girl: thanq aap bhi bansuri achi tarah bhajaya( u did play the flute nice)

Boy: that's obviously me, waise tera naam kya hain( whats ur name)

Girl: Radhika

Aap ka naam(ur's name)

Boy thought to him self " ye lladki mujhe ullu ban ne ki kosish kar rahi hain Radhika bol ke"( is she trying to fool me by saying her name radhika)

Radhika: aap ka naam( ur's name)

Boy: D.. Kishan kannayya

Radhika: aap ka naam bahut acha hain bilkul meri kanha ki jaise. ur's name was very nice just as that os my kanha)

Kishan kannayya giggled to him self " Y e ladki itni ullu hain, mera naam dev hain lekin main kk bola toh bilkul maan liya"( this girl is so stupid, we can fool her easily. she believed when i said my name as kk insted of dev)

Dev: okay kya tum mujhse khelogi( will u play with me)

Radhika: toh hum kya khelenge , basket ball( sure, basket ball)

Dev: kyaa basket ball

Radhika: haan aapko nahi aati hain kya( don't u know)

Dev thought to him self " she is a girl and she is playing basket ball"

Dev: okay tujhe aur kya kya khel aate hain( what the other games u know)

Radhika: basketball, cricket, soccer, rugby etc etc

Dev: kya lekin ye sab games tho ladka khelte hain( but these are games played by boys)

Radhika: kyun kanha ne kuch kaha ki in games boys khel sahte hain, these gamea are pleayed by girls.( is there any rule)

Dv: mea matlab vo nahi hain , acha tum kiske saath khelte ho( no, i didn't mean that, okay with who u play generally)

Radhika: mere pappa ke saath( with my dad)

Dev: aur(and)

Radhika: mere jo dost hain vuske saath( my friends)

dev: aapki dost ka naam kya hain( whats th name of ur friend)

Radhika: billu, bablu, etc etc

Dev: ohhh tum bahut achi aur alag ho( u are good an different)

Radhika: alag kya hain( what different)

Dev: tum boys ke sath khelte ho na( u play with boys)

Radhika: toh(so)

Dev: i never saw a girl playing with boys.

Radhika: meri daadi bolte hain ki , apne liye jo chahe wahi karo ksi aur ka baat mat maano aur isliye hi main mujhe jo acha laga vahi karti hun
(my gm tell me that we has to do whatever we wanna do and i follow the same)

Dev liked her sense of humour and also her positive attitue and soon be friended her.

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Devki: maaa

Sharada: kaisi ho beti bahut saalon ke baad tujhe dekhne ka mauka mila
( how are u daughter, i met u after a long time)

Devki: main bilkul tikh hun maa( i am fine)

Sharada: daamad babu tujhe achi tarah dekh rahe ho na beti(son in law was treating u nice na)

Devki: haan maa(yep)

Sheetal: i think here some one are asking abt my son

Sharada: beti se bat kar rahi hun beech me mat aao na sheetu( don't come in middle when i am talking with my daughter)

Sheetal: thik hain(okay)

Vaishali: ahem ahem koi yaha mujhe nahi dekha( some one didn't see me here)

Devki: bhabhiii

Vaishali : kaise ho tum( how are u)

Devki: main bilkul thk hun, aa kaise hain( i am fine, what abt u)

Vaishali: dikha nahi de rahi hun kya( i think u can see how i am)

All laughed and hugged each other

Sharada: waise meri poti kaha hain, ab vusse apni naani se milne ka waqt aa gaya( where is my gd, i wanna meet her)

Sheetal and Devki looked at each other and sharada asked whats problem

Sharada and devki explained the reasons and Sharada understanding it agreed.

Sharada: sheetal atleast u can intorduce me as ur friend na

Sheetal: mujhe kachu problem nahi hain, lekin humaari rishtey ke baare me mat bol na vusse, waise hi wo kuch short tempered hain( i don't have problem, but pease don't tell abt ur relation shie with her, she is short tempered)

Sharada: i know

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Dev: i wil meet u tomorrow bye radhika

Radhika: bye kishankannayya

Dev ran towards the place where her paents were there and Radhika went to search for devki and ammaji.

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Thanks for ur immense support friends and i am here updating my second part hope u all like it😊😊😊😊. feel free to comment.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: -Shankar-

thanks hari.

cant wait for grown up radev.

thankd a lot bro

but u have to wiat only 3 more parts to go for grown up radev
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: masumasrilanka

thanks dear beautiful start.waiting 4 more tc

have a lot to see and please do read with my ff but don't kick me when i take u into a mad world
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: imarti_rubi

really a good start looking forward for radev first meet and also i m curious about the mystery behind radha kanha milan as said by devki

thanq dear and childhood meet is here, and the big met will be soon may be in part6 or 7 but sure u will land into a mad world along with me and i too don't know what is the significance of the word told by devki😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: ekta-avinafan

nice update hari ,so first meeting going to come of our radev.will some magic will happen?
whats the story b/w mohan and purohith to not keep relation untill now?will wait for next.

no magics for now just things filled with silly ness which leads into a mad world in future which may have any magic.

i think u have got a guess abt it in the part2

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