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Posted: 13 years ago
what a spoiler yar
can't wait to read more 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
I guess am going to love this ML track..
This is better than the one in serial
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the spoiler...
geet's dialogue is really very hilarious about the kid..."they just came out of the blue"...🤣😆
waiting for the update...
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice spoiler
but they are grown ups they will put up the acts
but what about kids, esp the little ones, they might do strange /funny things, its difficult for them to stay away from their father and mother too
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Posted: 13 years ago
spoiler is awesome👏 plzzz update soon😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
love the spoiler!
but it would be nice to see how Maan interacts with his 4 kids!
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,

Hope you like the update😆

Chapter 57

Maan was in the hospital creating a fuss and yelling at all the nurses and doctors that were in the room. He wanted to leave the hospital and go home, not even listening to Dadima. Dadima quickly ran outside the room to make a phone call..."I am old..everyone should be taking care of me not the other way around..." She sighs and rings up Arjun...

Arjun: hello Dadima...yeah what happened..

Dadima: Listen Maan is awake

Arjun: ohh really that is a great news...when is he coming home?

Dadima: There is a small problem though...

Arjun: Problem? What happened?

Dadima: It seems like he is suffering from a memory loss..he forgot last nine years of his life...

Arjun (shocked): What? So that means that bhai is...

Dadima: Yeah he is back to the way he was nine years ago. He is creating a big fuss right now asking for the doctors to leave. I don't think I can keep him here any longer...so hurry and notify everyone soon. I will see what I can do with Maan right now...

Maan: Do what with me Dadima? (Dadima jumps with fear and slowly turns around. She saw him dressed in his formal clothes...she nervously smiles at him)

Dadima: Maan beta what are you doing dressed up?

Maan: I am ready to leave...lets go...I want to go home..you know I hate hospitals...

Dadima: ohh umm..but...we...(she looks down thinking of something...) we can't

Maan (looks at her with suspicious) why not?

Dadima: uhh because...I have a headache...(she looks at him with a happy face but quickly makes a sad face) I mean I have a really bad headache...

Maan (sighs): Dadima I know you are pretending..you always do this. I will call the doctors at home if anything. Lets go now...(he holds her hand to lead her outside...) by the way you look different...you changed a lot ever since I was in New York...

Dadima (to herself: Of course I will change...I have finally become old thanks to your kids...making me run and giving me tension all the time...now I have your tension...how do I stop him...): Maan lets go out to eat...

Maan: we can go out for dinner..all of us..you, me , Arjun and Pinky...Right now I really want to rest...(Dadima to herself: "Now what...he is not listening to me...I hope Arjun notifies everyone before we reach there..." Both sit in the car to go toward the mansion. Dadima sits in the car nervously thinking and hoping that everyone at home knows about Maan's current condition...) Dadima are you okay? Why are you so scared and nervous?

Dadima: you will find out when I go home...(she mumbles to herself)

Maan: What?

Dadima (looks at him) huh what...nothing...its nice weather isn't it? (Maan looks at her weirdly...)
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At the mansion:

Vicky (to MJ and Armaan): Do you guys see them anywhere? (All three were hiding behind a sofa with their guns looking out for Sargam and her team...)

Mj: No...

Armaan: Lets move to another place...

Vicky: Okay we have to split..Armaan you go over there behind the curtains...MJ you take the opposite side and I will be in the middle..remember listen for any noise and also make sure you guys clear the area before you hide there...remember boys they are everywhere...pay close attention...(Both nod their head and all split up...Sargam and Ranbir saw them...)

Ranbir: I see them lets attack

Sargam: No..not yet...we have to make them come out of their hiding...

Ranbir: how?

Sargam: signal Ramesh and Adi uncle...have them go out in the open and then we come from behind and attack them...

Ranbir: okay...(Adi shakes his head no because he was worried and scared...Ramesh pushes him outside..both hold their guns out ready to fight)

Adi (whispers): Ramesh...you guys play this game..I have to go and help your mother...

Ramesh: Don't be a spoil sport dad..come on...they could be anywhere (he said while looking around)

Adi (looks around scared) Anywhere? (he gulps)

Armaan: Sees Ramesh and Adi...(he signals MJ both nod and runs outside screaming and hitting each other with the gun ball...Adi and Ramesh scream and does the same...Vicky hits his head when he sees MJ and Armaan coming out...he waits for Sargam and Ranbir to be out...he sees them hiding and starts hitting them...eventually everyone comes outside and there is a huge mess, along with yelling and screaming.)

Meanwhile, Maan and Dadima reach the mansion. She hears sceraming and hits her forhead...Maan looks at her and then listens to the noise coming from inside..angry he walks inside and sees two nor four no FIVE kids along with Vicky and Adi playing with guns hitting each other...Adi runs behind Maan to save himself...Maan looks at him with anger..Adi instantly moves back...Arjun comes running home to tell everyone but hides behind the pillar scared when he sees Maan standing there with his death glare...

Maan (one of the balls from the gun hits Maan. He gets more angry. Dadima sneaks out of the mansion and bumps into Arjun. Both hide behind the pillar to look at the ongoing war): WHAT IS GOING ON? (Everyone stops and looks at Maan. They jump with joy...Sargam and the twins come and hugs Maan holding both of his legs..he looks down in shock)

Sargam: papa...you are home...

MJ and Armaan: what happened to your head papa?

Everyone else come outside and was so happy to see Maan. Geet comes from down the stairs, Maan looks at her with confusion. She was holding Asha in her hand while Pinky was holding Priya in her hands. He was confused..he didn't know anyone...besides from Vicky, Dadima, and Pinky and Arjun. He watches her come down the stairs as she stands in front of him with a girl. The girl goes toward him to be held by Maan but he just looks at her weirdly)

Geet: Maan she wants to be held by you...why are you not taking her? (Asha screams...Geet brings her closer to Maan. Asha holds his shirt collar. Maan holds her away from him...) Maan what are you doing?

Maan: Itne sare baache?

Sargam (pulls him by his leg): You don't know us? (She starts laughing) You are joking...

Maan (he looks around and doesn't find Dadima...he looks at Pinky) Yeh saare shetan baache kiske hai? (she gulps in fear) Yeh kya horaha hai...(Arjun pushes Dadima to go in front of Maan...he looks at her) Dadima what is going on?

Dadima: uhh Maan why don't you go upstairs and rest for a little bit...I will explain everything else later...(she calls for Nakul before he could say anything...she sighs in relief when Maan leaves...everyone look at her and then at Maan...)

Geet: Dadima what is going on with Maan?

Dadima: I will tell you everything...
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All the grownups sat in one room nervous, worried, scared and god knows what else.

Geet: Okay guys so you know why we all are here. (Everyone shakes their head yes) Maan is suffering from memory loss and he has forgotten his marriage life and everything along with it from the past 9 years meaning me, the kids, Pinky your marriage...everything...

Arjun: So now what we have to do?

Adi (scared) So this means that we have our old Maa Maa Maa Maan back?

Geet (shakes her head yes) Yes...the same old Maan...sadu, aakroo, Dhust Dhanav...Maan...

Pinky (scared) Oh my god that means that he will be protective again like before...(she gulps and bites her nails)...you know how hard it was for us to convince him about me and Adi..now when he looks at me and see that I am married..I wonder what will be his reaction...(Adi puts his shaky hands on her shoulder to console him)

Arjun: You are right Pinky...I don't know what we are going to do now.

Yash (gulps in fear) I am scared...I mean it took me great amount of time to get used to Maan bhai...whenever he used to look at me even after he accepted us I used to fear him and now he is back to his old self...I don't know...(Arjun holds his hand...)

Geet: You guys even I don't know...I mean I am scared to find his reaction when he sees the kids roaming around...I know before marriage he hated kids and after marriage he had changed his opinion and now he is full on gabar singh mode...and you guys know how kids are...

Vicky (sits back munching on an apple looking at everyone..Meera smacks him on his arm and motions him to help...he sighs and sits up) Alright guys there is only one option I can see right now..(everyone looks at him) You all have to be like you guys were 9 years ago...

Arjun: Meaning?

Vicky: Meaning Arjun you never met Yash or had a baby girl, Pinky you also the same...

Geet: What about me?

Vicky: you...hmm Dadima only said that he remembers you from NY..so you just have to pretend that you are still single and you came here regarding work...

Geet: What about the kids? They just came out of the blue?

Meera: umm maybe...

Dadima (came from behind) I got a solution for that...(everyone look at her) we just have to do a little role play...

Pinky: what do you mean...

Dadima: I mean...that you all have to pretend that you guys are single...

Geet: And kids?

Dadima: just umm say that they are (she looks at Vicky and Meera with a huge smile...he looks at her confused and then he chokes on his apple when he realized what she is thinking)

Vicky: No way Dadima...

Geet: What? Tell us too?

Dadima: The kids will be Vickys and Meera's

Everyone including Meera: WHAT?!

Vicky: Dadima...Maan will never buy it...I mean look at me do I look like I am a father of 7 kids?

Dadima: No just say that they are your dead sisters kids and you are taking care of them. Yash you say that you are the widower of his sister.

Vicky: Aab yeh sister kaha se tapak padi? Meri koyi behen aur bhai nahi hai aur yeh Maan ko pata hai

Dadima: Look Maan is already confused make him more confused...just say that you had told him before and he might've forgot...

Vicky: bhagwan meri invisible dead behen ki aatma ko shanti de

Yash: What?! Dadima can't you come up with something else?

Vicky: What about Ranbir? He will call me Mama?

Dadima: Ranbir will be your son...and that you and Meera got married after college...

Geet: Wow Dadima that sounds like a good plan..but kids will call me Maa then what?

Dadima: hmm just make something up..I don't know and one more thing...Geet you came here for business trip and that I told you that you can stay here...you might have to take out mangalsture if not then just hide your sindoor as well and Pinky you have to be the same...

Adi: What about me? I can't stay here...how can I stay without Pinky and Ramesh?

Pinky: Don't worry Adi...we both will come and meet you everyday...

Dadima: Alright...now first thing we have to do is remove any current pictures...we cannot remind Maan of his past it might be dangerous...(Everyone nodes their head yes)
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In kids room:

Sargam was walking back and forth with a ruler in her hand, while all the other kids were sitting on their kids chair waiting for her to start.

MJ: Why do you get to decide?

Sargam: because I am the one that has a plan...so lets begin the meeting. As you all know that papa is suffering from memory loss...so it is up to us to do something.

Ranbir (whispers in Armaans ears) your sister is very scary...I feel bad for you guys

Armaan: Thanks we know...

Sargam: Ranbir pay attention..(he immediately sits up) so I came up with a plan to help dad...

Armaan: How?

Sargam: Since dad got hit on the head...each of us will hit him on the head...when he is not looking...using toys or whatever comes in your hands but don't use anything heavy

MJ: What if he gets mad or if mom gets mad?

Sargam: We have to do it when he is alone or when he is not looking...we each will take a shift...

MJ: yeah am sure that will work...

Sargam: Okay then lets decide on the shift schedule

Precap1:
Maan was lying on the bed with his eyes closed when he hears a noise...he opens his eyes and finds no one in the room...he then hears another noise..he sits up on the bed...MJ comes out from under the bed and hits him on his head with a teddy bear...Maan quickly turns around but finds no one... "what is happening? Did someone just hit me or was I imagining?"

Precap2:
Sargam: Dadima since dad remembers everything 9 years ago so that means that you didn't have this many white hairs right?
Dadima: Yeah...so...
Sargam: So lets color your hair...hmm pink should look nice
Dadima (shocked): KYA? Haye Ram...
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG 😆
hitting maan everytime in shifting by everyone
sargam is too much 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
God that was so funny, sargam is a gem and dadima just great!! Awesome,thanks for making me laugh!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

God that was so funny, sargam is a gem and dadima just great!! Awesome,thanks for making me laugh!


ur welcome glad I made you laugh 😆

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