MAANEET SS;Destiny or Faith..Thrd 2..upd Pt25 Pg71 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on new thread 😃 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanku all for ur comments on the previous parts...!!
hope u like this too...😳😳




PART-17



Geet, meera and beeji all were so happy.

Beeji: shukar hai babaji ka sab thik se ho gaya …..meera ka rishta ache se teh ho gaya. Par ek baat muje ahi bhi samaj nai aayi ye dev ekdum se…..

Geet: beeji jo hota hai ache ke liye hota hai, dekhiye na babji ko shayad yahi manzoor tha

Beeji: haan geet puttar shayad tum thik keh rahi ho,,mas babji mere bachho par meher rakhe

Beeji hugs geet and meera . Both geet and meera share a relieved smile.

At KM

Maan dev and their mom came back. Dev was very excited and he wanted to thank his mom and bro for giving him his life but he hesitated to speak up.

Dev(self thought) baat to karni padegi na aise kaise chalega. Chal dev

Dev: Mom, bro muje apse baat karni thi

Savitri Devi and maan sat down in the drawing room

Savitri: haan dev bte boliye kya kehna chahte hai

Dev: mom main apko or bro ko thanku kehna chahta hu. Meera ke saath shaadi vo bhi ekdum se muje to samaj nai aa raha ye sab kaise hua?

Savitri: bte hum to bas apki khushi chahte hai or kya? Par ye sab kaise hua ye to maan hi bata sakte hai

Savitri: maan ye apne muje bhi nai bataya tha ki aapko ye sab kaise pata chala

Maan: pehle to dev congrats. Or mom vo geet ne muje meera ke bare mein bataya tha

Savitri: geet

Maan: haan mom geet mere saath jab Shimla gayi thi tab usne muje meera ke bare mein bataya tha, par main ye nahin jaanta tha ki vo ladka or koi nahin dev hai. Upar se apne meera ko mere liye pasand kiya tha. Vo to jab main call sunne gaya to maine geet ne tab muje bataya ki vo ladka or koi nahin hamara dev hai

Savitri: acha to ye baat hai. Par dev aapne hume pehle kyu nahin bataya

Dev: mom maine apse or bro se baat karne ki kafi baar koshish ki par himmat nai hui or upar se apki tabiyat or ye sab itna achanak hua

Maan: bas dev jo ho gaya use bhul jao..finally sab thik ho gaya

Savitri: thik to ho gaya par maan ki shaadi to wahi ki wahi…..hamari parshani pata nahi kab kam hogi

Maan: mom aap phir se shuru ho gayi na…..

Savitri: hume to geet bhi kafi pasand aayi, badi hi pyari bachi hai. Kyu maan????


Maan: main abhi aaya…muje important call karna hai

Savitri: ye maan ko kya hua..maine to kabhi maan ko aise nahin dekha tha….kuch to gadbad hai

Dev: haan mom main bhi ek do din se dekh raha hu…bro kuch badle se nazar aa rahe hai

Savitri: pata karna padega baat kya hai

It was night now. Maan was in his room and was happy recollecting the days moments. Geet on the other hand wanted to thank maan for what he did.

Geet: ya karu phone karu ya nahin

Maan: ek kaam karta hu geet se baat karta hu

Maan picks up his cell but realizes its too late to call her. He is about to keep his cell aside when his cell rings up. Its flashing geet. Maan was indeed happy to see geet calling him


Maan: hello

Geet: sir main geet bol rahi hu


Maan: muje pata hai geet par itni raat ko?

Geet: vo sir muje apko thanku bolna tha

Maan: geet tum shayad muje pehle hi thanks kar chuki ho

Geet: nahin sir apne jo meera di ke liye kia vo main kabhi bhi nahin bhul sakti

Maan: koi baat nahin geet….agar meera tumhari behen hai to dev mera bhai hai,,,,jo hua sab acha hua

Geet: sir vo to hai, chaliye sir raat kafi ho gayi hai kal milenge

Maan: geet ye baat to tumne sahi kaha raat kafi ho gayi hai per tumne call karne se pehle ye kyu nahin socha

Geet: o teri ki haan sir maine ye to dekha nahin bas call kar dia, m so sorry sir

Maan: koi baat nahin geet its okay

Geet: thik hai sir kal milte hai

Maan: hmm thik hai, par geet kya kal tum mere saath coffee pe chalogi

Geet: kya?

Maan: geet kal office ke baad tum mere saath coffee pene chalogi

Geet(self thought) maan sir ne mere liye itna sab kia ek cup coffee pene pe koi harz to nahin hai.

Maan: geet tumne jawab nahin dia, agar tumhe problem hai to koi baat nahin

Geet: nahin sir aisi baat nahin hai hum kal sham ko challenge.

Maan was so happy to get her approval.

Maan: thanks geet…. thik hai to kal coffee se pehle office mein milte hai… good night

Geet: good night sir

Geet was very relaxed after talking to maan.

Next morning

Geet was getting ready for the office but she could not get an appropriate dress for her. She threw so many dresses on her bed. Meanwhile meera comes in her room

Meera: geet ye kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: di vo kya hai na ek to main office jaane ke liye lete ho rahi hu upar se koi kapde nahin mil rahe

Meera: geet tumara dimaag to thik hai na..tumne pure bed me apne saare kapde gira diye or bol rahi ho ki kuch samaj nahi aa raha

Geet: he babaji, maine kya kar dia beeji ne dekh lia to main to gayi

Meera: par geet tum itna tyar hoke ja kaha rahi ho?

Geet: meera di bola to office jana hai

Meera: par office to tum harroz jati ho par itna tyar hote maine kabhi nahin dekha tumhe

Geet: di bas aise hi

Meera: tumhari baat sunke to aisa lag raha hai jaise koi chori pakdi gayi ho

Geet: di muje dress mil gayi ab main tyar hone ja rahi hu

Meera(self thought) ye geet ko kya hua bada ajeeb sa behave kar rahi hai. Chalo sham ko baat karti hu abhi beeji ke aane se pehle geet ka room saaf kar deti hu

Geet is dressed like an angel.


She is already late for the office so dint even had her breakfast and leaves.

AT Khurana technology


Pinky: kya baat hai geet aaj to badi sohni lag rahi hai


Geet: kuch nahi yar bas aise hi

Geet: pinky vo maan sir aa gaye

Pinky: nahin yar abhi to aye nahin …..maan sir to kafi punctual hai par pata nahi kyu nahi aaye abhi tak…shayad koi zaroori kaam aa gaya ho

Geet: zaruri kaam..aise kaise

Pinky: pata nahin geet chal muje kaam hai main chalti hu, muje thoda kaam hai

Geet is unable to concentrate on her work…thinking about maan whole time


Geet(self thought) ye maan sir abhi tak kyu nahi aaye,,mera dil bhi ghabra raha hai,, he babaji unki raksha karna… itni der to unhone labhi bhi nai lagayi

Geet: adi sir maan sir aa gaye kya?

Adi: nahin geet main bhi kafi pareshan hu pata nahin kaha pe hai sir

Geet: abhi bhi nahin aye ab to 12 bajne ko aa rahe hai

Adi: geet tumhe sir se koi zaroori kaam hao kya?

Geet: nahin sir, koi baat nahin sir jab ayenge tab baat kar lungi

Adi: aisa karta hu main ghar pe call karke puchta hu

Adi calls up Khurana mansion where nakul tells him that maan sir had met with an accident in the morning, so he will not come to office as he is taking rest and cuts the call

Adi: kya?

Geet: adi sir kya hua sab thik to hai na mera dil ghabra raha hai


Adi: geet maan sir ka accident ho gaya hai

Geet: kya???

Geet is in tears and is crying badly.


Geet: vo thik to hai na,, bataiye na adi sir aor kaha pe hai vo?

Adi: sir ghar pe hai or rest kar rahe hai

Geet runs madly towards maan's house to meet him.


doesnot even care about her. She reaches maan's house and finally maan's room and is in tears.


Precap:

Geet: kyunki main apse pyar karti hoon😳😳😳😳


How was the update friends…? Hope u liked the update

Please do comment I will be waiting…..!!!😳😳😳😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratulations on new tread...



Very Lovely... 🥳 I just loved it...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello di...sorry late hogi...but u know the reason...my exam...A big congratulation for the new thread...di aage jake iss ff de bahot threads open honge...i bet...ur work is too good...keep going...god bless u..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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o bale bale me 3 pe...comment ke mamle me😆...

yaar dii update is simply superb...
i love it alot...
chalo ajj wali update me maaneet ke convo se hi kaam chala lete hai...vo to amne samne mile nahi...
buteagerly waiting for next kyunki geet confess karegi
most lovely part...maaneet convo...
savitri ji humse puchea ki maan ko pyar ho gaya hai😳...vo bi apki fav khudi se...😆..
i llove alot the precap...jaldi se next update karna di...
cont soon
love u alot...
again congratulation for new thread di...
ur pagli xx

Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Geet ne kya sach mein confess kiya or is it a trick...batao na...up😊date plzzz ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
awsome update
finally geet is gonna confess
pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
awesome
update soon
thnx 4 da pm 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
awesome update...loved it
wow...geet really confessed her love
continue soon...

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