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ajenn thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sargam shy shy gal.. She surprised me.
Guess she is back on track with some action with Ranbir.
Wonder how they going to manage all the kids now...
The same Geet and Vicky. They are really cute..
All time the fight like kids... Not less than a kids...
Oh No What happen to Maan...
Seriously I got no idea what u've planned...
Plz cont soon...
Thx for the pM
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Posted: 13 years ago
to be frank i was really missing maan in this update n i kinda guessed something or the other would go wrong...i just hope he willl be fine...n the kids they were so funny...i love the twins...always irritating n making fun of sargam...continue soon n thnxxx...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
lovely
sargam is rly copy of geet
uff even vicky & geet fought too bad
2 more kids added in km
d whole khurana khandan vl go mad
omg maan in hospital
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oye!! I loved the update! lol it was awesome!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was chooo cute yaar...
sargam n ranbir fight😆 was nice...
geet n vicky fight🤣...OMG too funny yaar...
what happened to maan😲?????????????
hope not bad injury otherwise am gonna kill u😆...
looking fwd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!!!! Bachche toh bachche but bade bhi fight mein involve ho gaye...hehehe...

and what is this...Maan's accident...????

Don't tell me that you are planning for a memory loss track...

Please Simi...noo not a ML track... though I know it would be a fun in your FF but still nooo...


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Posted: 13 years ago
ROFL...Sargam and Ranbir are mini-Geet and mini-Vicky!!😆

Loved the update!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,

Here is another update...and yeah most of you guys would want to kill me after this update but like I said...FIKAR NOT!!!😆😆

Also, please please please press the like button...it is really making me sad to know that not even half of you guys are pressing the like button...I am not going to stop updating but likes does help me be motivated and give more quicker updates😭😭 If you guys don't like something tell me..I will try to incorporate your ideas into my fan fics..please slient readers and everyone just take two seconds to press the like buttons..I know not everyone can comment so I don't mind if I don't get engh comments...

Chapter 56

Geet and everyone sat in the waiting room waiting for the doctor to tell them something. It has been an hour since they have been inside and all she saw was nurses rushing outside of the room every five minutes. She hoped that he was okay..every time she sees someone coming out her heart beat increases with anticipation. Not being able to wait any longer she gets up to go inside the room to question the doctor when the door opened.

Doctor: Sorry we did what we could but we have to wait 24 hours to know his exact condition.

Geet: What do you mean?

Doctor: He got hit on his head and due to this we have to keep an eye on him for the night. Anything can happen.

Vicky: What do you mean anything? Do something.

Doctor: Listen I know, I am not a god and can't perform any miracles. I did everything that I could but now we just wait and see. Hopefully he regains conscious by tomorrow if not then there might be a danger of him going into coma. (Geet backed up and hugged Meera...)

Vicky (took the doctor to the side): is there any serious thing that we might need to look out for?

Doctor: The only thing that is concerning me is his injury on the head. All we can do is pray that he wakes up soon. Excuse me. (Geet went up to Vicky)

Geet; What did the doctor say?

Vicky (puts his arm around her shoulder) Geet don't worry...we just have to sit and wait.

Geet: I know but it is so hard...

Vicky: you have to be strong of Maan and for kids who are at home. They don't know anything about Maan's accident yet but very soon they will question you so for them you have to be strong.

Meera: Yeah Geet..don't worry Babaji will do everything right.

Vicky: Meera take care of Geet...I am going to go find the guys to let them know about Maan's condition. Also, can you call home Dadima and everyone would be so worried right now and make sure the kids don't know. It will be better that they know when Maan wakes up.

Meera: hmmm okay. Call me if anything. (He hugs her and leaves...Meera brings Geet to the bench and makes her sit...) Geet do want some water or anything to eat?

Geet (shakes her head no) No..I won't eat or drink until Maan wakes up. Meera do me a favor and go home. Please could you take care of the kids.

Meera: I am not leaving you alone right here.

Geet: Please (she holds her hands) Asha must be getting very cranky. She needs to be fed. Dadima and Pinky are already taking care of everyone and on top of it they are worried about Maan. They won't be able to take care of Priya and Asha. Please. I want to sit next to Maan. Nothing will happen. I will call you if I need anything.

Meera (pats her cheek) okay...I will go home and take care of the kids. (She wipes her tears)

Geet: Thank you. I am so sorry you guys came here for a vacation and this is what we were able to give you.

Meera: Don't say sorry. In fact, I am glad we came here and support you guys.

Geet (smiles): Thanks...Dadima knows what to give Asha and Priya.

Meera: hmmm and make sure you call me ASAP.

Geet: Okay I will...bye (She watches Meera leave and goes to Maan room...she sees him lying on the bed with his eyes closed hooked up to a machine. She sits right next to him and pats his head and his wound. She puts her head on his chest and silently cries. She remembers all the time they have spent together...their first date..his last moment when he was leaving for the trip...) "Come back Maan...I am incomplete without you and so are the kids however naughty they can get.." She smiles...and hugs him...

In the middle of the night she wakes up when Maan stirs in his sleep. She instantly sits up and looks at his hand as he moves it a little bit. She gets happy and runs to go call the doctor. The doctor examine Maan, while Geet holds his hand.

Doctor: hmm so far this is a good sign. Lets be hopeful that he is awake by tomorrow (he leaves the room along with the nurses...Geet looked at the time and realized it was 2 am...she puts his palm on her cheek and goes to sleep again...)

The next morning she wakes up when someone touches her shoulder. She looks up and sees Dadima there holding Asha. She quickly gets up and takes Asha from her.

Geet: Dadima what are you doing here?

Dadima: I was worried so I came here and Asha was constinently crying not going to anyone or eating her food properly. (She looks at Asha who had a red nose and puffy eyes...she pats her forehead to check if she had any fever)

Geet: Where is her food? Maybe I will feed her right now..

Dadima (touches her cheek): Geet beta why don't you go home. I will be here with Maan.

Geet: No Dadima. I am not leaving him.

Dadima: Look at her she needs you right now more then him. I am here with Maan and so are the doctors. Why don't you go home and take care of her and meet me back here as soon as you are done. It is not good for a baby to be in a hospital.

Geet (looks at Asha who was looking at Maan stretching her arm...she smiles and bends down so that she can touch his face. She touches his nose playing with him and slightly punching him yelling as if telling him to wake up) See Dadima look...she is trying to wake him up...(she pulls Asha away) come here let your papa sleep for now. When he wakes up you can yell and scream at him all you want for scaring us like this. Come lets go home so he can rest. (she looks at Dadima) Please call me as soon as you can. I will be waiting. Where are the kids?

Dadima: Don't worry about them. Everyone in the house is taking care of them and if you don't go home soon the kids are going to start asking about you and you know how hyper they can get.

Geet: Alright Dadima. Bye...
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Geet couldn't concentrate at home at all...she did everything she could but right when she is about to leave someone always comes up to her and distracts her. She knew that they didn't want her to go to the hospital but she also couldn't stay at home and not do anything either. She just wanted to be near Maan and no matter what she will go see him. She was about to leave when Yash stops her.

Geet: Yash I am going to see Maan in the hospital.

Yash: I know listen Dadima just called and she said that Maan has regained concious. (everyone in the house gets happy)

Geet: Really? okay I will be back. I want to see him. I know he will ask about me first

Yash: Geet you don't have to in few hours doctors will release him after they check on him. So why don't you relax and stay here.

Pinky: Yeah Geet come and help me so that we can prepare for bhai coming home.

Meera: I can make cake.

Pinky: i will make him lunch. Geet what are you going to do?

Vicky: I will tell you..she can get ready so that when Maan looks at her he will keep looking at her (he winks at her while she blushes as everyone teases her...)

Arjun: I am going to run some errands for bhai..Yash you are coming?

Adi: Why don't you just say that both of you want to spend some time together? (Arjun and Yash look away embarrassed as everyone laugh at them)

Pinky: Adi you are talking about spening time? Meera you know he doesn't even know ABC's of love..whenever he comes near me to say I love you he starts to stutter and laugh out of nervousness. Do you know what he said to me the first time he expressed his feelings for me? (Everyone looks at her with curious)

Arjun: Actually I want to know...I never asked

Adi (gets nervous) Pa Pa Pa Pinky...do do don't...

Pinky: hmm I will tell in front of Maan bhai so that he also knows...(everyone laugh..Vicky goes up to Adi)

Vicky: Don't worry Adi I will teach you about love...think of me as love guru

Geet: please Vicky you and love guru? How long did you take before proposing to Meera? (Meera looks down)

Vicky: Tab ki baat aur thi aab main pura expert hogaya hoon...

Meera: please Vicky

Arjun: GUYS GUYS GUYS...we can discuss this later but first we have to prepare for Maan bhai and knowing his nature he will be really mad like a volcano ready to erupt...so lets make sure everything is ready before that...everyone knows what they have to do? (Everyone shakes their head yes...) Okay then team lets go...(Everyone ran to their own things...Adi and Vicky stood there with nothing to do...)

Vicky: I guess Adi its just you and me...lets chill (both sit down but kids who were playing with their guns attack both of them...) What the? Okay kids come out and lets play a game...I am not gonna yell at you guys...(kids peak their heads out and looks at Vicky and Adi...Sargam who had her hat backwards comes out first...followed by the gang...) Alright kids...how about we play comando...we will split in two teams..and each team members have to take down other team members players...(all the kids yell with enthusiasm..Vicky rubs his hands together..) Okay lets see...I want

Sargam: why do you get to choose? I should get to choose the team...

Vicky (puts his hands up) okay fine you choose...

Sargam (comes and stands next to Vicky..) hmm okay I want Ramesh

Vicky: I want..hmmm (Adi motions him to pick him...) MJ

Sargam: Ranbir

Vicky: Armaan

Sargam: Adi uncle...

Vicky: wait I only have two players...

MJ: Don't worry uncle we are enough to take them down..(he cocks his gun..Adi looks at him worried...)

Vicky: Alright..we are the G-force team...wheres my gun...(Armaan takes out his extra guns and gives it to him...Sargam does the same with Adi...Vicky whispers to Armaan and MJ) by the way your sister is very scary...how do you handle her?

Armaan: Don't ask...

Sargam: Alright..lets play. (everyone hides inside the house...to play)
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Meanwhile, in the hospital Dadima sits next to Maan and watches him eat his food...he looks at her and smiles...while the doctors check on him at the same time

Maan: Dadima when will I go home?

Dadima: You are in a hurry to go home? I wonder why?

Maan (looks at her confused): What are you saying Dadima..I am just tired and you know how much I hate hospitals...

Dadima (smiles) yeah I know..the doctors said soon. Geet is waiting for you as well at home. You know how hard it was to convince her to go home.

Maan: Geet? What is she doing here...

Dadima (looks at him shocked): What do you mean what she is doing here? She lives here in the same house as you. Maan right now it is not time to make jokes. She already went through so much with your accident.

Maan: No Dadima I am serious...she works in New York...I remember going there for a meeting..but I don't understand what she is doing here living with us?

Doctor: Maan what do you remember exactly?

Maan: I remember going to New York for a meeting...and I remember coming back yesterday before I got into the accident...(Dadima looks at him shocked...Doctor motions for her to come outside)

Dadima: what happened doctor? why doesn't he know his own wife?

Doctor: Looks like due to the accident he forgot all of his life.

Dadima: What? How can he forget his wife that he knows for almost 9 years?

Doctor: Well good thing is he knows who Geet is but he doesn't know that he married her and have four kids.

Dadima: oh my god..now what

Doctor: It will be better if you guys don't give him any stress...don't try to make him remember his previous life..or else it might damage his brain and make sure you tell everyone at home as well. (the doctor leaves...Dadima goes back in the room...)
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Precap1: "Ghar main itne saare baache kaha se aaye?"
"yeh shetan baache kiske hai?"

Precap2: Sargam: Dadima since dad remembers everything 9 years ago so that means that you didn't have this many white hairs right?
Dadima: Yeah...so...
Sargam: So lets color your hair...hmm pink should look nice
Dadima (shocked): KYA? Haye Ram...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Ok.. I was going to get you for making Maan forget everything, but the precap is hilarious.. Especially, coloring hair pink.. OMG.. This Sargam is so so naughty..
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG these kids are just amazing
maan's memory loss in this too & that also 9 yrs!!!!!!!!!!!!! dammm

precap is funny 😆
sergam is realy naughty & such a sweetheart 🤗

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