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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

part 18 ...


awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 20

Scene changes'




Yahi same story chal raha hai...from many generations...

Abe...jab car kharidhte ho, milega n motor check karte ho na...but when u start dating a girl...why don't u check whether she has a lover or not?? Idiots!!!

Now u wont be able to control anything...

Everything IS under my control






The kidnapper was maintaining the same expression...suddenly maan takes out the gun and points at kidnappers's forehead...









Give me the keys of the vehicle...

Instead of taking the keys...the kidnapper takes the bullets of the vehicle...in the palm of his hand...

That gun is empty dear...with a sarcastic smile on his face'...

As he throws away the bullets in the fire'...he says'...

Without proposal...'girl wont fall for u'...

Without bullet'...gun too...'will not fire'...

You have failed in both'...

Maan was frustrated to the core...'don't give me your stupid explanations'...

Continuing a sarcastic smile on his face, he forcefully takes off the gun from maan'...maan was trying to free himself from the rope tied to his hands'...

Chod na'...kyon bekaar mein try karta hai'...chal continue kar'...





Scene changes

Maan is seen isolated from the family...'.annie n arjun try to cheer him up...'but he seems to be withdrawn...'geet calls him innumerable times but he dint feel like picking them up...'days pass by...'but nothing changes...'annie n arjun too took a leave from them as the holidays couldn't be extended...'savitri tried to cheer him up...'she had seen maan picking up geet's calls at the first two rings...'but now she just saw him ignoring geet's calls...'she thought breakup might be the reason...'

She goes to maan's room...'maan was hugging his pillow sitting on the bed n was in a deep thought...'

Maan'...

He dint hear her

Maan...'!!! Get up I say...'

Jao na maa

I said get up, Dint i?

When he dint respond...'she pulled out a stick from her hand n hit him on his right hand...'.maan was surprised to the core'...

Wont u get up when I say?

But..why are you beating me?

Saying so he got up..

Savitri started hitting his leg...'inorder to escape her, he ran throughout the house...'but savitri kept on beating him'...

Maa'...what are you doing? What'...he got a beating on his leg...'oouch'what's this?

Bahut acting ho raha hai? Huh? U wont even talk to me now?

Arey maa..

Maan yelled in pain this time'...

Kya maa..huh..

Saying so'...phir maan ki dhulai hoti hai'...

SAVITRI

This time savitri was stunned'...

Maa ko naam se bulata hai...'besharam..

She tries to him but this he was too fast...'she was tired n was breathing heavily...'she took the support of balcony's railing n stood there'...

After sometime maan was back with a bottle of water

Is umar mein ye sab karna zaruri tha?

She drank the water n maan took it to re-cap the bottle'...

She side-hugged him with a tiny smile

Its been 10yrs since your dad passed away'...agar mein ussi pal mein jee rahi hoti toh aaj kya hum aise hote?

Maan saw his mother with a blank expression

Karibi logon ke jaane se bahut dukh hota hai'...I know its difficult to bare the loss of near n dear ones'...kuch log unki kammi ke wajah se saari umar dukhi hi reh jaate hai'...but'...some..only a few actually'...spend the life happily with departed soul's sweet memories'...

You are my son...'I think I don't have to tell you what u have to do'...

Maan again drifted into thoughts...'this time positive ones'...he wanted to live life happily'...for his mom'...she doesn't deserve any more sad moments in life'...not because of him..it was the least he could do...


Maa'...movie dekhne chale'...





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Edited by millie_maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it but want to see maaneet togther.updtae soon.
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Originally posted by: nahtani88

Lovely Update
Cont Soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
rees

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loved it yar
poor maan really felling bad for him
so he ignored geet
pehle dil tootne ka dard upar se ma ke dande parne ka dard
loved savitri aunty yar
the way she got out maan from tha trauma and the way she succeeded..!!
hats off
finally maan has fpught out from her problems
ye kidnapper wala scene kuch ache se samaj nai aaya muje
or haan missed geet
continue soon
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh!my poor maan!
like to c maneet...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: minnie_tweetie

rees

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loved it yar
poor maan really felling bad for him
so he ignored geet
pehle dil tootne ka dard upar se ma ke dande parne ka dard
loved savitri aunty yar
the way she got out maan from tha trauma and the way she succeeded..!!
hats off
finally maan has fpught out from her problems
ye kidnapper wala scene kuch ache se samaj nai aaya muje
or haan missed geet
continue soon


which part of the scene?
i mean..purra??
Edited by millie_maaneet - 13 years ago

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