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Posted: 14 years ago
Congrats Fiza for completing one year as a writer..that too an amazing one😛
U r always welcum dear..I luv ur ffs coz they all deal with different subjects and all are written beautifully😳
Write more..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
u are welcome fiza...
keep writing writing...:):):)
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Posted: 14 years ago
congrats dear
we really love your writing continue doing the same
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Posted: 14 years ago
congratulation on completing one year👍🏼 i guess there no need to say thanks, Bcoz we should say thanks to you, for providing us Wonderful stories, i love all ur ff especially walking with u and ur ss Thanks to You Fiza
and u r one of Best writer Here..⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago



Fiza 🤗🤗

its Party Time🥳

Fiza, i want a BIG party😃
ginny09 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
it should be us who shld thank u fr lovely psc n stories :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
fiza when will u update? plz update now
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys,

This is an OS after so long, one of the most romantic piece I have evr wrote. This EIDI for the ones asking for…

Hope FARU u like it, and maha I 'll cum up with urs one very soon..hopefully…promise ..but pls change the title…I just nt able to write on tht..….

So enjoy, agar yeah acha nhi tu pls ap sab faria ko pakray …she made me write this much

Lova ya

Fizaa

ECSTASY, THE MOMENT

Thud …..a thundering sound I heard, n droped the knife from my hand, looking around the kitchen I found it somehow very dark outside, I covered my eyes as I saw a light flashed at the window….and with a reflex I looked behind me…

OMG…was the exclamation I gave …..n rashed to my room, reaching my huge window, I opened it, soon my surprise expression was turned into a deep smile….opening the window I closed my eyes.

The droplet of lords blessing kissing my skin, they kiss, the tickle, they flicker, they make be giggle ..

Small angels blue n smooth, dropping from heaven above, they feel and purify, evrying in contact and falls in the open arm of the earth, soaking , drenching evry single dry piece of it

Sigh…for evry one out there ther just mere drop, for me they are angles of GOD, each drop enchanting the soul. This one thing, a season I cant get enough off, my badest mood can be just chnge into smile with a sight of them.

Taking my favorite place, thts the window panel of my room, with a cup of tea, feeling the chilling air, unclear, but heavenly view.

Outside there is loads more than just rain going on, children who are playing in water, making paper boats , trying them to float, they get drown but they don't loss hope, aging make one n let it float. How determine and cherish able is moment is.

N than my smile turn agin into frown….but than I giggle remembering the old days….

Down near my apartment there were sum cologe friends, enjoying n playing in rain….when two of the love birds excuse themselves n made there way away….

I blushed at the thought, and than froze immedietly, I knew wht is happening but its too sudden….

Feeling a feather being floating on my neck, I shiver n as it capture my skin more deeply…

Mayank…..moan escaped from my mouth, cluthing his hand tht were roaming around my waist, I titled my head back, wht evr I feel, weak or senses less, its blissd to be in his arms,

Leaving a trail of kisses , he reached my ear…

Mayank: I don't want my wife to blush for imaginations when im all here to make it practical…

I cant help but giggle as he was not detaching his lips off my skin even while whispering, it tickle he knew it…

Mayank…I giigled more….

Mayank: wht happen …huh…he diped more n it tickled more….

Taking me in his lap, he too settle at my favt place…

Mayank: so why u were blushing…..

I moved my eyes to down in the lane, he followed n chukled , the boy was still there, making the girl blush…..

Mayank: very bad kisi ki privacy mein ….huh….he kissed my neck agin….

Nupur: u rembere….i whispered….

Mayank: wht exactly u want me to remember…he turned me around to look at me...playing along with my hairs on forehead, caressing my skin deliberately in process…..

Nupur: our engagement….

He laughed n I joined him too…

The world horrifying engagement of evry1, n for us its was a night of love…

After loads of argument he had with his family, who wants him to marry now, n he didn't want, he agreed to get engaged. It was our engagement day, n all was set perfectly, he has always been a person who hates celebrating in close environment, he wants a huge space so tht people don't make him suffocated, it seem they all over him, getting on him, so there shud me large area for the occasion site..but the truth is he get his moments of privacy in such place…..nautanki he is …

So the site was off city, a huge farm house garden wch was fully decorated with flowers n bit of lights…but lord n city problem, all wanted it to be highly adventures..

Being the bride n groom we where there at the farm house in morning…mayank need to go out of city for sum reason , n he said he will reach till evening….from there directly..

His mom n dad n all family members will be ther till evening to, my mom n dad left the place to chk the planner in afternoon …

So here I was with Samrat n gunjan…it was almost 6 o clock….it strt to drizzle….n my romantic brother…..wants to have walk with his lovly wife…

I ask him to plz do the honors dont worry abt me, n he reluctantly left for a small walk with gunjan…I was laughing to see his expression seems like he got a prize of 2 million….

Cuming back to my room, I was lost in ur thought, the feeling was amazing , I knew u'll be here any moment …my cell ring n I blushed a bit knowing it must be u

But to my surprise it was my parents

Dad: nupur …yaha buhat halat begair gay hain….MNA has been shot n all the place is on fire…its almost impossible to cum to u , smart haina n tumhary sath

Nupur: ya dad….ap loog maat ay…apna kayal rekhy..mayank k parents ko bhi mana kerdain

Dad: beta mayank se bhi pocho…though is cuming from other side, but still

Nupur: ji dad don't worry…

I lied to my parents as I don't want them to worry , soon than I heard I huge thunder, n look outside to find it strt raining cats n dog…now I was sacred , it was almost dark, n I was alone in this huge mansion….i called bhai, bhabi n mayank but network was not connecting….

Siting on the terrace I was watching all of our dreams getting shattered in front of me, the whole decoration tht u by urself supervise, whole day before leaving was changing in to a disaster….

The stge in mid of pool tht I want to have, with fountains all around was now filled with mud, broken lights, n wet flowers…

I cuddle myself n strt weeping a bit, I was sacred, I was sad…to low….n plus I was shivering with cold too….

Soon I felt sumthing warm around my waist…n I turned n found u..

Mayank: hey kiya hoa…ur smiled vanish seeing my feared face..n I huged I tight,,,n u hold me near…..jani kiya hoa….ur alone?...

I noded in yes still my head on his chest…

Mayank: sab kaha hain….he boke aprt n wiped my tears…n never he do this with his hands, he said tht they r precious don't want my hands to waste them, he kissed them n take them with him……

Nupur: ami baba went city, n disaster is going on there, bhai bhabi went to walk, n now its strt raing heavily, pata nhi aay gay k nhi

Mayank: oh hoo….im here n just relax…his worried chnge into smirk…wasy acha hai na aay

Nupur: kyun….

Mayank: will get engaged ….alone…he leaned n pecked my cheeks…n winked ….to make me blushed

Nupur: tumhain mazak soj raha hai…dekh bahar sab khtaam hogaya ….

Mayank: lo mjhy tu laga tha rain is a blessing for u….ek tu tumahra bst frnd tumahri engagement mein aaya n ur scolding….so bad

I always call rain as my savior…but today im hating it…..

Nupur: but mein ny kitan kcuh socha tha….sab bekar hogaya…I set on bed..ab tu humari engagement bhi nhi hosakti

N he giggled to wch he received a glare from me…..

Mayank: tu bora is baat k lag raha hai…huh..he hugged me from back n kissed my shoulder….woh tu hogi aj hi….

Nupur: kasay….

Mayank: u always say n nature is ur bst frnd, so me u n ur bst frnds will make the day…aaa rather night special…..leaning to me he was saying this with so much passion…tht I can help but smile n blush …..get ready..

Nupur: wht im gonna wear

Mayank: I don't mind anything….or nt

Nupur: mayank I hit him…

Mayank: 5 mins….hope ur brother doesn't cum back home….

Nupur: bhai …chk tu kero woh thik hai…

N with this his phone rung n it was bhai…informing they cant cum n he asuure him he will take a GOOD CARE of me…so he doesn't need to worry…..

Mayank: chalo saly sahib tu out of guest list, so now its just me n u..leaning closed to be he just left a inch space…

How bad nupur, engagement tak ka tu wait kerlo….i opened my eys to find him smiling n hited his shoulder to threw him out of the room….

Thinking a lot , I choice my favt colour white to wear, dressed in a white a bit low from knee, gown, tying my hairs in a bun, I went outside, to find a note on my door, to garden ASAP….

Slowly with racing heart beat I went outside, it was still raining so much tht I hardly can look beyond them, but still I can look at the person , the love of my life there, I smile watching the sight, white shirt with denim…giigle at the dress coat of my engagement, I slowly made my way towards him, he turned n scanned me from top to bottom, his eyes always made me shiver, but today thy made my throat dry up to with shivers, butterflies n wht not….

Spreading his hand on his face he removed the droplets from his eyes n also his hairs , may to have a better look, his shirt was hugging his body, making him more hot, but thn I realize my dress must me doing them same….

Feeling her feets moving to slow, n my feelings on fire, I just cant hold myself n proceed towards her, drinking in her beauty, mesmerizing n toxicfying …

Sliping my hands on her waist I pulled her close….

Mayank: if I become sinful today, its not my fault, he said without blinking his eyes….n I felt my whole self on fire….

I tried to move away from him, but he pulled me back in his arms, this time, hugging me from back…..i felt my sense lost, as his hand moved from myhand to my arm to my neck to my hair, caressing my skin….removing the clip to make my wet hairs drenching his face with droplets….

His hand were griping more tight, n he strt finding ways to my skin, plying hide n seek with my hairs, taking in the fragrance….

I found my way towards her skin, kissed her neck deeply ……the whole mansion went to dark …n I turned her in my arms to have a glimpse of her……n the nature was with me too….i flash of lighting make my view more clear..as now I can see her, breathless, blushing, eyes filled with love n passion…n face having wet hairs….removing the veil of hairs…I leaned towards to feel her more, capturing her lips, making her belive my love n I was made believed tht wht I just saw in her eyes was quite n under estimation to wht she is showering now….

The necessity struck our brain, as we need to breath….but soon getting enough I reapeated my action, pulling off to early she blushed n rashed away…doing this so quick tht I almost lost her from my sight…

It was so dark tht I just cant find her, sumthing was sinking inside , I heard I thunder, n sumting falling…wht the hell were she is , my passion n her mischief was far forgotten , now the only thing left was fear, n rash here n there , looked around evry where,…couldn't find her

NUPURR….

I scrrmed at top most…

NUPUR pls kaha hoo…plss

I heard a strange vulnerability in his voice, n my giggle was suppressed with frown….

Mayank….i shouted n found him turn towards be lightening flashed n he looked at me , run towards me, hugging me tight….

Mayank: dont u dare do it again…deemgh karab hai…

I chuckled n whispere, mayank Sharma daar gaya…I kissed his cheek…

He broked the hugged n pinned me in corner….

Mayank: u need to pay for this ..

Nupur: it was suppose to be my engagement…I tried to speak as I was finding him nearing inch by inch towards me, with so much passion oozing out from his eyes..

Mayank: I told u it will be different..n unforgettable …he leaned more closed, n I found him diped his head near my neck, n his hand on my hand on wall…..as his lips move up, his hand move down my finger, sliping the ring …going up leaving trail of kisses, he went near my ear…..

Congrats , ur engaged …..he left my hand n was moving away…when I grip his neck n hugged him tight….kissing his neck in return…

Moving away…he leaned back to me…capturing her lips in a deep kiss which she responded with equall passion, crave n firing emtion ….

I am still blushing lying in my husband arms, remembering the day, still it shivers while he is playing with my ring, n letting his lips to do tht….

Maayankkk…..sigh …he still determine to make me insane….

Mayank: wht..i hate to leave things inbetween, tht day I don't have tht right to…but today I have….so let ur gestures speak it…n let me silence u…..

I have no sense left….he will not leave a bit of it……the only thing thts now left is a feeling of bliss….

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fizaaa janu, sweetu - thank u so much for ur EIDI
Muahhh- series of Kkk...😆😆


OMG Fiza-----------------------ya ALLAH ye kya hai

superb os janu...👏👏👏

itna romantic OS- hayeee mar jawa


By GOD i m still blushing like hell.😳😳😳

GOSH- u wrote this romantic OS- i couldnt beleooive it...😆😆

r a wahhh- baat kya hai...?????

Fizu - apne tou hume maar he dalla itna romantic OS likh kar..
main tou gayi yaar. mujhe bacha lo- i need an antibiotic- i mean i need another OS- u know na "
Set a thief to catch a thief"😆😆
ab ek aur OS he mujhe bacha sakta hai..lol lol lol

ye dil mange more...


fizu i love u and waiting for ur another OS...



Edited by -Faria- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
edited.

Fiza ... awesome os.

too gud ... so nice ... so romantic ...hayyy

loved it.

muwahhh dear ... FK ( Friendly kisses ... lolz)

superb os dear.

loved their engagement

it was sooo weired...n romantic engagement i ever read.

it was sooo romantic.

Fiza ...ab main aur kya likhu... jitna ho ska likh dia.

jab main iss os se recover ho jayungi...tab phirse edit karke ek bara wla comment kardungi thik hai!!!!






Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago

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