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Posted: 15 years ago

Just finish reading and it is awesome 👏 looking forward to next update.

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Posted: 15 years ago
@Myra: thank you so much. and from next part it will be Radhika's , i hope, but as you said maybe it will come out another dev's story only.😆..
@anukutty: Thank you
@hari: thank you. um, so i think the concept is fiting here ok, so far. hopefully i wll be able to pull you back. I thought of this dierection, otherwise, the plot remains same and radhika will end up with RP'ian and Dev the RP. want to see a change... when something good we see, we alwyas feel liek why it didn't happen with avina. i loved Geet set adn all. so goddy, everyone had better dress and all...
@Maleena: thank you so much. Yes, he has that bitter past too, but now he realized how much he loves this girl, knowing all about her, and as you said he doesn't want to embarrass her at any situation. so next part coming soon... maybe can be considered as filler part, but i need it to continue to say how rahdika is feeling, about all these new changes in her life.
@shankar: no worries friend. happens, right. even i thought of giving the next pdate later last night, but got interupted. it is reaady , you know what, the best part is you liked the previous part. so hopefully next one too. thnak you
@nycsweetie: thank you
@radhika5: thank you so much. I am sooo happy to hear it, with Dev, the charactor, avi portraid it so the best that his acting is at its best as Dev... , and he carried all of us with it... i can't believe it is the third portrying dev and radhika.. ha ha.. still few of you are tolerating me ... so i can stay back some more time, i think.. 😆
@jeffin: thank you so much for likign the previous part. after the night settles, yes it radhika's day.. that begins as mrs. Dev, and how it will take her into new life, how can she come out from it.. and what she really think of this marriage (above all) coming up next... but it is the night after this day is , what is going to bring the voice in radhika, hopefully you will stick till we reach there.
@tukli: thnak you for liking it. I am glad that i ignored the 2 nd one, so you are here. it is a pleasure to hear that youare waiting , it can be a conscious ignorence as i thought "maybe it si too much take".. but as i am gettign few pop ups here and there, i will surely update it next monday or tuesday.. let see.
@laxmi: thank you.. yes now he realized and her little thoughts reminding her how much she need him too. so radhika's thoughts coming up next , how she is feeling this sudden change in her life, from a loss to unexpected future.
@suwin: thank you chechy, next part is a filler.. but yes, with radev..
@thank youruchibabbly, AditiD, wissen, avina21, AVINA4ever, jeffin, imissouri, tukli, thujaa, rad4dev, DAIRY25, suwin, chalhov, laxmi_avinafan, radhika5, radha_bilahari, Indiangirl09, nycsweetie, for liking previous part. a filler part coming up for to fill the saturday. will update one more part and will take a break form here to update (to update DG)😛.. let see.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part-6

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The moon was fading behind the thickness of clouds as the east horizon started showing its streak of white circle. The color of the sky was trying to welcome the beautiful morning and changed from reddish to pink' ,,...the sound of a birds flapping wings awaken the sleeping squirrel'... the narrow stream of river was flowing by making its happiest splashes on the wet stones...'

The Purohith mansion started awakening too. Dev slowly opened his eyes.. with a sweet smile on his lips... for last couple of weeks he tried hard to get into sleep and tried hard not to bring Radhika's face by digging his head into office files, but his eyes were only seeing the letters, it never got registered in his brain, his mind was flying with her. But now he felt a new energy in him, a freshness in every cell of his body.

His mornings were different, but today... he came back to reality,

With that lovely smile on his face, he turned his face to the side... the space was empty.. he sat up quick with a worried face : Radhika!!!.. where is she.??

. he got up quick and checked in washroom, and found the space empty'... his heart started pacing faster.. he looked at the balcony.. he grabbed his T-shirt in his hand and slipped that over his head and almost ran out looking for his Radhika..

Daadi looked at him as she saw his rushes while climbing down the stairs..

Daadi: Dev.. are you ok?

Dev: yes. Daadi.. Radhika?

Daadi: Radhika! What happened to Radhika? Seeing the frustration in his eyes..

Dev: no.. did you see Radhika?

Daadi looked at the kitchen side and saw RAdhika coming with hot coffee in a tray..

Daadi: here is Radhika.. why you look so tensed..

Dev felt a relief as his eyes caught her vision. He walked near to her...'

Radhika tried to smile...'

Dev: why you didn't call me? In his concerned voice..

Daadi: What is this dev?..? don't act like a kid. Are you expecting the school bus to be here early..

Dev looked at Daadi in confusion..as if what are you saying..!!!

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Daadi took the coffee cup from the tray as she sat on the sofa.. and said: ha.. usually the kids say that thinking they may miss the school bus as they go in search of their homework book.. Dev, You only need to go to office . that also your own.. Boss can be little late, that's ok. I used it many times, just say some important call, they will understand it. but you were on time all the time... .. but then looking at the clock.. ya, you are late today!, what happened? So finally Dev Purohith was able to sleep peacefully..

He looked at Daadi as if how does she knows..

Daadi: I am your daadi, atleast I should know something , right..

Dev took the coffee cup and looked at Radhika's face..

Dev: Where is your coffee.. Radhika?

Radhika tried to voice out hard: I had it already..

She left the space, Dev just watched her walking away..

Daadi: Dev, what is your plan for today?

Dev: so many works are pending, I need to finish those, actually I worked on it last night, and got mostly everything in order.. and now need to give final touch up and put it in place..

Daadi smiled and thought : ha Dev, I know, now you are back to yourself, but little different, after many years today you are sitting with me for a morning coffee.. or i used to see you walking out to your office at this time .. for years...'

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Dev: Daadi..

Dadi: ok ok. now what is your plan for today?

Dev: why ?

Daadi: because I am taking RAdhika..

Dev: where?

Daadi: it's a girl thing. Why I have to tell you everything. After such a long time, I have some company here, so I want to spend some time with my bahu.. do you have any problem with that?

Dev:: no daadi, I just asked, that's all.

Radhika walked in again..

Daadi : beta, come and sit near me..

Radhika sat near Daadi.. Daadi started telling her about the day's plan.. and Radhika was listening carefully..

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Dev while sipping at the coffee cup, was just looking at the beauty sitting next to daadi.. he saw the shade of sindoor on her forehead, it didn't wash off well.. her wet hair was left open with little curliness, and it was fanning on the sides.. her cheeks looked pinkish.. her lips closed, but trying to smile' ...her ear'...his eyes gone wide as he saw the missing earring, he loved seeing them hanging from her ears and shaking as her head nodes'...she was wearing a yellow salwar and the duppatta was kept loosely around her chest.. the mangalsuthr was covered under the duppatta, btu he could see its shining over her neck space...

Daadi: is that ok Dev?

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Dev was totally into RAdhika that the voice didn't reach his ears...

Daadi loudly: DEV..

Dev with a jerk: Ha Daadi..

Daadi: what is 'ha daadi' did you hear what I said?

Dev; jee,... actually what you were saying?

Daadi: Dev, what happened to you. Ok from tomorrow onwards RAdhika can start going to Indian Paints.. If she sit at home she may feel bored.. so..

Dev: Ha , daadi.. Good idea.. also Radhika I want you to take charge of Indian Paints, .. but then he paused thinking something hard.. oh no.. how can i forget myself.. he spoke out for self.. we need to go for follow up check up, I got the time for 8 AM:tomorrow, so maybe I can drop you after that at IP... ... I don't have much time to look after everything, I brought the IP because I thought it may benefit our business in total, but so far it is not showing any signs of that. were already there and knows the employees and all.. , so... And if you need any help.. you can always ask Daadi, she is the best guide, she only guided me..

Daadi looked at him surprisingly:

Dev looked at her.. asking what?

Daadi: Ok then, Radhika let's take that challenge. Don't think I am old.. I know the company is not doing well. But we are going to run it and will show Dev the girls power..

Dev: what?

Daadi in a stern voice: Radhika give me your hand..

RAdhika shook daadi's hand .

Dev:: that is not fare.. she is my wife..

Daadi: and I am your daadi.. and you are not going to interfere in any of our work, we are going to make it girlish way.. you take care of your construction company and we will take care of IP..

Dev understood her point well by now.." Ok then, let see how you two are going to win over me..

He stood up and went to his room to get freshen up...'

Daadi watched him going away, turned to Radhika and said: don't worry RAdhika , you can do it..

Radhika: what? I can? Me? But you said We.. the voice just came out easily from her mouth'

Daadi: ha, I know I said that, that is just to win over Dev.. he has big pride , right.. then why should we have to keep quiet..

Radhikat: But Daadi, I don't know anything..

Daadi squeezed Radhika's hands in hers and said: I am with you, don't worry, I may not be able to run with you everywhere, but I will be available for you anytime.. OK

Radhika tried to smile in confusion, as she got in total delimma

Radhika was in her own thought.. she didn't had anything in front of her till now, it was all blank'.but now Dev and daadi given her something to take care which she never ever thought of, and Dev was saying it as if he planned it all ahead... and all of a sudden she felt like as if she need another word to move on ,am i really going to take care of a paint company.!!!! how can I? I don't know anything...

She sat in a frozen state... remembered the morning.. as she opened her eyes, she couldn't believe finding herself in his strong wrap.. her heart stopped beating for a second.. she stopped breathing for a second.. she felt everything froze in front of her. But then she felt some kind of uneasiness, suddenly, felt like to be alone for a second..

' and as if he heard her wish, he lay on his back by loosening the grip, she just slipped out easily.. she tried to sit half way but her mangalsutr got stuck in his hand'... she looked into his peaceful eyes, his face looked so calm '... when and how I end up in his warmth.. she couldn't recollect anything back only she could recollect was her trying to lay facing away from him, and he looking into the monitor.. and and then' ...everything is blank until now.. she carefully got her chain released and went to washroom'./... and then down to kitchen , trying to escape from facing him, escape from herself'.

She jerked hearing Dev's voice calling out for her.. as she walked to their room, she thought, he is calling her in such a calm voice.. he never done that... she stepped in.. saw Dev drying his hair with the end of a towel.. wearing his black pants.. the white towel fell around his back neck hanging to the front'... he saw her coming in'

Dev: Radhika, come here..

with a fluttery heart of confusion she walked near to him.. he came closer to her too.. she stopped as he came so closer to her. and he halted too, near the dressing table.. he looked into her face so closely and lovingly.. tried to read her eyes of total confusion and questions, but meeting his gaze,she looked down.. he put his finger under her chin and raised her face to look at him.. and she did.. he could see the coldness in her look...' he felt the same, but doesn't want her to know..

Dev in a husky voice: you want to know why i called you..?

She just nodded her head in agreement..

He turned and took a gold color jumki from the dressing table.. and raised up to her eye level and asked.. ye kaise phool gayi?

She didn't say anything.. she stood with her dried mouth as she saw his hand picking it up fromt he table, she gazed down again. Watching her each breath movements, he slowly put the one on her right ear and then the next one., not breaking that gaze on her face... she stood in front him like a statue..

he slowly held her shoulder..

Dev: hum, now you look like my Radhika'...

Radhika looked at him in question..

Dev neared to her ear and murmured in: I love them seeing hanging from your ears, and always felt like they are so lucky to be a part of you.,..' . kash mei..

He stopped there and looked into her eyes and continued..: but now you are a part of me, right? .. he placed a soft kiss over her forehead..

she didn't move, stood still listening to everything.. he looked into her eyes again and then brushing his wetness of body on her slender arms he moved away' ...she stood there in trance'...

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He turned back once to see her reaction' ...slightly smirked and went to change. He came out in his office attire, and adjusted his ties.. saw Radhika still in trance..

He went near her wearing his watch..: Radhika, go get ready.. we need to go..

Radhika: je..

Dev: hum..

Radhika in her soft innocent voice : mei,' kya pehnum.

Dev looked at her in confusion: what?

Radhika realizing her words, gazed down saying: Ji kuch nahi'

he felt happy to hear her sound... He smiled and went to the wardrobe and took a nice white suit out and gave to her.. you will look beautiful in this.. and went to take his office stuff.''

She went to change and came out.. he looked at her as she came out, but then again he looked back as he doesn't wanted her to catch him.. With the corner of his eyes, he watched her tying her hair, adjusting her chain, he loved that, he loved it whenever he see that chain around her neck.. that gave him hope.. may a hope for her too, unknowingly'...

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She thought while adjusting the chain.. it happened to me earlier too, but then all those were fake, that chain was not meant for me..but this is mine, only mine.. he is mine.. she looked at him with her corner eyes, saw him busy in his office stuff... she turned to look at the mirror again..

his heart was jumping with joy, but he controlled seeing her corner eye...

she looked at her parted hair, the sindoor faded away.. she felt sad.. she looked around for the sindoor, but failed.. he saw her frustration..

Dev: Radhika , are you ok.. missing something.

Radhika looked at him and nodded her head ,conveying nothing..

Dev: let's go..

Radhika nodded her head again..

They walked out together, he wrapped his arms around her shoulder as if he didn't want to leave her.. but'.

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The day just passed by quick.. Daadi took Radhika to their family temple too. The poojari gave her the Prasad along with kumkum.. she felt happy.. . . she took a small pinch and applied that over her forehead, and looked at the smiley face of the Lord, and bowed her head for all the blessings..

As they walked down, Radhika saw a kumkum bottle in nearby shop, she looked at it, Daadi slowed down as she didn't see Radhika with her. She saw RAdhika staring at the sindoor bottle, she smiled and went near.. : you want to buy one..?

She just nodded her head'.. daadi smiled again

As they were returning

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Daadi: Now a days nobody care about all these, so I didn't pay attention to that. But it is your wish, do as you wish..

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She smiled and thought.. daadi, I know the value of it. Because of this I got apart from my family, my own people tried to kill me, my mom asked me to take that pill.. but now I got the right , to wear all these.. he gave me the name.. he gave me the hope.. he is mine and only mine...' I wish I listened to him once, then I should have not.. her thought got break there and unknowingly her hands rubbed over her tummy', her eyes felt slightly wet, but she controlled as she heard Daadi's voice again...'
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Thank you.. have a happy weekend.
Devika
part 7 on pg 15 (no PM)
Edited by Devika. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Its getting better and better...slowly she realised what she has and dev just wants to make it easy for her...for now is just stealing glances and self-monologue but the love is there...its so cute seing their simple gestures as with the earrings,mangalsu tre and sindoor...loved the last part with radh,glad she knows that now all its true and hers to claim...amazing part devika,thank u!
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Posted: 15 years ago
so again a fabulous update dear...
The way she searched for sindoor is nice...
waiting for the next...
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely part,wow she have got such a caring n loving family.am getting gready for more.tc
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Posted: 15 years ago
di,sorry for late comment of previous post,i know it became now a days daily work.actually i read it and ur pm too but due to slow net,i was not able to respond.pls accept this sorry.
and update was sooo sooo good ,u said true u like radhika more so only u give her such sweet caring man in life na ,and in this care,sweetness we fall in love with him in return more.waise we love both,both of them a lot.
dev wished for firstly to see his radhika's face clearly and he got automatically when she turned in her sleep and then he only was dreaming of a day when his radhika will be in his arms and acc to him ,day was quite far but who knows how far.his radhika again in her sleep allowed him to take her in his embrace.so so so sweettt,he started dreaming in his sleep when he is standing in rain and her closeness increasing made him dream more.i would say to dev,dream more and more ,ur dreams don't get time to fullfill.

will comment later of 6th part after reading.thanks di.


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Posted: 15 years ago
marvelous update.
I am running out of adjectives to describe it 😆
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Its getting better and better...slowly she realised what she has and dev just wants to make it easy for her...for now is just stealing glances and self-monologue but the love is there...its so cute seing their simple gestures as with the earrings,mangalsu tre and sindoor...loved the last part with radh,glad she knows that now all its true and hers to claim...amazing part devika,thank u!

Thank you Myra. I am so happy that you noticed all that simple gecters, he is holding her closer, never askign for her permission, for him , she is already his.. so... how ill he get her to know his mind... next part xoming soon, a si was unable to hold it back with me...😆 very poor writer...🤣, phas gaye readers log...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jeffin

so again a fabulous update dear...

The way she searched for sindoor is nice...
waiting for the next...

thank you thank you thank yo... waiitng still , then ic an give you the enxt one.. where i love my Dev the most.. hope you do tooo

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