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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

oh these kids defintely ther r maaneets kids...maan is alrounder...passionate hubby and responsible father...and these maaneet after four kids they r still same...same love between them...what a happy family...will there b something happen in the trip?ranbir and sargam new vicky and geet ya fir maaneet?

ahaha good guesses but sorry cant say much of the twist but all I can say is that it won't be sad 😆 if that helps...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zahra15

awesome update...
sargam wants to get married in order to be away from her brothers n even talked to his "groom"...poor maan...having to bribe his children all the time to get his way...

n then maaneet...haha...they dont want any more kids...seems maan is having a tought time bribing them all the time...

i really hope all will be well during the trip...n now even vicky n meera will be coming...

sargam n ranvir fighting...now this is expected coz even vicky n geet loved fighting..haha...

continue soon n thnxxx...

FIRST, THANK YOU for the lovely graphics
SECOND, thank you for your comment 😳
hahaa what is gonna happen at the trip? hmm can't say much lol
It won't be sad twist 😆
This fan fics is purly for enjoyment purposes so keeping that in mind I will bring twist accordidng to that lol...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maanhar

That was bit spicy 😉 wait a minute... am I the first one to comment??? let me check... yes yes its me first time!!!!!! now thats great😊

Sargam is so sweet to decide on her marriage, good that Maan could formulate some bahana... i feel she is just like Geet. Nice to know about Vicky and Meera's visit, but Geet ke bachomko kaun sambhalega😲

haha ayeah you are the first one to comment...CONGRATS!!!!
Sargam is like Geet..she is hte carbon copy of Geet...good luck to Maan to handle both of them lol
hhaa only god can handle her kids...they are the devils...house full of kids...Shocked it is def. going to be fun 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lively-piia

omg...their daughter want to gt married...😆😆😆

wat else u expect ...akhir kar she is THEIR daughter...😉😉😉
atlast maan realised no more kids...badi jaldi yaad aaya...lol😆😆
do continue
thanx 4 pm
chao

haha you guys would've never guessed it would be Sargam😆😆
She is not only their daughter but she IS like Geet hahaha Poor Maan 😆
I guess maan singh khurana had to expireince for himself to know how devilish his kids really are lol
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: wajiha-1

Hehehe sargam wants to get married hehehe lived the update dear excellent work by you di continue soon

Tahnk you so much
I was actually looking for your comment..
I had rememebred someone calling me Di and I had remembered your ID...so I was going thru all the comments in each fan fic..sicne I dind't know whch fan fic u made a comment on...
Thank you so much!
it just proves relationships can be formed with anyone and anywhere regardless of cast😳🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it loads
cant wait for vicky to come
i absolutely love his character
cont soon please
cant wait
thanks for the pm!! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update! Can't wait to read more! Precap sounds interesting!
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Posted: 13 years ago
ROFL... Sargam wants to get married just ti get rid of MJ and Armaan... lolz...

hhmmm so Vicky is coming down with family...

First it was Vicky and Geet fight and now Ranbir and Sargam fight hehehe... keeping the tradition huh????

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,

I hope you enjoy this update...and don't kill me at the end...😆

Chapter 55

Geet stayed at home while Adi went to pick Vicky and Meera up from the airport. She could walk now without any support from the crutches. Until Maan is away she moved back to the mansion with the kids...it was a great hassle especially with the kids since they wanted to take everything with them even though they are going to be living 5 minutes away from where they are right now. Geet made sure everything was clean and prepared before they came and made the kids understand not to make any noises especially Sargam. She could be loud at times if not controlled properly. She missed Maan so much and couldn't wait till he got home but she was also mad at him for not calling everyday like he promised. She knows that he is busy but still it doesn't take that long to make five minute phone call. She made a mental note of yelling at him when he comes home but deep inside she knew and even he knew that she could never stay mad at him for long. Maybe that is why he takes advantage of her niceness sometimes. She went to the kids room to see if they were dressed up but to her shock the whole room in a mess. She looked at Sargam and the twins with anger.

Geet: I had told you guys to clean the room up didn't I? What were you guys doing?

MJ: We were bored so we decided to play.

Sargam: Yeah mom I wanted to play tea party but they wouldn't play with me.

Geet (shakes her head in disappointment and irritation..) I want you all three to clean this room now or else forget about going anywhere with the whole family. I will be back in 10 minutes and within that time I want the room to be properly cleaned. Understood? (All shake their head yes...She closes the door "Maan when will you come back so you can deal with your kids..." She hits her head "I forgot to get Asha ready.." She goes toward her room and saw her playing and drooling all over...she picks her up and heads for the bathroom.."Really Maan was right..her name should be muskan.." She kisses her and takes her for a bath...After she was done...she heard all the kids run downstairs as soon as the bell rang...She quickly makes her way downstairs with Asha and stops the kids before they could open the door.

Geet (to the kids) Alright I want you guys to behave especially you Sargam...Armaan go get your Dadima...

Armaan: But I wanna see Uncle Vicky...

Geet: you can meet him when you Get Dadima..now go..and Sargam remember no funny business..MJ since you are the oldest you make sure...

Sargam: Fine (She crosses her arms in anger...Geet opens the door...She screams as she sees Meera and hugs her while Vicky looks at both of them in annoyance...She comes out of the hug and hugs Ranbir..Vicky was expecting her to hug him but alas he was disapointment...Meera began hugging all the kids one by one..Vicky stood there feeling left out..at last he cleared his throat...Geet looks at him with a smile and finally gives him a hug...Asha pulls his hair just when Geet was about to pull out of the hug...everyone laughs seeing this...

Meera: Omg Geet she is so cute...I saw her pictures...I never would've imagined she would get this big...(She brings out her arms so
that Asha can go to her...She lets go of Vickys hair and goes toward Meera...Geet welcomes everyone in...Armaan brings Dadima outside as well..Vicky and Meera take their blessings...)

Vicky: Geet seriously your kids have gone so big...but where is Maan?
Geet: He has gone for some meeting before we found out you guys were coming. He should be back in couple of days.
Meera: aww I was hoping to see the whole big family.
Vicky: Waise where is your carbon copy? (Everyone was confused) Maan had told me that Sargam is exactly like you..where is she?
Geet: ohh...good questions..where is she? She was here before...
Adi (clears his throat..) Is she the person you are looking for? (Sargam stood behind Arjun hiding back...each time Arjun tried to move..Sargam would quickly hide behind him...)
Geet: Sargam come here and meet your uncle..you were the one that were telling me that you want to see him and Ranbir...
Sargam (she shyly came to the front and hides behind Geet..everyone was shocked to see her being shy...especially the twins...)
MJ: (to Armaan) What happened to her? She is never like this?
Armaan: I don't know but I like this new side of hers...

MJ: Me too...finally we can bother her about something...

Armaan: I know...but I really hope she stays this way...
MJ: Me too...why can't Vicky uncle stay here forever (Both laughs among themselves...)
Geet: Vicky this is Sargam...
Vicky: wow she is nothing like what Maan told me...hello (he brings out his hand for a shake...) Won't you like to meet me and your Aunt Meera?
Sargam (quietly comes out from behind Geet dragging her feet...) Hello...
Meera: Sargam this is Ranbir...he is the same age as you...(Ranbir looks at her and smiles...Sargam smiles and goes up to Ranbir and shakes his hand...)
MJ (To Armaan): Why does she get all the attention?
Armaan: I don't know...look at us..we are twins and no one seem to care...
MJ: I know..come lets go and meet them properly too...
Armaan: Maybe we should act shy too...
MJ: Why? We are not Sargam...(Both laugh and high-five each other...)
Dadima; Vicky Meera why don't we all eat first..then we all can sit down and talk...
Both nodes their head and everyone make their way to the dinning table...the kids got their own small table...Nakul took Priya and Asha to feed them...Sargam sat on the table looking at Ranbir...Ramesh was busy talking with Armaan and MJ...
Sargam: Do you like it here?
Ranbir: Yeah..so far its nice...

Sargam (looked at her plate and saw broccoli on her plate..she made a face..and then she looks at Ranbir and smiles..) Here you should try this Ranbir..its really good...(Rakesh looks at Sargam and smiles..)

Ranbir: umm no thanks...I don't like broccoli

Sargam: but my mom made it especially for you

Ranbir: okay but i will tell Aunty that I don't eat this..so she doesn't make it again...

Ramesh (whispers to Sargam) Geet aunt is coming...(Sargam quickly sits back quietly and pretends to eat...)

Geet: Are you all done eating? (She looks at Ranbir..) Ranbir you didn't eat...

Ranbir: I am done...

Geet: its okay...(Sargam mimicks him...) Sargam finish your food...

Sargam: but I am done too...why does he get to not finish

Geet: Sargam finish eating or else you are not leaving this table...(MJ and Armaan laugh at her...Ramesh laugh is same as Adi's he he he..)

MJ: Maybe she is shy to eat anything...(Sargam gives them an angry glare)

Geet: Why don't you all go and play upstairs...kids show Ranbir your playroom and be nice...(Sargam was about to get up too...) you are not going anywhere until you finish...(Sargam sits down mad "I will get you Ranbir...")
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All the grownups sat downstairs talking...

Vicky: Geet I have to tell you..I thought with your fourth kid you will be fat...but you still look the same

Geet: Me and fat? please...kids keep me quiet active everyday...

Vicky: Are you having more? I think you should...

Geet: No way...no more..I told Maan already...Asha was the last one..anyway I think you should have another baby or two...you know to keep Ranbir company...what say Meera? (She blushes...)

Vicky: She doesn't want to...what can I do...(He winks at her..)

Meera: Anyway Arjun can I hold Priya?

Arjun: Sure you don't even need to ask

Yash: Actually Meera you are lucky he is giving her to you or else he doesn't allow anyone to come near her...(Meera holds Priya)

Meera: She is too cute and why shouldn't he be protective..just look at her...

Dadima: So tell us what else is new? Hows your job going?

Vicky: its good Dadima..I am still working in the company but they offered me a higher position...

Dadima: wow thats nice...good luck beta

Meera: Its bad Dadima..he stays at work all day long..he barley has time for anything anymore

Geet: Story of our lives. Maan is the same way...just look at him now..gone for a business meeting...Waise Adi I am surprised that you didn't go with him

Pinky: let me tell you why..he had requested to not attend the meeting with bhai...

Geet: Why?

Pinky: Because he couldn't leave me and Ramesh alone at home...(Everyone laughs...Adi looks down embarrassed)

Vicky: It is so nice to have everyone living in the same city and that too close to home. It must get really busy around here

Dadima: You have no idea...especially Maans kids...they are always fighting with each other...(Then they heard yelling and screaming from upstairs..) See what did I say..I am surprised they were quiet for 10 minutes straight...(Everyone, except Dadima, went upstairs to see whats going on...they saw Sargam and Ranbir pulling each others hair while yelling toward each other..Ramesh, Armaan and MJ were cheering them on...Vicky went to Ranbir and pulled him up and Geet went behind Sargam and pulled her away from Ranbir...Arjun had to hold Sargam back...he picks her up and she kept kicking her arms and legs in the air...Ranbir did the same...)

Geet: Stop it both of you...

Meera: What happened Ranbir...

Vicky: Yeah usually he is very quiet and not like this

Ranbir: I...

Sargam: oye I will say it...(Vicky and Meera looked at each other and both thought to themselves "duplicate of Geet") He broke my tea set

Ranbir: I didn't do it on purpose

Sargam: Yes you did...(She stands in front of him with her hands on her hips...)

Ranbir (pushes Vickys hands off of him and stands in front of her with the same posture) No I didn't...I ran into it...

Sargam (mimics him) bandar

Rabir: I am not a monkey..you are a a rat..a fat rat (All the grownups smiled...)

Sargam: If I am a rat then you are a monkey...a ugly monkey...(Ranbir steps in front of her again...)

Geet (comes in between them) okay..Sargam he didn't meant to break your tea set...and I will get you another one

Vicky: NO Geet we will buy her another tea set...

Sargam (gets happy) yay i will show you what I want...

Geet: Vicky no..she doesn't need it...and besides she already have too many toys

Meera: Geet its okay and besides we are family...so you don't need to be too formal...Sargam come with me and show me what you want...

Vicky (to Geet...) Maan was right...she is exactly like you..even you were wild this..i don't know how Maan tamed you (he laughs)

Geet (gasps) What do you mean wild? I was never wild...and as for taming am the one that tamed Maan and his arrogance

Vicky: Please Geet everyone knows the crazy things you did before your marriage...

Geet: Like what?

Vicky: Remember the time you started beating me with tennis balls for no reason of mine...

Geet: yeah but that was an honest mistake i was confused at that time

Vicky: honest? I couldn't walk for two days thanks to you.

Geet: Well it was your mistake and you deserved it...If I have to do it all over again I would do it

Vicky: Ohh yeah the only difference would be that I would be the one beating you with the tennis balls

Geet: I would love for you to try...(Yash steps in)

Yash: Alright guys we already have enough kids in the house we don't need to add two more

Adi (laughs) Yeah could you two not fight for few days?

Vicky: I don't know Adi it depends on her...she is the one that starts everything

Geet (pushes Yash out of the way): What did you say?

Vicky: you heard me...(Yash hits his head with his hands...he signals Pinky to do something...)

Pinky: Vicky come let me show you to your room (She signals Adi too...Adi holds Vicky and pulls him out of the room...both stare at each other with anger...)

Arjun: uhh Geet I have to ask your opinion on something...(he was trying to distract her..she gave him an angry glare and left from there...)

Yash (shakes his head..) I think I will go crazy

Arjun: Me too...now we can add two more kids to this family..I wonder when will Maan bhai come...he could handle all this...

Yash: Yeah I am missing him...anyway lets go and put Priya to sleep

Arjun: okay today is my turn to put her to sleep (The twins and Ramesh watch everyone leave one by one...)

Ramesh: Okay lets play some games...do you have any new video games?

Armaan: do we? Let me show you...
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Geet goes in her room and curses Vicky...she lies on the bed..."Maan when are you coming..I am missing you..." As if Maan had heard her..she hears her phone ringing..quickly she grabs her phone and talks to him

Geet: Maan when are you coming? and why are you calling me now? Do you know you haven't called me in the past two days.

Maan: Geet Geet relax...i was actually busy

Geet: busy? how long does it take to make a five minute phone call

Maan: I am sorry actually I wanted to surprise you and the whole family.

Geet: What kind of surprise?

Maan: Well first tell me did you miss me?

Geet: hmm maybe...

Maan: hmm looks like someone doesn't want their surprise...

Geet: hello Maan I was joking...of course I missed you...when are you coming?

Maan (smiles): how is Vicky and Meera? and the kids?

Geet: Don't even ask...Sargam got into a fight with Ranbir and Vicky and I got into a fight afterwards..the house is very crazy right now with the kids (she laughs)

Maan: So I didn't miss anything so far

Geet: hmmm kab aah rahe ho aap?

Maan: hmm just think in couple of hours...

Geet (screamed Maan had to hold his phone far away from his ears): you are coming today?

Maan: yeah that is why i was busy two days in a row..I finished all of my meetings..now am coming home...waise Geet what will I get as my present..

Geet: Whatever you want...

Maan: hmm okay remember that when I (then Geet heard a loud noise..she quickly sat up and listened...she kept yelling Maan on the phone..scared she runs downstairs...everyone looks at her...)

Arjun: Geet what happened? Why are you crying...

Geet: woh Maan...i was talking to him and then there was a loud noise...listen he is not replying back...(Meera goes to Geet to console her...)

Vicky: Geet don't worry he would be okay..do you know where he was at?

Geet: No he said he is coming home in few hours..he was on the road driving...

Arjun: dont' worry we will find him...(all the guys leave the house in search of Maan...)

Dadima: Pinky stay with the kids..I don't want them to see Geet like this and get worried (she nodes her head yes)

Geet (crying) I hope he is okay..(she prays to Babaji...)


Precap: maan in hospital

Don't worry it won't be sad..if you guys know where am heading from here😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
bache geet ki copy..nd twins...omg...ranbir nd sargam

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